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Posted: 08 December 2005 at 5:06am | IP Logged
ITNAY ROMANTIC LAMHO KAY BAAD KUCH STORY KO AAGAY Bardhaatay Hain.....
SUJAL - kASHISH is preparing to leave.......
Sujal : Kashish chalo bhi , Sumit aur kumkum humara intezaar karrahay
hongay....
Kashish : Sujal bas 2 minute main, abhi aayi.
Sujal : Uffo Kashish Tum har baar Late kar dayti ho...
Kashish : Aarahi hun na.
Kashish comes and he starts Gazing her.....She looks awesome.
Kashish : Chalay.
Sujal : Dil to karta hai ki ...
Kashish : Sujal, ab bas bhi karo......Itna romantic honay ki koi
zaroorat nahi hai.
Kashish takes his hands and they move outside the house.....
Kashish : Keys, Drive to tumhay hi karna hoga....
Sujal : jo Hukm.......
Sujal Takes the Keys, Opens the door for Kashish and comes and sits in
the car........
As he is about to start the Car, he gets a call.........
Sujal : hello, Sujal Grewal.
Sumit : Kahan ho tum log, Hum tumhara kab say wait karrahay hai......
Sujal : Bas abhi nikal rahay thay.
Sumit : Sujal, yahan hotel Garden view aajao, phir saath may Hospital
chalaygay, Kumkum bhi Gunn say milna chahti hai......
Sujal : Ab tum phone rakho phir aaunga na.
Sumit : Ok Bye.......
Sujal drives towards Hotel Garden View..........
Wahan hotel ki Lobby may, Sumit aur kumkum pehlay say hi Wait karrahay
hotay hai.......
Kashish : Kumkum, tum log lobby may kya karrahay ho.....
Kumkum : yeh sumit ko itni jaldi thi kay mujhe lobby may laykar
aagaya....
Sujal : achcha chalay...
Sumit : oh .....
Sujal : kya hua.
Sumit : woh main room may apna cell bhool gaya, sujal chalo lay aatay
hai...
Kumkum : summit, may nay tumhay cell diya tha na.....
Sumit : Haan par maine wahin bed par rakh diya tha....
Sujal : Abhi baatay hi kartay rahogay ya cell laalay.
Sumit : Hum abhi aatay hai, jab tak aap ladies baat kar sakti ho.
Sujal : chalo.....
Sujal and sumit goes and starts talking......
Sujal : haan kaha hai tumhara cell.
Sumit : sujal ,cell to ek bahana tha, asal main mujhe tum say kuch baat
karni thi...
Sujal : kis baaray main.....
Sumit : Yeh dekho.......
And sumit shows some pics of sujal and kashish with red markings on it
to sujal.......
Sujal : kya, yeh pics tumhaaray paas .....
Sumit : haan, tumhay yaad hai hum Hotel Meridon may thay aur jab tum
logon nay check out kiya toh kissi nay yeh pics Kumkum ki bag may daal
diye jo kashish kay paas tha.....
Sujal : Oh my god. Samajh nahi aaraha yeh kon karsakta hai....
Sujal tells sumit all that happened at Kashish's house, and about the
call....
Sumit : Jo koi bhi hai, Mujhe us ka irada Kuch theek nahi lagraha
hai......Hummay Police ko inform kardayna chahiye.
Sujal : aisa nahi karsaktay, is may khatra hai.
Sumit takes sujal's cell and dials a number....
Sujal : Kya hua kisay phone karrahay ho......
Sumit : Main apnay ek dost say baat karta hun woh CID may hai, ab woh
hi kuch help karsakta hai....
Sumit tries to dial but the number is unreachable so he leaves a
Message.......
Sujal : kya kumkum is baaray main jaanti hai.
Sumit : nahi, main nay usay yeh pics nahi bataye....
Sujal : achcha kiya , waise kashish bhi bahut pareshaan hai is sab ko
laykar...
Sujal gets a calll.
Kashish : sujal,Sumit ka cell yahin hai kumkum kay purse may tum log
kya dhoondrahay ho...
Sujal : wohi hum dhoondrahay thay...
Kashish :Ok abhi aajao, we are waiting.
Sujal : Haan abhi aarahain hai.
Sujal and sumit rush to the lobby .....They then behave Normally and
proceed towards the hospital.........
Sujal : Tum sab chalo main car park karkay aata hu.
Kashish goes and meets Gunn....Gunn is looking fine
Kashish is sitting beside gunn........
Sujal comes and sits infront of Gunn on the chair...
Kashish introduces Kumkum and sumit to Prerna, veena and Rishab.....
Sujal comes.......
Sujal : mumma, yeh fruits Bulbul kay liye..
Gunn : kya Bhaiyya, itni late aaye ho aap, kab say wait karrahi
thi......
Sujal : Bulbul, Kaisi ho aur haan ab jaldi hi theek ho jao bas....
Veena : Sujal , Jao dr say poocho kay kya hum gunn ko ghar layjaasaktay
hai......
Sujal : Haan mumma, abhi aaya.
Sujal goes to Dr and takes discharge......
Sujal comes to gunn and says chalo abhi tumhay promotion milgaya hai.
Gunn : promotion....
Sujal : haan dr nay tumhay ghar layjaanay ki ijazat daydi hai.
Kashish sab pack karti hai and then they come to House............
Gunn is rested in her Bedroom,Veena and prerna are talking in the
Hall........
While Kumkum, Sumit , Sujal - Kashish are sitting with Gunn......
Sumit gets a call .......He excuses himself and goes out to take the
call......
Sujal follows him, while Kashish and Kumkum is busy chatting with
gunn.....
Sumit : Sujal , chalo humay abhi jaana hoga...
Sujal : Par kaha.
Sumit : Main nay kaha na Bas chalo woh case kay baaray Discuss karna
hai.
Sujal : par sab say kya kahengay.
Sumit : I will handle it, Bas tum kashish ko kuch matt batana.
Sujal : Theek hai...
They come to The room..
Kashish : kis Ka phone tha.
Sujal : Woh Meray Friend ka phone tha.
Kashish : Kis ka.
Sujal : Tum nahi jaanti usay, woh meray saath London may tha.
Kashish : kya kaha us nay.
Sujal : Woh abhi hum say milna chahta hai....
Kashish : Theek hai,to tum jao....
Sujal : Hum bas abhi aye, tum bulbul ka khayal rakhna...
Sujal and sumit leaves to meet the friend...
There his friend is standing.........Lets see who this NewBie is..
Sumit : Krishna
Krishna : Hi sumit, Kaise yaad kiya.I read ur message, koi problem hai.
Sumit : First meet my friend Sujal.
They shake hands and ....
Rishi :Yahan kuch Theek nahi hai, chalay.
They go some where...
Here Gunn is asleep, so kashish and KumKum comes to the hall where
Veena And Prerna are sitting.Risabh and LG also joins them.
They start chatting.
Prerna : Pata nahi kya horaha hai,Gunn ki halat say sab kitna
Pareshaan hai.
Veena : Fikr matt karo Prerna sab theek hojayega.Main sonch rahi thi
kay Is baar Hum nay Kashish Ka birth Day Bhi miss Kardiya aur phir Yeh
sab.Kyun na....
Kumkum :Haan Aunty kyun Na kuch khushiyan laali jaayen.
Kashish : Main kuch samjhi nahi.
Veena : Kashish, kyun na hum Ek Party rakhay.
Kashish : Par aunty, Gunn toh abhi theek bhi nahi hui, aur party..
Prerna : Nahi Beta, Veenaji theek kahrahi hai.

Kasak, Akshat and Varun Joins......
K, A , V : Wow Thats a great Idea, Lets have a party.
Prerna : aap Log kya Kahtay hai.
Risabh : Mujhe to koi aitraaz nahi hai.
LG : Jab Sab itna khush hain toh Ek party ho hi jaye.
Kashish : Par, This will be a surprise Party for Sujal and Sumit.
KumKum : Toh kya kahtay aap sab ?
Kasak : Great, ab toh Mazaa ayega........
Kashish : Par Par Par.
Varun : kya.
Kashish : Kumkum aur Sumit Ko yaha humaray saath rahna hoga.
Kumkum : Theek hai, lekin Sumit ko kya kahengay.
Kashish : woh Hum nahi Sujal kahayga........
this part has been wri
summit n sujal enter in a house wt krishna
they introduced him wt every one
sujal:kya ho ra hai
akshat:ku8ch nahi wo part6y ki tayaari ho ri hai....................................
kashish:akshatttttttttttttttttttttttttt
sujal:hey party
kashish:u stupid akshat k bachey saara maza kharab kerdiya idiot
ashshat:sorry..........................................
sujal:chaloo koi baat nahi
summit:ok hum chaltey hein
kashish:no summit app loog party k baad jaogye
summit:magar........................
kash:kuch sun rey hum loog
sujal:haan yaar rok jao na buhat mazza aye ga
summit:ok but dress code kya hai
kashish:indo-western touch
sujal:coooooooooooooooooooool
well kash, sujal , summit kumkum, akshat .............leave for shoping
party day:
sujal wearing sherwani little short in size wear pant wt that black in color
kashish come down wearing black indo -western dress short shirt and tight fitting pants wt silver embroiedry on it sujal mesmerized at her beautiful looks
kash:wow tum kafi handsome lag rey ho
sujal:tum bhii kafi cute lag ri ho
kash:matlab mey khoobsurat nahi lag ri hoon
sujal:nooooooooooooo........................................ ...........yes
kash: tum bhi na sujal .............................
akshat mike leta hai or announce kerta hai
akshat:beautiful ladies n gentlemen i have an special announcement i want my very cute sis kashish and my handsome jeejo sujal to come over the stage and request him to say some thing really very beautiful about kashish and their love
sujal holding kash's hand come at stage.................
sujal:kashish merey liya kya hai yeah app sab jantey hein meri zidagi meri sansein, meri aatma sirf kashish say hai.............mey sirf ik shareer or meri rooh kashish hai or bina rooh k jism be mainey hota hai kashish mey nay sirf or sirf tum say pyaar kya hai pyaar kya hai tum ney mujey bataya hai......................mey ney tum say pyaar kya jab say jab hum pehli baar miley , jab say tum janaa hai , her us waqt us pal jab jab tum merey pass hoti ho kashish mey nahin janta kab say haan may tum say pyaar kya tab say.......................................kashish mey nay tum say bina kisi shaart k pyaar kiya hai haan bas yah chata hoon k tum meri mohabbat ko apna lo.........................may bas tumhay pyaar kerta hoon or chahta hoon k tum bhi mujh say........(here tears are flowing from his eyes and kashish too ) pyaar ....karo kashish tum wada karo meri akhari saans tak tum merey sath rahogi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz kashish"
kashish
every body call at dance floor a beautiful track play
meri dunya hai tujh mey kahin
terey bin may kya kuch bhi nahin
teri jaan mey meri jaan hai
o saathi merey
meri dunya hai tujh mey kahin,.........................................
they dance suddenly kumkum get faint
summit is shocked sujal make call to doctor
dr come and check kumkum
summit:dr meri patni........................................
dr:there is a good news 4 u mr summit
summit :ji
dr: ur wife is pregnant


