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Chapter -5

 

 

"The river side here is so cool in the evening isn't it Koke? Don't know why Abi and Roody stayed back . they should have come .its so nice here."- Shreya asked casually, standing in front of the river taking a lungful of fresh air.

 

Konishko concentrating on his potato chips didn't hear the question. When Chandreyee and Shreya didn't get any suitable answer they turned around.

 

You Fatty! Can't you think of anything else other than food? A twin scream startled him.

He looked timidly at two pairs of glaring eyes and feebly asked in surprise, what I have to think?

 

Shreya came forward snatched the packet from his hand & threw it.

 

He looked weakly at the packet lying on the ground, Doll! My chips !

 

Shut up Koke ! If you keep on eating this way someday you will burst like a balloon.

 

Yeah Doll then how will I marry you if I die? He answered with concern.

 

With such amount of fat all over, do you take yourself as an eligible bachelor Koke? I am not going to marry you ever!

 

Why doll? do you have a wrong notion that you owe a slim trim figure and Brad Pitt will come to marry you?-Konishko was very angry at the mockery made by two ladies in this way and his favourite chips are also been taken away.

 

"Ohh no! Not again! Stop! Both of you!"

 

"But Riyaaa this is cheating!" he blabbered! "My fat earns me the tag fatty and her fat?" "Cuddly cute, doll  and bla bla ."

 

Koke NOW! Riya glared at him while Shreya gave him a winning smile. They continued walking through the riverside. Konishko a bit behind.

 

"Riya ? When we can have view of the river from the backyard of your bungalow, why we came here?"

 

"Ohh please Koke! You and your evergreen stupid ideas! Give it a break pleasee!We can't view the river and roam to have fresh air amidst of weeds, mud & crawlies Koke!" 'She answered taking strides over the moist ground with Shreya

 

Something clicked Konishko's mind hearing this

 

Now its your turn Riya . I know what spoiler is exactly needed now! He smirked-.'Riya ' Why Roody is taking so long to come here?'

 

Riya slightly turned her head while walking and replied with a smile," Try something new Naradmooni . This is not going to work. And besides adding to your woeful questions Abi is also there. You forgot that!"

 

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"No Horen-Kaka I don't want to see all these accounts matters .I just came to meet you and kaaki-ma but my bad luck she isn't here. Bibs sighed. You show all these to Kanai-kaka and if he doesn't then send it to Ranima ."- she said relaxing  on the cushion of the antique wooden chair and going through newspaper kept  on the table in front

 

"Yeah she has just gone in the neighborhood temple.from there she will make a visit to some friend's house."

 

 'I have a request-Please while returning do make a visit to that temple. Its said that if you tie the holy thread in the banyan tree in the temple premises, it ensures the safeguard, security and success of the person wished for'.-Horen pleaded as he knew very well Bibs has now turned into an atheist

 

"Kaka you know very well I don't believe in God and this rubbish and I will not go there at any cost."-She answered irately. "Its too far from here, not neighborhood. okay? Moreover the tyres of my cycle can give up at any moment." 

 

Seeing the hot temper of Bibs Horen diverted the discussion.

 

"But-But, Rani-ma says 'show these to Da-Moshai.' And you also know that's not possible for me but for you of course."

 

"Okay then. I will when I get time but not now. Now I am a little busy."

 

"But this since two months Ghosh-villa's installment is pending. Ronen babu hasn't turn up yet and the amount is large. We spend that amount on the maintainence of Banerjee estate. If you don't get is regularly it's a problem." Horen was disturbed enough

 

"Horen kaka. Please! Spare me from these financial matters. You are the manager of the estate and Kanai kaka caretaker, so you manage and he will take care."

"Now I must leave Kaka, before Kanai-kaka gets a hint that I am out of the house with an  injured leg or else today my classes are fixed. And if maashi gets to know then the hell will break lose."

 

"Injured leg? What happened?.'

 

 "Nothing much kaka. Just a cramp. Don't worry I have put a crape bandage."

 

 

She got to her feet to go , but suddenly stopped and turned to him

 

"What did you say Horen kaka? Ghosh Villa?"

 

Yes!

 

"This Ghosh Villa beside the river?" -She enquired.

 

Yes!

 

It's ours?

 

Not ours? Yours! He smiled.

 

Show me the papers kaka!-

 

 Yeah Sure why not? Horen was elated, at last his wish was fulfilled.

 

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"Nomoshkar Kanai 'kaka" Kanai was watering the hedges hearing a familiar voice turned around . "Dadabaabu you?"

 

"Why? Can't I come? I told you, I will come to eat hot luchi and aaloor dom Isn't it?"

 

Kanai was flabbergasted, couldn't understand how to react.

