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ok thanks a lot ppl...so i am continuing again!!
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Garewal's mansion main arr taraf hangama hai...sab log apnay kaam main busy hain...Cut to the girl's room...sab larkian kamray main tayar hi rahi hain...all of them are wearing fish-style lehengas of the same design but different colours...Anjali, Kannan aur Kasak, kamray main tayar ho rahi hai...Anjali is wearing orange, kannan is wearing mustard and Kasak is wearing shocking pink,..all of them have same dresses...yahan takk ke Disha also has the same one lekin a blue coloured one..sab log bhut khubsurat lag rahi hoti hain...tayar honnay ke baad woh log neechey jattay hain hall main jahan sab tayarian kar rahey hotay hain..Veena ney blue colour ki bhut khubsurat sarri pehani hoti hai...Kkavya and Varrun are dresses in kurta shalwars wth stoals...
Veena un teenon ko neechey utaraty huay dekhti hai
Veena: arey wah..aj to meri teenon betian bhut hi khubsurat lag rahi hain
Kannan: ap yeh bataiye keh sb sey pyari akun lag rahi hai?
Veena: bahi yeh kehna to bhut mushkil hai ke kaun ziada khubsurat klag arhi hai...tum teenon bhut achi ag rahi ho
Anjali: thank-you Choti-Ma...bass dekhiye na sab aik jaissey hi lag rahay hain
Bua-ji: Veena...chalan ni ay?ay Sujal kithay reh gaya ay?
Kasak: Big-B kamray main tayar ho rahay hain
Varrun: abhi takk tayar ho rahay hain?
Kavya: haan bhai uss ney to mujh sey bhi ziada dair li hai
Veena: ruko..main dekh ker ati hun
Woh ooper uss ke kamray main jati nhai...and amn what should i say keh Sujal kaisa lag raha hota hai...imagine it yourself...Sujal in a black kurta shalwar...looking so cute witha stoal around his neck..its a long kurta like he wore on the diwali special..
Veena: arey tu abhi takk yahan...acha to diary main kuch likh raha hai?
Sujal: nahi mumma...main bass aissey hi..chalain..main annay hi wala tha
Veena: acha theek hai chal...pata nahi tera kia hoga...chal!
woh donon neechey jattay hain and tehn tehy set off to Raheja's Villa...cut there!
Raheja's Villa per sab log ziada tayarion main hoti hain aur ziada tense bhi...cut ti girl's room....kamray main teen larkian tayar ho rahi hoti hain...Gunn,Sneha and Shruti (all decided to get ready together)...all of them are wearing ghagra cholis...with different clour combinatons..Gunn is wearing a combination of red and shocking pink, Sneha is wearing a combination of orange and yellow and Shruti is wearing purple and blue...all of them are looking superb
Gunn: arey yaar...ab tayar bhi ho jao...Shruti-di...ap kitni dair lagayen gi?
Shruti: khud to sab sey pehley tayar hoo ker beth gayi hai aur ab mujhey keh raahi hai
Sneha: waisey aj bhut maza ayega...sangeet plus mehndi...wow...yaar main issi raat ka wait ker rahi thi
Voice: aur mujhey bhool gayi??
murr ker dekhtey hain...who is it..ofcourse yaar Kashish's oldest friend...Kumkum...she is also dressed in aghagra choli of the combination maroon and mustard...
Sneha: KUMKUM!!! kaisi ho tum...mujhey laga tum anhi pohnch pao gi...itni late kyun ayi?
Kumkumk un sab sey gallay milti hai
Kumkum: aj kitnay dinnon baad hum sab friends akhatay huay hain na...haan woh mujhey bhi laga tha keh hum nahi pohanch payen gay...kyunki ghar main kuch tension thi...lekin Dadi-ma ne kaha ke humain jana chahiye...so here i am
Shruti: tu yeh bata keh yeh dress...yeh dress tujhey kaisey mili?
Kumkum: bhai tum log to mujhey bhool jattay ho lekin meri pyar Kashish ney mujhey aik tum logon jaissa dress pehley sey hi bijhwa dia tha...by the way...Kashish kahan hai??
just then Prerna enters in a beautiful combination of blue and white sarri...
Prerna: arey Kumkum!! agayi beta...tum kab pohanchi??
