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Posted: 01 September 2010 at 9:29am | IP Logged
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awesome , amazing updates. loved it.
 keep it  up.



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Amazing yaar...just loved it... As it is RT-MC is such a wonderful pair...I really love reading stories on them...keep updating asap...and do let me know when u update next...



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sabse pehle toh m very very sorry for commenting soo late on this wonderfull ff.Confused i hope both shruja & nehu u 4give me 4 thtEmbarrassed.

&  m very very very thankful to nehu 1st for writing such a nice ffTongue on our beloved & most fav ever RTMC & also 4 including my name in your list of well wishersSmile.

the story is very nice & extremely interesting & gripping.the surrounding & theme is lovely. & i LOVE bibs.attitude rocksssssClapClap.good work nehu.but whts her secret mission.hey tell me na plzEmbarrassed
waiting eagerly 4 d next part.Smile.keep writing & keep rocking.love uEmbarrassed
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 thanks Aka. secret mission ab khul gaya toh secret kaise rahega?LOLlov u 2Hug

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Oh m crazy for rajat n mugdha!!!! please continue soon!!


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Chapter-4

 

Its midnight, the rain has stopped but the sweet smell of damp soil is everywhere. The atmosphere was more soothing & cool after the heavy showers. Everything was too peaceful unlike the city. Only from a distance sound of crickets were heard quarrelling among themselves.

 

"Riya! its 3am what Abi Koke and Roody are doing at the terrace room? It's so chilled now.?" - shreya asked dizzily  seeing the watch on her  hand

 

I don't know Shreya , may be solving  Mr. Aabeer's never ending mental problems & their cocktail party , what else?- don't bother ' saying this  Riya ' couched more inside the blanket

 

******************                                                                                                                       

 

"Hey, both of you please lets go downstairs its already 3am, my head is already feeling so heavy." Konishko said warily with his eyes half closed.

 

"That's because you had four pegs more than your normal limit weirdo"

 

".If you cant, then why take a risk? To prove yourself dude in front of Shreya?"-" That will not help buddy, Try something else."

 

 "God is also confused in this matter still finding answer to this prehistoric query "what exactly a girl wants in a boy" ' Aabeer just spurted out in a tiresome voice, trying very hard to keep his eyes open

 

But before these words would reach Konishko's ears he was fast asleep

 

Hey ! Abi chill- Roody patted Aabeer 's shoulders in effect of intoxication his voice was bit loud.

 

YOU CHILL! - coz you have your "Miss. Time Table."

 Just think Roody? Aabeer , the handsome Aabeer traveled with a babe for three hours alone in a car , in this rainy night and couldn't  get hold of her name also . Isn't it strange buddy? -Aabeer  said drowsily

 

Yes, it is strange that in this romantic weather your eyes went to that chic's face rather than her mini skirt or tang top she must be wearing-.Roody smirked sipping some rum from the bottle

 

Ohh dude! She was covered from top to bottom. Ivory complexion, eyes were sparkling, as diamonds .Her words were music to my ears. She was magic and'

 

Okay  okay .. I understood'.so how many days you have  planned to waste for this new chic of yours Abi?

 

What how many days dude? Still didn't get a chance to know her name. Aabeer sighed.

 

Abi chill! I think you need rest, you must be very tired.

 

"Noooh I am not tired",-Aabeer shouted boozing . "You listen to me,"

 

-hey Koke, get up man- he kicked Konishko who was still sleeping with snores despite the kicks , hey get up listen to me .she is the most beautiful lady Aabeer has seen , I will get her , her long hair as dark as night, eyes as deep as sea, lips as red as a rose .She is intoxicating , but a total "Miss Attitude"- he grinned at Roody .

 

 

Okay Okay we will search her tomorrow in broad day light!. Roody gave assurance warily.

 

We will Isn't it Roody? Surely we will? We have too'..hair as dark as a night , lips as red as a rose '.  Fumbling these lines He stumbled downstairs with Roody who was assuring him though intoxicated.

 

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It was a bright sunny morning with clear skies .

