Chai's Teahouse (Creative Writings House) - Page 63

heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cn u plz add e to pm list for pee loon nd at first sight aswell :) im alredy in pm lisgt for alltherongmuvsintherytways :D

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

Loved the part Grace! Great as usual! Please add me to your PM list that way i can stay up to date with this one as well!!

Thanks :)

 

Nikki xoxo

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Originally posted by: Ayesha103

heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cn u plz add e to pm list for pee loon nd at first sight aswell :) im alredy in pm lisgt for alltherongmuvsintherytways :D

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Oh, Pee Loon is actually finished and completed no more updates on that SS.

Originally posted by: khajju

awww i m soooo sorryy grace..u r too good yaar...u updated so fast for us and me even not commented for last part...actually i was going to read day b4 yesturday only..but i had to go...after tht wh i went to sleep i thought of reading but my stupid net wasnt working😡..i tried many times but failed..thn i went to my kitchen in all dark and tried connecting the neighbours net but all in vain..tht too wasnt workingg..i tried till 3:00am and thn went off to sleep....see i tried all possible ways but couldnt read...then yesturday after school i read the update...the i had lotts of work so didnt get time to comment...and yesturday again in the night when i was abt to comment my net agin stopped workingg..heheh ya it stopped again...i had the next update but comment on it later...ok now i ll stop my bak bak...cming to ur update it was super awesmee...luvd it yaar...poor heeer its soooo sad with her...aah so bth premeer ignored each other after tht kiss...prem actually told heer tht he is dating abby to tell heer tht if sh can date tht bo( i forgot his name) so he can also date abby..m i right??...heer liks prem but prem...prem wasnt allowing heer to work in his house coz o tht abbyy..i m gona kill this girl...and whn  she is not thr he is inviting her....present was greatt...wooww...prem is heers bodyuard...want sme nice scenes noww...nyayzz thanks for pm...and ya dnt think tht u r updating fast tht we dnt get enogh time to comment...u continue with ur good speed.😆😃

It's cool.  Yeah, I noticed this last part I updated before anyone else had a chance to really comment.  But I wanted to get both Part A and B out so everything could be wrapped up and we could move onto their adulthood relationship.

It's okay...sorry about the net issues.

About Prem asking Heer about dating Abby...um, I meant that:

Prem doesn't realize that Heer likes him as more than a friend.  He's a bit stupid and confused himself because Heer did go up to Frank and allow Frank to ask her out to the dance.  Prem in turn asked Abby out because he was sort of upset but of course Prem doesn't really understand why he got upset in the first place.

Prem and Abby started hanging around each other a lot after the dance.  Heer wasn't really talking to Frank or thinking about dating him at all.  Prem went to Heer to see what she sort of thought about Abby and then told her that he and Abby were probably going to start dating. 

Hope that clears up any questions or confusions 😃

Originally posted by: iheartChai

It's cool.  Yeah, I noticed this last part I updated before anyone else had a chance to really comment.  But I wanted to get both Part A and B out so everything could be wrapped up and we could move onto their adulthood relationship.

It's okay...sorry about the net issues.

About Prem asking Heer about dating Abby...um, I meant that:

Prem doesn't realize that Heer likes him as more than a friend.  He's a bit stupid and confused himself because Heer did go up to Frank and allow Frank to ask her out to the dance.  Prem in turn asked Abby out because he was sort of upset but of course Prem doesn't really understand why he got upset in the first place.

Prem and Abby started hanging around each other a lot after the dance.  Heer wasn't really talking to Frank or thinking about dating him at all.  Prem went to Heer to see what she sort of thought about Abby and then told her that he and Abby were probably going to start dating. 

Hope that clears up any questions or confusions 😃

oh thankss for the explanation..i got it now😊

Finally they found each other lol
Just luv da wy heer teased prem that prt was hilarious ....
Their separation prt was sad
finally they found eachother so it's good

While holding both ears, Grace my dear, I am really, really sorry. 😳  I am sorry for not replying to you from the beginning.  I have been waiting to read your SS but I didn't get the chance.  Today I finally got the chance to read and finally catch up with your SS.