Kumkum: bass abhi ayi hun aunty
Prerna:hmm...arey Gunn, Shruti, Sneha....tum log to tayar ho gaye ho lekin Kashish...
Gunn: Kashish-di ke clear orders hain keh jab tak woh humain khud nahi kehti tab takk koi unhain an dekhay ga na un ke kamray main jayega
Prerna: lekin kyun?
Shruti: ab yeh to woh hi jannay!
Kumkum: lekin ab woh tayar kaisay hogi?
Sneha; Kashish bhut asani sey tayar ho jayegi...uss ke liye koi probloem nahi hai...make-up to hua hua hai..aik beautician ney aker kar dia tha lekin full tayar unhain hum ney bhi nahi dekha
Prerna: arey yeh kaisa bachpana hai...ruko main dekhti hoon ussay...tum log bhi ao saath...dekhain to kya kar rahi hai
woh sab Kashish ke kamray main jati hai...Prerna uss ke kamray per knock karti hai
Kash: kaun hai??
Prerna: Kashish...darwaza kholo beta
Kash: nahi mumma...abhi main darwaza nahi kholoon gi...
Prerna: yeh kia baat hai Kashish...dekhoon woh log attay hi hongay..phir to neechey ana hi hai na...beta darwaza khol na...
Kash: plz mumma....main abhi kisi ko nahi milloon gi...mujhey kisi ko aik surprise dena hai...bass kuch dair aur
Sneha: Kashish darwaza kholo na...um sab tumhain dekhna chahatay hain...dekho na Kumkum bhi agayi hai
Kash: kia ...Kumkum pohanch gayi?
Kumkum: haan main agayi...ab to darwaza kholo
Kash: kaha na nahi
Prerna: yeh larki kabhi nai mannay gi...chalo rehney do...
woh sab phir neechey ja rahay hotay hain jab Bhumi ooper dorati hui ati hai
Bhumi: mumma...pata nahi sab itna shor kar frahay hain..kia hua hai?
Shruti: kyun beta kia hua?
Bhumi: sab keh rahay hain keh koi log agaye....pata nahi dulhay walay agaye
Sneha: kia??? Sujal log agaye...arey baap re...reception per koi nahi kharra hai...chalo jaldi
woh log ja ker Garewals aur kuch mehmannon ko receive kartay hain...Sujal in the fronmt..uss ki side per Kasak, Anjali aur Kannan hoti hain ....aur Veena bhi...Varrun aur Kavya aur baqi peechey
Reception ke baad...
sab log idhar udhar apni baaton main masroof hain...Sujal akela tehal raha hai...woh ahista ahista ker ke Kashish se milnay uss ke kamray ke bahir takk pohanch jata hai jab samnay sey Kasak aur Gunn aker darwazay ke aggay kharri ho jati hain
Gunn: kahan ja rahay hain ap?
Sujal: main woh...nahi...kuch nahi...main to aissey hi...
Kasak: Big-B ap bhi na...bhabhi se milnay aye thay?
Sujal: areyu nahi nahi...main to aissey hi...
Gunn: jhoot matt boliye...ap ke chehray sey pata chal raha hai keh jhoot bol rahay hain...bataiye Di se milnay aye tahy?
Sujal: ummm.....haan
Gunn: sorry lekin abhi woh kisi ko nahi mil rai hai...ap sey bhi nahi
Sujal: tumhari baat alag hai woh mujh sey zaroor millay gi...ab peechey hatto...
Kasak: sorry...lekin ap ko entrance ke liye kuch inaam dena hoga
Sujal: ab kia chahiye tum logon ko...
Kasak: sshhhh....khamoshi nsey humain kuch paisey dijiye aur hum kisi ko pata nahi lagnay dain gay keh ap yahan ooper hain...i promise
Gunn: yeah i promise too....lekin ap ko sirf 10 minute ka time dey saktay hain...uss sey ziada jhoot hum nahi bol saktay...
Sujal: acha baba yeh lo...(gies tjem some money) ab jannay do...aur haan kisi ko matt batana
Gunn: paka! thanks bhaiya!
woh donnon wahan sey hatati hain aur Sujal Kashish ke kamray pe knock karta hai
Kash: kaun hai??
Sujal: Kashish...main Sujal....darwaza kholo na...
Kash: Sujal tum...itni dair sey aye ho...
