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arre main hoon na comment karne ke liye bahut ache parts the but naye kab post karogi M.kiran.. LOL

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Posted: 10 December 2005 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
wah wah..kya baat hai..tussi great ho yaar....agaye likho na...

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Posted: 11 December 2005 at 4:37am | IP Logged
awsum parts kiran..........awwwwwwn...dat bitu part was ooo cute....lolz......can't wait till da sangeet n its dhamaal.......

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Posted: 11 December 2005 at 7:39am | IP Logged
gr8 story!!!!!!1
love the interaction btw sujjal and kashish.....
one small request...plz dont let there b misunderstanding btw them..... hate it when that happens Confused ...aisa lagta hai ekta ki serial ho.....
the rest of the world can turn against them but they should always have each other..... Wink Big smile

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Posted: 13 December 2005 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
kiran.....where r u...post da nxt part soooooooooon.....

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Posted: 13 December 2005 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
gudddd......but ytaar saare fanfics aik jagah post karo na plzzz....dhoondhne main problem hoti hai warnaaa

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Posted: 14 December 2005 at 5:11am | IP Logged
ook ppl....thanks for comments...but BIG PROBLEM..i have los the 2 main sangeet parts...sorry!!!

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Posted: 14 December 2005 at 5:13am | IP Logged
ok so i am posting the mehndi parts