 

 Konishko came downstairs as hurriedly as possible ignoring the hangover. He didn't find Roody in proximity but Aabeer was fast asleep on the sofa. He kicked Aabeer hard so much so that he fell down from it. '"You weirdo, both of you left me upstairs alone?"

 

Aabeer was slightly startled with the kick, but as soon as he saw Konishko in dizziness, he made a straight face in tiredness, with a yawn he asked-"What   is it Koke?"

 

He gave another kick & asked him again why was he left alone last night.

 

"We thought not to disturb your night out with the ghosts and your darling witches. That's why left you there"

 

Where is the other weirdo? Konishko asked angrily

 

How would I know?  Aabeer answered with another big audible yawn & went to sleep again

 

"Hey Boys freshen up and have the breakfast!"-Shreya voiced from the kitchen.

 

Chandreyee where is Roody?

 

"Ohh c'mon Koke as if you don't know, that he has a habit of doing morning walk". -she said inattentively with attention on  munching chips casually.

 

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"You should have been more careful Bibs. Thankfully today I went to the backyard of our bungalow or else you would have fallen into the river"    - Roody advised Bibs with concern while taking a sip of hot tea.

 

She was cleaning mud from her legs            with concentration, suddenly looked up to him and asked in a quiet voice ' "your bungalow?"

 

Roody who was expecting a "thank you" or at least a sorry from "Bibs" looked at her in surprise with this interrogation                                                                                        

 

No, I ' I mean Ghosh Villa.

 

 

"Didimoni you should say thank you to this dadabaabu  for saving you from drowning in the river and you are interrogating him?" ' Kanai came with the tray full of breakfast .

 

Kaka please! She looked at him, I didn't ask your dadabaabu to save me. May be its HIS pass time to act as body guard of girls.-.

 

"Bibs I really think you need to know how to behave with people!" Roody interrupted quietly looking at her.

 

Is it? She smirked and so you decided to give  me tuition on human behavior  by escorting me till my place?- I am obliged  Mr. Roody .

 

Seeing the heated conversation Kanai hunched world war 'III is about to begin .He quickly forwarded the breakfast tray in front of Roody with a smile -. "Okay dadababu the argument can continue but the food will get cold , please have it ."

 

No thanks Kanai-kaka, not this time, some other time please. Roody maintained his courtesy with a smile.

 

Why?  Do you have your breakfast in the evening?   Bibs mocked while cleaning her feet .

Usually I don't have .. but ..

 

If usually you don't have then what's so unusual today?

 

Actually you know Bibs its not unusual today. But unfortunate. He declared irately

 

He turned to Kanai-and said wth a smile "Kanai-kaka I will surely come to eat your hand made "luchi-aaloor dom " but not today. Today I am already late doing SOCIAL SERVICE and  hearing useless talks ' saying it with added effect he gave a final rugged look to Bibs & strode away  before she could say anything .

 

 

Didimoni, you were very rude to him! Weren't you? Kanai asked her.

 

Kaka if I wouldn't have been rude how would have I known about his breaking point. - She replied in low tone. After 'all I am the only owner of the 2500 crores property and owner of Banerjee-Estate. Isn't it? Which he'

 

Its him?  Didimoni.. Didimoni  are you sure its him? His eyes were glittering with tears of joy. Legs were shaking ."please didimoni please say once more its  Him"

 

Enough Kanai-kaka!

 

Can't you forget all Didimoni?

 

How can I Kanai-kaka? How can I? Did YOU forget all?

 

I didn't,  but let me tell you if God has planned a miracle it will surely happen and quietly went inside. He will do justice.

 

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What is the problem with this girl? We met merely two times and this behavior? In IFD also she was a bit weird. Infact she should have been thankful to me today for the favour I did today to her .She would have fallen straight to the river slipping on the mud if I wouldn't have caught her. But she? My God not a bit of gratitude! And I had to leave my favourite Luchi & aaloor dom!- He thought while going back to Ghosh Villa

 

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Where have you been love? Chandreyee was eager to know as soon as she saw Roody coming.

 

I-I Just went too far while walking  & lost my way. He quickly managed the situation & went upstairs .

