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Posted: 28 August 2010 at 10:40am | IP Logged
awesome update...loved all the flash back scenes and how gunjan had written all of this in her diary...please update soon an reveal the mystery ...thanks for the pm Smile

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Posted: 28 August 2010 at 11:24am | IP Logged
fabulous update.......the flashbacks were awesome......cont soon

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Posted: 28 August 2010 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
amaizng part na
do cont soon

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Posted: 28 August 2010 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
awesome

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Posted: 28 August 2010 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
niceeeee plzzz jaldi say gunjan ko theek karo naaaaaaa

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part-3

samrat was reading gunjans diary......n fells asleep......he was sleeping..when he his cell rings.samrat wakes up..n ses the number was from the hospital..
s=hospitalse????? is waqt????hello.........
dr=mr shergill...ma dr mehta....
s=ji dr mehta.......kahiye..is waqt??? koi problem ha???gunjan theek to ha na????
dr=ap abhi hospital asakte ha?????
s=kyu kya hua???????
dr=-ap ajayiye...phir bethke bate karte ha...theek ha??
s=ji ma abhi ata ha.........ok...bye.......par abhi ma neha ko kaise akele chodke jau??? ramukaka bh chale gaye.....neha ko sathi leke ja raha hu......
hospital
samrat reaches the hospital with neha in his arms...n goes to the cabin of gunjan.....he sees the doctor exmaining gunjan...
s=dr...apne mujhe yaha is waqt kyu bulaaya????
dr=mr shergill......dekhiye humne apko isliye bulaya ha...ke agar ap chahe to ap ms gunjan ko apne sath abhi ghar leja sakte ha....
s=kya??? matlab gunjan theek hogayi????
dr=nahi....lekin abhi humhe esa lagta ha ke....unpar humare dawaioka koi asar nahi horaha ha. ab hum sirf umeed karsakte ha..isiliye.......ap chahe unhe leke jasakte ha.....
s=doctor...par ap umeed kaise har chodsakte ha?? meri gunjan ko theek hona parega....
dr=mr samrat....hum abhi sirf dua karsakte ha....agar unko tabyaat kharab hojayegi..to ap humhe bula lena..humm ajayenge......
s=ji....
dr=ma inke papaers leke aate ha....
samrat sat on the chair beside gunjan.....she was sleeping...samrat;s eyes were flowing tears...he holded her hand.,..
s=chashmish....tum wapas aogi na?????plzz dekhona....neha kitni akeli ha.....koi baat nahi agar dr ne umeed chod di ha..par meri umeed akhri daam tak rahegi.......mujhe pata ha..jab tum apne ghar aogi na....to sab theek hojayegaa......
later samrat bought gunjan home.....n made her lie on the bed....n covered her with the bed sheet....n made neha lie beside her......
s=ab lagraha ha.......ke...neha apni mom ke sath ha....ha na neha?????ap mummy ke sath rahiye..papa mummy kee kapde leke ate ha.....
samrat turned to leave...when he felt something was holding him back....samrat thoought gunjan was holding him back....he felt very happy...n turned quickly.....but his smile was disappeared when.....he saw it was neha who was holding samrats finnger....samrat smiled..
he sat near neha..n kissed her finger.....
s=love u beta............n love u chashmish,.....
the next day.......
the sun shined on the room.....gunjan was sleeping..beside her was neha.... n samrat was keeping his head on the bed..n sitting on the floor.....he was holding nehas finger...he slightly opened his eyes......n sat on the bed.....he was very hapy today...gunjan  was with him.....
s=aj meri life ki ek new shuruad ha.....meri chashmish aj phirse mere sath ha.....humesha keliyee....aur meri beti bhi......