 

"Yes ! yes ! sure I will prepare it right now . Come inside please." He kept the pipe and ran inside.

 

Roody looked over the huge building in front of him Estate? Truly it is! A mansion in this estate .

   

 

 

Kanai was busy preparing Aaloor-dom in the kitchen and Roody was busy in viewing the beautiful traditional interior decoration of the mansion. But soon he remembered what was he here for and also Bibs was still not visible. So he finally decided to go to the kitchen and start his detection with the weakest end who was already impressed by him.

 

 

"So Kanai-kaka where is your Didimoni ?" he asked in a casual tone sitting on the platform  beside the gas oven with legs slightly above the floor and examining the spices kept aside for preparing the curry.

 

"Why? Why do you need her dadabaabu when you came for me?" Kanai replied with a smile while stirring the curry.

 

Roody understood his timing was wrong." No! I just needed to make sure that I am not kicked out while eating." He answered flatly smelling a cinnamon.

 

"No no ! dadabaabu . didimoni is not so harsh !"- kanai replied while stirring the curry

 

"Yeah I think you and me both saw the trailer today morning Isnt it?"-He smirked.

 

"No dadababu , didimoni was not like this at all. After she came back from London she is like this."

 

"London? She was in London?"- Roody was surprised.

 

"Yes for last 3 years" And suddenly Kanai understood he shouldn't have said this and cursed himself for the carelessness of himself while cooking.

 

'And before that where did she stay Kaka?' Roody became more curious. Kanai gave him a blank look, Roody felt some soft inquisitiveness in Kanai's eyes as if they were asking something and breaking the silence Kanai said calmly with a smile

 

"Dadabaabu  food is ready , come ".

 

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Aabeer was now tired of searching Bibs. The only information he had was the car's colour. Precisely!.

 

He was walking on the mud filled path with potholes .How is it possible not a single person saw her? But I will find her today at any cost. Once in Kolkata it will be impossible to find her -

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'But Thakurmoshai why can't I tie the thread?' Chandreyee asked the priest of the temple in rough voice.

 

'I am sorry my child, no thread is left with me, the last one was there its been tied by that lady'

 

Chandreyee turned around to see who came in her way and messed with her wishes.

 

 

But could only see a figure   limping and balancing on a cycle. She pouted as if trying to see a clear view of the figure but couldn't make out anything but saw a crape bandage on her ankle.

 

 

She had to come now only? Crossing this bamboo bridge. Couldn't she come some other day some other time? ' Chandreyee viewed the figure in distance with a rage 

 

'Please Riya lets make a move Doll is waiting there alone.'-Konishko pleaded as Shreya was waiting alone in the tea-stall .

 

You fatty! if you had a problem why did you accompany me till here? You could have also said you have this phobia, that phobia? ' She blasted at Konishko!

 

"But it's too late since we started for the temple Riya, Doll must be worried. She is sitting alone in the tea-stall on the roadside .she doesn't know anyone and its getting dark."- he said feebly

 

'I will not go anywhere without tying the thread. do you get it Koke?'

 

The priest heard her heated argument and felt it was necessary to interfere seeing the way the lady was shouting at a poor chap.

 

'I am sorry , but the temple is closed for today , its no use waiting  my child.'

 

'But thakurmoshai , I am leaving for Kolkata, tomorrow early morning , and I want to tie the thread .I heard from the people in the tea-stall on the other side of the bridge saying that , if anyone ties a thread in this tree it ensures the safety and security of the near and dear ones.'

 

'Pray from the core of your heart my child your wishes will surely be fulfilled. No thread is needed for that. It is God who directs everyone to do everything Isn't it?. We can't change what's written in destiny with a thread. Today it was her luck may be you get a chance in future. Keep patience my child. God bless you both'. 'Saying this the priest walked away.'

 

***************

 

'Ohh God, what will I do now? How will I return to Ghosh villa? It's nearing to twilight. I am sure Koke and Riya forgot that I was waiting for them in the stall. But how long could I wait.So many people were staring at me as it I am an alien! But what now? I think I lost my way. How will I go back .' God please help me!- Shreya was too much nervous . tears rolled down her eyes. She was roaming like a vagabond looking here and there trying to detect the right way to go.

 

'Can I help you?' 'a soothing soft voice enquired.

 

Shreya slowly turned around with a tearful face sensing some danger.

 

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'Really Kanai - kaka you are too good. The food is delicious. You know Luchi-aaloor dom are one of my favourites!I don't remember the last time I ate so much tasty food'. Roody said relishing the food.

 

Kanai felt a strange satisfaction while serving him the food and watching him relishing the food as if he was hungry for ages. His vision was becoming blurred, before tears could finally make their way out He ran to the kitchen. But Roody was busy eating.