well guys i m gonna continue....................
summit:ji doc
doc:mr summit ur wife is pregnent
summit:oh doctor thanx app ney mugey zindagi ki sab say achi newz di hai.............................
doctor greet summit and leaves
summit goes in to the room kiss kumkum on her forehead just then kumkum wakes
kumkum:summit kya howa mujey
summit:kumkum achi news nahi hai.....................
kumkum bcum nervous
kumkum:matlab
summit(controlling his happiness):balki bhoot achi news hai kumkum mey papa baney wala hoon
kumkum :summit she hugs him tightly
just then every one lalit,bajaj,prena,akshat ,sujal,kash every one enter
all:congrats.............................................
sujal summit k galey lagta hai us ko congrats ker kerta kashish bhi kumkum k galey lag rey ker usey congrats kerti hai
prena:beta ab tumhey apna bhoot khayal rakhna hai samji or summit or tumhey in dono ka
summit n kumkum blushes......................
prena:kashish:beta mera merey room say zara purse to lao indono ki nazar uttarni hai
bajaj:prena purse say nazar uttaro gi
prena:very funny ....us purse mey ofcourse paisey hein un say
bajaj:oh(stupid prena bajaj say man lo )
kashish then goes to wards her mom n dad room sujal follows her
kashish room mey enter hoti or sujal bhi or kashish ko is ka pata nahi hota sujal usey peechey say hug kerta hai or us key sholder per apni chin rakh deta hai
kash: sujal
sujal:arey tumko kesey pata mey hoon
kash:kyun ki tumharey ilawa yahan kisi k pass itna time nahi hai k wo mujey follow kerta howa yahan aye
sujal:smart gal
kash:wo to hoon
sujal:akhir tum mohabat kis ki ho ab intelligent to hona hi tha na
kash:ok bhoot hogya batao kya kaam hai
sujal:dekho ab to summit bhi papa ban gya hai
kash:to
sujal:kashish
kashish:sujal
sujal:kashish
kashish:tum pagal hogye ho is k liya tuhey shaadi ka wait kerna hoga
sujal:umm mey ab intezar nahi kersakta mujey tum say abhi shaadi kerni hai
kash:tum pagal hogye such mey
sujal:haan tumharey liya
kash:tum kab sadroogye
sujal:umm kabhi nahi
kash:sujal hum kal shaadi kerletey rite
sujal:really
kash:shutup
sujal:ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
kashish:oh my poor baby
then they share a long hug...........................
this is for today
Thorda sa Pyaar Hua hain.......
By Kahish_rox...........
Sujal leaves the scene i.e, room and Kashish-kumkum are alone....
Sujal comes to the party scene and they become busy chatting with a common friend.
Kumkum and Kashish are chatting.......
Kashish is soooo happy that Kumkum is pregnant as she loves kids........
Kumkum : Kashish im sorry.
Kashish : sorry kisliye.
Kumkum : meri wajah say party ka mazaa kharaab hogaya.
Kashish :Kumkum tum bhina aise kyun sonchrahi ho, tum nay toh itni achchi news sunayi hai, kya tum khush nahi ho.
Kumkum : Bahut khush hu.
kashish : chalo ab Baby ka naam decide kartay hai.
Kumkum : Haan baba woh bhi karlaygay par abhi party main jaana zaroori hai, wahan sab humara intezaar karrahen hain.
Kashish : sab bahut khushb hai aur unhay bhi party enjoy karnay ka mokha mil hi gaya.
kumkum tries to stand from her bed.Kashish stops her.
kashish : kumkum kahan jarahi ho, yahin rest karo.Aur kuch bhi chahiye toh mujh say kahna.
kumkum : Kashish, ab plz baith toh sakti hun...Thorda paani milayga.
Kashish :abhi layi par tum yahin rest karo neechay matt jaana.
Kumkum : theek hain.
Kashish goes to bring the water, Kumkum at once calls Veena and discuss something mysterious....
Jaise hi kashish ki paayal ki awaaz aati hain kumkum call cut kardayti hain.
Kashish : lo paani pi lo, ab kasie lag raha hai.,
Kumkum: Thorda suffocating feel horaha hai..
Kashish : Main window khol dayti hu, thordi fresh air ayegi toh fresh feel karogi.
kumkum : kashish chalo neechay jaatay hai, wahan sab say baat karungi toh fresh feel hoga.
kashish : Ok chalo par haan agar koi bhi problem hoto mujh say kahna.
Kashish and kumkum comes to the Party scene........
Veena gets a signal from Kumkum and sumit........
Veena along with LG comes on the Diaz......
LG : My lovely friends May i have your attention for a second.
Every one turns to see them on the Diaz......
Sujal - kashish is surprised as wat they are up to.
Veena : kumkum, sumit come on.
Kumkum takes Kashish to the stage.
Sumit takes Sujal to the stage.
Veena :Sujal-kashish yahan aao.
Sujal,kashish goes to her and she starts..
Veena : Aaj mujh se koi door honay waala hai, aaj mera pyaar kisi say batnay waala hai, par
mujhe is baat say itni khushi ho rahi hai ki main nay soncha ki sab ko is khushi may shamil karlun.
Sujal : mumma ,yeh kya kahrahi hain aap.
Veena : Haan Sujal Main nay aur tumharay papa nay soncha hai kay ab .
LG : Haan beta ab hum tum ko jo kahnay jaarahen hai woh ghor say suno.
Veena : aaj say tum dono ka milna hulna Band bas aaj kay baad hum tumhaari mangni tordtay hai.
Sujal-kashish is shocked .....
Veena : kyun ki Hum nay Tumhari shadi ka Faisla karliya hain aur aglay mahinay hi Tumdono ki shadi fix kardi hai.
Bulbul : wow.....
Sujal toh khushi say paagal hojaata hain, aur kashish runs to kumkum aur sharma rahi hain...
All are so happy.
Akshat,Kasak, Varun and bulbul all comes and they all hug each other....
Party ends.........
Next day.....
Kumkum and sumit has to return to Wadhwa pariwaar in Mumbai......
Kashish : Kumkum, plzzz ruk jao thorday din kitna achcha laga tum sab yahan thay.
Kumkum : kashish, ab tumhari shadi ki taiyaari bhi toh karna hain na aur wahan sab ko yeh good news bhi toh dayna hai.
Sujal : haan akhir waadhwa pariwaar may ek chota sadaya aanay waala hain.
Sumit : Sujal ko toh itni jaldi lagti hai, thorda sabar rakh jab teri baari aayegi na toh tujhe nahi chorunga.
Sujal : Par meri baari kab aayegi.
Kashish feels shy is about to leave the room, Sujal holds her hand.
Sujal : kumkum bhabhiji zara poochiye na kay humari baari kab aayegi.
Kashish : kumkum,mujhe nahi pata tha itnay baysharm log bhi is duniya main hotay hain .....
Sujal : aji sharam karta rahunga toh phir aap say shaadi kon kareyga....
Kashish : Kyun yeh kaho kay tum say shaadi kon karayga.
Sumit kumkum meets every one and sujal-kashish takes them to airport.......
At the airport........
Kumkum: Kashish, I will miss You..
Kashish : haan main bhi jaatay hi phone kardayna aur haan meri shaadi ki shopping hum dono milkar karengay.Tumhay Yahan aana hoga.
Kumkum : theek hain Baba zaroor aaungi..
As they are walking towards the Check inn terminal they hit Sneha......
Kashish : Sneha Tum...
Sneha : (Kashish, Kumkum in her heart) ......Kon ho aap main aap dono ko nahi jaanti.
Kashish :Oh we are sorry hum nay sooncha ki humari dost hain.
Sneha : Dost ? tum dono say mujhe baat nahi karni, dost kahtay ho aur Ek baar kabhi call bhi kiya hain mujhe. Foriegn gayi thi marr nahi gayi thi.
Kashish : Madam aap nay koi number apna koi contact address Diya tha jis par hum aap ko contact kartay.
Sneha : oops.
Kumkum : Rahnay do kashish yeh paagal toh aisi hi hain,apni shaadi par bhi humay nahi bulaya.
Kashish : Wat Sni tumhari shadi hogayi kis ullu say.
Sneha : Hey Usko ullu matt kaho haan,Chalo yaar galay nahi milogay.
They three of themn hug each other...
Sujal-Summit joins them........
Sujal : Hey guys Wats up .
summit : kumkum,Hum nay aaj ki hi flight book ki hain chalay...
Kumkum : Theek hain chalo baba.
Sneha : Kumkum dekhogi nahi meri kis ullu say shaaadi hui hain,
Kashish : Woh yahan hai.
Sneha : Haan Yahin tumhaaray peechay dekho.
They aal turn to see...........
A rough and Tough Guy...
Rishi.............
Rishi : History..
A Bad Guy always involved in Rackets...Student politics and Sneha's Enemy.......
Kashish, kumkum and Sneha were a Gang in the college and Rishi was Their senior....
Sneha : Chakkar khagaye na...
Kashish : tujhe koi aur nahi mila tha is kay siwa.
Sneha : Kya krun yaar dushman say dost kab ban gaye pata hi nahi chala, aur haan shadi toh upar waalay ki marzi say hoti hai, hain na.
Kumkum : Bas tum dono khush raho issay bardi khushi aur kya hosakti hai.
Summit : ab tum logon ka emotional drama hogaya ho toh hum flight par jaaye.
Summit kumkum takes leaves and Boards the flight.......
Rishi : hi mann.
Sujal : Hi Sujal Grewal.
Rishi : Rishi Ahluwaliya.
Kashish : Sneha , yeh alu..mujhe bahut irritate karta hain tujhe pata hain na.
Sneha : Dont worry, abhi he has changed..
Sujal : Toh aap log kahan tehray hain.
Sneha : woh hum.
Rishi : Hotel Manohar.
Kashish : Sneha, hotel main rahnay ki kya zaroorat hain, tum humaray saath rahsakti ho.
Sneha ; Kashish, yeh kon hai.
Kashish : Sujal mera Fiance hain ....Aur next month humari shaadi hai.Tum log ghar chalogay toh mumma bahut khush hongi...
Sneha : Kashish, Aunty ko kahna main jaldi hi unhay tang karnay aaungi par abhi kuch work hain rishi ko isliye hotel main hi rahengay.
Rishi : Kashish agar tum itna force karti ho toh chalo tumharay ghar hi chaltay hai.
Sujal : Nahi rishi kashish ki toh aadat hai request karnay ki,in dono ko ghar jaanay do tum meray saath chal saktay ho....I can help you out..
Rishi : Bro just chill man... i will do my work my way.... Sneha come on Cab is waiting gotta go..Thanx for your help.
Sujal : ok bye.
Rishi : kashish Meet you soon.
Sujal gets annoyed at rishi'sa behaviour.....
Kashish is also very irritated at rishi and at the fact that Sneha has Married Rishi...