Sujal: abhi darwaza to kholo
Darwaza khulta hai aur.......

Agay kia hga...SujalKashish ke kuch romantic scenes...to yeh parhanay ke liye wait for the next part....sorry this is short but i dun get enogh time even to switch on the comp...skools and stuf...oook hpe u like it..and make ur guesses ke aggay kia hoga...plz give ur comments luv ya all kiran!
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Posted: 10 December 2005 at 6:07am | IP Logged
so here is the next part: hope u like it!!

Darwaza khulta hai aur Sujal dekhta hai keh uss ke samnay aik bhut hi khubdurat larki yello colour key lehenga choli maun kharri hai...Kashish is looking sooo beautiful (just the way in the diwali special...see the pic in the next post)...sujal ussay dekhta reh jata hai...
Kash: Sujal!! sujal....(ahista sey)
Sujal: haan....woh..
Kash: abhi bahir kia kharray ho?andar ao...kisi ne dekh liya to....
Sujal andar ata hai aur Kashish darwaza band karta hai
Kash: aissey kyun dkeh rahey ho??
Sujal: aj to merey pass bhi lafz nahi hain tumhari tareef main kehnay key liye?
Kash: kyun?? burrii lag rahi hun?
Sujal: nahi...tum to bhut bhut bhut bhuttttttttt khubsurat lag rahi ho...
Kashish aur Sujal bed ke samnay kharray baat kar rahay hain
Kash: ab tasali ho gayi?? do din nahi millay to jaisey pahar toot parra...
Sujal: haan....lekin main ney bhi nahi socha tha keh tum itni khubsurat lago gi...
Kash:hmm.....thanks!!
Sujal: uff!! pata nahi yeh do din kaisey guzaray....
Kash: mujhey to yeh samajh main nahi araha keh agar main na rahi to tumhara kia hoga?
Sujal: kia kaha tum ney??
Kash: main ne kaha keh....
Sujal: ainda ke baad aissi baat kabhi matt karna...tum sey judayi ka tusavar bhi nahi kar sakta main aur tum...hamesha aissi baatain karti ho...aj ke din bhi...
Kash: acha baba sorry....waisey apki kasam ki wajah se main kisi se nahi mili!
Sujal: haan woh kasam to bilkul jayiz thi
Kash: kahan jayiz thi...tayar honay ke baad kisi se nahi milloon gi aru sab sey pehley tum mujhey dekho gay...yeh kia baat hui?? jantay ho...mumma, Gunn, Akshat, papa, kumkum,sneha shruti yahan takk ke Bhumi ney bhi kaha keh main darwaza kholloon lekin tumhari qasam ki wajah sey...
Sujal: kitni shikayat karti ho Kashish tum...main tumharay liye kuch bhi karnay ko tayuar hoon aur tum merey liye itni si problem ko ITNIII barri problem bana rahi ho
Kash: aj tumhain ho kya gaya hai? harr baat per mood kharab ker letey ho...aik baar mujh anney o tumhain bilkul theek kar loon gi
Sujal: amin bhi to kab sey dua kar raha hu ke tum ghar ajao
Kash: ahahaha!!! jantay ho Sujal...aj ki raat meri is ghar main akhri raat hogi...iss ke baad main iss ghar sey hamesha ke liye chali jaon gi...
Sujal: haan yeh to hai...apnay ghar ko chorna bhut mushkil hota hai na?
Kash: tum nahi samajh pao gay keh kaisa lagta hai...aik khushi hai keh main akhir kaar apnay ghar ja rahi hun....aur aik dulh hai keh iss ghar ko, jahan main ne apni zindagi ke 24 saal guzaray hain...iiss ko hamesha ke liye chor ker ja rhi hun
Sujal: tum pareshan kyun ho rahi ho? main hoon na...merey saath tumhain kabhi koi problem nahi hogi...i promise
Kashish smiles yet with tears in her eyes...sujal smies and then they both hug!!
suddenly tehre is aknock on thr door...
Kash: oh no...ab kia karain...kisi ne dekh liya to??
Sujal: ruko min dekhta hoon....
He opens the door and who does he say but Kashish's ultra-super irritating neighbour...his name is Bittu and he is 9 years old...too talkative and naughty
Bittu Sujal ko andar dekh ker andar ajata hai aur Kash ko cheap looks deta hai...Sujal darwaza band karta hai....actually Sujal gets very irritated by this boy and he was the last person he was expecing then!