 

Konishko was watering the plants in balcony, just when Chandreyee was passing by he whispered in  her ears ,"Riya I don't think  Roody was lost , he is hiding something from you , I am sure "

 

Shut up Koke !, she burst out . Before he could react his head was bumped with a cushion thrown by Aabeer.

 

 Ohh Mr. Naradmuni don't you have anything else to do other than pinging up people? ' A bellow came from upstairs.

 

Abi, I was just talking to her.

 

"We know what your useless talks are all about. so don't fool us Koke and if you are really finding an issue to think about just stand infront of a mirror you will get the matter which needs your utmost concentration. You are becoming a "sumo-wrestler" day by day ' Idiot !"

 

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Roody took a shower, stood in front of a giant mirror slightly turned his head zig-zag.- Am I not handsome? Am I not smart? C-mon I am  "the Roody" of IFD , ace photographer , excellent choreographer , & handsome  model . what else a girl needs to be impressed upon ? Why she was behaving so weird?  I understand Riya was kind of sticky that day but still.

 

*********     

 

 

It was afternoon after lunch Roody and Chandreyee were resting in the balcony having some good time sitting beside each other. Her head rested on his chest, while Roody held her close to him .

 

Why Bibs behaved so rudely with me ? she should have been grateful for saving her life .Isnt  it?

 

"Love, don't you think its too much crowded here , I  mean "

but when  she got no response she looked up at Roody , who was engrossed in some other thoughts

 

And' wait wait ' I am forgetting something .. what was she doing in the backyard of  this bungalow? Whereas her place is quite far from here.I must know this , and only she can answer this .

 

Seeing his frown Chandreyee asked, Roody ! what are you thinking about love ?-

 

He came back to reality with her jerk shakily answered looking at her trying to smile as brightly as possible,-  "Na-nothing Riya , just that  our next show is on summer collections and that's within 3 months.  I want it rocking as the last event."

 

Yes love , as soon as  we get back to Kolkata , I will start  the project she said looking as him with a  pleasant smile..

 

 Riya , I know You are the Best '

 

She put her index finger on his lips &  said softly " no we are the best "!

 

 

Thank God Riya didn't start her routine enquiry  on "why were u so late my love?". If today's morning encounter truth was out this whole bungalow would have fallen like a pack of cards ,

I have definitely seen Bibs  somewhere  else before other than in IFD ,  but the question is where ? Yeah !or why should  she behave so weird

 

Why am I suspecting so much when I can ask her directly? My luchi 'aaloor dom is also pending and elders always say things shouldn't be kept pending ' he held Chandreyee more close to him & closed his eyes for the moment .

 

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Kanai was serving lunch to Bibs

                                                                                         

"Didimoni I didn't understand how did you meet dadababu in the morning? Kanai asked casually while serving lunch to Bibs.

 

"What to say Kanai-kaka" she sighed,  "my bad luck."

 

"I just went to check where exactly the bungalow is  coz yesterday it was dark when I dropped that clown there and moreover I had to check  who else are there in that cage .But yesterday's rain just washed away my plans. and then this gentleman! He had to come today at that place only."

 

"But thank god dadabaabu was there to save you or else '"

 

"Or else? Or else what Kanai-kaka? You think I would have fallen?. Kanai-kaka you are forgetting something I am an expert swimmer that too without formal training and he being there was a mere co-incidence rather my bad-luck " she gushed out in anger

 

Whatever didimoni , we cant ignore the fact that he saved you . Or else we don't know what would have happened. The way he couched you & brought here I am really thankful to him. ' Kanai was in sobs.

 

Kaka please now you don't start all over again, I just slipped on the mud but he held me on time & stop falling that was it.

 

What Kanai-kaka is thinking of him I don't know, but the meeting with him for me was disastrous, what was the need of holding me that way? She ran a slow hand on her waist line absent-mindedly . what would have happened at most without him ? at most I would have fallen .

 

But one thing for sure Mr. Roy Chowdhury henceforth you will think only about me whether in conscious or subconscious.

 

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 "Love get ready we will go the river-side. Isn't it? and Abi , Koke you also get ready  quickly"- Chandreyee  just informed them while going upstairs   mopping her face .

 

Riya , I ate too much at lunch.   I just want to rest for a while please .-Roody came to the living area  while moving his hand on the  belly.