Kashish gets a call from Kumkum...
Kumkum : Hello Kashish.
Kashish : Haan Kumkum, Theek ho, Pahoch gaye Mumbai, koi problem toh nahi hua na. Dr say checkup karwaya, dekho tumhay ab Careful rahna chahiye.......
Kumkum : Bas Bas meri Maa. Sab theek hain, Yahan sab Bahut khush huay tumhari aur Sujal ki shaadi ki baat sunkar..
Kashish : Par Tum log aarahay ho na, Dadi ma aur Dadaji say baat ki yahan aanay kay baaray main.
Kumkum : Nahi ki, abhi toh Mumbai aaye hain aur abhi.
Kashish : Mujhe kuch nahi sunna,Kumkum tumhay aana hi hoga...
Kumkum : Ofcourse Baba Hum zaroor ayengay par ab zara Sujal ko phone toh do ussay Sumit ko baat karni hain.
Kashish : Par sujal toh Office may hoga.
Kumkum : Tum office nahi gayee aaj.
Kashish : Nahi aaj Gunn ko check kay liye layjaana tha isliye nahi jaapaye..
Kumkum : Gunn ki tabiyat toh theek hai.
Kashish : haan theek hai, Bas regular check up hain...
Kumkum : achcha Rakhti hun, Sujal ka call aaye toh ussay kahna ki sumit ko Ussay kuch baat karni hain.
Kashish : Theek hain kahdungi, tum apna khayal rakho aur mujhe contact kartay rahna.
Kumkum: Ok Bye.
Kashish : Bye.....
Call ends....
Kashish calls Sujal ...
Kashish : Sujal,kahan ho.
Sujal : Ek Client say meeting thi wahin par gaya tha.....
Kashish : Achcha Kumkum nay call kiya tha, sumit ko tum say kuch baat karni hai, tum sumit ko call karlo.
Sujal : theek hain karlunga.Aur kuch nahi kahna.
Kashish : Haan main aur mumma Gunn ko hospital layjaarahay hain.
Sujal : Ok ,toh phir wahin miltay hain.
Kashish : sujal ,tumhay aanay ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, tum office jao.
Sujal : kyun nahi hai,I want to see you yaar..
Kashish :pehlay office.
Sujal : ok Office jakar wahan aajaunga.
Kashish : Hum thordi dair main niklaygay, ok, tum jaldi aao.
Sujal : aur sunao.
Kashish : Kya sunao, abhi bye..
Sujal : Par suno toh.
Kashish : Sujal, I said bye....
Sujal : Bye...
Kashish, Prerna And Gunn head for the hospital....
They go to the doctor and Gunn is declared fit by the doctor...
Abhi Gunn ko doctor medicines prescribe hi kartay hain....Aur itnay main kashish ko phone aata hain.
To take the call she comes out of the Cabin....
Sujal ka phone hain, he calls kashish out......
While kashish is coming out of the hospital........
Kashish sees Someone and tries to pick up some thing in her mind...
Kashish : Shruti...
Shruti sees Kashish..
Kashish :Shruti tu yahan.
Shruti : oh meri jaan kashish, Kaisi ho, yeh tareekha hota hai doston ko yaad rakhnay ka...
Kashish : Agar yeh main kahun toh, ek hi shaher main rahtay hain par koi contacts nahi....
Aur tum hospital main sab theek hain, where is sameer..Shaadi kay baad dono aisay ghayab huway ki.....
Shruti : haan kashish....Bachcho main itna busy rahti hu ki time hi nahi milta.
Kashish : Bachchay, Oh my god..teray bachchay kahan hai..
shruti : Bhoomi.....
Sameer comes along with bhoomi and Roshan......
Sameer : Hi kashish tum yahan.
Kashish : Tum toh mujh say baat hi matt karo.
Sameer : Kyun maine kya kiya.
Kashish :Tum Isi shaher main ho aur ek baar bhi milnay nahi aaye.
Shruti : Sameer, kashish hum say bahut naraaz hain..
Bhoomi : mumma yeh aunty Kaun hain, Aunty Papa say gussa hain..
Kashish bends holds her in her arms........
Kashish : Beta Main aap ki mumma ki Friend hu, Par aap ki mumma aur Papa mujh say Miltay hi nahi hai.ab aap bolo aap ki friend aap say nahi milaygi toh aap Kya karogay.
Bhoomi : main toh apni friend say katti hojaungi.....
Kashish : Toh main bhi katti ho jaoon.
Bhoomi : nooo ...
Kashish : yyyy.
Bhoomi : Kyun ki mumma bahut achchi hain, aap unsay dost ho jao.
Kashish : ok, Par aap sab ko Meray saath meray ghar chalna hoga tab main aap ki mumma say dost ho jaungi.theek hain.
Shruti : Nahi kashish abhi nahi chal saktay , but next time I promise.
Kashish : this is not fair shruti, sameer tum kaho shruti tumhari baat zaroor manegi....
Sameer : Nahi kashish phir kabhi....
Gunn,Prerna comes out from the hospital.
Prerna : Sameer, Shruti tumdono yahan.Kaise ho sab theek hain.
Kashish : mom ab aap hi kahiye na in dono ko ghar chalnay ko.
Shruti : ok baba chaltay hain...
As they are coming out sujal is standing seeing kashish with the kids.He is soo happy.....
Sujal itna muskura raha hain kyun matt poocho isliye kay Kashish is playing with kids and
SUjal is thinking about their children..
Kashish sees Sujal coming towards them...
As sujal is smiling....
Kashish : Kya hua.
Sujal : Kuch nahi.
Chalo Sujal joins them

They all go to kashish's home......
Kashish calls Sneha for Dinner with them and tells them that Shruti and Sameer has come to have dinner with them...
Sneha comes alone WITH OUT RISHI..
All the three friends enjoy Dinner while Sameer is having nice time with Sujal...
They sit to relax after Dinner......
Kashish : Mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai, woh sab Lamhe jo hum charon doston nay saath guzaray,
it was really fun.
Shruti : haan ,kaise bhool saktay woh din.
Sneha is very quite.Kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi,( lagta tha kuch usay ander hi ander sataraha hai..)
Kashish tells Sujal about their college Days as he & Sameer joins them..
Flashback..
Kashish, Sneha, Kumkum
shruti all were a gang " 2SK "Their Fave Time pass was Giving Boys a runn...
Sameer was Sneha's cousin and he just visited the college for Shruti Madam...
Mean while sumit have come to Shimla for holidays and when he saw Kumkum he shifted his base to
Shimla...
Rishi was A disaster a flirt...... All the girls in the college were lattu behind him....
Sneha hated Rishi to the T...
Flash Back ends...As kashish sees Something wrong with sneha...
Bhoomi was in kashish's lap and Roshan was in Shruti's Lap..
Kashish,takes sneha and Shruti to her room to lay children on the Bed and even this may give
her an appourtunity to talk personally with sneha..
Kashish, sneha and Shruti sit on the bed...
Kashish : sneha kya baat hai.Any problem.
Sneha : nahi kuch bhi toh nahi.
Kashish : kuch toh hai.tum itni changed lagrahi ho.
Shruti :Haan kashish even i have noticed that Sneha kuch badal gayi hai.
Kashish : rishi nay kuch kaha.
Sneha chup rahti hai..
Kashish : kya hua batao..
Sneha toot jaati hain aur ronay lagti hai..
Kashish : Kya baat hain, sneha please sambhalo khud ko...
Sneha ko kashish aur shruti bahut samjhaatay hai.
Sneha : kashish, main ab Rishi kay saath nahi rah sakti.I want to divorce him..
Shruti : main jaanti thi woh Rishi aisa hi hain..
Kashish : Par shruti humain bahut sonch kar faisla karna hoga yeh sneha ki saari zindagi ka sawaal hain..
Sneha : haan kashish, main nay sonch liya hain main usay divorce dayrahi hun..
Kashish : par tum bataogi kay aisa kya hogaya ki baat Divorce tak aagayi.
Sneha shows Kashish her hands....
Kashish aur shruti bas dekhtay hi rahjaatay hain...
Her hands are all bruised...
Sneha : Rishi, nay mujh say shaadi bas isliye ki thi ki woh mujh say badla lay sakay..shuru may toh woh aisay behave karta tha jaise woh sirf mujh say pyaar karta hain, par dheeray dheeray usnay Papa kay saaray business par kabza karliye...aur mujhe daranay laga ki agar main nay is baaray main kisi say baat ki toh woh papa ko...( she starts crying).
Kashish & Sneha consoles her.......

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Posted: 08 December 2005 at 5:07am | IP Logged
ok ppl so i am writing in here with thsi story after avery long time...and i knwo u few ppl who read it waited for it...so here is a long one dedicated to all the ppl who like this story!!
Thoda sa pyar hua hai

A small recap: Sneha and Rishi come to India...Kashish meets them at airport...Sneha, Shruti and Kashish get together at Kashish's house and Sneha tells them how Rishi has ruined he life...Sujal takes Rishi to his own home but Rishi resfuses to go and says that he wants to stay in a hotel...now Rishi has NOT met the Garewals...and Kashish supports Sneha..they are going to get a divorce...so leyts see whats happened