Wow........
loved d flashback scenes.........was cryin ........
pendant was cute............
finaly finaly............they recognized each other.............. ........
awww prem hugged her 5 times 😳............n funny thing..........he was in his boxers😆 .....n telin her abt his muscles n six pack☺️..........so cute........... cant wait for d nxt chapter..............nw waitn 2 c how they fall in luv again..............
plzzzzzzz plzzz plzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooon ..................thnx for d pm............

OH-MY-GOD dat was just fantbulous Grace i was ltrly jumpng!! srsly like Prem me too was in a complete shock it was truly a miricle!! and Prem was completly outta control hahahahahah lmao!! and i dnt wannna tlak abt dat sad bart it was written beautifully bt was extrmly Sad!! loved it to da coore!

Originally posted by: sweta2005

its awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it waitinggggggg for next asap.

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Originally posted by: rhtpkcm

woahh! loved it1 thanks for the quick update

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Originally posted by: pwincess1

mine

 

thank god you updated

i dont know how many times i logged on today waiting to see ur PM

 

now im off to read it

thanx again

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Originally posted by: princess5341

OMG

finally they actually found out about each other  - I would think that it would take longer but . . .

the seperation was so sad: (

anyways update soon

cant wait to see how they fall in love again!!!

Well, I figured if I dragged that out too long it would be a bit too ridiculous so decided to have them realize who they were sooner...now it's the development of their adult relationship 😉 Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

Awesome part!!

 

Finally! they both find out about each other 😃

lol really loved how prem kept talking and talking in his boxers

Cant wait for more

Do continue soon

 

Maheen xx

I thought that would be something funny considering how sad their childhood memories were.  Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: khajju

hii gracee😃

awesmee update..finaly they recognized each other...soo happy...luvd it when prem was trying to convince heer tht he is prem onlyy😆😆....the past was sooo sad...awww so prem was actuall asking heer abt the gift for heer only...and she misunderstood him...not only she we oo misunderstiid him😆...the fight scene was sooo sad...and the seperation brougt tears in my eyes...veryy wlll written...thankss for pm...cant wait for next.

Hehe...my evil doing of course 😈...I thought it was fitting since they've been having issues and Prem's been ignoring Leher/Heer a lot because of Abby.  Too bad he doesn't realize what his actions mean...poor confused and stupid Prem 😆 Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: sweetnsourx3

omg i was right about the necklace thing!!  

wow so much happened in this chapter, i dont even know what to say...i absolutely loveddd it! they finally found out everything!! lol prem convincing heer was funny, he got all excited 😍

 i'm glad prem and leher didnt end on a bad note in the flashbacks, it was sad to see them separate though 😭  

thanks for updating so quickly! hope the next one comes soon too 😉

Yeah, a lot happened in the last two chapters...I could have dragged it out but I really didn't want to and wanted to get to the point of the story.  I think I stated somewhere in this thread that this SS will probably be a very short one...well, that is depending on my writing...sometimes I write too much and the storyline starts dragging out.  We will see 😛  Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: crystall

Awesome update !

Loved it !

Glad that  they both find out about each other !

I thought it will take more time !

Soo thank you very much !

Waiting for next !

Update soon !

Thnx for pm !

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Originally posted by: aaminaman

Ohhh so great I didn't think you would make them realize each other so fast but I am happy and it was so funny prem in boxers hugging heer and going on talking and do update the next part as soon as possible I can't wait to read and find out how prem falls in love with heer

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Originally posted by: Sukrutha

yeppieee.....yes......yahooo..!!!!!!...they recognized....

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Originally posted by: shivangi2092

that was superbbbbb!!!!!!!!!!

wow! it was really amazing dear!

loved each and every bit of it!

thanks for the pm dear!

continue soon!

m loving this 1!

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waitingggggg r u updatingggg now