Rehna Hai Teri Palkon ki Chaaon Mein


Rehna Hai Teri Palkon ki Chaaon Mein
Rehna Hai Teri Palkon ki Chaaon Mein

Imaginary Written Updates-[Sumiku and Karman]..... (Page 2)

--aarthi-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
kavya don't telll kartik died or has memory loss it wud be pathetic. so don't be be like RS u r doing good continue

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kavya-kaabarz Senior Member

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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 8:50pm | IP Logged


Starts with Kartik rolling downhill and becoming unconcious.In TM all r worried about Kartik,he's not been back for a day.Karan,DC and PJ go off in search of him.


Meanwhile Kartik comes to his senses.He's badly hurt,looks around and finds himself in the jungle.He makes his way through the dense forests[just like Bare Grills of Man VS Wild] and finally arrives at the bank of a river.The river is turbulent[these days rivers r turbulent because of the monsoon] .He sees a family of 4 members stuck at the other bank.He wants to help them,they too cry for help[they don't know swimming but Kartik does].He finally decides to make a kaam chalau boat by collecting wood and creepers from the jungle.He knows it's quite risky and in an attempt to save the family his life is at risk but he's mentally prepared.


Camera switches to Karan,DC and PJ who r madly looking 4 Kartik but instead find Nihu running past with some goons behind her.Karan says-''Whatever is happening with Nihu is good,she's paying 4 her wrong doings'' but they finally decide to save her from the goons and hand her to the police.


Camera shifts to Kartik-he's trying his heart out to get to the family.After facing a lot of difficulties he finally manages to get to the other bank.The family tells him-they r now homeless,their house and,fields r flooded and they don't have any means to earn a living.Kartik ensures them that he wud help them.Kartik and the family walk by the side of the river and finally reach a village named-Thul{which has not been effected badly by the flooded river because of its altitude}.Kartik works along with the family for 7 days and manages to built a small hut for them.They thank him 4 his efforts and ask him for his name .He tells them-KARTIK.The lady of the family says-bada hi pyara naam hai,bhagwaan tumhay humesha khush rakkhe,tuhari har pareshaani ab hamari bhi hai.''They ask him for his auto biography.He tells them the entire Karman story.


After hearing the story the woman informs him that they know a baaba named-BABA RANCHORDAAS SHYAMAKDAS CHAANCHAR[Rancho].She tells him that he's the only one who can help u and tells him that he shud meet Baba Rancho……..


To b continued……….

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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
When you mentioned that Kartik met a homeless family, first thing I thought was that he was going to settle them permanently in the TM haveli ROFL  Somehow, you broke the stereotype LOL

Very good, Kavya, do continue... Smile

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kavya-kaabarz Senior Member

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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 12:51am | IP Logged

                                                                   Big smile PART-5Big smile


Opens with Karan running after the goons to save Nihu.He gets to them and bashes the goons[Kartik did that often].Nihu thanks him –he gives her an angry look.Meanwhile PJ and DC reach there with the police.The police inspector thank's Karan and they r off.PJ is left wondering where Kartik must be.


In the next scene Kartik is sitting on a floor with his knees folded.The woman who agreed to help him brings food for him.He asks her about her family.She tells him her name is Lila,her husband is Hari while the two children r Bela and Kamal.She tells him about her families past.About how happy they were when,Hari worked on the boat of the richest fisherman of their village-Biju.They even owned a buffalo.Life was flowing like a roller in the ocean for them but then Hari took to drinking and they were in debt.Lila was affected by TB and her drunken husband did nothing except drinking all day.The 2 children –Bela and Kamal were their only hope.Hari used to beat Lila at night when he came home drunked.The family thrived only on the few fishes that Bela and Kamal were able to gather..But 1 day Lila's condition changed for the worse.Bela an Kamal went to bring help and it was then that baba.Rancho came to their rescue.


As Kartik is hearing all this a boy comes to the hut named Pinto.He tells Lila babaRancho is coming here to meet u.Lila is happy and wants Kartik to meet him.Baba enters the hut,Kartik an Lila do a little namaskar to him and baba says-''All is well,all is well….lol''.The Baba sits down on a wodden chair.Lila introduces Kartik to him and tells him the entire Karman story on Kartik's behalf .She asks him to help Kartik.The Baba agrees but has a demand………


To b continued……….