Shruti and Kashish convince Sneha and they support her to get her divorce.Actually Rishi had been in India since 2 months or so and Sneha had come to India to apply for a divorce and they (rishi and sneha) were happy to get rid of eachother...Next day Kashish and Sneha go to ytheir lawyer and apply for the divorce...they come out of the lawyer's office and Kashish is calling Sujal
Sneha: kissey phone laga rahi ho Kashish?
Kash: Sujal ko..us ne kaha tha keh woh humain yahan sey pick karay ga aur hum lunc akhatay karain gay
Sneha: kashish...main tumhari bhut shukarguzar hun ke..
Kash: bass...koi thanks ki zaroorat nahi hai..we r friends...aur main tumharay kaam nahi aon gi to kaun ayega?/
Sneha: aj main iss pabandi sey bhi azad ho gayi..thank God...main aj bhut khsuh hoon
Kash: haan...aur issi khsuhi ko aj hum sab mill ker celebrate karain gau
Sneha: hum sab??
Kash: matlab main, Sujal, tum, aur Shruti and co.
Sneha: SHruti and co...yaar tu ney yeh to bataya hi nahi keh SHruti ki shadi kaisi hui??
Kash: matt poocho..hazaron pappar beley thay unhain milanay kay liye...khair yeh choro...yaar yeh Sujal kahan reh gaya...hamesha late hota hai...kabhi time per nahi aya...
Sneha smiles aur uss key shoulder per tap karti hai
Sneha: lo agaya Sujal
Kash: tameez akro...after all main tum sey pooray 5 mahinay 6 din barri hun aur Sujal tum sey ziada barra hai
Sneha: ahahhaaa...5 mahinaya nahi 5 saal ho gaye...chalo agaye Sujal JEEJU!!
Kash: better...(laughs)
Sujal comes up on teh stairs where they are standing
Sujal: ziada late ho gaya kia??
Kash:nahi...ap to as usual waqt se pehley agayen hain...wiasye anney ki zehmat kyun ki ap ney??
Sujal: yaar tanney na marro...office main kuch kaam tha...tum logon ka kaam ho gaya??
Sneha: haan...kaam ho gaya...thanks to u both
Sujal: no problem at all....
Kash: pata hai Sujal aj lunch key ba hum shopping per phir...
Sujal: ab ap ko late nahi ho rahi?? (wickedly)
Kash: baad main dekhoon gi tumhain...chalo Sneha garri main
they recah the car
Kash: Sujal please aj main drive kar loon??
Sujal: No way...last time yaad hai an kya hua tha...
Sneha: kia hua tha?
Sujal: humari larayi ho gayi to madam ko garri sahi drive karni ati nahai hai lekin garri ley ker nikkal gayi...phir hospital sey phone ata hai keh Miss Kashish yahan admitted hain un ka accident ho gaya hai...3 stitches forehead pe aur garri tabah
Sneha: kashish...itni burri garri chalati ho??
Sujal: meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi...
Sneha: zahir si baat hai...ap ki nahi nikalay gi to kiss ki nikalay gi??
Kash: ho gayi burai??ab chalain?/
Woh ghussay main garri main beth jati hai ..SNeha aur Sujal aik dosray ko dekh ekr Kash ke attitudeper hanstey hain phir garri main bethtey hain...Sneha peechey aur Sujal driving...garri chalti hai...SUjal ko masti charhati hai aur woh SNeha ko wink kerta hai...kashish abhi bhi ghussay main hai
Sujal: yaar Sneha....garri main bhut garmi nahi ho gayi??
Sneha: haan...bhut gari hai...kuch jalnay ki smell bhi arahi hai...
Sujal: tumhain bhi arahi hain...bhut strong smell hai jalnay ki...lagat hai kisi ka dil jal raha hai
Kash ghussay maian ussey dekhti hai
Sujal: arey baap re...kashish aissey na dekho main darr gaya....acha baba naraz na ho...i am sorry...mazak kr raha tha yaar
Kashsih chup rehti hai
Sujal: kashish yaar tum aissa react kero gi to yar lunch per kya maza ayega..mera bhi mood kharab hoga...aur sneha kia sochey gi keh yeh donon hamesha lartay rehtey hain...ok...agar tum ab razi na hui o main aj poora din kuch nahi khaon ga...theek hai?? ab khush??
Kssh:nahi aissa nahi karna..pata hai an tumhari tabiyat kharabb ho jati hai...ok..its alright..
Sujal: ab ap sey aik aur guzarish hai please!!
Kash kia??(cutely)
Sujal: aik baar smile kar do
Kash: nahi...
Sujal: ok...
2 minute baad, SUjal garri rokta hai....kashish ki taraf aik damm dekhta hai aur kehta hai
Sujal: kashish..yeh tumharay chehray pe kia hai??
Kush:kia hai??(confused)
Sujal:woh tumharay cheeks per...tumharay cheeks key pass...
Kash: kia hai sujal batao na!!(she thinks its an insect aur something)
Sujal uss key honton ker kareeb haath lagata hai
Sujal: yeh mill gayi!!
Kash: kia hai??
Sujal: tumhari smile...gum ho gayi thi lekin ab mill gayi hai
Kashish smiels aur shies down...SUjal uss key kareeb ata hai aur uss ko cheek per kiss karney lagta hai when a voice comes
Sneha: AHEM AHEM!!!!
sujal aik damm seedha ho jata hai
Sneha: i think keh is ultra-romantic jagah main mera damm ghut raha hai...waisey bhi main kebab main haddi kyun bann rahi hun??
Kash: arey nahi Sneha..its nothing like that...yeh Sujal hai na hamesha aissi i koi harkat karta hai..choro...haan to tumhain pata hai Nisha ka...woh na..
Sujal starts driving the car and they reach Silver Oak Restaurant.
they go inside aur abhi bethey huay do minute hi huay thay keh Shruti aur Sameer wahan ajatay hain
Kash: HI!! itni dair laga di anney main??
Shruti: haan bass woh traffic...
Sneha: arey Shruti bachay nahi aye?/
Shruti: nahi mumma ne unhain rok lia...actually mumma chahti thi keh hum log akeley jaye...warna Roshan bhut tang karta hai...
Sujal: acha chalo betho..aur suna Sameer kaisa hai??
Sameer: aik damm theek
They sit there talking for some time...
Sujal: ab order dein...
Shruti: haan...mujhey to bhut bhok lagi hai
Sneha: hmm....waiter
and who comes here but our waiter Gurry
Sujal: waiter, please order note down kar lo...
they all give their order
Sujal: aur han zara jaldi karna
Gurry: jee?
Sujal: main ney kaha keh jaldi karna
Gurry: sir kia jaldi karmna??
Sujal: abey yaar order jaldi lana
Gurry: abhi ley aon?
Sujal: yaar jab bann jaye to ley ana mere baap..ab ja
Kash: daant kyun rahey ho ussay?
Sujal: dantoon na to kia karron...kashish..
Gurri has gone from there
SNeha: ok ppl to main ap ko aj ki taza tareen news deti hun..hum garri main bethey thay aur Kashish naraz thi to Sujal...
Sujal is sitting next to Sneha aand on his other side is Kashish
SUjal Sneha key moun per haath rakh deta hai
Sujal: Sneha! no...nahi..Sneha nahi
SNeha: ok baba nahi batati
Sameer: kia hau batao na Sneha
Kash: anhi kcuh nahi...yeh to aissey hi...
Shruti: hmm....to Sujal tum mujhey aik baat batao...
Sujal: poocho...
Shruti: tumhara shadi ka koi plan nahi hai kia??
Sujal: bilkul hai...kyn?/
Shruti: bhai kab sey sun rahey hain keh ap donon ki shadi hai...lekin kab hai??
Sujal: arey yaar itni jaldi kai hai...
Shruti: jaldi?? poora aik saal ho gaya ap ki mangni ko mister...ab shadi ka koi plan nahi hai??
Kash: Shruti...tujhey sach bataon to Sujal acting kar raha hai...rozana kehta hai 'yaar humari shadi kab hogi' aur tumharay samney...
Sujal: yaar mainey kab kaha??
Kash: Sujal...jhoot na bolo..hann Shruti woh bass aj tareekh pakkii honi hai..isi liye aj jaldi jana hai ghar
Sneha: ohhh!! aur yeh achi news ap ney pehley kyun nahi batayi madam??
Shruti: chor na...Sneha isi baat per aik gana ho jaye yaar
they both start singing but not loudly
MERI PYARI BEHNIYA BANNEY GI AJ DULHANIYA...AND DULHAN HUM LAY JAYENGAY
SUjal kashish key haath per haath rakhta hai...Kashish is smiling and blushing at the same tiem..she is beet-root red...
Sameer(to Sujal): bhai sahab...haath ahta lijiye
they all laugh and then they get their meal...start eating...after a lot of time Shruti and Sameer leave with Sneha...now only Sujal Kashish are left
they go out in the parking...SUjal leans against the car aur Kashish uss ke saath kharri hai...Sujal kisi gehri soch main hai
Kash: kia soch rahay ho Sujal?
Sujal: soch raha hoon key jab sapnay sach hotay hain to insan ko kitni khsuhi hoti hai na
Kash: kaun sa sapna??
Sujal: tumhain pannay ka sapna...tumhain ani dulhan bana ker apnay gahr lanney ka sapna...tumhain dulhan key roop main sajjay huay dekheny ka sapna...tumharay haathon per apnay naam ki mehendi laganay ka sapna...tumhain apnanay ka sapna...kuch dinnon baad tum meri ho jao gi kashish!!
Kash is silent...she has tears in her eyes
Sujal: arey yeh kia...main itni romantic baatain kar raha hoon aur tum ro rahi ho?? yeh anssoo kiss liye Kashish??
Kashish:Sujal..main ney kabhi spanay main bhi nahi soch atah keh mujhey tum jaissa saathi milley ga...lekin yeh anssoo iss liye hain..keh main soch rahi thi keh jiss ghar bmain main palli bhari, jahan apnay achay burray waqt guzaray aur jin logon ko itna pyar kia...iss sab ko chor ker main kaisey....
Sujal is silent aur woh uss ke samney akey kharra ho jata hai
phir woh ahista sey apna haath agay kashish ki taraf bharata hai...aissey like ussey tham lo...kashish usey dekhti hai aur phir apna haath sujal key haathon main dey deti hai
Sujal: bass....ab tumhain fikar akrnay ki zaroorat nahi hai!
Kas:kai matlab?/
Sujal: jab tum eny iss haath ko thama hi liya hai to ab tumhain apnay sarray gham sarri pareshanian aur sarray khauf bhool janney chahiye...iss haath ko tham liya matlab yeh haath zindagi bhar nahi chootay ga aur hamesha tumhain sahara dey ga...aj sey tumhari sarri pareshanian meri...main aj tum sey aik wada karat hoon kashish...main wada karta hoon ekh tumhain zindagi bhar khsuh rakhoon ga...tum per aik anch bhi nahi anney doon ga...tum merey peechey nahi hamesha merey saath chalo gee...merey saath merey gahr main tumhain koi takleef nahi hogi...aur gara koi takleef hui to uss takleef ki jarr ko hi khatam kar dalloon ga...tum per ksii ki nazar takk nahi uthnay doon ga...yeh mera wada hai tum sey!!
kashish ussey dekh arhi hoti hai with love and a bit surprised
Sujal: mujh per bharosa to hai na??
Kash: yeh pooch ker kyun humaray pyar ko, humaray bharosay key rishtay o kamzor bana rahay ho...main tum per apnay ap sey ziada bharosa karti hoon...main janti hoon keh tum apni baat per kharray sabit hogay...main wada karti hoon keh zindag bhar tumhara saath doon gi aur kisi aur key barray main sochna door ki baat hai tumharay ilawa ksii ko nahi dekhoon gi!
THEY BOTH LOOK INTO EACH OTER'S EYES...bavkground ( ji yeh chahey yeh lamhay)
tehn kashsih at once comes running into sujal's arms and hugs him tightly
Kash: i love u Sujal..i love u!!
Sujal: i love u too!!
they hug for some time (actually there is no one in the parking lot if u r wondering) aur phir kashish aur sujal garri main beth ker ghar jattay hain..go staright to Sujal's house
Veena: arey acha hau tum log agaye...
they enter aur Raheja's aur Garewals sarray bethey hain to decide te ady of marriage
Prerna: beta...shadi ki tareekh nikal ayi hai...
Kash:: jee mumma
Gunn: janti hain Di...shadi ki tareekh kia nikali hai??
Kash: kia nikali??
Kasak: aj sey theek aik haftay baad ap iss gahr main ajayen gi!
Kash: matlab??
Veena: beta Saturday ko sangeet hai aur Sunday ko shadi!!
Sujal: kia?? itni jaldi...
Lalit: waisey to jaldi parri hui hai shaid i aur ab...
they all laugh
Veena: to Prerna...tayarian shuroo kar do...bhut jald tumhari beti ko apnay ghar ley ayen gay hum
Prerna smiels aur phir kharri hoti hai aur Kashish ko forehead per kiss karti hai
Prerna: meri achi...itni barri ho gayi aur mujhey pata hi nahi chala!! (tears in eyes)
Kash: mumma!!! (crying)
she hugs Prerna phir Sujal Kashis ashirwad letey hain sab ka...kashish is crying badly
Sujal: aunty (prerna)...yeh bhut burri baat hai...mushkilon sey main ney issey normal kia tha aur pa ney phir sey rulla dia!
Prerna: aunty nahi..ab mumma kaho! aur haan abhi issey jitna rona hai ro ley...kyunki main janti hoon keh shadi key baad tu issey ronnay ka mauqa nahi dye ga!!
Akshat: arey ab dulha dulhan ka moun to meetha karaiye!
Veena: haan haan...yeh meri beti key liye (kashish ke mou main mithayi) aur yeh terey lie! (in sujal's mouth)
tehn it proceeds on...hopr u liek it...PLZPLZPLZ give ur comments luv kiran!!

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Posted: 08 December 2005 at 5:08am | IP Logged
ok...so i hope u liked the last part...so here is the next part of the story Thoda sa pyar hua hai...hope u like it

ok so we left it where the date of the marriage is fixed..te marriage is taking place the next week...the next day
Kashish apnay kamray main sakoon ki neend so rahi htoi hai jab uss ka alarm bajta hai...woh alarm band karti hai aur frustration main pillow apnay ir per rakh leti hai...phir koi uss ka darwaza knock kerta hai...woh neend main uthati hai aur darwaza kholti hai
aur uss key samney Gunn kharray hoti hain
Kashish (yawning): arey yaar...itni subah subah...kia kaam hai??
Gunn: di...subbah??main college key liye late ho rahi hoon...ap ney office nahi jana...Sujal bhaiya ka do baar call a chuka hai
Kashish: main udhar do minute late ho jaon to Sujal ko tension ho jati hai..aj to koi khaas kaam bhi nahi hai
Gunn: keh rahey tahy keh kissi Virani industries key ssath bhut hi zidaa important meeting hai!!
Kashsih: oh my GOD!! main kaisey bhool gayi...yaar Sujal mujhey maar dalley ga...main do minute main tayar hui
Gunn: impossible!!
Kash: kia??
Gunn: ap do minute ,main nahi tayar ho skati
Kash:tu ja ker garri main beth main abhi ayi
woh darwaza band karti hai...Gunn neechey jati hai
Prerna: Gunn...tu ney Kashish ko uthaya??
Gunn: jee mumma
Prerna: yeh larki na..acha hua jaga dia...aj humain shopping mkarnay ana hai
Gunn: lekin unhain to kisi meeting per jana hai
Prerna: dekhti hoon kaisey jati hai!
Gunn ja ker garri main beth jati hai...she wiats for 25 minutes lekin Kashish nahi ati...andar dekhety hain kia ho raha hai
Kashish stairs sey nechey uttar rahi hai..looking dazzling in a red saarri (for a change) and very high heels...makeup and jewelley
Prerna: arey wah..aj sarri kaisey pehan li??
Kash: mumma aj bhut hi ziada important meeting ahi...isi liye
she has files n her hand...Prerna takes away the files
Prerna: aj tu kahiin nahi ja rahi!
Kash: MUMMA!!
Prerna: haan ji...aj tujhey Sujal key saath shopping per jana hai
Kash: mumma plz jannay di jiye...agar aj na gayi to bhut barri problem ho jaye gi...plz...i promise main 2 ghanton key ander shopping mall amin ap ko millon gi...ok??(takes away the files) main chalti hoon...bye!!
Prerna: aerey nashta to akr ley!!
Kash: office main kar loon gi
she runs out of the house and reaches the car and sits inside, panting
Gunn: arey...aj to barri aci lag rahi hain
Kash: thanks
Woh drive karti hai, Gunn ko college drop karti hai aur phir rush karti hai RnG...woh jaissey hi apnay cabin ka darwaza kholti hai, aik peon ata hai aur kehta hai keh Sujal sir ussay bulla rahay hain
Kashish Sujal key office main jati hai aru uss ka cabin ka darwaza kholti hai...ahista sey andar jati hai Sujal ka face darwazay ki taraf hai aur woh kisi sey phone per ghussay main baat kar raha hota...
Kashish(thinking): arey baap ray...main to gayi...Sujal aj bhut ghussay main hai
Sujal phone band karta hai aur deewar ki taraf hi dkehta rehta hai in frustration...Kashish ussey peechey sey ja ker hug ker leti hai, Sujal aik damm murr ker dekgta hai
Sujal(angry): agayi tum??amin to police ko phone karnay wala tha keh Miss Kashish Raheja kho gayi hain gumshuda hain pata lagaiye...itni diar kahan thi??
Kash: woh main...
Sujal: sonnay aur tayar honay sey fursat milley madam ko tab na!!
Kash: sorry!!(making a cute face)
Sujal (calms down): its ok!!
Kash: acha Sujal...woh Viranis key saath meeting ki preparations key barray main..
Sujal: issi liye to tumhara wait kar raha tha/...woh ffile layi??
Kash: yeh rahi..aur haan woh product...
they get busy in their work....
Kash: Sujal meeting kitnay bajjay hai?
Sujal: yaar...abhi main...
just then he gets a call from teh Viranis taht tehy had a death in the family and tehy can't come...meeting would be tommorow
Sujal switches off the phone
Kash: kia hua??
Sujal: they can't attend the meeting tommorow...chalo acha hau preparations key liye ziada waqt mill gaya
(till now the two hours have pased and its been 3 and a half hours)
They again get busy in their meetings
Kash(on the phone): Mr.Mehta..please woh quotations i file cabin main ley ker ayen
after 5 minutes the cabin door opens
Kashish and Sujal are veryu busy...Kashish is looking down in the files..doesn't look up to see who is it, assumig it is Mr.Mehta
Kash: arey Mr.Mehta...woh file dijiye (doesn't look up)suddenly koi uss key haath main haath deta hai...woh aik damm ooper dekhti hai aurguess who is tehr...yes the poor Prerna and Veena who had waited lonng time in teh office..couldn't contact cuz Veena had left her cellphone at home and Prerna's waas not working
Kash: arey mumma...aiye na...ap log yahan??
Sujal: arey mumma, ap log yahan kaisey??
Prerna: haan jab tum log nahi aye to humain hi ana parra
Sujal: kahan??
Kash: oh my God! so sorry mumma main bilkul bhool gayi aj humain shopping per jana tha
Sujal: oh..aam itna tah keh...
Veena: chup...terey bahanay na...bass ab koi kaam shaam nahi...tum log jao shopping
Kash: mumma humain itna kaam...
Veena: Kashish...kia kaam...beta shadi sey ziada zaroori kuch nahi hai...
Prerna: yes..aur iss liye tum log abhi ja rahey ho shopping karnay
Kash: lekin ap log??
Veena: hum log ghar ja rahey hain...humain jo kaam karna tha kar liya...ab tum log jao...ok chalo
Kash: theek hai...jaissa ap kahain
they leave the office and Prerna and Veena leave to go to their homes
Sujal and Kashish enjoy a lot in the shopping malll....abhi woh log centre sey bahir hi nikaltay hain keh achanak Kashish ko chakar ata hai and she falls ddown...behosh...
Sujal: KASHISHHHH!!!!
woh ussey apni bahhon main uthata hai aur phir ussey jaldi hospitalley ker jata hai
Lady Doctor after checkip...kashish is still behosh
Sujal: Doctor...woh kashish...
Doc: Mr.Sujal...kia yeh apna poori tarah dehan nahi rakhti??
Sujal: jee woh...
Doc: in ki hallat bhut nazuk hai...seh is very weak...woh properly apna khanna nahi leti aur na hi un ki neend poori hai...woh bhut kamzor hain..u r her husband right??
Sujal: jee woh abhi humari shadi honi hai...but i am her fiance..
Doc: to ap ko in ka khaas khyal rakhna hai...in ki tabiyat kabhi bhi kharab ho sakti hai, aur in case after marriage bhi in ki yehi hallat rahi to...
Sujal: to??to kia doctor??
DOc: i am sorry to say lekin agar ap in ka pooru tarah sey khyal nahi rakhain gay to shadi key baad jab yeh pregnant hongi to pregnancy main kafi complications a sakti hain..so i am warning u beforehand..in ka khaas khyal rakhain..teen waqt ka mukamal khanna aur kuch dinnon key liye bed-rest
Sujal: doctor yeh koi barri bemari...
Doc: oh no no...shadi ki tension main aksar aissa ho jata hai...lekin in ka case zara serious hai...u hae to take good care of her...yeh in ki mediine prescription hai...ap lay lijiye
Sujal: jee doctor

