Fan Fictions

   

SR FF (To those eyes i kneel)update dec 21 pg15

Post Reply New Post

Page 1 of 17

Page 1
Page   of 17
Page 2 Page 17

kusumfan

Senior Member

kusumfan

Joined: 02 January 2009

Posts: 375

Posted: 01 September 2010 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
Hey guys
This is an os i began to write a really really long time ago and never finished. So i thought i would post it. It is from the first time Rid-Sid meet and it continues from there. Let me know if you want me to continue it because it is still not finished (by commenting or hittng the like button!)
 

To Those I Kneel

After two years Riddhima Gupta was returning to Mumbai. As soon as she took the first step onto the soil of India, she flashed back to her past'Armaan. The man she had fallen in love with and also the man that had left her, left her to pursue his career in America. He did ask her to come with him and she would have, but she said no to test whether he would leave without her or not. He made his decision clear and after that she couldn't help but feel betrayed. She had to take some time to learn to live with the biggest betrayal of her life, so she had left. Now she was coming back. As she was making her way through customs, when a man in a blue shirt bumps into her and catches her right before she is about to fall.

 

Sid

As he is dropping Tamaana off at the airport he accidently bumps into a red suit girl. Wow! She has the beauty that would match the beauty of a thousand angles put together. As he stares into her eyes his heart sinks. Her eyes'it's like they are dead, like she is dead. Wait! Why is her sadness making me sad? I don't even know her yet I want to already spend the rest of my life trying to bring those eyes back to life. Does she feel anything?

 

Ridz glares at the man and slaps him.

 

Sid

Okay she does feel something. Anger! Ow man she's got an arm. 

 

"How dare you? How dare you take me in your arms? You molester!"-Ridz blasts

"Okay first of all, I am not a molester! Second of all I didn't know taking you in my arms was such a daring act. Is there like a medal or some sort of recognition I should get for showing my courage"-Sid

"What! Tumhari himaat kaisi hui ki tum mujhe se aisa bhaat karo? Huh?"-Ridz continues to scold and a crowd of people gather to enjoy the spectacle.

 

Upon seeing the scene that they were creating, Sid decides it's best to leave this mental case alone and leave. As he is about to leave, Ridz stops him by placing her hand on Sid's shoulder.

 

"Ab tum mujhe molest kar rahi ho"-Sid

Ridz quickly removes her hand from Sid's shoulder, and he seizes the opportunity to leave.

 

Ridz

She is sitting at her window in her old room, watching the rain fall. She was back with her old friends, with her family and in her old life. But she wasn't the old Riddhima. She was even sure if she existed at all or not. She was just a one of a kind statue that could walk and talk. But she wasn't thinking about that at all, instead she was thinking about what happened at the airport. The man in the blue that had bumped into her had also taken over her thoughts. His eyes reflected the sadness of losing a love, but unlike her he still seemed to live. He was handsome. The kind of guy the every girl would give a second look to. But he still seemed oblivious to the effect he had on women. Whoever he was she was sure she was never going to see him again.

 

Next Day

For the first time in two years Riddhima walks into Sanjeevani. She relives all the precious moments that she spent with Armaan, that now seem like a lifetime ago. She walks into her dad's cabin as he wanted to talk to her about something important. She doesn't know why but she feels nervous as if something drastic is about to happen.

 

"Beta, I have something very important to tell you. Your mother and I have noticed that you haven't been the same and I can understand that. But I think it is about time you moved ahead in your life and I think you need someone's support to help you move on. Beta, your mother and I have found a boy for you."-Shashank

 
Ps: if you want me to add you to my pm list i would appreciate it if you guys added me to your buddy list (i can't do so because my account has some problem) if not then i will still pm you!!Smile
 
PM List (please let me know if i forgot someone)

yokosona

 sidhima3jsp 

kiran255

 Noorya

Wafa_94

sidma_love

 princess1

indian_beauty

mayuri.vet

divi4u

nikita_88

punjabkudi98

Parts

Part 1-page 1

Part2-page 3

Part3-page 5

Part4-page 7

Part 5-page 9

Part 6-page 12

Part 7-page 15




Edited by kusumfan - 21 December 2010 at 12:35pm

The following 20 member(s) liked the above post:

ANNU30mala1108vidyashreeMuasamSept16thjacobharry10011..Naina..arp04srockskiran255Liashna-Prithi-ShiningStar18princess1...Noorya...payyalDJ..-Mayu-indian_beauty-Harshu-nikita_88_Divya_

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "SR FF (To those eyes i kneel)update dec 21 pg15" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

kiran255

IF-Dazzler

kiran255

Joined: 15 December 2009

Posts: 4400

Posted: 01 September 2010 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
OMG Prachi
i just love it , Tongue
very well written
do continue Embarrassed
and dont u dare not pm me Angry
put my name in permanent pm list
got itCool

princess1

IF-Rockerz

princess1

Joined: 08 July 2005

Posts: 7231

Posted: 01 September 2010 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
WOnderful Dear :) love reading it :)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kusumfan

-Prithi-

IF-Rockerz

-Prithi-

Joined: 13 May 2010

Posts: 5611

Posted: 02 September 2010 at 12:55am | IP Logged
nice part Thumbs Up
plz update it soon Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kusumfan

-Harshu-

IF-Stunnerz

-Harshu-

Joined: 27 May 2010

Posts: 31527

Posted: 02 September 2010 at 10:50am | IP Logged

Prachi Hug

Great starting yaar & dat too wid a twist Wink

I loved it sweetie...Embarrassed

Plz continue soon

And yes add me to ur PM list

ShiningStar18

IF-Rockerz

ShiningStar18

Joined: 22 October 2009

Posts: 7458

Posted: 02 September 2010 at 10:54am | IP Logged
OMG Prachi this is so awesome!Clap
 
Loved the beginning. Kash if this happened in January then we wouldn't have had to wait so long for their love story to start. Tongue
 
It's beautifully written. Please continue soon and please please PM me the next part.
 
 
Take Care
Wafa

...Noorya...

IF-Rockerz

...Noorya...

Joined: 02 March 2008

Posts: 5944

Posted: 02 September 2010 at 11:08am | IP Logged
wow Prachie it was amazinTongue
SId bein molested by Riddhima wasROFLROFLROFL
and dont tell me Shashank wants Sid as his damaad!!
that would be a great twist yaar
plzzzzzz pm me when u update the next part

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ShiningStar18

nikita_92

Groupbie

nikita_92

Joined: 10 August 2010

Posts: 154

Posted: 02 September 2010 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
It is amazing so far. Please do not stop! =]
Please update as soon as you can

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kusumfan

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
Mister Greek Gods Miss Angry Eyes Ch15 PG120 21/04

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 137 138

missy22 1100 104616 21 December 2011 at 1:22am
By yongshin
RN-Look into my eyes-Pt 25+Sumry ||Sept 1|| Pge.72

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 76 77

starasdf 608 39863 02 August 2011 at 11:41am
By pearlie
~Hungry Eyes~(AR MIN) Part5 PG1 22/5/09

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 21 22

Catwoman 170 21857 19 February 2011 at 3:17am
By vidu87
MN FF - Behind my Eyes (Suspended)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 20 21

epiphany. 162 6135 21 October 2010 at 8:45am
By love.mayurarti
Author's NOTE l AR FF l When his eyes met mine <3

2 3

IloveKSG4ever 16 1728 17 October 2010 at 10:11am
By ashwini16

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.