Besides me...[Oneshot] - Page 2

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Mahiiiiiiiii

That was beautiful!

Honestly, I absolute loved it!

Amazing girlie!!

 

And like Divya said, I want Mayank's POV sequel too

 

x x

Thanks jaan.........glad u loved it......

u do love it really?

Thanks yaar....

sure baba......ab toh sabhi mere peeche hi pad gaye hain....

do i have another option? nope!

so i am going to continue it with a mayank's sequel....

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That was a beautiful one Mahi..!!.. Awesome ! :)
touched my soul....
How do you express love so very beautifully ??
I'm so bad at expressing love.....the only thing I write is melancholy !!
But this is superb dear !! Loved it !
But you never really gave Mayank's pov ??
I'm not saying I demand a happy ending....yet I would love to know his thot's too !!

Do write more !! :)

-Fatima
Edited by -shabnoor- - 13 years ago

yet another beautiful OS mahi dear

Originally posted by: arunabehere

yet another beautiful OS mahi dear

Thanks a lot yaar........

Glad you loved it....

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

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That was a beautiful one Mahi..!!.. Awesome ! :)
touched my soul....
How do you express love so very beautifully ??
I'm so bad at expressing love.....the only thing I write is melancholy !!
But this is superb dear !! Loved it !
But you never really gave Mayank's pov ??
I'm not saying I demand a happy ending....yet I would love to know his thot's too !!

Do write more !! :)

-Fatima

Thanks yaar.....

I am so glad that it touched your soul....

I don't know how i describe love...i mean i never write anything....i just feel everything.....

Although i have never been in love, though i can feel it...

But i love the way you express melancholy....

Thanks a LOT for loving it dear.....

Yup, i guess....ya i know that i have to write a sequel of it.....only mayank's feelings....

Sure....now even you want the sequel.....so i have to write the sequel....doston ke liye kuch bhi....

I would surely write more....

Thanks a ton!

Originally posted by: -Ishaan-

Beautiful👏

Thanks yaar.....

you know how much it means to me....

and your comment is like reading di's comment.....

Thanks a ton bro....love you loads......

Mahak that's such a beautiful , lovely , fantastic , mind blowing one.............
this was really a wonderful piece.............
mahi tu mujhe hamesha hi speechless kar deti hain...............
touched my soul yaar...............
this was such sweet one.................
yaar itni sweetly express kaise karti hain...........u r world best writer jaan............
yaar it was beyond awesome................
amazing one yaar..............
and ha i agree with all..............
please write a sequel jaan with mayank's pov................
love u loads........😳

Originally posted by: Surbhi123

Mahak that's such a beautiful , lovely , fantastic , mind blowing one.............
this was really a wonderful piece.............
mahi tu mujhe hamesha hi speechless kar deti hain...............
touched my soul yaar...............
this was such sweet one.................
yaar itni sweetly express kaise karti hain...........u r world best writer jaan............
yaar it was beyond awesome................
amazing one yaar..............
and ha i agree with all..............
please write a sequel jaan with mayank's pov................
love u loads........😳

Aww.......thanks a lot dear......

I am soooooooooooooo happy that tujhe yeh itna pasand aaya!

Main tujhe hamesha speechless kaise kar deti hoon?

i am soooooooo happy......i can't define that in words....

Glad that it touched your soul.....

main kuch likhti nahi hoon.....bas feel karti hoon....

Aww........that's so sweet of you to say ki main world ki best writer hoon....i wish i was!

thanks yaar.,...

Thanks a ton!!!! i am smiling sooooooo widely!

Ya, ab toh tujhe bhi sequel chahiye.....

So, now i HAVE to write a sequel.....with mayank's pov.....

I would write that and update that within next sunday......

Love you loads too......

Thanks a bunch again.......

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

Aww.......thanks a lot dear......

I am soooooooooooooo happy that tujhe yeh itna pasand aaya!

Main tujhe hamesha speechless kaise kar deti hoon?

i am soooooooo happy......i can't define that in words....

Glad that it touched your soul.....

main kuch likhti nahi hoon.....bas feel karti hoon....

Aww........that's so sweet of you to say ki main world ki best writer hoon....i wish i was!

thanks yaar.,...

Thanks a ton!!!! i am smiling sooooooo widely!

Ya, ab toh tujhe bhi sequel chahiye.....

So, now i HAVE to write a sequel.....with mayank's pov.....

I would write that and update that within next sunday......

Love you loads too......

Thanks a bunch again.......

friendship mein thanks nahi bolte mahiiiiiiiii....................
and i am so happy ki mujhe itna awesome os padhne ko mila..............
tu mujhe isiliye speechless karti hain kyunki tu jo bhi likhti hain  dil se likhti hain jaan.............
hey mahi..........u r best writer.........ab to tujhe award bhi mil gaya..........u r world's best writer jaan..........
i am glad that i made my jaan smile.............
yipeeeeeeeee tu sequel likhe gi................
i will wait jaan............
love u loads....................😛

Originally posted by: Surbhi123

friendship mein thanks nahi bolte mahiiiiiiiii....................
and i am so happy ki mujhe itna awesome os padhne ko mila..............
tu mujhe isiliye speechless karti hain kyunki tu jo bhi likhti hain  dil se likhti hain jaan.............
hey mahi..........u r best writer.........ab to tujhe award bhi mil gaya..........u r world's best writer jaan..........
i am glad that i made my jaan smile.............
yipeeeeeeeee tu sequel likhe gi................
i will wait jaan............
love u loads....................😛

Hmm.....pata hai.....but you know abt my habit of saying thanks na?

Even i am happy that mujhe itna acha comment padhne ko mila....

Award? ohk woh...yaar that was just a type of gift.....asli competition toh ab hai....

Main dil se likhti hoon kyunki tum dil se comment karti ho....

Yup, i have to write a sequel.......for u and for my other frds....

tumhari baat taal sakti hoon bhala?

love you loads too........