Kashish abhi bhi behosh hai...aur un donon key darmain uss key hosh main anney key baad kia hota hai yeh jannay key liye parhatay rahiye...i hope u liek it though there is no romantic scene...feeling sleepy..aur haan agar koi medical problem hain iss main to i am sorry i ahve no idea abt bio....sorry and hope u liek it....PLZ PLZPLZ GIVE UR COMMENTS! love kiran

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Posted: 08 December 2005 at 5:09am | IP Logged


Subbah hoti hai,roshni ki kirnain window ke zariye aik kamrey main ati hain aur bed per leta hua Sujal apni neend sey uthata hai...uss ki mumma kamray key darwazay par khatkhata rahi hoti hain...woh kamray ka darwaza kholta hai...
Sujal: Good-Morning mumma...(neend main hai bahi bhi)
Veena: Good Mroning beta...uth gaya?
Sujal: bass nabi utha hun mumma...
Veena: raat ko late soya hoga...
Sujal: haan woh bass kaam kar raha tah...
Veena: kaam kar raha tha ya Kashish sey phone per baat ker raha tha?
Sujal: mumma....ap bhi na...main kaam kar raha tha
Veena uss ka kaan khenchti hai
Veena: tu ne jhoot kab seyu bolna shurroo kar dia?? main bhi teri maa hoon..janti hun raat ko tu Kashish sey hi baat kar raha tha...
Sujal: mumma...ap harr baat kaisey jaan leti hain
Veena: bass...acha sun jaldi sey neechey aja nashta thanda ho raha hai aur phir tujhey terey papa key saath office jana hai...koi meeting hai na
Sujal: lekin woh meeting to Kashish present kar rahi hai...
Veena: jee nahi...aj sey Kashish office nahi arahi iuss liye tu ja...ab jaldi kar...aur haan...abhi Kashish ko call na karbna, so rahi hogi khawamakha ussey disturb karay ga...
Sujal: arey wah!! ap ko uss bahu ki abhi sey fikar hai jo abhi iss ghar main ayi bhi nahia ru jo beta ap key saath hai hamesha uss ki koi fikar nahi?
Veena: pagal! kuch bhi bolta rehta hai...jaldi aja..
She goes aur Sujal office key liye tayar hota hai...tayar hotay huay kamray main harr jagah ussey Kashish nazar ati haii..
Sujal: sach main pagal ho gaya hoon...pata nahi kya ho gaya hai mujhey
Varrun at the door: BIG-B!!! ap neechey arahay hain keh nahi?? jaldi karain papa bula rahay hain
Sujal: araha hoon yaar!
he goes down to breakfast aur wahan ussey aik plan soojhta hai
Veena: kia ley ga? toast?egg?
Sujal: nahi mumma...kuch dil nahi hai...
Veena: kia matlab dil nahi hai? tabiyat to theek hai teri?
Sujal: bass kuch beychaini si ahi..mujhey lagta hai keh aj mujhey gahr per hi rehna chahiye
Veena: haan...aj ghar hi reh aj..yeh na ho baad main tabiyat kharab hojaye...
Sujal: lekin woh meeting??
Lalit: beta...meeting main handle kar loon ga...tum rest karo
Sujal: theek hai papa
Khushi khushi woh apnay kamray main chala jata hai...yeh sab drama Kashish sey milnay key liye
woh kashish woh call karta hai...after 6 calls Kashsih phone uthati hai
Kash: (sleeply) hello...kaun??
Sujal: main aur kaun
Kash: Sujal...tum?? itni subbah...
Sujal: bass yaar bore ho raha tha...
Kash: tum offie nahi gaye?
Sujal: anhi...meri tabiyat kharab hai
Kashish aik damm uth bethati hai, anxious
Kash: kia hua? tum theek to ho na?? ziada tabiyat kharab hai?
Sujal: haan....tabiyat to kharab hai...isssi liye office nahi gaya
Kash: acha...abhi time kia hua hai...oh 9 bajjey hain
Sujal: haan...aur Varrun,Kasak college gaye hain aur Papa office...mumma kisi kaam se bahir gayi hain aur main akela hoon...
Kash: what?? tumhari tabiyat kharab hai aur tumharay pass koi nhai hai??
Sujal: nahi na...kisi ko mera khyal hi nahi hai...isi liye tumhain call ki...lekin tum bhi nahi asakti na
Kash: kyun nahi asakti?
Sujal: woh rasam na milnay walli...
Kash: bhar main gayi rasam! main pandrah minute main pohanchti hoon...ok bye!
Sujal phone rakhta hai happily keh Kashish sey mill ley ga...woh bed per lait jata hai night-suit pehan ker pretending to be sick..
Kashish neechey jati hai kamray sey
Prerna: arey...aj itni jaldi..beta tu office nahi ja rahhi...
Kash: mumma...office nahi ja rahi...aik bhut important kaam hai iss liye...bass ghantay takk ati hun...bye!
woh Prerna ko kuch bolnay ka mauqa hi nahi deti aur garri ki chabi ley ker Sujal key ghar ke liye nikalti hai!
taqreeban 15 minute baad, Sujal ke ghar per bell hoti hai aru 10 second baad Kashsih bhagti hui Sujal key kamray main enter hoti hai
Sujal: arey tum agayi...main tumhara hi wiat kar raha tha..
Kash: kia hua tumhain?tum theek to ho? kitni baar kaha tha keh tahnd main coat pehana karo elkinn suntay hi nahi...ab bukhto!
Sujal uss key shoulders per haath rakhta hai
Sujal: calm down!! chill karo..
Kash: kia chill karoon? tumhari tabiyaat kharab hai aur...bhukhar to nahi hai...
Sujal: kuch bhi nahi nahi hai...
Kash: kia matlab?
Sujal: matlab yeh sab tum sey milnay ke iye nattak...
Kash: WHAT!!! tumhain sharam nahi ati...pagal...milnay key liye yeh sab...meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi...
Sujal smile karta hai aur phir ussey hug kar leta hai
Sujal: God i missed u soooooooooooooooo much!
Kash: choro Sujal!! kisi ney dekh liya na to...
Sujal: tum na...thora sa romance bhi nahi karnay deti...
Kash: shadi ke baad jitna romance karna hai kar lena...filhal main ja rahin hun
Sujal: arey itni jaldi?
Kash: mumma wiat ker arhi hongi
Sujal: jahan atkk amin tumhain janta hoon tum mumma ko kam sey am aik ghantay ka time de ker ayi ho...to betho na yaar
Kash: koi agaya to?
Sujal: 2 ghanton takk yahan gahr main koi nahi ayega main ney iss ka bandobast kar liya hai....
Kash: sirf aik shart per keh ainda aissa nahi akrogay??
Sujal: ok baba nahi karoon ga
Kash: theek hai
woh smile karti hai...Sujal apna dil pakar leta hai
Sujal: uffff!!! isi muskarahat per to hum fida hain...
Kash: Sujal!! tum ney mujhey paka embarass karnay ka zima le liya hai...
Sujal: embarass kia yaar... i am ur going to be husband
Kash: GOING TO BE na huay to nnahi ho...
Sujal: acha yeh sab choro...decide kartay hain...shadi key baad ghar ana chaho gi ya hotel main madam ke liye kamra book karain?
Kash: of course ghar angi...apnay ghar..
Sujal: theek hai...aur honeymoon per kahan jayen??
Kash: ummm....lets see....London??
Sujal: main ney aik tour socha hai...pehley London,phir Dubai, phir Morocco aur phir ghar...kia kehti ho?
Kash: excellent!! aur kitni dair key liye??
Sujal: yaar do amhinay to...
Kash: DO MAHINAYYYYY!!!! itni dair sab ke beghair...
Sujal: jab main wahan hoon ga to sab ki kia zaroorat....
(btw this conversation is taking place on a sofa in sujal's room)
Kash: nahi...phir bhi its too long....
Sujal: theek hai...merey saath akeley do mahinay bardasht nahi hotay aur iss gahr ain poori zindagi guzar sakti ho...fine
Kash: acha naraz na ho..theek hai jaissa tum kahoo....
Sujal: aur shadi ke 2-3 saalon main humaray paanch chay bachay to ho jayen gay na....
Kash: pagal ho agye ho?? 2-3 saal main paanch chay bachay?? main insan hoon koi machine nahi...
Sujal: yaar insan jab chand per ja sakta hai, k-2 sarr ker sakta hai to panch chay bachay paida karna to mamooli baat hai...
Kash: jee nahi...mujhey paanch chay bachay nahi chahiye...
Sujal: yaar woh Anish, uss ki bhai key janti ho kitnay bachay hain? saath....uss ki bhabhi ney kabhi kuch nahi kaha
Kash: uss ney nahi kaha matlab main bhi chup chap sarri takleef sehti rahoon? na baba na...mujh sey yeh takleef nahi sahi jaye gi...
Sujal: uff o kashish! kia takleef??
Kash: ab tumhain poora process bataon?? sab jantay ho lekin bholay bantay ho...main ney keh dia na sirf do bachay...nahi to takleef se to main marr hi jaon gi...
Sujal: main ney agar tumhain marnay dia to na?? tum mujhey chor ker ja hi nahi sakti...
Kash: kyun? maain koi immortal hoon...
Sujal: woh oopeer wala hai na uss ney humari qismatain akhatai likhi hain...matlab hum marrain gay to akhatay hi...
Kash: acha baba...tumhain chro ker kabhi nahi jaon gi ok...
Sujal:...hmmm thats better
Kash: acha ab main chalti hun
Sujal: kahan ja rahi ho??
Kash: ghar....bhut dair ho gayi hai...arey main naukar ko abta doon keh tumharay liye soup bana dey...
Sujal: yaar mujhey kuch anhi hua hai...
Kash: acha theek hai main chali...bye
Sujal cute sa chehra bana ker beth jata hai,....Kashsih darwazay takk jati hai aur phir murr ker wahan sey ati hai, Sujal ko hug karti hai aur aik simple si cute bki kiss karti hai cheek per phir wahan sey bhaag ker chali jati hai.....

