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hey its really nice
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lovely story...just read it...
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OMGGG !! That came as a shock ..

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Chapter 7


Nupur was walking to her car after a long day at the hospital, she was so tired and was thinking to herself.

Nupur- Hmm what to get dad for his birthday, something special. Suddenly, a man in a long blue coast walked in front of her, she turned, but his hand had grabbed her arm.

Ranvijay- Hi, remember me.

Nupur pulled away from him, Stop it, I told you to never bother me again. Hey, when did you come to Mumbai?

Ranvijay- This morning, Mr. Bushan needed my help on something and he told me to pick you up and'

Nupur- One,I dont need a ride and two, I have to pick Arti up.

Ranvijay- I already did, she's safe and sounded with Mr. Bushan.

Nupur was really annoyed; she walked over to her car, turned the key and walked in. Ranvijay did the same and turned on his car, followed her out of the parking lot and down the street.

Back at the airport, Mayank was looking at his watch and dialing a number on his cell phone. There was no answer; he was frustrated and a bit worried. Then, he dialed another answer, someone picked up.

Gunjan- Hello Mayank? What's wrong?

Mayank- Is Sheena still at home?

Gunjan- No, she left a while ago. I thought you two were on the airplane already.

Mayank was really worried now- Then, where is she? I have been waiting here for at least four hours now!

Samrat just couldn't believe that someone would hurt Sheena; she was so sweet and cared so much for Mayank. He droved as fast as he could to the airport.

Samrat- He is going to be crushed when he hears this. I hope Sheena lives through this. He rushed into the airport and spots Mayank called someone.

Samrat- Mayank, I have something to tell you.

Mayank grabbed his arm- Its Sheena, isn't?

Nupur had tried to take the long way home, driving onto the busiest streets of Mumbai; she wanted to lose this stupid man. He was one of her dad's right hand man in San Francisco, and one wanted her to love him.

Nupur- Why doesn't you just give up? Ranvijay was in the right lane, right next to her car.

Ranvijay- Never!

She continued home, when she was a block away, she noticed that he was gone.

Nupur- What a relieve, what a jerk.

She had slam the door when she got into the house, Arti ran to her.

Arti- Hi, mommy.

Nupur- Sweety, I told you never ever to step into a stranger's car.

Arti- But but mommy.

Shashi came into the room and Arti ran to him.

Shashi- Stop it, I told Ranvijay to pick her up and she knows him.

Nupur was angrier- But dad.

Shashi- Now listen to me.

She walked into the study, sat down, and placed her hands on her forehead.

Shashi- Honey, Ranvijay is a good person, I know he loves you dearly and.

Nupur- Dad, stop it. You know I can never forget.

Shashi- That cop, he is happily married now. What can you do about it?

Nupur- I dont care if he is married, I am very happy for him. I just want to see him well and live happily. She ran out of the room and up the stairs.

Shashi- I will not let him be happy while my daughter here is suffering. He laughed, I'm going to let him pay for what he did to my daughter and his father did to my wife.

Mayank rushed into the hospital as quickly as his two legs could take him. Diya, Benji and Gunjan were standing there impatiently waiting for the red operation room light to go out. They tried to look less worried.

Mayank- Please let her be alright, please.

Diya- Mayank, just sit down, she going to be okay.

Benji- We have the best doctors here, don't worry.

Gunjan- Mayank, calm down. I know Sheena doesn't want to see you like this.

Mayank tried to sit down, but all he wanted to know if his wife was okay.

Mayank- I saw her this morning, I should have waited for her. Why did I have to go to the office and get my stupid briefcase?

Samrat- Mayank, its not your fault, she going to be alright.

Mayank- Why, why, I said that I was going on vacation, then why did I need this? He gave the briefcase and throws it down the hall.

Suddenly, the red light was off, a doctor in a blue scrub walked slowly out. Mayank ran over to him and grabbed his arm.

Mayank- Is my wife okay, is she? Please tell me she is!

Dr. spoke sadly, Mr. Sharma, I'm sorry but she lose too much blood and shot was aimed near her heart. We did our best, I'm sorry.

Mayank grabbed the doctor's collar- No, no! You're lying to me, you didn't do you best, she's still alive.

Dr. - Mr. Sharma, please calm down. I'm very, very sorry.

Mayank was so weak that he fell out the floor, No, no! I saw her this morning. No, no.

Gunjan had started to cry, Benji went to her side and hugged her. Diya and Samrat held Mayank up and helped him sit down on the bench.

Nearby, Nupur had just returned to the hospital to get a patients file. She hid behind a wall and watched; when the Mayank's briefcase landed near her foot, she had picked it up.

Nupur hugged it- Mayank has kept this after all of these years. No, why did they have to take Sheena away from him, why? Her heart began to sink when she saw how sad Mayank was; she wanted to rush over to him.

Nupur- No, can't do this. She hurried into her car and drove home.





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Posted: 12 October 2010 at 11:48am | IP Logged
very nice part plz cont soon and thx lot for the pm

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i hope Nupur comes to know the truth... nice upate

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Awesom update
 
plz do continue soon

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sooo sheena is no more.....thats so sad.............................

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