 

 

 

 

'Must say kaka! You are a genius. The food was too too too tasty . and thanks to your didimoni  that I  had my full meal without any hurdles.'

 

 'didimoni is sleeping upstairs. So no problem ''Kanai grinned with his uneven set of teeth

 

'ohh that why the atmosphere is so calm'  he smirked.' Okay kaka now I must leave.'

 

 

No No! not so soon ! wait . I am making payesh  for you ..

 

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Thank You! Thank You very much dear. I don't know what would have happened if you didn't come on time- Shreya was much relaxed now getting a helpful escort

 

No worries at all. I am not at all surprised. Since two days I am having such experiences.

 

What experiences? ' Shreya was quite inquisitive.

 

Nothing! Forget it! ' Bibs avoided with a smile.

 

Well, Hello! my name is Shreya Roy, she stretched out her arm.

 

Hi , I am Bibha'. I mean Bibs.!

 

Ohh what a cute name! ' Friends? Shreya asked with a smile

 

But not more cute than you. ' yes friends.

 

Thanks ! hey! 'You have a graceful smile  Bibs'

 

Thanks to you too.

 

But how did you lose way Miss Shreya?

 

No! Actually I was waiting in the tea stall for my friends; they went to the temple nearby. I have acrophobia so I didn't go with them. But don't know what happened they didn't turn up and I was tensed too.

 

Both of them proceeded through the mud full path chatting away.

 

************

 

 

Aabeer was busy scrutinizing the place.

 

Abi!

 

Hearing a known voice he looked towards the source of the call & saw Shreya running towards him. She hugged Aabeer tight in relief  & broke down in tears.

 

What Happened Cudly? What are you doing here? That too alone at this time?

 

She told him the horrible situation she went through before she met her new friend.Aabeer's eyes were reflecting his rage on the absolute irresponsible behavior of his other two friends   but he kept cool and consoled Shreya for the moment .

 

 

 Suddenly Bibs saw her companion was not beside her.

 

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When Shreya turned around to introduce her new friend to him, she found her no-where.

 

"No worries Cudly, you first cool down, now nothing to worry I am here Isnt it?" He consoled her and cupped her face.

 

"Might be she was an angel who came to show you the way like you read in your favourite stories?

 

 "we should return now Cudly, you must be very tired and where is your fatty to-be-groom Koke now? Let him come I will liquefy his total fat today. -Now cheer up. Our Cudly doesn't look good in tears" and took her in embrace. "I will make some tea for you when we return okay? "- He was trying to divert her attention from the full situation. Though his work was not done. But consoling Shreya was more important for the moment.

 

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Ohh My God ! this is really pity on me. I came here for Him and You loaded me the full bunch of Idiots? Thank God I saw that clown and made a move.

 

 This girl is quite sober, not like Him or that clown and not even His- Miss Fiance.

 

 But why me? Oofff ! Now it's dark too! How will I enter the house?

 

 Either its through the drawing room or through the balcony. My legs are paining like anything. I can't climb the balcony now. I have to enter through the window of the drawing room. Though too high but Bibs you have no other way darling!- thinking of all these Bibs finally reached the window of the drawing room of the mansion in Banerjee Estate.

 

 

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This house is no less than a curio-shop. The artifacts, paintings, the large chandelier, traditional furniture of shining Burma teak, the black and white marble flooring, the fat pillars truly exibits the class of this family. This "Miss Ungrateful" really seems to be a big fish. -Roody thought giving his artistic nature a jolt viewing the interior decoration of the mansion for the second time.

 

Suddenly he heard the rustle amongst the bushes from the direction of the window. The sound was loud and clear in the silence of the room. He slowly went towards the window.  But before he could register anything he felt himself slashed on the marbled floor and something heavy on him. After some moments he was at ease.

 

"What the hell are you doing here you rat?"- Bibs screamed at him rubbing her elbow in pain

 

"Not Rat.. Its Roody . R O O D Y. and How would I know that at night the entrance of this bungalow changes?" He replied in wincing pain  rubbing his back with hand

 

"You Idiot! I am asking what are you doing at my house?  Did I call you?"

 

"No My Luchi-Aaloor dom called me . He said in distress. By the way! as far as I remember  .. Kanai-kaka told me you are sleeping upstairs.  Then how come you '.?

I can smell REAL RAT here !"

 

Shut up ! I woke up long ago and was in the garden. She gritted her teeth

 

Ohh really? and what for you chose  the window as the entrance?

 

 

That's none of your business! You rat!

 

 

But I know the exact person whose business it can be .  He grinned ignoring the abuses by Bibs. and walked towards the kitchen. 

 

Roody listen !

 

"Sorry I have stopped doing social work now". and Continued towards the kitchen. Kanai- Kakaaa! Is my Payesh  readyyy ?

