Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

OS: Bleeding Love (Page 8)

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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
i am sooooooooooooooo sorry I haven't been replying to any of your msgs....i was sick...*sob* i am feeling a little better and ofcourse the first thing i do is sneak away with my laptop to my roomLOL....but thanks for your concern....i missed you too!!!Heart....and now the OS...*GASP* could you??...sad ending??...and what is this i am hearing about my twin being a tragedy queen?? *bigger GASP*....dude i m a sucker for happy endings so i have a feeling we might have issues later with your endingsLOL....i pressed like only cuz it was beautifully written and the way you captured Geet's emotions was just soo touching....but still, no happy ending? don't worry cuz instead of belans and chappals, i will be coming with my bulldozer...ya i have a pink and sparkly imaginary bulldozer for things i don't like....haha.....just to let you know, everytime its not hunky dory, you owe me double happy happy stories....yes i am totally not demandingLOLand its a win win situation for me cuz i get more stories from youWink....soo now i will be moving on to your next OS and it better end happily or else you will have an angry twin to deal with!!

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tes_v1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Hey Jaz,

This is one beautifully written one-shot! The feelings and emotions were amazingly portrayed. I won't complain about the separation of Maan and Geet bcoz there are other feelings and situations which need equal expression as love.

You're a great writer!

Would appreciate it if you'd drop a PM the next time you come up with something.Embarrassed


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ash08 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Jaz, my tragedy queen,

How are you? Hope you remember me back from Kis Desh forum.

As always brilliant. I love how your thoughts flow without any hitch. It was heart wrenching but it was beautiful.


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