**** Grace, I will be back later to give you my update. Right now, all I can say is that I am 😍 😆 and 😳 with this chapter. ****
Grace, another great update.
I loved it when Prem and Heer woke in the morning and later realized how comfortable they were sleeping next to each other. It was a very sweet scene.
When Prem asked Heer out on a date was cute. They both trying to figure out how the date thing happened and Heer trying to figure out what kind of "date" it was going to be was funny.
Heer buying ice cream for Prem was very adorable. The entire ice cream scene that happened to Prem and Heer was 😍 😆 and 😳. With all those spectars watching them, some of them being tourist, I am surprised nobody took a picture of that 😆. And aaahhh, their longing to kiss each other is so cute and tormenting not only to Prem and Heer but for your readers also 😆. Don't worry Grace, I loved the part when Prem's mouth so close to Heer's mouth. It was great scene. 😍
I love how you ended the chapter. Heer and Prem holding hands was sweet and romantic.
Thank you for the PM. I am really looking forward to your next update.
Congrats on your 100th page. 🥳
Edited by Aymee - 13 years ago
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