 

What? Are you sure love? But you only said we will go today.-she wondered . "Leave it we will go tomorrow Love.you rest" .

 

No No  Riya .. You all move as soon as I am bit fine He hurriedly said to Chandreyee

 

Okay! but what if you lose your way again?

 

No worries Riya , I will find my way .

 

Abi! . What are you waiting for? Get up.

 

 Riya take koke please. I also don't want to go. Not feeling well

 

 What's wrong with you guys? She said angrily

 

Konishko whispered in her ears ' I am telling you Riya something is wrong

 

Shut-up Koke !

    

Please Riya  ' You move! if I feel okay I will join you all.

  

       Okay love but take care.! saying this with a sigh Chandreyee left with Shreya & Konishko .

 

***************                                                                                                                             

Now I can peacefully go in search of Miss Hitler. Or else I cant breathe peacefully. Nearly  twenty hours and not single information? Shame on you Aabeer!. This is a small area so try and find out. Fast.- Aabeer said to himself  sitting quietly on the sofa.

 

 Roody was moving upstairs. - They will take at least two to three hours to return  , by then I can visit Banerjee Estate & come back  before Riya comes . I hope no one traces me from the backyard .

 

Hey , Abi, I am not feeling well I am going to my room to rest for a while and take a nap .

 

Ok dude .. I am also going for a walk for sometime, you take rest. Abi left for his walk to search the beauty he came across last night.

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Edited by rinku4u - 30 September 2011 at 3:59am

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hey nehu wat an ud dear......Clap
simply greattttt Thumbs Up
 
so mr. aabeer stil cant leave miss. attitude frm his mind..!Wink bechara.. may b tis is d first time for him tat any girl has avoided him..!LOL
 
well tis roody also doesn seems like a perfect mr.fiance..!Wink
Yes, it is strange that in this romantic weather your eyes went to that chic's face rather than her mini skirt or tang top she must be wearing-.Roody smirked sipping some rum from the bottleWink
 
 poor koke he slept upstairs al alone at night n tat too wit d ghost n darlin witches..!!ROFL
 
n our bibs n roody finally met in nurpur....! but dear nehu u should hav explained in detail naa how he saved her..!!!Wink
 
oops mr.fiance  tutorin miss.attitude how to behave wit people...!ROFL
Actually you know Bibs its not unusual today. But unfortunate. He declared iratelyLOLLOLLOL
 
by d way nehu wats tis "luchi-aaloor dom "? sorry i haven heard tis b4..Ermm
 
n wattt?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bibs is d owner of 2500 crores property!!!!!ShockedShocked n now i understand tat she has some past wit roody or his fmly in connection wit tis property..!Ermm
 
i hate chandrayee callin him 'love'Angry
 
koke is interested in creatin a misunderstandin between mr n miss fiancee...LOL good goin koke..Clap
 
Roody took a shower, stood in front of a giant mirror slightly turned his head zig-zag.- Am I not handsome? Am I not smart? C-mon I am  "the Roody" of IFD , ace photographer , excellent choreographer , & handsome  model . what else a girl needs to be impressed upon ?  well i think u need to hav somethin more to impress tis bibs dear...Wink
 
again d fiancee couples..!!Angry
"Love, don't you think its too much crowded here , I  mean "
what are you thinking about love ?- AngryAngryAngry
as aabeer say.. she really is miss time tableAngry.. i wonder how roody fell in love wit her n is toleratin her!!!Disapprove
i guess now roody has learnt how to handle her... see how perfectly he is tellin lies n excuses to her... Wink good goin mr.fianceClapClapClap
 
What Kanai-kaka is thinking of him I don't know, but the meeting with him for me was disastrous, what was the need of holding me that way? She ran a slow hand on her waist line absent-mindedly . Embarrassed
nehu y didn u explain how he saved her?????AngryLOL
 
But one thing for sure Mr. Roy Chowdhury henceforth you will think only about me whether in conscious or subconscious.
yupp he even started thinkin about her wen he is in a kind of romacin wit his fiancee..!! WinkClapLOL
 
hmmmm so now aabeer n roody r goin in search of miss hitler..!Tongue hey who wil meet her 1st...? i really hope riya finds out roodys lies..!!!WinkLOL
 
taaaaaaaaaks nehu for tis looooooooooooooooooog n wonderful ud..Smile
do continue soon dear..Big smile
 
 


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first thanks for beautiful update again

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me like start atmosphere description is very pleasantEmbarrassed

Its midnight, the rain has stopped but the sweet smell of damp soil is everywhere. The atmosphere was more soothing & cool after the heavy showers. Everything was too peaceful unlike the city. Only from a distance sound of crickets were heard quarrelling among themselves.

