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OS: Bleeding Love (Page 5)

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 4:50am | IP Logged
OMG....it was sooo heart warming but lyk last tym i expected d proposal par also EmbarrassedDisapprove!!

it was relly awsum though.....very very sad!!!.........i relly tot Maan wud wake up n ask her sumthin ..!!
but dis was unexpected....!! u srsly r a gr8 ri8er.....
shud try on a bigger level!! Smile

tc n keep up d gud work!!
T@$

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Hi Jaz,

That was heart wrenching OS. I love ur writing style...u do emotions' so well!

-Sona

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Great to have u here Jaz Big smile
The OS  was BRILLIANT !!
I liked this one more than the previous one.TongueBig smile
Very well written Clap
I loved the "HERE and THERE" part.It was awesomely writtenWink
I wish to hear these lines
from Geet
".... she knew him better than she'd like to admit. She saw his eyes when he said he didn't remember. For a moment, just a quick moment, his shield failed him and she's seen past his lie. For a moment, just a quick moment, his shield failed him and she'd seen into his heart. For a moment, just a quick moment, his shield had failed him and she'd seen his pain. For a moment, just a quick moment." 
very nice dialogues and written very well Thumbs Up
Great job Jaz.....luv itttSmile


Edited by Innocent02 - 25 August 2010 at 10:19am
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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 5:06am | IP Logged
That was really very senti
The way u expressed Geet's feelings it was fab
Jus loved it
 

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 7:39am | IP Logged
awesome...

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Loved it Dear but thats so painful
Loved ur way of writing

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 8:31am | IP Logged
Wow!! the best one shot i've ever read!!really loved and you my friend have a great imagination!! loved the description!!ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
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