(I wanted the Abhijeet orphanage story to follow Chinnu's story, so interchanging the posts. )
This was on the first CID Aahat Maha episode (Bank Locker Ka rahasya) when we were all worried about an Aatma in CID. We imagined how Daya would slap an aatma. And I got this idea...this was my debut in scene writing.
(Sorry this post might be a little cluttered, but I don't want to change it much...I want it to be the way I first wrote it)
For original content, go here.
Imagine.....the atma wakes up...Freddie sees it and reports it to Daya and Abhijeet. They make fun of Freddie and go after it. Daya tells Abhijeet....yeh koi chor hai....aatama bankar sabko dara raha hai...Abhijeet shoots at it, but the bullet goes through it. Daya says 'tumhare nishane ko kya ho gaya?'. Main dikhata hoon isko....and raises his hand...and his hand goes through thin air.. What would their reaction be????
And they come back and tell Freddie...haan tumne theek kaha...woh aatma hai. And the 3 of them run for their lives and tell ACP.
ACP looks at Daya and Abhijeet and says 'Daya, Abhijeet....tum bhi aatma par vishwas karne lage'. Daya standing with his head down and Abhijeet trying to protest, 'Sir maine goli mari par woh aar par chali gayi...Daya ne thappad mara, uska haaath bhi aar paar ho gaya, iska matlab kya hai Sir'.
(There was a big scene after this contributed by many members...please visit that thread to read the whole story.
I am pasting my part only.)
Madam Zara was called to drive off the aatma. Then...
Zara : Main aapka problem humesha ke liye solve kar sakti hoon.
Daya : Accha??? Kaise?
Zara : Aap sab log yahan baith jaayiye...bureau mein sab lights off kar dijiye...phir main aap sabke saamne ek ek candle jala kar rakhoongi. Aap sab uske saamne aankh band karke baith jaayenge. Jab tak main apna kaam poora nahin karti, tab tab aap bina hile, silent baith jaayenge.
Main us aatma ko bhaga doongi.
Fredricks : Accha...to jaldi shuru kijiye na
Zara : Lekin.....EK KHATRA HAI...agar aapke man mein darr hai, to us aatma ke saath aap bhi doosri duniya mein chale jaayenge
Fredrcks :Yeh kya keh rahi hain aap...main yahan nahin baithoonga...main baahar wait karta hoon sir.
Zara : NAHIN......sabse pehle aatma ko tumne dekha...tumhe yahan baithna hi padega...
Daya : Kuch nahin hoga Fredricks...main hoon na...mere paas baith jaao...tumhe kuch nahin hoga
And everyone sits around the famous glass topped table in the bureau with a candle in front of them - ACP, Fredricks, Daya, Abhijeet, Vivek, Tasha, Salunkhe and Tarika. They all close their eyes...
Madam Zara starts her task of driving away spirits with wierd movements of her hands and chanting something (which no human could understand)
After 1 hour....
Zara : Aap sab aankhen khol sakte hain. Maine aatma ko bhaga diya hai.
Fredricks : main bach gaya....Dekha Sir...main itna darpok nahin hoon jitna aap samajh rahe hain.
Tarika gives a shriek....everyone turns....
Tarika : Sir, Salunkhe sir yahan nahin hai!!!!
Madam Zara : Uske dil mein bahut darr tha...isliye woh doosri duniya mein chala gaya.
Abhijeet: Daya...Mujhe to Fredricks ke baare mein chinta thi....lekin yeh Salunkhe to sabse zyada darpok nikla!!!!
Edited by visrom - 21 September 2010 at 3:08am