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Since, there are loads of writers here who perhaps would do more justice to the Maaneet confession and my mind seems to be stuck at one point after it.. i thought id share this with you all...
So, they confess their feelings for one another and hug, cry and part for the night!
Part 1:
Geet is really happy as she falls asleep.. she has spoken to Maan about everything, her being forced into marriage, her baby, and also why she had been running away from her feelings for him...maan tells her, he doesnt want to think of anything else today.. and he has never been this happy before and he wants to live this moment with her....with happy thoughts and the confidence that Maan would always be by her side geet falls asleep...
somewhere in the middle of the night, a sound wakes her up! she is scared, of all the animal sounds she can hear around her, she starts sweating-she tries maan's number but it is unavailable, and its way past mid night, she decides she will not call him... and so she shuts the window and tries to sleep once more.. but this time she hears foot steps, that seem to grow louder by the minute... she gets really scared, and finds her danda that she has always had next to her bed since the time she had come to the Khurana Outhouse.. she grips it with the silppery hands and tells herself, she is a strong girl and that she can handle this...So, slowly and steadily she takes steps and comes down.. she spots a silhouette on the other end of the hallway and she prays to her babaji and goes to attack him.. she comes down slowly in the dark, and before she can react a hand grips her tight and closes her eyes with a black cloth, carries her, straight out of the out house and before she can say a thing, she is put down... and the patti is removed.. she opens her eyes slowly abusing to person only to realise she is in a meadow like place, which is actually maan's garden... there is candles all over, and the jhoola on which she is sitting is adorned with flowers and creepers... she breaks into a smile.. and wants to get down to look around when a person stops her and makes her wear her jooti's ....
yeh jooti toh she says....
wahi waali hai jo tumne mujhe pe pheka tha ... says maan, but he has a smile on his face, instead of his usually stern expression...!
Geet blushes..." yeh ab tak aapke paas hai.....
Maan: haan... aur aaj ke paas bhi mere paas hi rahega....
Geet: yeh toh, wahi kahani jaisi hai na, ho maine apne school main padha tha... chandrakala aur uska raj kumar...
maan: chandra kala?
Geet: haan... humare hoshiarpur main, yeh kahani humari teacher sunaya karti thi....
Maan: oh you mean Cinderella?
Geet: jo bhi ho... toh iska yehi matlab yeh hua ke main woh chandrakala aur aap mere raj kumar.... ( she stops suddenly embarrased as she notices maan gazing at her...)
Maahi..... plays.... she smiles... as he holds her hand... she goes in red in her face and looks away... and the background score of Teri ore starts playing...
tell me if i shd continue...
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Part 2: page 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=2
Part 3: page 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=4
Part 4: page 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=6
Part 5: page 9:] https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=9
Part 6: page 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=12
Part 7: page 17: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=17
Part 8: page 20: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=20
Part 9: page 24: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=24
Part 10: page 27: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=27
Part 11: Page 32: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=28
Part 12: Page 36: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=36
Part 13: page 39: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=39
Part 14: page 44: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=44
Part 15: page 51: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=51
Part 16: page 55: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=55
Part 17: page 58: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=58
Part 18: page 65: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=65
Part 19: page 70: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=70
Part 20: page 74: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=74
Part 21: page 83: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=83
Part 22: page 87: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=87
Part 23: page 91: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=91
Part 24: page 98: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=98
Part 25: page101: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=101
Part 26: page 105: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=105
love,
niha
Links to the other parts:
Since, there are loads of writers here who perhaps would do more justice to the Maaneet confession and my mind seems to be stuck at one point after it.. i thought id share this with you all...
So, they confess their feelings for one another and hug, cry and part for the night!
Part 1:
Geet is really happy as she falls asleep.. she has spoken to Maan about everything, her being forced into marriage, her baby, and also why she had been running away from her feelings for him...maan tells her, he doesnt want to think of anything else today.. and he has never been this happy before and he wants to live this moment with her....with happy thoughts and the confidence that Maan would always be by her side geet falls asleep...
somewhere in the middle of the night, a sound wakes her up! she is scared, of all the animal sounds she can hear around her, she starts sweating-she tries maan's number but it is unavailable, and its way past mid night, she decides she will not call him... and so she shuts the window and tries to sleep once more.. but this time she hears foot steps, that seem to grow louder by the minute... she gets really scared, and finds her danda that she has always had next to her bed since the time she had come to the Khurana Outhouse.. she grips it with the silppery hands and tells herself, she is a strong girl and that she can handle this...So, slowly and steadily she takes steps and comes down.. she spots a silhouette on the other end of the hallway and she prays to her babaji and goes to attack him.. she comes down slowly in the dark, and before she can react a hand grips her tight and closes her eyes with a black cloth, carries her, straight out of the out house and before she can say a thing, she is put down... and the patti is removed.. she opens her eyes slowly abusing to person only to realise she is in a meadow like place, which is actually maan's garden... there is candles all over, and the jhoola on which she is sitting is adorned with flowers and creepers... she breaks into a smile.. and wants to get down to look around when a person stops her and makes her wear her jooti's ....
yeh jooti toh she says....
wahi waali hai jo tumne mujhe pe pheka tha ... says maan, but he has a smile on his face, instead of his usually stern expression...!
Geet blushes..." yeh ab tak aapke paas hai.....
Maan: haan... aur aaj ke paas bhi mere paas hi rahega....
Geet: yeh toh, wahi kahani jaisi hai na, ho maine apne school main padha tha... chandrakala aur uska raj kumar...
maan: chandra kala?
Geet: haan... humare hoshiarpur main, yeh kahani humari teacher sunaya karti thi....
Maan: oh you mean Cinderella?
Geet: jo bhi ho... toh iska yehi matlab yeh hua ke main woh chandrakala aur aap mere raj kumar.... ( she stops suddenly embarrased as she notices maan gazing at her...)
Maahi..... plays.... she smiles... as he holds her hand... she goes in red in her face and looks away... and the background score of Teri ore starts playing...
tell me if i shd continue...
index:
Part 2: page 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=2
Part 3: page 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=4
Part 4: page 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=6
Part 5: page 9:] https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=9
Part 6: page 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=12
Part 7: page 17: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=17
Part 8: page 20: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=20
Part 9: page 24: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=24
Part 10: page 27: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=27
Part 11: Page 32: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=28
Part 12: Page 36: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=36
Part 13: page 39: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=39
Part 14: page 44: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=44
Part 15: page 51: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=51
Part 16: page 55: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=55
Part 17: page 58: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=58
Part 18: page 65: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=65
Part 19: page 70: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=70
Part 20: page 74: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=74
Part 21: page 83: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=83
Part 22: page 87: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=87
Part 23: page 91: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=91
Part 24: page 98: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=98
Part 25: page101: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=101
Part 26: page 105: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461465?pn=105
love,
niha
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