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FF*Simply love*(Maaneet) completed (Page 6)

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 5:50am | IP Logged
so aapki update aa hi gayi dear,
koi nhi ramzaan hai to delay bhi chalega,
accha i cudnt understand why geet is in hospital, plz throw sm light, wud b vry kind of u.

naddiya26 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Part 29
Maan walk to the Dr room .. "hi sorry to disturb you i just want to ask can i take her home"
Dr: " yes you can take her but i think gynecologist will check her first "
Maan: is everything fine?
DR: yes actually we want to be sure before discharging her.
Maan: thx.
He walk to the gyne dep .. He went to Geet Dr.
Maan: Hi miss neha
DR neha: hi come in ,i was about to come and check your wife.
Maan: oh i just came here to ask you
DR: we have to do a n ultrasound to check the baby condition. will you bring her here.
Maan sure.. he walk out...Smiled this will be her first ultrasound with me she had not seen the baby yet.may be this will make her bit relax..
Geet was waiting for Maan talking to nurse.."since when you are working here?"
nurse "for last two years"
Geet: was you on duty yesterday?
nurse:"yes I was the one who called your husband in operation"
Geet: what Maan was with me in Operation Theater too?
nurse: yes he was.....she smiled. Dr didn't allowed him first to come with you . he was crying badly. your brothers tried alot to seek permission from Dr but he didn't agree. we started were put under anesthetize but you murmur his name...paused looked at shy Geet last Dr has to give permission to let him in.
Maan :walked in "Geet want to see our baby?" he didn't notice nurse was there..
Geet: with her eyes ask him to look who is there.
Maan: opps ! shy
nurse : smiled sorry .. i will bring wheel chair .
Geet: dekha to kara.
Maan: i am sorry Dr want to check Baby then we will go home
Geet: bit confused.. how? shy plus scared too
Maan: ultrasound.. it is so exciting Geet he held her hand.
Geet: when & where you saw? she bit angry.
Maan: placed his hand at her be**y yesterday i saw our baby.
Geet: why you saw without me? moved his hand
Maan : you were...paused...her mood swing she was bit irritated ....he just Kissed her fore head.her breath tickle at his throat. whisper i love you dear sorry i saw alone.
When he looked at her she was crying.
Maan: Geet kya huwa meri Jaan.. daar ho raha ha
Geet just grab his shirt. he hug her ... run his finger in her hairs...
Maan: kya hogaya meri Geet ko.
Geet: was bit calm she her self didn't get why she was crying..
Knocked at the door
Maan: yes come in …wipe her tears with his hand. He made her sit at wheel chair and took her to ward.

At home:
Vicky : Dadi i want to take permission from you can i ask my Friend to come & stay with us?
Dadi: which friend? She run her fingers in his hairs
Dadi: who is she?. Hold his ear.
Vicky; Dadi she is just friend leave my ear. she doing medicinal she took admission here staying in
a hostel if you will join was she can be help to bhabi
Dadi: oh for bhabi you are asking or for yourself
Vicky: Dadi bhabi ka leya.
Dadi ok call her ask nukal to arrange guest room for her.
Vicky at once jump ...ok i will tell her to come...ran out
Dadi: jhoot bolo ga Dadi se beta your eyes tell me everything... smiled
nurse made her lay at bed Maan could feel Geet was uneasy.
Maan: if you don't like i will wait out
Geet: grab his hand tight. Closed her eyes tight
the Dr came in carry on the procedure she was watching Geet reaction. ask Maan to talk to her.
Maan:sit next to her "Geet open eyes see our baby. "
Geet: nahi i am scared
Maan: removed his curls dekho to kaisa ha.
Geet slowly open her eyes & saw the baby movement..she was surprised. tear of joy float down her eyes
Maan: cute ha na.whisper
Geet :clutched his shirt...
Maan: wiped her tears. See just like you restless moving fast.
Geet:hide her self in his arm
Dr: smiled .   at Maan. She is ok you can take her home.   But her hemoglobin report is not fine make sure she eat alot. Best of luck
Maan thanks.he help her back to wheel chair they walk to the car
Geet: was now bit relax."Maan"
Geet: why these guys following us?
Maan: now they will be with us dear? he picked her up in arm made her sit at back seat. sit next to her
Geet: why ?
Maan: security dear till we find out who was the culprit.
Geet: yeh kya ha. I want to be alone with you. rested her head at his shoulder.
Maan : why anything special? stare in her eyes
Geet : she quickly closed it as she could not look in his eyes in front of driver body guard.
Maan: koi baat nahi kuch dar aur then we will be alone whisper in her ears.
Geet: patted at his chest"Maan aisi baat nahi ha."
Maan:phir kaisi baat ha bolo
Geet: pinch him hard
Maan: was not expecting that bit loud "ouch"
body guard: what happen sir is everything ok?
Geet: held her laughter.
Maan: yes yes everything fine just a cram...whisper" i will tell you later".
at home
Maan open car door for her he was about to pick her up
someone shouted
wait wait wait ...........hello bhai & bhabi shaked hand with Maan i am Pari...
Maan: Pari who?
Pari: bhabi dr , i am here to look after her.. in shrill voice she carefully pull Geet out of car. hold her from her waist
Maan :what?shocked
Pari:i will take care of bhabi you dont worry bhai.
Geet confused looked at her
Maan: wait a min stop her in between. "she is my wife i can take care of her.2 he picked her up in his arm.
Geet :wrap her arm around his neck
Pari : stopped him wait2 she is my patient i am here to look after her so you better leave her"
Maan: she is my Geet ... bit loud
Geet: both of you plz stop .
Maan: Geet tell her i can take care of you
Pari: bhabi tell him you need an attendant
Geet: he can look after me & yes i need an attendant... she answer both.. take me to my room Maan.
Dadi was waiting for them at door.
Dadi: welcome home my princess... (religious customs )
As Maan step in Vicky throw all lot of petals on them
Vicky surprise.. they both smiled
Pari: you are s**** it was better i would have done it.
Vicky yar you didn't stopped them
Maan: oh that was your idea
Pari: yes bhai his Foolish idea. beat him at his shoulder.
Vicky the came early... see Dev bhai can't reach home.
Pari: all your fault your plan is always flop
Maan: whisper she is just like you Geet... he was still standing picking her in his arm
Geet: what do you mean ?hmmmmm
Maan: you do same with me?kissed her forehead
Pari: tell bhabi it is his fault na
Vicky: wait wait . You guys came early
Geet:ufff hold her head bus plz
Dadi: yes plz don't tease her Maan take her to bed room
Maan: kya huwa. are you ok?
Geet "my head i need coffee" bit loud with a puppy face.
Maan: laugh loud.
Pari: let me make for you
Vicky let me help you. they both walk to kitchen
Dadi;she need rest.
Geet:winked at him.hide in his arms
Maan: abhi deta hoon Janu manu
walk to bed room
to be cont if you will comment or like it ............

Edited by naddiya26 - 24 August 2010 at 6:25am

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 6:35am | IP Logged
hry so cute janu manu

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 6:35am | IP Logged
so cute janu manu luv it

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naddiya26 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rinky70

hry so cute janu manu
see i updated quickly Embarrassed
anufa Goldie

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 6:40am | IP Logged
cutest update ever.....

nw geet needs coffee....she's getting addicted!!!!:D:D:D

luved iT!!!

update soON!!!!

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 6:42am | IP Logged
cute update nadiya!!

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Hey thats so cute
Loved it
pls continue soon

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