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Posted: 13 years ago
Helloooooooo!
I just wrote a small poem from Ridz to SId.Its a happy poem reflecting SR's life at the moment!
Do criticise/comment plz!
 
 

Its love when you feel the sun's shining brighter

Its care when a small hurt in his hand makes

Your heart ache like it never had.

Its jealousy when  you start fuming

On seeing him hugging someone else even if

its a guy

Its passion in his eyes that

Makes you go weak in your knees

It's the smile on his lips that makes you

Wanna live

 

Its care in his eyes that makes

Your world a paradise

Its beautiful when his cheesy lines

Also makes you blush

Its amazing when his single 'I love you"

Can make everything perfect!

Its Lovely to see the same world  differently

Its paradise to visit your dreams

Its heavenly when Its only you he sees

Its funny that even you can see only him

Its Life  given to live again

Its Love when you marry the

Same guy again!

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.Angel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh wow this is awesome dearπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .Angel

oh wow this is awesome dearπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thank you!😳
Posted: 13 years ago
amazing poemsπŸ‘ 
 
just straight to the heart, M-I-N-D-B-L-O-W-I-N-G, every words is perfect, marrying the same guy twice is love!! BRAVO!!
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you!
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Originally posted by: hewascool90210

amazing poemsπŸ‘ 

 
just straight to the heart, M-I-N-D-B-L-O-W-I-N-G, every words is perfect, marrying the same guy twice is love!! BRAVO!!
 

Thanks a lot bani!πŸ€—
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderfully written ,straight from the heart.Perfect for Sid n Riddhima.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Parul !! πŸ€—

OMG, Parul, I have no words. Just one advice. Turn a lyricist, and do something with the songs these days. πŸ˜›

Loved it, like, reallly reallly loved it !! ❀️

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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant Parul!

Love it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you Anky and Nikki!πŸ€—πŸ€—
LOL Anky I am not that good at all and neither I think I have time for that ryt now!