 

Eee ' I will kill him someday!.. Ohh God ! Why me? She looked up & said

 

*************

 

What happened Dadabaabu ? I heard didimoni's voice . Kanai asked while serving him the paayesh .

 

Is It? ' I didn't hear anything! Anyways thank you Kanai-kaka. I have to go now. But today was really special for me you know why?

 

Why?

 

  "After many years somebody fed me with home made food sitting beside me. It was only my ma who use to do this.But she is not with me . Today I am missing her sooo much"'. He couldn't say anything else and hugged Kanai.

 

Kanai felt his shoulder was a bit wet. But didn't say anything.

 

Don't worry Dadabaabu . God is there He will make everything perfect.

 

Byee Kaka, I am leaving for Kolkata tomorrow morning. You take care

 

You too dadabaabu hope to see you again. Tears welded in Kanai's eyes.

 

Why? Do you wish to get me killed by your didimoni?- he griined at Kanai.

 

She is not that bad dadabaabu !

 

"Yeah yeah I know" . and he left with a smile .

 

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Roody walked towards Ghosh Villa. This girl is really mysterious. Entering her own house through the windows when no one is there to say her anything. And Kanai-kaka is a mere caretaker of the mansion .  Why is she so much bothered about him? The girl as annoying as her is bothered about a caretaker?  Ohh god .. Again in this hiatus I forgot to ask what was she doing in the backyard. But never mind IFD is there . He smiled to himself  & casually looked at the watch.

 

"Oh My God! I am late. Now Riya will kill me. They must have returned by now. How will I climb to first floor in the dark from the backyard? God please save me today."

 

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Konishko and Chandreyee returned and saw Aabeer was consoling Shreya by teddys and chocolates though she was continuously sobbing.

 

Our cuddly is very brave isn't it? She is not afraid of anything. Is she? 

 

 

"What type of stupid behaviour was this Shreya?" Chandreyee yelled at her as she entered Ghosh Villa with Konishko We were searching for you like anything. Your phone is also switched off.

 

Shut up Riya! Just shut up! 

 

How did both of you leave her alone in a tea-stall in an unknown place?

 

Hellow ! we didn't tell her to sit there.  It was she who chose to stay back.

 

"You are her friend, don't you know she has acrophobia?"

 

I had to make a visit in that temple and it was not at all far away. Riya said disinterestedly

 

And so you took two hours?

 

Look Abi ! you don't know anything what all happened so'.

 

I don't want to know also. I only know both of you were irresponsible enough to leave her like that.

 

And you Koke? you always claim to love her! This is your great gesture of love and care?

 

Amidst of all Shreya stood still didn't know how to stop them from quarrelling.

 

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What for they are shouting? Ohh no! I guess Riya is searching for me.

 

 But I have to go from backside. Might be they are screaming for some other reason .I have to take a chance. God save me today  seriously !

 

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"Koke  from today onwards if I see you claiming her  as your fiance I will claim your life I swear !"

 

Enough Abi ! its nothing to make such a big issue ! Chandreyee shouted.

 

Of course it is Riya! It is! How can you leave your friend like this?

 

Seeing the heated arguments Shreya finally broke down in tears and ran upstairs.

 

What happened Cudly? Why are you crying? Roody was coming downstairs .She couldn't say anything but Roody understood something unpleasant has happened concerning her, seeing the situation downstairs. He took her in embrace.  Don't worry Cudly , I am there isn't it? I will manage everything. 

 

But Roody ! They- they are ' she was in sobs..

 

Shhh !! now stop crying ! Roody will manage everything. he just rubbed the sleeve of his kurta on her wet eyes & cheeks to wipe out the tears. Now stop crying. Don't you know we can't see our doll in sad face? You look awful like this. He grinned as Shreya hit his shoulder with smile. Go and rest I am sending you a hot cup of coffee   and no crying okay?  She nodded her head in confirmation & went to the room .

 

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 Guys! Why are you all shouting? Roody asked while coming downstairs

 

Nothing much love Abi was giving us his valuable lessons on responsibility.Isnt it Abi?.

 

Riya , now you are improvising it . I did not say anything like that. But today both of you were '

 

1 sec .. Roody interrupted.

 

 Koke take a cup of coffee for Shreya upstairs.

 

But Roody . ? Konishko looked at him weakly.-"I didn't do'

 

Shut up koke ! Chandreyee shouted

 

No Roody. I don't want this Idiot to talk to Cudly .Abi said wrathfully

 

Don't worry Abi  let me handle it .

 

Konishko stood still trying hard to make out what to do.

 

Koke I told you something to do!. Roody said

 

Konishko silently went to the kitchen..

