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aakritisri1111

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 12:50am | IP Logged
hey dear lovely OS i loved it

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 1:04am | IP Logged
this was beautiful...it was sooo deep and hurtful..gosh...
how did u rite this its sooo painfull..but yet i really liked tit..thnak you..can u also add me to ur pm list?

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 1:19am | IP Logged
wonderful expression....so deep and emotional truely Geet...ClapClapClapClap

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Cry loved it dear ..really you made my eyes moist love bleed love really bleed ....true love always bleed

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Oye Jaz, u planned to send me in direct one way flight Rab de kol or what ? LOL
Yaar that was beautifully written, dare i say it again BEAUTIFUL.
Just amazing here and perfect there.
Too much to handle, too touchy not to be felt ClapClap 
 
ok i copied ur style of writing to tell you the sentences i loved the most, i admire ur sense of writing, the way u twist every sentence and add the perfect emotion.
 
My fave sentence would be " huting her here, carressing her there" EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
and " look at his stubble gain before going" LOLLOL
Why i am laughing to  this last phrase? That was at the same time so heart wrentching Cry
 
But i loved it, please keep writing OS, because i've become a HUGE fan of YOU Big smile
 
What did i just read tragedy queen huh? Werent u the Jz who used to drool over JW black boxer??? ROFL ok i wont open ur secret here .... *cough cough*
Lets be serious, so where was i? Yeah do write more Tragedy queen Tongue
 
Love,
 
Humera Hug

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anufa

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 2:01am | IP Logged
although it was sad.....

but still i find it mind blowing....luved iT!!!!


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.FlawlessSarun.

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Jaz Babes u r one of the BEST Writters on IF Clap
I mean i actuallly Felt Geet's Pain here Unhappy when she said "Main jaa rahi hoon, aur aapne saath woh saare gham leke jaa rahi hoon joh khabi aapa tha hi nahin. Aapni asoon, aapni kismat aur aapna daard leke jaa rahi hoon. Woh saare yaadein leke jaa rahi hoon joh aapne mujhe diya hai. Woh umid, woh khudaari, woh swabhimaan leke jaa rahi hoon, joh aapne mujhme jagaya hai. Woh pyaar joh aapne mere dil mein jagaya, woh roshni joh aapne meri zindagi mein bhara…woh bhi lekar jaa rahi hoon"
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Amazin Clap i mean i actually felt it Unhappy
and then When she Kissed him on his Forehead Awwwwwwwwwww Unhappy
 
i dont Care this is the sad OS by u n which i would even kill u Angry LOL
Cuz behoooodi CV's Aren't givin us Happy scenes n so r u Angry LOL
Buh stilll LOVED it ! i mean this Bought Tears in ma eyes Unhappy
Jaz u r amazin !!!
kay by u givin us bact to back 2 Maneet OS Wink now i expect a new OS everyday by u ROFL
 
 Love u Jaz Heart

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Haaaww!!U R Sooo Bad!!!AngryLOLI was like he'll wakeup now...now...now n u!!!u end it just like tht!!AngryLOLLOLLOLLOL
BTW It was nice but no confessionCry
Tumhe toh tumhari next update mein dekhlungi!!!LOL

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