Posted: 25 August 2010 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Archu is in the car realising wat is happeng 2 her n gets angry. Wat does Manav think he's doing? Has he gone mad? He's been behavg so peculiarly these days. She tries 2 catch his attentn by askg him questions but Manav just stares in front of him. Archu starts panicking, not that she is afraid of Manav, she can never b afraid or in danger with this man, she feels more secured when he is around n she can travel 4 life with him but somethg is definitely wrong coz Manav will never act this way.
She murmurs his name softly n when he turns up, seeing his determined look, she knows that her life is going 2 gear up a u turn n she's afraid that she wont b able 2 do somethg abt it coz this man just affects her in the most strangest n wonderful way. There is nothing 2 say now, no need 2 create a scene in the car, spicing up the driver's imagination coz he is havg a blast time They sit silently till they reach a barn in a remote place, They step down n Manav takes his bag n pays the driver. The car moves away but Archu does not budge from there compelling Manav 2 drag her in the barn n he locks the door.
Archu glares at him n asks him wat the hell is going on. We all know that Archu's tongue can really wag at time n poor Manav gets blasted.
Wat r u up to? R u out of ur mind? Ur thopri has again gone nut? Nobody misbehaved with me why r u so charged up? U r the most confused person on Earth - 1 day u avoid me 1 day u kidnap me!! How can u do such a ghattya cheez Manav aapse yeh umiid nahi thi. why r standing like Gautam Buddh? Speak up dammit!!
( Now hold on i know i'm exagerratg but it's just 4 fun)
Manav: I love u Archana.
Archu feels like Dharti maata has just slipped from beneath her feet n with her heart racing stammers: But Shrav.....
Manav: Bhaar mein jaye Shravni. I am not thinkg of anybdy else now only u n me. I am here 2 win my love bak n i'll not budge from here til u accept me coz i know u lov me too. They stare at each other n move closer as they remember all those cute n hot moments they ever spent 2gether.
( Yes guys u must b thinking is it not too farfetched, hav i ever miss any hot scene bet them? dont worry but 4 Arman changing shirt n eyelockg r synonymous 2 love making n is the hottest trend in PR land)
But just as Manav is about 2 hold her, Archu has flashbak of a pleading n begging Savita ( dhat teri ki!!). She stiffens n says: U seem 2 4get that it's not only abt u n Shrav now.
Manav: Wat do u mean?
Archu: I mean i'm engaged 2 Jaywant n i'm marrying him soon.
Manav stares at Archu motionless.
Avoiding his eyes Archu says: Now plz bring me bak home. My aai must be worried n may get some ashtma attacks thank 2 u n my fiance must b looking 4 me right now.
Manav's face is drained of all colour at the mention of Jaywant n glares at her. He replies:
If u r worried abt ur mom then ur time starts now coz i told u we r leaving here only when u r mine. We r going bak as husband n wife only. Now u decide r u ready 2 face the truth?
A panicked Archu stammers: but....
Manav turns away n goes to light a fire.The nite wud b long n full of tension with so much passion threatening 2 overflow.
To b cont..... Wat u think guys. Too Mills n Boon type? Too good or too bakwaas? U tel. Chiao
Edited by omshreejaanu - 26 August 2010 at 1:03am