 

Now tell me Riya what happened. Chandreyee recounted the whole affair, trying to edit the but Aabeer didn't let her do so and again they ended up in arguments. But hearing all details Roody looked silently at Chandreyee and said

 

"You didn't do it right Riya. She could have lost her way if Abi didn't get her today. She is our friend Riya. Isn't it? And how can both of you leave her alone in an unknown place? We could have gone to the temple later on. Isnt it?"

 

But love? I went for..' she couldn't say anything else feeling extremely humiliated.

 

"FORGET it "

 

And she finally marched upstairs.

 

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Konishko slowly entered the room with a cup of coffee. Shreya was reading a magazine lying on the bed . On the sound of footsteps she peeped from behind the magazine but seeing him again resumed reading and said

 

Koke please go away , I am not in a mood to lend an ear to your blabbering .

 

Doll please for once listen to me . I told Riya many times to get back but.!

 

Koke  I know  you. I can make out what have happened. But I expected a bit of care from you not because you claim that you love me but at least as a friend.

 

Roody Aabeer Riya all are disturbed. You are tired too, isn't it? Go and freshen up. She said softly.

 

But Doll?-

 

Seeing Shreya resumed reading again he left the room quietly .

 

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Roody I am sorry but I was too worried for Cuddly. The way she rushed seeing me, I was tensed. Thanks to that girl who helped her out.

 

Yeah that Girl? Who is she? .. He asked

 

I didn't ask her detail. She was very very tensed then.

 

Yeah thanks to that stranger. '

 

Roody you please go to Riya she must be very upset.

 

Don't worry Abi! I know her. She can't be angry on me for long. He smiled.

 

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Riya was sitting on her bed facing her back to Roody                                 

 

Riya, please don't cry .I didn't mean to hurt you. You know it very well .I care for you .

 

"Please love leave me alone"- she said wiping the tears

 

"No I wont.! I love you Riya I can't see you upset "

 

"Ohh that's why you told I am wrong and that too infront of Abi?" she turned and charged Roody

 

"But Riya we all are friends after all . Its nothing formal between us. And if I said you are wrong.Yes you were wrong ! If you wanted to visit the temple you could have told me. I would have taken you. What was the need to take Koke? Don't you know , I don't like you go anywhere like this?" and pulled her to him to hold her tight .

 

"C'mon love"- atlast she smiled hiding her face  in his hug ..

 

'No, really I mean it. From now onwards I will escort you everywhere.'

 

'Really? She smiled softly, but today you didn't. I asked you didn't I?' She asked looking at him.

 

Ye'.yeah .. You did. But I ' I was ill today darling .I am sorry!  he kissed her fair cheek softly.

 

You know love? You are getting possessive day-by-day .she smiled

 

"Am I? Then its good.  I must say." and he kissed her forehead. "I love you Riya  love you very  much . I can't see you upset. I will never ever hurt you." He said softly looking outside through the balcony holding her tight to him in some unknown agony.

 

"I know love." Chandreyee's head was on this chest. But suddenly she remembered something. "ohh no , I have to go and make arrangement for dinner.I forgot"

 

Dinner? Roody exclaimed

 

What happened?

 

Nothing..Just that I 'I am not hungry at all

 

Shut up! You didn't have anything since afternoon.

 

No'no Riya I will not have anything please .

 

"No love I will not listen to anything in this way you get weaker"  and walked away

 

Ohh God Save my stomach.!I will burst now.

 

 

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Bibs was studying the file Horen gave her 

 

'Didimoni'- Kanai came to her study and stood beside her silently.

 

'Yes kanai-kaka!' She replied without looking at him concentrating on the file.

 

'Dinner is ready.'

 

'Okay I am coming'

 

But she saw Kanai was still standing beside her.

 

'Kaka ! what happened? Isn't your Luchi aaloor dom session over? Or still something left.' She mocked.

 

'Yes it is!' He grinned.

 

'Ohh you are looking very happy today making my house a Restaurant'. Bibs teased him, but Kanai remained silent as he was too much satisfied hosting the surprise guest today.

 

'Kaka! Do you know what is in this file?'  She asked after a thoughtful pause showing the file

 

 Kanai 's face was dumb. He couldn't make out the reason for the change of discussion.

 

No!

 

'This is his death warrant'. She grinned. But hearing this Kanai was pale.

 

 I came here to find out some information about Roody . But God gave me a hidden treasure Kaka!  This is surely an atom bomb for Mr. Roy Chowdhury.

 

Kanai silently left the room with pale face

 

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Okay Miss Hitler .see you in Kolkata . I am sure I will meet you again and you will be in Kolkata . If god wants us to meet He will make us meet for sure. Till then take care. and get ready for your Mr. Aabeer 'and he went to freshen up before dinner thinking his whole search was literally in vain today.