To Sangeet ke liye wait karain aur next part main sangeet millay ag...bhut fun hoga...ok PLZ GIVE UR COMMENTS luv kiran

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Posted: 08 December 2005 at 5:09am | IP Logged

Iss sab key baad aglay din Kashish SUjal ko call karti hai...Sujal office main hai..
Kash: hi sujal...
Sujal: kashish!! hi kaisi ho...pata hai main abhi tumhain hi yaad kar raha tha..
Kash: acha?? jhoot bhut burra boltay ho..main janti hun keh abhi tum B-channel ki report parh rahay ho...
Sujal: tumhain kaisey pata?
Kash: bass dekh lo...tumhari secretary ne bataya...
Sujal: hmmmm.....(checking file)
Kash: lagta hai tum busy ho...main baad main call karroon??
Sujal: nahi main busy nahi hion...tum bolo...
Kash: pata hai kal mumma ko pata chal gaya tha keh main tumsey Milnay gayi thi..
Sujal: acha...unhain kaisey pata chala?
Kash: pata nahi...main ney un sey kaha keh tumhari tabiyat kharab thi...
Sujal: acha...hmmm...
Kash: Sujal??
Sujal: haan kashish
Kash: woh uss din amin poochna bhool gayi...woh uss din jab main beyhosh hui thi tab Doctor ney kya kaha tha?
Sujal: haan woh Doctor...uss ney kaha keh tum bhut weak ho aur tumhain apna khyal rakhna chahiye warn problem ho jaye gi...
Kash: weakness?? lekin main to brabar diet kar rahi ho aur khana bhi kha rahi hoon...lekin kaisi problem?
Sujal: woh...Kashish...woh doctor ney kaha keh shadi ke baaad..woh kaha keh...(he is getting shy in telling her abt her supposed probs in pregnancy)
Kash: kia kaha Sujal??
Sujal: tum Docotor se khud pooch lo na
Kash: ab main doctor ke pass jaon? batao an kia Sujal?
Sujal: Kashish woh..arey haan woh tumhari medicines garri main hi reh gayi thi...aik kaam karta hoon tumharay ghar aker dey jata hoon phir baat hogi...
Kash: ok...jaldi ao...bye
Sujal: bye!
after two hours Sujal completes his work and goes to Raheja's Villa...darwazay per Prerna milti hai
Prerna: arey Sujal tum yahan?
Sujal: Namaste mumma...woh main Kashish ko...
Prerna: ahan...tum logon ko to milna manna hai...
Sujal: theek hai mumma...phir main chalta hoon
Prerna: arey nahi nahi..ab kahan ja rahey ho? ajao andar
Hall mainGunn,Akshat,Kashish aur Sneha bethey hotay hain...Sujal ko dekh ker Gunn uthati hai aur bhagti hui uss ke gallay lag jati hai
Gunn: Sujal bhaiya! tnay dinnon baad aye hain..uss din bhi darwazay sey hi chalay gaye...
Sujal: Bulbul! kaisi hai tu?? doctor ke pass gayi an chek-up ke liye?
Gunn: jee hazoor...lekin ab sey jannay ki zaroorat nahi hai main theek hoon...
Sujal: hmm....
Akshat: Sujal bhaiya...ayie na baithiay...
Sujal: nahi Akshat woh mujhey kuch kaam hai...
Sneha: arey Sujal...tum harr waqt kaam hi kartay rehtay ho...kabhi humain bhi time dia karo...
Sujal smiles
Sneha: aur waisey bhi yahan kuch log aissey hain jo ap sey na milley to pani binna machli jaisey ho jatay hain (glancing at Kash)
Kash: chup....pagal..kuch bhi bolti rehti hai...
Suajl: hi Kashish!
Kash: hi...kaisey ho tum?
Sujal: mainn theek hoon aur tum?
Kash: main bhi theek hoon...
Sneha: Akshat...tum in donon ko dekh ker batao keh kahan sey lagtta hai keh do din baad in ki shadi honay wali hai??
Akshat: arey Sujal bhaiya...ap na acting bhut burri kartay hain..aik ghanta pehley ap ne Di sey baat kia aur ab aissey Kaisi Ho pooch rahay hain jaisey pooray haftay sey baat nahi hui...
Kash: Akshat..bhut bolnay lagay ho tum
uss per aik cushion phenki hai, Akshat side per ho jata hai aur cushion Sujal ko lagta hai...uss ka nokila side Sujal ki ankh main lag jata hai...aik damm sey ankhon main panni ajata hai aur red ho jati hai...
Kashish jaldi sey uss key pass jati hai...
Kash: so sorry Sujal...tumhain lag gayi (ankh main phoonk marti hai)
Sujal: nahi its ok...
Kash: kaisey kuch nahi?tumhain lag gayi na
woh apnay duppattay sey uss ki ankh ko saik deti hai aur phir phoonkti hai, phir jab confirm hota hai keh Sujal theek hai to chain sey bethati hai...all along SNeha, Akshat aur Gunn yeh concern dekh ker hans rahay tay hain
Gunn: Akshat bhaiya...ap ko pata hai kal main ney aik serial dekha...pati ki ankh main kuch chala jata hai aur patni aissey pareshan ho jati hai jaissey ussey koi bhut barri chot ayi ho
Sneha': i tell u...aj kal ki larkian apnay husbands sey itna pyaar karti hain na aur itni possessive hoti hain...zara si chot ajaye pati per to patni ki jaan nikal jata hai
Akshat: yeah...u r absolutely right! aissa hi hota hai...ab humaray ghar main hi aik misaal hai...Di!!
Kash: urao! aur urao mazak...bhut maza araha hai na...Sujal, mujhey tum sey bhut zaroori baat karni hai, zara iss kamray main ao
Sujal uss key saath doosrey kamray main jata hai...
Sujal: kia baat hai?
Kash: woh sab choro..baad main bataon gi..tum mujhey woh report aur medicines dey do...
Sujal: haan yeh rahi medicines...
kash: aur report..
Sujal: woh kahiin misplace ho gayi hai..
Kash: acha mujhey ab to bata do keh kia problem hai?
Sujal: dekho Kashish...hum logon ki shadi honay wali hai aur hum mai n itni frankness to hai hi keh hum shadi sey pehley yeh baat kar sakain...actually Doctor ney kaha hai keh tum bhut weak ho gayi ho...neend bhi poori nahi hai aur proper khana nahi ley rahi..abhi to yeh problem hai hi lekin agay ja ker ziada problems ho sakti ahin...maslan ke pregnancy ke doran agar tum eny koi tension li ya apna khyal na rakha to iss sey complications h sakti hain iss liye tumahin poori tarah sey apna khyal rakhna chhaiye
Kash: bass?? itni si baatko itna bara bana dia...tum bhi na Sujal...acha chalo main tum sey vaada karti hoon keh apna poora khyal rakhoon gi aur koi carelessness nahi karoon gi..ok?
Sujal: sure...Kashish main dekh raha hoon tum kuch dinnon sey areshan ho?
Kash: nahi to...aissa kuch nahi hai
Sujal: jhoot matt bolo Kashish...tumhain koi tension hai iss liye tumhain woh weakness bhi hai..aur bhut dinnon sey kuch disturbed nazar arahi ho...plz batao mujhey...tum mujh per trust karti ho na?
Kash"khud sey ziada\
Sujal: theek hai phir tumhain meri qasam hai mujheu batao
Kash: theek hai...waisey bhi main tumhain yeh baat aj batanay hi wlai thi...Sujal...yeh baat main tumhain iss liye batana zaroori samjhati hooon kyunki hhumara rishta pyar aur vishvas ki buniyad per bana hai...aur humain aik doosrey sey koi baat nahi chupani chahiye..tum bhallay hi iss baat per ghussa ho lekin main tumhain batana zaroori samajhti hoon...Actually uss di jab hum shopping gaye thay uss key aik din pehley main shopping centre gayi thi shopping karnay:

