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Chaloo Khanak- OS UPDATED on page 2 and page 3 (Page 4)

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Posted: 15 September 2010 at 3:47am | IP Logged
OMG Clapbeeni superb,funtastic,,excellent,rocking,awesome,fantabulous.nice ,too good  I was really spell bound reading themClap
Thank u a lot all those inspirers because of u beeni wrote such an outstanding OS

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Posted: 15 September 2010 at 3:57am | IP Logged
@ shriya: thanks A LOT shriya Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile haina? even i agree that loads of people inspired me :) i used to wonder how people write OSs! you need so much time, you need a good concept, you need an original story, language, humour there's soo much you need to put in it! but seriously, when i started writing it all just came automatically. Shanak effect i tell youROFL

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Posted: 15 September 2010 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Edited my earlier postEmbarrassed

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Posted: 15 September 2010 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Hey Beeni!!
 
I just read it all in one go, and it is really amazing!!!
Truly sweet and romantic.....great work hun!!
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Posted: 15 September 2010 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by missfilmy

ResLOL

*EDITED*

Sorry, I took loads of timeEmbarrassed

I read it "ruk ruk ke", imagining every scene, cherishing every sceneEmbarrassed

Sach mein Beeni, you potrayed Shaan and Khank sooooo well.


'Was it just my imagination or did I just see a flicker of annoyance in Khanak's eyes?'

"Aanay do inhay" she said loudly, "main bhee baat nahi karoo gee!"

Shaan cornering Khanak...I really want this

" Kyunkay main aapsay pyar karti hoon", she looked up into Shaantanu's eyes as she said it, all in one go, and was surprised that she didn't feel herself blushing. It felt like a mere statement. The truth. That was all.


"Oh!" whispered Shaan, now moving Khanak backwards towards the bed, holding her shoulders. "So you were playing hard-to-get? Haan?"


Shaan gently pushed Khanak so that she fell on the bed, straight on her back. Shaan lay down beside her as well, turned and came over her and whispered "You love me Khanak" It was not a question. It was a statement. Khanak didn't nod her head in approval.

OMG OMG, so sweetEmbarrassed

Shaantanu, on the other hand, sat on the bed and what he did next made Khanak gulp. Taking off his shirt, he announced to the room in general, "Buhat garmi hain" and laid on the bed, shirtless

LOL He should do thatLOL

" Shaantanu! Aap yay kyun karay hain?!"
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"tum mujhay tung kar rahee thee! Haina? Kar liya! Ab khush! Tumko pata bhee hain mujh par kya guzree hain!" Shaantanu suddenly became louder.
I want thisBig smile

OMG OMG the kissing, the proposal and hugging.................shooooooooooooooo sweet, typical our fav ShanakEmbarrassed

The ending is tooooo good:


At that time they both felt that completing their marriage could wait'could wait until after their second marriage. It was an unspoken, mutual feeling.Embarrassed

Very good job BeeniClap You made me hungryLOL want some moreLOL

I don't know what Karishma will do after reading itLOL She will surely ask Swapnaji to take you within the RBO CV groupLOL



 
WHERE is karishma!!?she's always online at this time! but she didn' come online at all today :( haha anything to do with shanak and that girl goes crazy! lets see how she reacts LOL
 
aww thank you soo much ranjini for letting me know the actual lines that you loved! it meant a lot when you said you were reading everything ruk ruk kay...like when i'm reading a novel by my favourtite writer even i do that, read slowly and savour each wordEmbarrassed
 
lol about taking off his shirt...yes...don't i always look for an excuse to have that...Sehju where are you? i made KT shirtless just for you!
 
The proposal i wanted to be flawless...the last one really broke my heartCry lol and plus i didn;t want shanak to get all lovey dovey in a weird farmhouse. I wanted them to, you know, go to that stage in a proper way, after taking their vows again and having a meaningful reunion Embarrassed
 
 

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Posted: 15 September 2010 at 4:52am | IP Logged
@ februaryflower : Thanks! Hug (whats your name?) i never knew i could write romance lol. simply because i don't read romance! lol

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Posted: 15 September 2010 at 8:09am | IP Logged
tofeeeeeeeessssss i wannna hug u big timeHugHugHug...........dear u just made my mind n heart go sumwhere else only wat a super duper scene awesome awesome awesome......i cant tell u in wrds how beautiful this scene is......a perfect romance n a perfect confession...i want this 2 heppen wid shsnak at their confession time..........really really put this on the star one site n im 10000% sure u wil win...i soooooooooooooooooooo loved reading it n i was imagining everything happen between my shanak..............beautiful dear just superb.......standing ovation 2 uClapClapClapClapClapThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpHeartHeartHeartHeartHeart

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Posted: 15 September 2010 at 8:41am | IP Logged
yeah beeni., karishma is right.
 
it is really good .just summarise and post this in starone wesite wihtout fail. It is a request from ur fans here.
 
,u would be providing happiness to many who visit  tha page.they would have a smile reading it.
 
so not for contest but for their happiness just condense and  post it.

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