 

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Now I will not get a wink sleep after eating so much. Roody tossed and turn on the bed.Its only me who knows  how I have managed  climbing  this room. Miss Bibs I will not leave you for sure now. You have to go through all the awful situations which I went through from today morning till now. How dare you call me a rat! Roody the handsome a RAT? What if Riya gets to know this? I am sure she will kill you Miss Bibs. ' He smiled

 

But something fishy is there. I am sure I have seen this damsel somewhere. Her eyes! Its so transparent. But where have I seen those pair of dark deep eyes? Why I cant remember? And why was Bibs so concerned about kanai-kaka rather afraid if he is a mere caretaker? What was she doing here in the backyard?Why did she enter her own house through the window? Why does she behave with me like that always?

 

 I have to get answer to all these. Don't worry Bibs we will be together soon 'in IFD .

 

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Thank u so much nehu for long update Big smile

Like river side scene of riya-shreya n koke
poor koke have to waste his chipsLOLLOLLOL
so koke trying his naradmooni tricks again but thank god that not workedBig smile

Bibs relaxing in antique armchair!!(roody also saw many antique items in this mansion)Smile and horen is wanted to see accounts n visit templeBig smile
which bibs not wanted to doConfused n who is this ranima?Confused n y bibs not believe in godOuch
what means 'Da-moshai'?Confused

How much bibs cares for even kanai kaka n her sweet mashiBig smile

"Now I must leave Kaka, before Kanai-kaka gets a hint that I am out of the house with an  injured leg or else today my classes are fixed. And if maashi gets to know then the hell will break lose."

Ghosh will is belongs to bibs?Shocked
then wht roody in all friends doing there?Shocked n who is 'Ronen babu'?Confused

so our smarty roody came for detecting abt bibs and pleased not to find her there at that timeBig smile

." No! I just needed to make sure that I am not kicked out while eating."

"Yeah I think you and me both saw the trailer today morning Isnt it?"-He smirked.

Kanai kaka is too much impressed n pleased with roody's visit that info's abt bibs slipped out of his tongue! but kanai kaka is still honest servant who vision gets blurred while serving to roodyBig smile

'Must say kaka! You are a genius. The food was too too too tasty . and thanks to your didimoni  that I  had my full meal without any hurdles.'

  'didimoni is sleeping upstairs. So no problem ''Kanai grinned with his uneven set of teeth

so our bibs is london return n not like this beforeShocked so where she is before?Confused



She was not like that till that we can make out even her cramp n not having car she visited temple on cycle to respect ranima's wishEmbarrassed n just opposite chandrayee Angry god knows how roody fall in love with herOuch

poor koke worried abt his doll and riya k aage bechare ki kuchh chal nahi rahi

but our bibs helped her n they r friends nowBig smile

Ohh My God ! this is really pity on me. I came here for Him and You loaded me the full bunch of Idiots? Thank God I saw that clown and made a move.

 

 This girl is quite sober, not like Him or that clown and not even His- Miss Fiance.

hope both will good friends on IFDEmbarrassed

Abi is still searching Miss HitlarLOLLOLLOLLOL with only car colour ROFLROFLROFL
As per bibs woh clown LOLtoh hai but he is very caring and good friend how he pacify shreyaEmbarrassed

cudly is very sweet name for shreyaEmbarrassed

nice described the decorated mansionBig smile

This house is no less than a curio-shop. The artifacts, paintings, the large chandelier, traditional furniture of shining Burma teak, the black and white marble flooring, the fat pillars truly exibits the class of this family. This "Miss Ungrateful" really seems to be a big fish. -Roody thought giving his artistic nature a jolt viewing the interior decoration of the mansion for the second time.

Suddenly he heard the rustle amongst the bushes from the direction of the window. The sound was loud and clear in the silence of the room. He slowly went towards the window.  But before he could register anything he felt himself slashed on the marbled floor and something heavy on him. After some moments he was at ease.

so bibs chosen window to enter the mansionLOLLOLLOLLOLwhy u called our bibs heavyAngry

And she called 'RAT' to roody the smart LOLLOLLOL and roody also telling her

 

"Not Rat.. Its Roody . R O O D Y. and How would I know that at night the entrance of this bungalow changes?" He replied in wincing pain  rubbing his back with hand ROFLROFLROFL

"You Idiot! I am asking what are you doing at my house?  Did I call you?"Tongue

"No My Luchi-Aaloor dom called me . He said in distress. By the way! as far as I remember  .. Kanai-kaka told me you are sleeping upstairs.  Then how come you '.?Winkhmm so bibs also lied the same as roody

I can smell REAL RAT here !" LOLLOLLOLLOLagain rat

Shut up ! I woke up long ago and was in the garden. She gritted her teeth LOLLOLhmm good reason bibs