And aabeer still thinking abt bibsBig smile and confused about her as he never came across girl like her in his lief beforeLOLLOLLOLLOL

"God is also confused in this matter still finding answer to this prehistoric query "what exactly a girl wants in a boy" ' Aabeer just spurted out in a tiresome voice, trying very hard to keep his eyes open

aabeer toh poet ban gaya hai!!LOLLOL bibs ka magic jo chal gaya hai usparEmbarrassed

Ohh dude! She was covered from top to bottom. Ivory complexion, eyes were sparkling, as diamonds .Her words were music to my ears. She was magic and'

like aabeer's reply to koke!!! how he was sleeping it deserves such replyLOLLOLLOLLOL

"We thought not to disturb your night out with the ghosts and your darling witches. That's why left you there"ROFLROFLROFLROFL

ohhoo so bibs finally met roody and he saved bibs from falling in riverEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

but out miss attitude not giving any thanks too himShocked

 

He turned to Kanai-and said wth a smile "Kanai-kaka I will surely come to eat your hand made "luchi-aaloor dom " but not today. Today I am already late doing SOCIAL SERVICE and  hearing useless talks ' saying it with added effect he gave a final rugged look to Bibs & strode away  before she could say anything .

poor roody missed his fav. "luchi-aaloor dom" (what is this?)WinkLOL
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coz she is good swimmer!! wow!!!ClapClapClapClap

and what is connection between ghosh villa n bibsConfusedShocked

she is owner off 2500 crores property and banerjee estate!!ShockedShockedShocked

and kanai kaka knows roody n taking his dadabaabu's sideSmile

also he knows bibs past which he and she can't forgetConfusedOuch

but having hope in god

I didn't,  but let me tell you if God has planned a miracle it will surely happen and quietly went inside. He will do justice.

chandrayi now forget calling roody loveAngryAngryAngryAngry coz now his mind also occupied by bibs thoughtsEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Roody took a shower, stood in front of a giant mirror slightly turned his head zig-zag.- Am I not handsome? Am I not smart? C-mon I am  "the Roody" of IFD , ace photographer , excellent choreographer , & handsome  model . what else a girl needs to be impressed upon ? Why she was behaving so weird?  I understand Riya was kind of sticky that day but still.

i loved ur word zig-zag EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Koke now acting as naradmuni thank god riya din't believed himBig smile

hahahahha both aabeer n roody after same girl and don't know that trying to trace her TongueLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
hmmm now bibs also thinknig abt roody

What Kanai-kaka is thinking of him I don't know, but the meeting with him for me was disastrous, what was the need of holding me that way? She ran a slow hand on her waist line absent-mindedly . what would have happened at most without him ? at most I would have fallen .

But one thing for sure Mr. Roy Chowdhury henceforth you will think only about me whether in conscious or subconscious.

now toh u should tell how he saved her will like to read itWinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

hmmmmmmm both boys r now on 'mission search of bibs' LOLLOLLOLLOL

Now I can peacefully go in search of Miss Hitler. Or else I cant breathe peacefully. Nearly  twenty hours and not single information? Shame on you Aabeer!. This is a small area so try and find out. Fast.- Aabeer said to himself  sitting quietly on the sofa.

 

 Roody was moving upstairs. - They will take at least two to three hours to return  , by then I can visit Banerjee Estate & come back  before Riya comes . I hope no one traces me from the backyard .

now waiting egarly who succeeded n upto which extentDay Dreaming





Edited by shruja - 07 September 2010 at 1:36am

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awesome update. loved it.
continue soon.

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