SR FF ~Tum Mile~(PART 26 p144) - Page 6

Noorya 🤗

This OS was jst amazing........👏👏👏

it wasn't boring at all.....plz update it soon.......

Noorya,
it wasn't boring at all
wonderfully written
loved reading it
do update soon
and thanx 4 d pm

-Tasheen-

noorya.... 🤗 🤗........

amazing SR FF.......this is so typical SR.....it's just amazing!!!!!.......... 👏 👏.........and thanks so much for the pm........and please update asap........it's just too good!!!!!!!

and m really sorry for the late reply...actually college has started so have been inactive on forums.....hope u will forgive m for the late reply......

loads of love❤️ ❤️
mayuri❤️ ❤️

Noorya,😊

gr8 noorya.

Let me start by, 👏👏👏

Like someone pointed out, everything was totally in character. The actions and the words were in sync. And the coordination was so perfect that you could imagine it happening in front of you. You could imagine SR fighting, R bandaging S, S holding R, and so on.

I louved the way the story is shaping up. Both of them know that the other has been through a lot in their life and the real 'them' is somewhere hidden beneath the layers of anger and hurt. Now, unknowingly, they would break the layers and help the real 'them' to surface. 😊

Great work. Loved it. Continue soon. 👍🏼

PS - Thanks for the link. I would watch it and comment on Youtube. 😃

great start! thanku!! now sid n ridhima r gonna be friends!!! yayyyyyy

plz update soon cant wait................

Gr8 VM