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Posted: 18 September 2010 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Another poem by me.....
hope u all like it...
 

The perfect man

 

I hope I had someone

In whom I could confide

With no questions, no complaints

Who could just read my eyes

Someone who'd take me in a tight embrace

And let me pour my heart into his own

Someone who'd lend me his shoulder to cry on

Someone who could just pacify me

Not with words but just his touch

Leading me into a world unknown

Who would never care who I am

All that would matter is what I mean to him

Who will accept me just as I am

Who will make me feel that i do make a difference

That my presence matters

That my absence hurts

Who will be not just a dream

Which vanishes as i leave my bed

But someone in my reality

Unto whom i can lose myself....

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plssssss comment
lotsa love
 
kaavyaSmile

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Posted: 18 September 2010 at 9:57am | IP Logged
wwowoowow i love this more
whish i get a man like this

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Posted: 18 September 2010 at 10:03am | IP Logged
very beautiful poem.. Hug

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Posted: 18 September 2010 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cute.arsh

wwowoowow i love this more
whish i get a man like this
thanxx naureen di....
 
i too wish a man like thisEmbarrassed
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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 3:18am | IP Logged
very nice poem ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapBig smile
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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 4:32am | IP Logged
AWWW!!!sis this one is also v.nice...
loved both the poems...Smile
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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 8:21am | IP Logged
WOW it's also  very nice .....
Loved it .....
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Posted: 22 September 2010 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Awww.... it's perfect!! Soooo beautiful... the utmost wish of any girl in the world... to be loved like this.

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