FLASHBACK:
Kashish kuch shopping karnay key liye market ja rahi thi...woh market main enter ho ker aik barray sey shopping centre main jati hai...kuch shopping kartay huay uss ki tabiyat kharab ho jati hai aur woh restroom main jati hai...rest-room sey bahir nikalti hai to ussay rest-room ke bahir Rishi nazar ata hai...woh ussay ignore karti hai lekin Rishi uss ka haath pakar leta hai..woh aik damm ussay murr ker dekhti hai
Kash: RISHI!!! mera haath choro..
Rishi: anhi choroon ga...
Kahs: tumhari himmat kaisey hui mera haath pakarnay ki? mera haath choro warna main guards ko bulaon gi..
Rishi uss ka haath chor deta hai
Rishi: Kashish please meri baat suno...
Kash: mujhey tumhari koi baat nahi sunani Rishi...
woh aggay aggay chal rahi hoti hai aur Rishi uss key peechay peechay hota hai...now they are out of the centre and in a deserted part of teh road
Rishi: Kashish please meri baat to suno...
Kash: main ney kaha na mujhey tumhari koi baat nahi sunani...meri sab se pyari dost ka gahr ujaar ker tum chahtay ho keh main...
Rishi: main sirf tum sey dosti karna chahta hoon...
Kash: dosti?? dosti ka matlab samajhtay ho tum...dosti ka matlab hta hai vishvas, pyaar aik doosrey per bharosa...aur main tum sey in sab main se kuch nahi kar sakti...na vishvas, na pyaar aur na hi bharosa
Rishi: lekin main ney aissa kia hi kia hai??
Kash: kia kiya hai?? meri dost ki zindagi tabah ker keh poochtay ho keh tum ney kia kiya hai?? tum ney gunnah kia hai Rishi gunnah
Rishi: ajb main uss sey pyaar nahi karta tha to ussey chor ker kia burra kia?
Kash: chor kar nahi ussey apna kar ghalti ki...tum uss ke laiq hi nahi ho...
Rishi: Kashish...dosti karna burayi nahi hai..
Kash: ajnti hoon main..lekin tum jaisey papi sey dosti karna burayi hai Rishi..
Rishi: Kashish tum nahi janti yeh sab kyun kia main ney?
Kash: janana bhi nahi hahti...janti hoon tumharay kaalay kartooton ki niatain
Rishi: kia janti ho tum?janti ho kehj main ney yeh sab kyun kia?
Kash: haan tum ney yeh sab daulat ke liye kia hai....
Rishi: nahi...MAIN NEY YEH SAB DAULAT KEY LIYE NAHI KIA HAI...MAIN NEY YEH SAB KYA HAI TUMARY LIYE...SIRF TUMGARAY LIYE KASHISH...
Kashsih murr ker ussay ghussay sey dekhti hai
Kash: kia kaha tum ney?
Rishi: haan main n yeh sab kuch tumharay liye kia hai..college ke dinnon se main tum sey pyaar karta hoon...graduation ke baad main tum sey apnay dil ki baat karnay hi wala tha lekin tum eny RnG join ker li aur ksii kaam se mujhey Mumbai jana para...jab amin wapis aya to tumhain tab hi apnay dil ki baat batana chahi..lekin tumhara koi ata pata hi nahi tah...phir main ney tumhari dost Sneha sey tumhara pata manga lekin uss ney mujhey bataya ke tum aur woh Sujal aik doosrey sey pyaar kartay ho...yaad hai na tumhai..tumhari engagement per bhi main Simla main hi tah lekin nahi aya...yunki main tumhain kisi aur ka hotay hauy nahi ndekh paya...phir main ney aik plan socha..main ney socha keh shayed tumhari dost Sneha ke zariye main tumharay qareeb asakoon..lekin Sneha America settle hogayi...main ney phir socha keh tum shayed Sujal sey uss ki daulat aur izzat ki wajah sey shadi kar rahi ho..iss liye main ney Sneha ki property seize ki...main ne socha keh agar main bhi daulat kama loon ga to tum meri ho jao gi..aur yeh sab kuch main ney sirf tumharay liye kia hai Kashish...ab merey pass paisa hai shaan hai..Nanda Industries ka maliq hoon main...ab to tum meri ho jao gi na Kashish...kyunki main janta hoon keh tum Sujal sey pyaar nahi karti...pyaar to tum mujh sey karti ho...hain na Kashish..chalo shadi ker letey hain Kashish...
Kashish yeh sab kuc shock main sun rahi hai...woh yeh sab sunanay key baad Rishi key moun per zorr sey slap karti hai (jaisey Gurri ko)
Kash: merey pyaar ko mazaq samajh rakha hai tum ney! TUM APNAY AP KO SAmAJHTAY KIA HO (SLAP)...TUM NEY SOCHA KE MAIN SUJAL SEY USS KE PAISEY KI WAJAH SEY SHADI KER RAHI HOON
(SLAP)   TUMHARRI HIMMAT KAISE HUI..MEREY PYAAR KA MAZAQ URAYA TUM NEY, MEREY PYAAR KA ATMAAN KIA TUM NEY (2 SLAPS) MERI DOST KI ZINDAGI TABAH KI MEREY LIYE (SLAP)...TUM SEY ZIADA SELFISH AUR BEYSHARAM INSAN MAINEY AJ TAKK NAHI DEKHA MR.RISHI NANDA...TUM NEY MUJHEY ITNA GIRRA HUA SOCHA KEH MAIN SUJAL SEY PYAAR KA NATAK KAR RAHI HOON (SLAP)...TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISEY HUI MEREY PYAAR KA MAZAK URANAY KI (SLAP)...AIK BAAT KAAN KHOL KER SUN LO...MERA PYAAR BAZAAR MAIN BIKNAY WALI KOI CHEEZ NAHI HAI JO JO CHAHAY KHAREED SAKTA HAI...MERA PYAAR MEREY LIYE MERI SA SEY AHEM CHEEEZ HAI...TUM NEY TO PYAAR KO HI MAZAK BANA KER RAKH DIA..TUM MUJH SEY PYAAR KARTAY HO?(SLAP) BARAY AYE..AREY TUMHAIN TO PYAAR KARNA BHI NAHI ATA, PYAAR KA MATLAB NAHI JANTAY TUM AUR TUM NEY MEREY PYAAR PER SHAQ KIA (SLAP)...ITNI ZINDAGIAN BARBAAD KI TUM NEY SIRF APNAY SAWARTH KE LIYE (SLAP)...TUM MEREY PYAAR KO BIKAO SAMJAHTAY HO?? MR.RISHI NANDA..TUM JANTAY BHI HO MERA PYAAR KIA HAI?? MERA PYAAR MERI AATMA, MERI KHUSHI, MERI ZINDAGI, MERA WAJOOD, MERA FAKHAR HA...MERA PYAAR MEREY LIYE MERI IBADAT, MERI POOJA HAI AUR SAB SEY BHAR KER MERA PYAAR MERA GHAROOR HAI...AUR MERA PYAAR SIRF AUR SIRF SUJAL HAI!! TUM ISS JANAM MAIN TO KIA HAZARON JANAM MAIN BHI MERA PYAAR NAHI BAN SAKTAY KYUNKI HARR JANAM MAIN KASHISH SIRF SUJAL KI RAHAY GI!! (slap)
Rishi: Kashish meri baat suno...
Kash: ab sunanay ko baqi kia raha hai Rishi!! aur aik baat kaan khol ker sun lo...ainda ke baad tum mera naam apni zubaan sey nahi lo gay!
Rishi: loon ga! agar tumhara pyaar tumhari ibadat hai to mera pyaar mera janoon hai...KASHISH...KASHISH...KASHISH...KASHISH...KASHISH
Kash: tumhari himmat aksiey hui mera naam leney ki (5 slaps for syaing Kashish 5 times) iss naam per sirf Sujal ka haq hai..ainda ke baad tum mujhey Kashish naahi Mrs.Kashish Sujal Garewal kaho gay
Rishi: tumhari shadi abhi hui nahi hai Kashish
Kash: do din baad meri shadi ho jaye gi Sujal sey...main hamesha ke lye Sujal ki ho jaon gi aur tum jitni bhi koshish kar lo iss shadi ko nahi roq pao gay...
Rishi: shadi o abhi do din baqi hain Kashish...lekin main tumhari shadi nahi todunga...main tum donon ki shadi hnay doon ga..lekin shadi ke baad tum donon kabhi chain sey nahi jee pao gay....main Sujal ko tabah kar doon ga
Kashish uss ko bhut KARAKAYDAR AUR ZABARDAST thapar marti hai
Kash: BHUT BARRA NAAM LEY LIYA APNI ZUBAAN SE TUM NEY RISHI NANDA!! BHUT BARRA NAAM...TUM JITNI BHI KOSHISH KAR LO...TUM SUJALKASHISH KO ALAG NAHI KAR PAO GAY...POORI DUNIYA HUMARA NAAM ALAG ALAG NAHI AIK SAATH LEY GI,,,SUJALKASHISH!!
Rishi: tum poori koshish kar lo apnay Sujal ko mujh sey bachanay ki aur main poori koshish karoon ga tum donon ko tabah karnay main...ab amin na sirf ussey balkay tumhain bhi tabah kar doon ag...tum ney merey pyaar ko thukraya hai na...aur yeh jo thapar tum eny mujhey aj marray hain na Kashish...aik aik kar kay sab ka hisaab loon ga
Woh wahan sey chala jata hai aur Kashish wahan sey ajti hai ghar

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ab iss key baad Sujal ka kia reactio n ho ga yeh jananay key liye wait for the next part...plz plz pzl give ur comments i have dne a lot of effort...love ya all kiran

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Kashish yeh sab Sujal ko batati hai aur batatay batatay ro parti hia...
Kash: Sujal...main yeh sab kuch pehley nahi janti thi..main Sneha sey nazrain nahi milla pa rahi..meri wajah sey Rishi ney uss ki zindagi tabah ki
Sujal is in the worst of his tempers...lekin woh Kashish ko roay nahi dekh sakta...uss ke shoulder perr haath rakhta hai...kashish rotay rotay apna sarr uss ke kandhay per rakhti hai
Sujal: Kashish...tum kyun ro rahi ho? Sneha ki zindagi tumhari wajah sey nahi Rishi ki wajah sey tabah hui hai...bhut khel liya hai uss ney logon ki zindagion sey...ab woh merey haathon nahi bachay ga...1main ussay nahi choroon ga
Kash: nahi Sujal...woh bhut khatarnaak hai...agar uss ney tumhain kuch kar dia to,....
Sujal: kuch nahi hoga mujhey...humara kuch nahi bighar sakta woh...kitni bhi koshish kar ley woh hum donon ko alag nahi kar payega
Kash: main janti hoon Sujal..mujhey tum per aur apnay pyaar per poora bharosa hai...
Sujal: to phir yeh ansoo kyun?? ansoo kamzor logon ki nishani hoti hai Kashish aur tumhari ankhon main aik ansoo bhi mujh sey bardasht nahi hota..u don't worry ok...usssey main dekh loon ga
woh halki si smile deta hai aur Kashish key ansoo hatata hai...aik ansoo uss ki ungli per reh jata hai to wph ungli woh ansoo woh Kashish ko dikhata hai
Sujal: Kashish tumhain pata hai...iss aik ansoo ko bachanay key liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon kyunki iss aik ansoo ki qeemat hazar heeray motion sey ziada mehngi hai...
phir woh uss ansoo ko Kashish ki mang main bharta hai like sindoor
Sujal: ab yeh ansoo hamesha ke liye mehfooz ho gaya hai...merey saath saath iss ka bhi khyal rakhna
Kashish smiles
Kash: pagal....
Sujal: Kashish...i am proud of u...jiss tarah tum ney Rishi ko jawab dia aur jiss tarah apnay pyaar per vishvas hai tumhain....uss sey sabit hota hai keh humara pyaar kitna sacha aur kitna gehra hai...
Kash: batanay ki zaroorat hai??
Sujal shakes his head in an answer for a no...
Sujal: acha...yeh baat kisi ko na batana...woh sab pareshan ho jayen gay...acha ab main chalta hoon...mumma mera wait kar rahi hon gi
Kash: ok....garri dehaan sey chalana...bye
Sujal uss key forehead per kiss karta hai...
Sujal: bye!!
woh donon kamray sey nikaltay hain
Prerna: baat ho gayi tum donon ki?
Sujal: jee aunty..
Prerna: kitni baar kaha hai keh ab mujhey aunty nahi mumma kehnay ki aadat daal lo
Sujal smiles: jee mumma...ab main chalta hoon
Prerna: itni jaldi? khana to kha ker jao...
Sujal: nahi mumma ghar per wiat ker rahi hain...
Prerna: arey yaad aya...Veena ney kuch cheezen mangwayi thi...ley jana...ruko main lati hoon
Sujal: jee
Akshat: bhaiya...ap bethiye na
Sujal: nahi mujhey jana hai...ghar per bhut kaam hai
Sneha: arey wah! Sujal...tum apni hi shadi main kaam bhi karo gay..? mahaan ho tum
Sujal laughs: Sneha...tum kuch ziada hi bolti ho...mujhey office ka kaam hai..aur byy the way...tum log tayarian kyun nahi kar rahay?
Sneha: maybe ap ney notice nahi kia lekin sab kamron main decoration hjo chuki hain bass hall rehta hai...
Kash: haan aur woh aj hi tum log decorate karogay...
Gunn: haan ji aur ap humain instructions dain gi...yeh karo youn karo...khud araam sey bethi hoti hai aur hum sey kaam karwati hai
Sujal: Kashish..yeh bhut burri baat hai tum Gunn sey kaam karwati ho? iss ki tabiyat kharab thi na?
Gunn: AB MAIN THEEK HOON!!
just then Prerna comes there
Prerna: Sujal yeh sab ley jana huh?
Sujal: jee mumma..ab main chalta hoon...bye!
woh wahan sey chala jata hai
Prerna: arey tum log bethey kyun ho...chalo hall decorate karo!
all of them get ready to start the decorations....
cut to Garewal's Mansion ( the house in KTH of Sujal...Kashish's house is the Virani parivaar house)
Sujal ghar main enter hota hai...dekhta hia keh wahan tayarian chal rahi ahin...Veena sab ko instructions dey rahi hai aur hall decorate ho raha hai...Kasak aur Varrun thakkay huay stairs per bethey hain...Ekta Mayi aur Gurry safayi kar rahay hain
Sujal cheezen table per rakhta hai aur Varrun, Kasak ke pass jata hai...un ki halat dekh ker ussay hansi ajati hai...woh mazak ke mood min VArrun ke sarr per haath rakhata hai aur Varuun ussay dekhta hai with tired eyes aur ankhon ke neecehy halkay parray hain
Sujal: arey...tum logon ko kia hua?
Varrun: matt poochiye Big-B...subbah sey tayaron main lagay huay hain...kamar toot gayi hai
Sujal is trying his best not to laugh
Sujal: tututut...yeh to bhut burra hau...kia kaam kia tum donon ney?
Kasak: Big-B...hum ney subbah sey apna, mumma papa ka aur sab sey special ap ka kamra decorate kia hai...sach poochiye ap ke kamray per sab sey ziada mehnat ki hai...phoolon sey bhar gaya hai kamra...
Sujal uss key saath stairs per beth jata hai..Kasak uss ki ladli hoti hai...Kasak apna sarr Sujal ke shoulder per rakhti hai...Sujal uss ko hug karta hai one sided..aur uss se bhut cutely kehta hai
Sujal: haye meri jaan...itni mehnat ki tum ney...thak gayi?
Kasak: bhut ziada...socha nahi tha keh ap ki shadi ke liye yeh sba karna parray ga...
Sujal: acha..to tum kaam kyun rahi ho...yeh sab hain na kaam ke liye...meri nazuk ki jaan sey itna kaam karwatay hain...bass ab tu koi kaam nahi kar rahi...
Varrun: Big-B...kaam main ney bhi kia hai..balkay main ney ziada kaam kia hai...garden ki decoration bhi main ney ki hai
Sujal: tu larka hai aur barra bhi hai...yaar sach bataon...tum logon ki yeh hallat dekhi nahi ja rahi(laughing)
Varrun: hansiye hansiye...ap ke liye sab kuch ho rah hai hai Your Honour...dekhta bhoun meri shadi per ap sey kaam karwata houn ke nahi
Kasak: tum pehlay apnay liye larki to dhoondho...
Varrun: arey hazaron line main khari hain merey liye...
Voice: bilkul jhoot!
Sujal, Varrun aur Kasak darwazay per kharri aiik lari ko dekhtey hain...woh un ki taraf ati hai
woh Varrun key kaan khenchti hai
Girl: abhi takk jhoot bolnay ki aadat nahi gayi na teri?
Kasak: Anjali Bhabhi ap??
Anjali: haan main...tujhey kia laga tha apnay devar ki shadi main nahi aongi??
woh phir Kasak aur Varrun ko hug karti hai...Sujal sey one sided hug leti hai
Anjali: to ab teri bhi barrii agayi...yaad ha Kkavya sye kia kaha tha tu ne shadi per...Kkavya bhaiya, ap ki to balli charh gayi.ab teri barri hai?
Sujal: bhabhi...ap akeli ayi hain?
Anjali: arey nahi...sab log arahay hain na...lo agaye
And here enters Sujal's Taya's (uncle's) family