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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 6:42am | IP Logged
baba rancho .... cool continue soon
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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 8:40am | IP Logged
please comtinue .. LOLClap
kavya-kaabarz Senior Member

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Opens with baba putting forth his demand..He wants fresh tender grass for his cow and fresh water for himself……….lol.Lila provides him with what he has asked for.

In the next seen baba and Kartik r sitting in front of a fire, the baba is busy enchanting mantras while Kartik is trying to concentrate with his eyes focused at a particular point of a mirror placed in front of him.

The Baba finishes his mantras and tells Kartik that now he will teach him-Leveation.[The art of magical happengings-Eg: a person flying in air without support].Kartik agrees but the baba tells him that it requires a lot of concentration.He asks Kartik-does he wish to proceed.Kartik agrees.After putting in a lot of effort Kartik is finally able to learn –leveation and we see Karik flying in air without any support.

In the next seen PJ, is roaming around in his room,thinking of Kartik.He prays for his safety.

The camera again shifts back to Kartik and Baba.The baba tells him that now he'll give him some powers by using which he'll b able to see –Ghosts.Kartik nods his head.The baba tells him –before giving u these power's I'll have to make sure whether u deserve these or not.Who knows u may misuse these to fool people.[The baba is doubting Kartik].The Baba proceeds on to say-Know I'll read ur mind[just as professor Charle's does (of X-MEN)] and everything that happened with u since u were born.[In short he wants to analyse Kartik's character].The baba proceeds,he sees everything that happened with Kartik since he was born.The baba is satisfied with what he sees and finally decide's that he wud give Kartik his magical powers.

Next the baba enchants a mantra and puts ghee into the fire.He asks Kartik to repeat the mantra and remember Suman ,to remember how much he loved her,to call her.

We see Kartik remembering Suman,he remembers the scene when she left him after exposing Nihu.He calls her-Suman mere paas aajaao, mere paas aajaao 4 about 10 factorial times and Suman finally replies-Hum aagae- Kartik ji.Kartik opens his eyes and sees Suman in front of him.He gets up,goes to Suman and we see Karman hugging each other.Kartik thanks the baba,says-Mein aapka aehesaan kabhi nahi bhoolunga .Aapne meri Suman mujhe lauta di.The baba says-All is well ,all is well.


The baba tells Kartik - he'll b able to see Suman,he'll b able to talk to her but Kartik needs to b careful as others don't have this ability.Kartik leaves.


Kartik reaches TM.All the members r angry with him as to where he was for the past few days.Kaddu shouts on him but Dadaji comes to his rescue.Dadaji tells Kartik to go to his room and get fresh.Kartik is in his room and remembers what the baba told him.

Next he sees Suman sitting with him on his bed .He holds her hand and wants her to promise him that she''ll never leave him again.She promises,says-''hum aapko chodkar kahin nahi jaaengay''.


It's the next morning,the entire family is doing a puja.Kartik comes there and also sees Suman doing the puja.He smiles at her,she smiles back at him…The entire family[including DC and VB] is standing together after the puja…We hear the sound-CLICK and it's a photographer taking a family photo.


Its evening ,the photographer comes to TM and asks 4 Kartik.Kartik meets the photographer.The photographer hands him an envelope.Kartik goes to the main hall where the entire family is gathered.He sits on a sofa and opens it ,finds a family photo.The entire family has formed a circle around him.Everyone is busy trying to locate himself/herself in the photograph while Kartik is just looking at Suman;s image in the photo which no one else is able to see…………ENDS at Kartik looking at Suman,who is sitting at the sofa placed beside him…………..


Well this was my attempt in extending the story.Hope it atleast acted as a consolation and if not then consider that the the story ended where RS ended it.


Thank's to all.Big smile

Regard's  [KAVYA].Big smile

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hmsni Senior Member

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Posted: 21 September 2010 at 4:57am | IP Logged
i loved it...Embarrassed
as long as karman are together we r all very happy....even if rs didnt show it that way...
 neither is what rs shows in her serial reality nor is this...
but to me, this is how the serial ended...Embarrassed

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