Posted: 04 September 2010 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Nw wht wud we wnt if the second Siddhima marriage dsnt go according to plan? I noe it wud definitely shatter our hopes of quick bright future (point to be noted: i said quick bright future which means i lost hopes for quick bt i still hope fr a bright future). So nw hw wud we wnt the story to progress. This is my melodramatic take on hw the story shud progress:
Sid and Riddhima are all set for their second marriage. So far every rasam has been taken care of with perfection by Anjali (guys recollect! she ws supportive of 1st SR marriage). Things fall in their place like they belong there.
Wedding night scene. (Sid and Anjali)
Sid: mujhe pata hai ke woh mujhse pyar karti hai leken kabhi kabar uska Armaan ke liye yun pareshaan hona.....
(looks down and nt sure hw to continue)
Anjali: Sid shayad jissey tum concern samajh rahey ho woh shayad guilt hai. Woh aagey barna chahti hai tumharey saath leken Armaan ki haalat zeemey daar woh apney aap ko manti hai.
Sid: Anjali main nahin kehta ke woh Armaan ke dard ko bhool jaaye kyunke main jaanta hoon ke kahin na kahin hum dono uss dard ke zimmeydaar hain par woh merey saath apney pareshani ko share karna hi nahin chahti
Anjali: sid baat ko...
(enters JP huffing and puffing)
JP: Sid bhaiya riddhima phlowerji toh bhagayi. Hamrah matlab hai ke unka phone aaya aur woh daur teh daur teh chali gayi!
Sid: phone?! Kya phone? Kiska phone aaya?
JP: Armaan ka...
(Sid gives one last pain struck look to Anjali and heads off)
Story moves as:
Sid arrives at hospital to find a drunk unconcious Armaan in the general ward. Pain begins to sketch on his face when he sees a tearful Riddhima by his side.
Sid and Riddhima silently take care of the paper work due for Armaan's discharge and exchange a few formal words when extremely necessary.
Sid's place scene. (SR)
Riddhima: Sid tumey samajh na hoga ke mainey jaan bhujh ke kuch nahin kiya. Mainey tummey phone karney ki koshish ki leken Sid tumhara phone off aaraha tha.
(Sid gives her continuous blank looks with no response and Riddhima gets more tensed and desperate to make him understand. She kneels beside the couche he's sitting on and takes hold of his hand)
Riddhima: tumse zyada mein aur kissi sey bhi...
Sid (cuts in): tum explanation deti thakti nahin aur mein explanation sunthey thaktha nahin. Leken aaj nahin Riddhima. Aaj mein thak chuka hoon. Aaj mujh mein himmat nahin rahi. Aaj mujhe kuch zyada hi dard hua. Shayad hum ek dusrey ko dhuk deney ke liya miletey.
Riddhima: Sid main...
(her voice trails off as Sid walks off)
Story moves as:
Riddhima tries desperately to talk to Sid the next morning bt Sid far too hurt by last night's incident leaves for hospital.
hospital scene (SR)
a tearful Sid sits on a bench near examination room. Riddhima thinking he is pain struck because of last night walks by his side and sits next to him. Sid still in tears dsnt realise shez next to him. Riddhima clears her thraot to pull his attention. Sid looks up immediately and wipes off his tears.
Sid: tum kab aayi?
Riddhima: zyada deir nahin hua hai
Sid: der toh hogaya hai Riddhima
(Riddhima is struck with agony as she realises wht he meant)
Riddhima: Sid deir nahin hua hai abh bhi sab kuch badal saktha hai. Tumhey bas mujhe ek aur moqaa deyna hoga. Sid bas ek akhri bar mujh pe barosa karo.
(Sid puts his finger on her lips and shez taken aback by the fresh set of tears in his eyes)
Sid: akhri bar mein kab tumhey bola ke mein tumse pyar kartha hoon?
(Riddhima still in shock cnt reply.)
Sid: well u noe wht? Mein karta hoon. Bohot pyar karta hoon tumse. Sirf tumse. Kabhi bhi mainey tumse zyada ya pehley kissi ke barrey mein nahin socha.
(he bends on his knee takes hold of her hand)
Sid: tum samajh sakti hona main kya keh raha hon?
(Riddhima has tears following frm her eyes and can only reply with a nod)
Sid: aaj ke baad sab acha hoga. Main tumhey woh sari khushyan doonga. Main woh sab karoonga jo shayad main kar nahin paya aaj tak.
(the camera thn moves to the other end of the corridor where Anjali is found crying)
Should I go ahead with part 2?
*Sorry I jus realised its a bit long! bt part 2 will be better!
Part 2: page 2
Part 3: page 4
Part 4: page 5
Part 5: page 6
Part 6: page 7
Part 7: page 9
Part 8: page 11
Part 9: page 12
Part 10: page 14
Part 11: page 18
Part 12: page 20
Part 13: page 23
Part 14: page 26
Part 15: page 28
Part 16: page 31
Part 17: page 35
Part 18: page 39
Part 19: page 43
Part 20: page 48
Part 21: page 53
Part 22: page 58
Part 23: page 63
Part 24: page 68
Part 25: page 74
Part 26: page 77
Part 27: page 84
Part 28: page 89
Edited by Dsntmatter - 16 December 2010 at 6:23am