Ohh really? and what for you chose  the window as the entrance? ROFLROFLROFL

That's none of your business! You rat! LOLLOLLOL

But I know the exact person whose business it can be .  He grinned ignoring the abuses by Bibs. and walked towards the kitchen. WinkTongueLOLLOLLOLohoo now roody going to blakmail bibs for this

Roody listen ! WinkLOLLOLLOLLOLhmmm not calling RAT now

"Sorry I have stopped doing social work now".LOLLOLLOL and Continued towards the kitchen. Kanai- Kakaaaaaaa! Is my Payesh  readyyy ? WinkBig smileso he is getting sweet treat also LOLLOL

Eeeee ' I will kill him someday!.. Ohh God ! Why me? She looked up & said Tongue will like to see how will u do thatEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

butt whats this he saved herConfused roody's behaviour also getting mysteriousBig smile roody having good time in company of bibs than riya'sWink
so roody leaving for kolkota
his convo with kanai kaka is too good n touchyEmbarrassed

  "After many years somebody fed me with home made food sitting beside me. It was only my mas who use to do this.But she is not with me . Today I am missing her sooooo much"'. He couldn't say anything else and hugged Kanai. Shocked he is not with his mom

Kanai felt his shoulder was a bit wet. But didn't say anything.CryCryCry

Don't worry Dadabaabu . God is there He will make everything perfect.Big smileStar

 Byee Kaka, I am leaving for Kolkata tomorrow morning. You take care

 You too dadabaabu hope to see you again. Tears welded in Kanai's eyes.Cry

 Why? Do you wish to get me killed by your didimoni?- he griined at Kanai.LOLLOLLOL

 She is not that bad dadabaabu !

 "Yeah yeah I know" . and he left with a smile .ConfusedWinkBig smilehow he came to know that

LOLLOLLOLLOL so roody also had to climp up n enter like bibs in the houseLOLLOLLOL so many similar things in bothEmbarrassed
LOLWhat is served for him in ghosh willaOuch but he handled all of themClapClapClap

Hope Shreya forgive Koke but she knows him very well so she willEmbarrassed

Koke  I know  you. I can make out what have happened. But I expected a bit of care from you not because you claim that you love me but at least as a friend.

abi n roody much cares for shreyaEmbarrassed wish they meet their cudly's saving angel soonStar
but riya is getting some signal wrong abt roodyAngry

You know love? You are getting possessive day-by-day .she smiled Dead

"Am I? Then its good.  I must say." and he kissed her forehead. "I love you Riya  love you very  much . I can't see you upset. I will never ever hurt you." He said softly looking outside through the balcony holding her tight to him in some unknown agony.Ouch

and for this love he is getting dinner

"No love I will not listen to anything in this way you get weaker"  and walked away LOLLOLLOLLOL

Ohh God Save my stomach.!I will burst now.ROFLROFLROFLROFL

But what bibs got which is atom bomb for mr. roy chowdhury which made kanai kaka's face paleShocked what is going to bibs doShockedOuch
Shocked


waiting for bibs - roody - abi next meetingEmbarrassed
egar to know what will happen next Day Dreaming




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Reserved for replies after exams....Tongue But u continue with your updates.....

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a superb ud nehu...Thumbs Up
 
first of all i feel sorry 4 koke..wil shreya cheat him??!!CryLOL
 
With such amount of fat all over, do you take yourself as an eligible bachelor Koke? I am not going to marry you ever!
Why doll? do you have a wrong notion that you owe a slim trim figure and Brad Pitt will come to marry you?ROFL
 
who is tis ranima?? is she bibs grandmom?? is bibs related to some royal family???Shocked
 
hmmm roody is smart.. he said to kanai kaka tat he came to eat his luchi n aaloor dom..!LOL
hey roody n bibs said  d same excuse to riya n kanai kaka tat tey wil b sleepin upstairs..!!!WinkLOL
 
" No! I just needed to make sure that I am not kicked out while eating." ROFL
"Yeah I think you and me both saw the trailer today morning Isnt it?"LOL
 
so our bibs is london returned..!!Shocked wat was she doin in london for 3 yrs??Confusedlike roody i also want to know wer did she live b4 goin to london?Confused
 
by d way nehu if bibs does not belive in God wat was she doin in temple???!!Shocked Tongueshe even tied d thread!!!!!ConfusedWinkLOLwat did she wish 4??Confused
 
tis riya..!!Angry she is sooo selfish..!Angry how did roody fel in love wit her??Shocked
 

'Must say kaka! You are a genius. The food was too too too tasty . and thanks to your didimoni  that I  had my full meal without any hurdles.' LOL

 'didimoni is sleeping upstairs. So no problem ''Kanai grinned with his uneven set of teeth  

