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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
hi everyone
m sure everyone of u know me so not gonna introduce u maselfLOL
okay here i go
m writing an os on karanika on ma one of friends request anjali, who u know too, so not going to introduceLOL

now here is the summary:
basically in this os arjuhi dunno each other, its their high skool life, n by not knowing each other, they even fall on love...how?? what happen?? n to know that u have 2 read this osBig smile

starting:
arohi is new in the country n she is in high skool with arjun, arohi is really pay attention on the class teachers, cuz she is new, so teacher told all the girls to dont trust on boys, cuz some of them arent good at all n all that
during changing the class
arohi thought she will b late so she was running n just get pass by arjun n her books fall, n she was in hurry time, n arjun was helping her that tym, but arohi didnt look @ him, n just took the books from him say thanks n start running for her class
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
arohi didnt talk to him cuz of teacher's lecture
--XX--XX--XX
in arjun's heart a feeling has cum for arohi
he is thinking "that there was something very special in her, she didnt even try to be friend with me, like just say thanks n went seriously there was something very very good about her"
n he was about to left
n the other boy just walking by sees an id on the floor
the id was by the arjun, so boy said: hey pick up ur id
n arjun looks @ id, it was arohi;s id, he sees n than by seeing this he know that its arohi's id, now he know the name of arohi, grade n all that
n now arohi is in media center with her class
she chose a book called "love story"
so she needs her id to check out the book
n she cant find her id
so she thinks arjun took it
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
arohi thinks about what teacher told her
--XX--XX--XX
continue
now arohi asked for excuse that she can go n take her id
but she dunno where is it
so she start thinking "omg that boy i didnt even look @ him, he took my id, if i will see him, i swear i will never gonna look his face again, omg now where should i go, i havent seen him, how am i gonna get my id arghhh!!"
now arjun n arohi are in same hallway
so arjun sees arohi
arjun: (screams) arohi
but arohi couldnt hear him, n keep walking
so arjun runs after her n touch her by mistake
arohi turns n slap him
cuz she thought that it was some guy trying to bother her
arjun goes like ouch
arohi: what r u trying to do??
arjun: ur arohi right??
arohi: yes how dare u touch me?? i will call security (screaming) security security
arjun: oye wait wait i want to give u ur id
arohi: my id??
arjun: yeah in the morning with ur books u forget ur id n i found it, n now m finding u so i can give it to u
arohi: ok thanks
arjun gives her id
n than arohi wanted to tell him sorry but someone suddenly call arjun
arjun: gtg cya later bye
n arjun left now arohi is walking to the media center
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
all the feelings that arohi have for arjun in her heart first removed
--XX--XX--XX
arohi thinking while walking "he was a nyc guy, i dunno how cum i listen to teacher n believe it, m such a arghh!!, i even slap him, i have to tell him sorry, next is lunch i will talk to him during lunch"
now arohi has feeling about arjun, that he is a nyc person, which arohi is looking in her life for!!
n now its lunch tym
arohi looking for arjun
finally sees him
goes to him
arohi: excuse me
arjun: oh hii
arohi: actually, i want to tell u sorry i slaped u, even u thou u helped me, i dunno how can i??
arjun: oh its okay..now forget about it, but u slapped hard
both laughed together
than arohi shake hand with arjun
arohi: by the way, m arohi u?
arjun: arjun..friends??
arohi: of course..ur like first boy i have been friends with
and they both do lunch together
n have love feeling about each other
now bell rings
both have 2 go in their classes
arohi: bye cya tomorrow
arjun: k bye dont forget ur id
arohi smiled n left
now arohi have art she is so thirsty so goes out to drink water
but there are some bad boyz who r trying to rape arohi
n arjun comes n hit them n all that
n now boyx are with security
arjun take arohi to the banch give her his jacket
arjun: sit
arohi is keep crying
arjun: arohi plz stop cry, this issue will cum in skool if u will keep cry, now these boyx have left no one would do anything
arohi: what m i gonna say to my parents, no one will marry me, i cant b just as a burden on my parents
arjun: i will marry u
arohi looked @ him
arohi: what?
arjun: yes i will, i love u, but just cant know it, now stop cry
they both hug each other
n they do marry in hindu wayz
n arohi is late @ home her parents r worried there
than arohi cums home with arjun, n have sindoor in her forhead
her parents r shocked
arohi is crying
arohi's mom: what happen??
arohi is keep crying
n arjun told them everything that happen
n now arohi's parent are thankful to arjun too
n now there suhagraat

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hope u all lyk itEmbarrassed 

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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 3:08pm | IP Logged

Awesome OS! hun Totally Loved how Arjun Help her so delicatly and Gentle from HIMEmbarrassed and loved your way of writing the OS! Totally FABEmbarrassed 

Sorry was going to edit fast na but IF stopped working!Ouch thats way>3Tongue


Edited by ArTiToTheEnd - 20 September 2010 at 10:34pm

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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ArTiToTheEnd

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will w8 4 ur commentsBig smile

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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
Gosh, Mehr! You're a brilliant writer! Shocked You've got a very unique and creative way of writing... and I'm glad you decided to share this with me... Thanks! Hug


Edited by chip. - 21 September 2010 at 1:16am

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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Awesome
brilliant
superb os
loved it
thanks 4 da pm
hope u make more

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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chip.

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will w8 4 ur comments chipBig smile

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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

Awesome
brilliant
superb os
loved it
thanks 4 da pm
hope u make more


thanks dear, i will make some more asap, i have a request on sajan so will b next os on sajanBig smile, u can req too, but will take tym, cuz i have reqz already, n so my ff updatez, also skool, test, all those stuffLOL

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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
fabulous os

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