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MN FF To Love or Not to Love Ch 8 Page 13 (Page 2)

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 September 2010 at 8:29am | IP Logged
hey nice start.
continue soon.
add me into ur pm list.

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Let-It-Go IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2010 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Amazin onee... Looking fwd to it :D

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Anish85 Groupbie

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Posted: 16 September 2010 at 10:56am | IP Logged

Chapter 2

On the other side of town, a group of police officers went discussing something in the newly painted conference office. They surround a rectangular table with their leader, the door was closed; the room was decorated with several different kinds of maps.

CID 1- "Yes, sir."

Mayank- "I want you to go here. Samrat, I want you to go here." He pointed to a map with several red and blue circles around the building. "The rest of you follow the instructions that I have given Samrat yesterday, understand!"

CIDs- "Yes, sir!"

Mayank"Okay, it's 8:45, we'll meet there in one hour."
Everyone raised their arms, took a look at their watches, and set it with the exact second to the office clock. Then, they stepped out of the conference room.

Mayank-"Samrat, good luck and be careful."

Samrat-"Yes! You, too, I don't want to lose my friend nor his leg. Are you going to see your wife now?"

Mayank- "Yes, I always do before I go out into danger. I don't want her to worry too much."

Samrat-"Oh, I envy you, I wish I had someone who cared for me so much."

Mayank smiles- "I know, I know."

Samrat  turning at the corner of the hall- "See you later!"

Mayank- "Right, meet you there in an hour."

Mayank walked down into the next hall, press the blue down elevator button, and watched the little orange numbers on top go from 10 to 7. He stepped into the elevator and pressed for the ground floor.

In a small office building, a lady in her early twenty walked into a small room filled with snacks and a pot of beverages. She took the one, poured the black coffee into her decorated mug, and stirred cream and sugar into it. She took a sip, and then another woman stepped in.

Sheena- "I told you not to drink so much of that, it's not good for your health."

Diya- "So! You and your health books! So when's the baby due?"

Sheena patted her tummy- "Not for another two months. Mayank is going crazy, he has bought so much stuff for him that I don't know where to put it."

Diya- "Wait a second." She rushed out of the room, into her office, opened the drawer, took out a nicely wrapped box, and walked into Sheena's office.

Diya-"Here, you wouldn't mind for another one."

Sheena- "Not you too, you already bought two, this little guy is getting spoiled before he's even born."

Diya- "I just couldn't resist, it was so cute.

Sheena- "Thank you." She got up, walked over to her friend and gave a hug. "I guess we have to get back to work, did Mr. Walia call back again?"

Diya- "Yes, he was very satisfied with the computer program and wants us to re-edit only a few things."

Sheena-"Great, can you work on it and show me it by lunchtime."

Diya- "Yes, boss!" She stepped out and called Riya the secretary into her office.

Moments later, Mayank rushed into the office with a dozen pink carnations. "Hi, Riya! Sheena was on the phone and looking through her calendar- "Let's see, how about a meeting on Thursday at 11:00 or 1:00...No, I'm available at 10:00.

Mayank had quietly stepped into the office, Sheena signaled him to wait, and he smiled and nodded.

Sheena- "Okay, then Thursday at 11:00. Hope to see you then." She hung up the phone and smiled at Mayank.

Mayank handed her the flowers, lean on the desk and gave Sheena a kiss on her forehead. "So how are my two favorite people in the world doing?"

Sheena- "Fine!" She smelled the flowers and smiled. "Thank you, so why are you here?"

Mayank- "Guess."

Sheena- "Another case."

Mayank- "Yes, honey."

She walked over to him and wrapped her arms around him.

Sheean- "Be careful." She gave him a kiss.

Mayank- "I will." He hugged her and walked out of the room.

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Let-It-Go IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2010 at 11:16am | IP Logged

OMG !!!!!

This is literally a shock !!...How wil things turn out b/w mayur .
Ahhh...waitin eagerly . ! But gr8 update

Edited by ruchimayur - 16 September 2010 at 11:19am

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-Aiza- Senior Member

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Posted: 16 September 2010 at 11:24am | IP Logged
nice chapter but mayank and sheena r married Shocked

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safeplacetoland IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 September 2010 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Interesting. Do PM me. =)

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sreevijayan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 September 2010 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
shocking..mayank and sheena...lets see what happens....great update dear.............

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Faria. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 September 2010 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Oh GOD it was shocking update dear
maynak and sheena r married..........

then whats about my mayur.
hoe they will  become unite.

it was mind-blowing update
i loved mayaks profession- its thrilling yaar
good part
very nicely written
keep it uptc

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