'ohh that why the atmosphere is so calm'  he smirkedLOLLOLLOL

so bibs made a good impression wit shreya too.. i am waitin to c wat wil happen at IFD now wen riya sees shreya friendly wit bibs..Wink
 
Ohh My God ! this is really pity on me. I came here for Him and You loaded me the full bunch of Idiots?ROFL
 

"What the hell are you doing here you rat?"- Bibs screamed at him rubbing her elbow in painBig smile 

"Not Rat.. Its Roody . R O O D Y. Tongueand How would I know that at night the entrance of this bungalow changes?" He replied in wincing pain  rubbing his back with hand LOLLOL 

"You Idiot! I am asking what are you doing at my house?  Did I call you?"LOL 

"No My Luchi-Aaloor dom called me .TongueWinkLOL He said in distress. By the way! as far as I remember  .. Kanai-kaka told me you are sleeping upstairs.  Then how come you '.?I can smell REAL RAT here !"WinkLOL 

Shut up ! I woke up long ago and was in the garden. She gritted her teeth Tongue 

Ohh really? and what for you chose  the window as the entrance? LOLLOL 

That's none of your business! You rat!Tongue

But I know the exact person whose business it can be .  WinkTongueHe grinned ignoring the abuses by Bibs. and walked towards the kitchen.  LOL 

Roody listen ! wat???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Shockedshe called him by his name!!!!!ShockedTongueWink 

"Sorry I have stopped doing social work now".ROFL and Continued towards the kitchen. Kanai- Kakaaaaaaa! Is my Payesh  readyyy ?LOLLOL 

Eeeee ' I will kill him someday!.. LOLOhh God ! Why me? ROFLShe looked up & said wil definitely wait to c how u wil kil him..!Wink

"After many years somebody fed me with home made food sitting beside me. It was only my mas who use to do this.But she is not with me . Today I am missing her sooooo much"'.  does mas mean mom?? n y is she not wit him now?Confused
 
finally riya got somethin wat she desreved for her behavior frm both aabeer n roody..Clap
wat??? roody is becomin possessive for riya??!!AngryAngryAngry
he kissed her forehead. "I love you Riya  love you very  much . I can't see you upset. I will never ever hurt you." He said softly AngryAngryAngry
seriously nehu.. how did tey fel in love??!!!ShockedConfusedAngry
 
i hope shreya n koke wil patch up soon..Wink n i wonder how wil roody react wen he sees d stranger who helped shreya!!!!Wink
 
n wat is tis?? wat did bibs get frm d file??Shocked
'This is his death warrant'. She grinned.  I came here to find out some information about Roody . But God gave me a hidden treasure Kaka!  This is surely an atom bomb for Mr. Roy Chowdhury.ShockedShockedConfusedConfused
 
hmmmm so aabeer is hopin to c his miss hitler in kolkata...!Winkn roody is waitin to c her in IFD..!Wink
good... Clapwaitin to c all of tem meetin bibs at IFD n how wil bibs n roodys' life wil move onTongue along wit riyas' n aabeers' Winkn also some funny moments from shreya n koke..!LOL
 
do continue soon dear...
take care...Smile
 

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my dearest nehu 1st of all m extremely sorry 4 not being able 2 comment on the earlier update.plz forgive me 4 thtConfused.u know na wht probs i have..& thanx alot 4 this long & elaborate chapter of your.its really very nice & was a delight 2 read.

u know i just loved d temple sequence & faith related 2 god.hope u understanding wht m sayingWink

u know m not much aware of a bengali culture so m a bit confused abt it but still u r doing a good job.i can understand it of course but my speed is very slow.spare me 4 itConfusedConfused

yeh riya na mujhe bahut hi complicated character nazar aata hai.cant decide if she is a positive or negative person.lets see whts in store 4 future.u know some characters r really strange.cant make out whts goin on in their minds.u r doing a fabulous job as a writer but yaar wht is every1 upto..y does bibs seems so volatile when it comes 2 roody & y is roody eyeing bibs when he has a stable relationship with his girlfriend..Ouch..poor shreya yaar.but i hope she has found a friend in bibsSmileSmile
whts up with abeer & wht is his fascination with bibsWinklove quadrangle na ho jaye kahinLOLLOL

story is going very nice with the mystery element surrounding & u r doing a good job as a writer its just tht i cant control my inquisitivenessLOLLOLLOL.... oooops btw just 4got 2 tell u cudly seems a very very very cute name i just loved it.lets hope abi gets 2 meet his mystery women in kolkata.umeed par toh duniya kayam haiDay Dreaming.

update was good.looking forward 4 d next part & next part se i promise i wll try 2 make out time 2 comment.bye tc love u

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awesome part.loved it.
continue soon.

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