Mayank Garewal: elder brother of Lalit... (if u dont know Mayank is palyed by Ronit Roy: Mihir Virani)
Nitya Garewal: Mayank's wife...mother of two children
Kkavya Garewal: elder son of Nitya and Mayank...works in Mumbai..this whole family lives in Mumbai...husband of Anjali...eldest cosuin of Sujal..Sujal is on the second number
Anjali Garewal: Kavya's wife...has one daughter...name is Disha (played by the child who played the role of Sneha in KZK)
Kanan Garewal: she is the young daughter of Mayank and Nitya...she is 21 and is engaged to a guy named Vishaal Agarwal (Piyush)
Bua-ji: she is the sister of Mayank and Lalit...has no children and husband died...lives with Mayank's family...played by none other than Ramola of Kavyanjali...and she has a habit of slapping everyone!
Dadi: mayank's and lalit's mother...played by Ba..everyone calls her Ba...Sujal and Kanan are her favourites
Now thsi family enters Garewal's Mansion...
Veena murr ker dekhti hai aur khushi sey pagal ho jati hai
Veena: BA! Mayank Bhai-sahab...Nitya Bhabhi...ap sab? arey...bata dia hota main garri bhej deti...
Ba: bata detey to terey chehray per yeh khushi kaisey dekhteuy?
Veena; kaisi hain ap Ba? (paon chooti hai)
now she meets everyone aur phir bacha partyy i barri
Sujal agay ho kar Ba key paon choota hai
Ba: arey bacha...kaisa hai tu?
Sujal: main theek hoon Ba...ap kaisi hain?
Ba: aik damm theek
Sujal smiles
Sujal: taya-ji...kaisey hain ap?? aur my darling tayi-ji ap kais hain?
Nitya: chup badmash...bikul nahi badla na tu?
Sujal: bilkul nahi!
they move forward to meet Varrun and Kasak...And then comes the eldest son...Kavya..Sujal uss o gallay lagata hai
Sujal: Kavya!! kaisey ho tum??
Kavya: main theek hoon....tu suna?
Sujal: bass dekh lo...
Kanan: congratulations bhaiya!!!
Sujal: kiss baat ka?
Kanan: arey bhai shadi ho rahi hai an apki...
Sujal: haan ....yeh to hai
Sujal: Buaji..kaisi hain ap?
Ramola: ki dassa puttar...aida lamba safar..ni tu mainoon dass....tu inni dair naal shadi kyun kar raha hai??
and then comes a slap for Sujal on his back...
Sujal: woh buaji...woh bass jab waqt milla gto...
Ramola: arey Varrun...
she moves forward to meet Varrun and then comes the cutest member....yes this is Disha (sneha child star) and she is Sujal's favourite....woh uss ki bhut care karta hai...he luvs kids!
Disha: CHACHU!!!
Sujal: arey mera bacha!! (woh ussay goad main uthata haia ur ussay hug karta hai)...kaisa hai mera bacha?
Disha: aik damm theek....chachu ap mujhey aik baat bataiye
Sujal: haan poocho...
Disha: hum log yahan kyun aye hain? meri sarri friends to mumbai main hain...
Sujal: meri jaan tum log idhar ap apnay chachu ki shadi main aye ho...
Disha: chachu ap shadi kar rahey ho?
Sujal: haan....
Disha: to ap jiss sey shadi karain gay ap un kay barray main bataiye...
well Sujal loves talking to Disha to woh ussay ley ker bahir garden main chala jata hai
Disha: bataiye na chahu
Sujal: meri jiss sey shadi hogi woh apki chachi hongi...
Disha: lekin main ney to unhain pehley nahi dekha...
(she had not attended the engagement cuz she was ill and had to stay with Kanan who had her exams...both of them have not seen Kashish)
Sujal: kyuunki ap meri mangni per nahi aye thi na...
Disha: chachu un ka naam kia hai?
Sujal: un ka naam Kashish hai...
Disha: un ka naam bohat pyara hai...woh bhut piyari hain?
Sujal: haan...bhut bhut bhut pyari hai...
Disha: mujh sey bhi ziada pyari hain?
Sujal: ummm....nahi tum sey ziada nahin...
Disha: lekin ab main unhain kab dekhoon gin?
Sujal: parsoon...lekin ap un sey baat karo gay?
Disha nods..
Sujal: theek hai..phir main ap ki baat karata hoon...lekin promise karo kisi ko nahi batao gi?
Disha: paka promise!
Sujal: acha abhi apnch minute ruko ap ki baat karata hoon...
Sujal Kashish ko uss ke mobile per call karta hai...
Sujal: Hi Kashish!
Kash: hi....
Sujal: kia kar rahi ho?
Kash: khana bana rahi hoon...
Sujal: khana???
Kash: haan...sab ney kaha keh aj merey haath ka bana khayen gay iss liye...chinese bana rahi hoon..i hope sab theek banay...
Sujal: chalo acha hai practice kar lo...
Kash: kia mtlab?
Sujal: matlab ke yahan aker bhi kaam karna hai to practice kar lo...
Kash: kia? tum mujhsey apnay ghar main kaam karwao gay?
Sujal: haan...balkey shadi ke aglay din hi sey tumhain kaam karna chahiye hain na?(laughing)
Kash:jee nahi...jab takk larki ki haath ki mehndi pheeki nahi parti tab takk woh koi kaam nahi karti
Sujal: yeh sahi mazak hai yaar...matlab bahana bana ker poorui zindagi larki haath main mehndi lagaye rakhey to?
Kash: stupid...pehli mehndi ka rang jab takk pheeka nahi parta
Sujal: lekin tumharay haath main mehndi pheeki paray gi hi nahi (btw Disha is playing in the garden on the swing and Sujal is aside so she can't hear anything)
Kash: woh kyun?
Sujal: kyunki uss main mera naam hai na...iss liye pheeka nahi par sakta
Kash: ziada romantic honay ki zaroorat nahi hai..
Sujal: practice kar raha hoon...shadi kee baad ke liye
Kash: pagal...acha tum abhhi kia kar rahey ho?
Sujal: cycling!
Kash: SUJAL!!
Sujal: KASHISH!!
Kash: acha to tumharay gahr per tayarian ho gayuin?
Sujal: haan...aur abhi Ba log bhi agaye hain..arey yaad aya...tumhain call ki thi kyunki Anjali bhabhi ki beti Disha tum sey baat karna chahti hai..ay Disha...idhar ao...yeh lo Chachi sey baat karo...
Disha: Hello Chachi
Kash: hi janu...kaisey ho ap?
Disha: main aik damm theek...ap kaisi hain?
Kash: main theek hoon...
Disha: Chachi ap ki merey chahcu sey shadi honay wali hai?
Kash: haan ji
Disha: ap Chachu sey kyun shadi ker rahi hain? (Sujal is holding Disha in his hands...)
Kash: kyun? uss sey shadi nahi karni chahiye...
Disha: nahi...woh main ney socha tha keh barray ho kar chachu sey main hi shadi ker loon gi
Sujal looks surprised...woh Disha ke sarr per halka sa slap karta hai
Sujal (to Disha): ay paga..kia bol rahi hai??
Disha: sach hi to bol rahi hun chachu
Sujal uss sey phone leta hai aur ussay wahan sey behj deta hai
Sujal: chal jaa ander...aur andar ja ker kisi sey kuch na kehna acha
Disha: jee chachu!
udhar Kashish ki hansi nhi ruk rahi..
Sujal: ab hans kyun rahi ho?
Kash: yeh soch ker ke chalo..koi aur larki to tum per fida hai...(laughs)
Sujal:kia matlab hai tumhara?
Kash: matlab ke merey ilawa koi aik larki to hai jo tumhain pasand karti hai...
Sujal: kashish....
Kash: acha acha baba sorry...yaar waisseey she is tgoo cute...i want to meet her
Sujal: to ajao na..
Kash: nahi main nahi asakti...Sujal main tum sey raat main baat karti hoon mera khana kharab ho raha hai
Sujal: ok jan...see u soon luv u bye!
Kash: bye!
woh phone sun ker ander ghar main jata hai..aur Disha madam tab takk sab ko bata chuki hoti hai keh Sujal Chachu Kashish Chachi sey baat ker rahey hain...
Kanan: acha...to bhabhi sey baatain ho rahi thin?
Sujal: tum logon ko kaisey...Disha ki bachi tu na...
Disha: main nay anhi bataya in logon ney poocha
Sujal: tujhey to dekh loon ga..
Ba:Sujal beta
Sujal: jee Ba
Ba: beta main bhut khsuh hoon....Kashish is ghar main ayi gi to yeh gahr poora ho jaye ga..kyun Veena?
Veena: bilkul Ba...Kashish jaisi bahu humain kahan milti..
Kasak: mumma...Kashish Bhabhi jaisi Bhabhi bhi humain kahin nahi milti
Anjali: chal na..meri shadi per bhi yahi kaha tha tu ne
Varrun: kuch jalnay ki smell arahi hai na Kanan Di?
Kanan: haan...kuch jal raha ha
Anjali: mumma dekhain an in logon ko...
Nitya: bahi ab tum log meri bahu ko kyun tang kar rahey ho?
Kavya: lagta hai keh aik aur bahu iss family main....Anjali tumhain burra laga kia?also teasing her)
Anjali: Kavya tum bhi...Sujal..mumma...Ba!!
Sujal: arey nahi..Anjali bhabhi ki iss ghar main apni jagah hai aur Kashish ki apni jagah hai...koi ksii ki jagah nahi le sakta
Anjali: dekha that's why Sujal mera favourite devar hai
Varrun: bhai Big-B to harr kisi e favourite hain...Mumma ke favourite betey, Ba ke favourite pottay, Tayi-ji ke favourite bhanjay, sab ke favourite bhaiya, Anjali Bhabhi ke favourite devar...uff humainn to koi poochta hi nahi...
Kanan: oh baby! dun vry..arey Sujal bhaiya ap ney Bhabhi ki picture takk anhi dikhayi...engagement pics dikhaye na plz...
Sujal: acha baba...chalo tumhain pictures dikhaon...
Disha: main bhi dekhoon gi Chachi ko
Sujal: tujhey to poochta hoon..chal aja!
Issi tarah sarri bacha party (Sujal, Kanan, Varrun< Kasak, Anjali, Kavya aur Disha ooper jattay hain)

Ab sangeet per kia hota hai...its going to be DHAMAAL!!! so dun miss the next part...the longest one...so watch out...plz give ur comments on this one...bhut mehnat kar ke likha hai..ok luv ya kiran!

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kiran merey fan fic kay parts bhi collect kerdo .....hmmm nice work

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ppl plz give ur comments...baqi 50 parts kal post ekroon gi..hehe..love kiran

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