Sujal: jee...kia problem hai ap ko??
Bittu mur ke ussay dekhta hai
Bittu: mujhey kia problem ho sakti hai?
Sujal: to phir ap apni tashreef idhar kyun laye hain?? (annoyed)
Bittu: amin Kashish ko dekhney aya tha...
Sujal: teri choti behen hai jo Kashish keh raha hai??
Bittu: main tumhain zinda nahi chorooon ga!!
Sujal: kia??? (surprised)
Bittu: tum ney meri Kashish ko mujh se cheena hai aur iss ke liye tumhain saza millay gi
Sujal: abey kia baqwas kar raha hai!
Bittu: haan main kashish se pyaar karta tah aur tum hum donon ke beech agaye ho
Kashish is so shocked at him and she starts laughing at Sujal's expression...Sujal is really irritated
Sujal: abey tu kia baqwas kar raha hai...
Bittu: aik baar bolnay er samajh nahi ati??
Sujal ussay uss ke collar se pakrta hai aur uss ko deewar ke saath lagata hai
Sujal: dekho...mujhey irritate na karo aur abhi ajo yahan se
Bittu: main apni Kashish ko chor ke kahiin nahi jaon ga
Sujal: woh teri nahi meri Kashish hai aur ab sey tu ussay Kashish Bhabhi bola karay ga samjha?
Bittu: tum merey bhai nahi ho aur jiss sey pyaar kartay hain ussay bhabhi nahi kehtay
SUjal gets really annoyed aaur woh Kashish ko dekhta hai for help to deal with him...Kashish Bittu ke pass ati hai
Kash: Bittu...dekho mazak na karo...abhi mazak ka waqt nahi hai tum yahan se jao??
Bittu: Kashish tum ne bhi mujhey akela ker dia?
Kash humari love story ka yehi end hona tha samjhay...ab main kuch nahi kar sakti...main Sujal se hi shadi karoon gi...srry darling!
Bittu: Kashish..aop hum bhaag chaltay hain!!
Sujal: yaaaarrrr!! kyun paka raha hai ja na yahan sey!
Bittu: nahi main Kashish ko saath le ker jaon ga
Sujal: yaar tu kyun damgh kha raha hai Ekta kapoor ke dramon ke dialouges bol bol ke??
Bittu: yeh dialouges main ne khud sey banaye hain
Sujal: acha dekho ab jao yahan sey pyaar se keh raha hun...waran maar bhi parray gi
Bittu: Kashish ke liye kuch bhi!!
Sujal: Bittu tu....b mujh se nahi bachay ga...
Bittu: acha theek hai...tum Kashish ko ey jao amin Gunn se pyaar ar leta hoon....lekin..
Sujal: ab kia hai?
Bittu: amin sab ko bata doon ga keh tum yahn Kashish ke kamray main thay?
Sujal: abay nahi marwaye ga kia...na batana choclate doon ga
Bittu: mujhey paisey chahiye
Sujal: acha yaar yeh ley!! (ussay dass ruppay deta hai)
Bittu: kanjoos....sirf das ruppay?
Sujal: acha yeh le yaar pachas ruppay...ab ja aur apna moun band rakhhna!
Bittu wahan se jata hai aur Sujal Kashish ke saath kuch dair beth ker rmantic baatain kr ke wahan se chala jata hai!!

well this is all for today...i know it is small lekin kal ka sangeet willbe DHAMAAL!!!! all the dance and singing and mehendi...plz read it...waisey dun u love Bittu? i love his cheekiness and Sujal's irritance...haha...ok luv ya all kiran!
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Posted: 10 December 2005 at 6:18am | IP Logged
comments dey do...plz......
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Posted: 10 December 2005 at 6:25am | IP Logged
actually i have lost the parts of sangeet..searhing for them/..abhi likhti hoon!
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Posted: 10 December 2005 at 6:30am | IP Logged
ppplllll....comments!
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Posted: 10 December 2005 at 6:39am | IP Logged
cant find the sangeet parts...so i will continue tommorow after finding the,./..bye!!
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bhut burrri baat hai///koi comment nahi ke rraha Cry

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