To iss sab ke baad larkon ko aik side per kar dia jata haia ur larkion ke liye neechey bethanay ka intezam karwa ker mehnadi lagana shuru hoti hai...Kashish ko aik haath per Veena mehndi laga rahi hai aur aik per Prerna...Anjali, Mehak, Kasak, Gunn, Kumkum,Sneha Kannan aur Shruti aapas main beth ker baatain bhi kar rahi hain aur aik doosrey ko mehndi bhi laga rahi hain..aur larkon ko iss jagah per annay ki ijazat nahi hai...peechey mehndi songs lagay hain aur bhut maza kar rahay hain sarray...Kashish ke donon haathon per itni khubsurat mehndi lag rahi hai aur uss ke paon per bhi mehendi laga rahay hain Anjali aur Kannan...
Kasak, Gunn aur Mehak akar Kashish ki mehndi dekhtey hain
Mehak: wow ...ap ki mehendi to bhut khubsurat lag rahi hai
Kashish: thanks...actually main ney tumhain pehchanna nahi
Gunn: Di...yeh Mehak hai...Krishna ki behen
Kash: Krishna.....??
Gunn: Di...Krishna Sujal bhaiya ka dost hai...jis ney merey saath dance kia tha...
Kash: haan...i am so sorry mujhey bikul yaad nahi raha Mehak
Mehak: nahi iss main sorry ki kai baat hai...waisey bhi hum pehli baar to millay hain
Kashish: haan iss sey pehley mulaqat hi nahi hui na
Mehak: actually i am a bit confused...main ap ko kia bulaon...ap mujh se barri hain aur aissey hi Kashish kehna mujhey acha nahi lagta
Kash: to iss main confusion ki kia baat hai...jo chahey keh lo...
Mehak: actually main Sujal ko Sujal bhaiya kehti hoon to ap ko Bhabhi bula sakti hoon?
Kash: main ne kaha na...jo chaho keh lo
Kasak: Bhabhi...ap ko mehendi kis ney lagayi hai?
Kashish: meri donon mumma ne
Kasak: acha...lekin woh aik cheez bhool gayi...
Kashish: acha woh kia??
Voice: mera naam!
woh murr ker dekhti hain....aur wahan Sujal kharra hota hai!
Kash: Sujal...tum yahan kia kar rahay ho?
Sujal: kyun...main yahan nahi asakta?
Kasak:Big-B...idhar larkon ko ana manna hai
Sujal: yeh kia baat hui yaar? ab Kashish ki mehendi main ney hi to dekhni hai...please
Mehak (laughing): Sujal Bhaiya...ap bhi na...haan Bhabhi ki mehndi ap ney hi dekhni hai lekin kuch to sabar kijiye
Gunn: chaliye Bhaiya...jaiye yahan se
Sujal: dekho idhar humaray ilawa yahan qareeb koi nahi hai...sirf panch minute
Kash: Sujal...tumhain ho kia gaya hai?
Kasak: main batati hoon...woh ap ke peechey pagal ho gaye hain
Mehak: waisey sab log gaye kahan?
Sujal; sab log khana khannay gaye hain...aur haan i remember Gunn...mumma tumhain aur Kasak ko bulla rahi hain...koi kaam hai
Gunn: pakka?
Sujal: promise!
Kasak and Gunn leave and now there is only Kashish Sujal and Mehak there
Sujal aur Kashish donon Mehak ki taraf dekhety hain
Mehak: i guess mujhey chalna chahiye!
Sujal: thanks Mehak!
Mehak: no problem...
Sujal: aur haan....
Mehak: kisi ko kuch nahi bataon gi aur yahan kisi ko annay bhi nahi doongi ok??
Sujal: thanks a lot! (sarr per halka sa haath rakhta hai)
Mehak hansti hui wahan se chali jati hai aur ab reh jattay hain Sujal-Kashish....Kashish neechey bethey apni mehndi dekh rahi hoti hai...Sujal uss ke samnay bethata hai aur uss ke haath dekhta hai
Sujal: hmm....lekin Kasak theek kehti hai...kuch missing hai!
Kash: acha...kia missing hai?
Sujal: of course yaar mera naam aur kia?
Kash: uss ki zaroorat nahi hai
Sujal: kyun??
Kash: kyunki woh yahan likha hua hai...dhoondho
Sujal: kahan likha hai Kashish nazar to nahi araha...
Kash: nazar kaisay ayega...tumhara naam meri mehndi main nahi in haathon ki lakeeron main likha hai
Sujal:haan...yeh nahi dekha..
Kash: tab hi to tumhain kehti hoon ke thora ghaur kia karo
Sujal:yaar tumharay barray main hi to ghaur karta rehta hoon...
Kash: hmm...main janti hoon
Sujal mehendi uthata hai aur Kashish ke haathon per lagata hai...
Kash: yeh kia kar rahay ho?
Sujal: aik minute ruko...
woh uss ke haath per likhta hai chota sa
SUJAL!!
Kash: shukar hai mehndi nahi kharab hui...
Sujal: mehndi ki parri hai tumhain...
Sujal smiles: ay Kashish...dekho bahir kitna acha mausam hai...bahir chalay?
Kash: dhamagh to theek hai?
Sujal:kyun? bahir jannay main kya hai?
Kash: Sujal kal humari shadi hai...hum log aj itna tayar ho ker sab ke samnay bahir jayen...
Sujal: to kia Kashish?
Kash: acha nahi lagta...
Sujal: Kashish...tumhain pata hai tumhari burri adaat kia hai? keh tum logon ke barray main apnay se ziada sochti ho....
Kash: to iss main burra kia hai?
Sujal: yeh zindagi humari hai aur harr insan ko apni zindagi jeeney ka poora haq hota hai...aur iss haq ko istamal karna chahiye
Kash: aur jo logon ka ap per haq hota hai?
Sujal: logon ko ap per haq sirf tab hota hai jab ap un ko woh haq khud detey ho...
Kash: waisey main ney tumhain kaun sa haq dia??
Sujal: tum ney mujhey haq dia tumhain apnanay ka tum se pyaar karnay ka...aur....
Kash: aur kia Sujal?
Sujal: tumhain choonay ka haq...tumhain hug karnay ka , tumhain kiss karnay ka, tumhain,....
Kash: SUJAALLL!!! bass karo...bhut besharam ho
Sujal: iss main besharmi ki kia baat hai....after all i am ur husband
Kash: abhi hoye nahi...aik raat hai abhi
Sujal: uff yeh aik raat pata nahi kab guzaray gi!
Kash: merey beghair bhi to jee hi rahay thay na...main nahi rahoon gi tab bhi jiyo gay na??
Sujal uss ke moun per haath rakhta hai
Sujal: manna kia tha na tumhain aissi baatain karnay sye...phir bhi tum na....tumharay beghair main zindagi guzar raha tha, jee nahi raha tha....aur tumharay baad zindagi hi nahi rahay gi to...
Kash: Sujal...kabhi kabhi mujhey darr lagta hai...
Sujal:meri jaan ko kiss baat se darr lagta hai??
Kash: yeh soch kerke kabhi hum juda ho gaye to?
Sujal: hmm....tum na...yeh batao phoolon main se khusbu ko alag kia ja sakta hai? uss chand main se roshni ko alag kia ja sakta hai?jeetey jee shareer main se aatma ko alag kai ja sakta hai??nahi na...issi tara SujalKashish ko bhi koi alag nahi kar sakta
Kash: i love u Sujal!
Sujal: really?? (smiling)i love u too!!
then they both hug and sujal kisses her on the forehead.....
they separate....Sujal goes away as ppl have started coming inside...so he leaves....the function continues and after a few hours function khatam!!

Coming uo: Sujal-Kashish ki most awaited shadi...all of u r invited...ok plz give ur comments luv kiran!

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