he kissed neha...on her hand..n then gunjan on her forehead...n went to the washroom..samrat took a bath....n came out..he was putting on his clothes..when the door bell rang.........
s=itni subhah????
samrat went down n opened the door.......he was surprised......
s=benji tu.......??????
b=kyu mujhe yaha dekke accha nahi laga???
s=kaisi baat karraha ha mere yar...tuto mera best frend ha......
b=accha??? best frend?? ma london kya chala gaya.....tune to mujhe paraya bana dia.....itna sab hogaya...aur tune mujhe kuch bhi nahi bataya???/ kyu sam???? ma tera dost nahi hu kya??? kya ma tera dukh nahi bath sakta?????
s=benji.....
samrat started to cry....n hugged hs frend......benji also hugged him.......both were hugging eachother....after sometime..samrat broke the hug..n wiped his tears......
b=ab...mujhe kya yaha khara karke rakhega???????
s=sorry chal andaarrr...aja...tujhe kaise pata chala..ke...
b=tera number lene keliye dia ko phone ia..tab usne mujhe bataya ke....dude.....gunjan....neha..
s=chal..aja....
samrat took him to his room......benji saw gunjan n neha n smiled...
b=dude...she's so sweet.....tujhpe gayi ha....
s=nahi...gunjan pe gayi ha.......
b=tu aj bhi nahii badla na....
s=chal neeche bethte ha...
b=chal......
both sat in the hall....samrat bought coffee.....
s=aj accha lagraha ha....mera dost...meri chashmish...meri bachi mere sath ha.....
b=par tune mujhe ye sab itni salotak kyu nahi bataya????
s=tera adress number kuch nahi tha mere pass.......aur batata kase?? khudko sambhal tak nahi paraha tha....
b=dude....ye sab kaise hua????? matlab.....mane......tumdonoki shadi tak..sab theek tha.....
phir achanak?? esa kya hua??? dia ne baataya ke koi accident hua thaa....
samrat went into his thoughts....ajse..theek 3 saal pehle........humari shadi......
flashback
delhi......a crowded city.........where the camera focuses on a big bunglow....samrat is sleeping in the room.....gunjan comes out of the washroom...n sits on the mirror...she drys her hair...nn then wears her bangles...the sound of her bangles...breaks samrats sleep...he openes his eyes...n sees her.....from  the mirror...
s=killer dude...
gunjan looks through the mirror n sees samrat smiling at her....
g=uth gaye??????
s=ha bhaiu..tumhare ye churioki khanak mujhe sone nahi detee....
g=accha??? ab jab uthhi gaye to...to jake fresh hojao...
s=kya yaar chashmish...kaal shadi hui ha..aur ajhise typical wife ki tarah ban gayi???
g=kyu na banu????akhir biwi hu tumhari......
s=ya ya...mujhe pata ha....
g=acch samrat tum ready hojao..ma nashta banati hu...aur tumhare kapdo nikalti hu,...
s=kyu??
g=kyu matlab???? office nahi jana ha kya??
s=chashmish....shadike badd couples honeymoon pe jate ha.....office pe nahi...
g=samrat.......
gunjan stands up......she goes upto him....
g=tum uth raheho??
s=nahi...kya karogi?
g=paata nahi.....ha..agar nahi uthe...to morning kiss cancel...
s=nahi plzzzzzz...chashmish...ye cheating ha....
g=everything is fair....soclo.....ma coffee banati hu..
gunjan goes to make coffee...when she comes back.....she sees samrat was tieng the tie....
g=are wah..janab to sudhar gay....
s=biwi ki baatko andekha nahi karpaya....
g=ye lo..coffee.....
s=ek minutee......
g=kya hua????
s=madam mane apki bata mani.....ab mera inam????
g=inam????
s=ha....meri morning kiss?????
g=ohh....accha woh wala......
s=ji ha...
g=tum mere ek kiss keliyee....itna sab???
s=agar tum kehti ke tum mere liee...jaan dogi...to tumhare age ake ma pehle dedunga..samjhi???
gunjan smiles...n kisses him on his cheeks...
g=ab khush?????
s=bohot..............
g=ab jao.......
s=ek minute...ab ma kuch bhool raha hu..
g=kya??? rumal to dia ha....keys bhi ha..
s=ummm....ha..yaad aya...
g=kya????
samrat brought her face close...n kissed her on his forhead.....
s=ab ma to.....tumhare iss kis ke sahare sara din katunga..par tum kaise katogi?? isiliye..
g=how sweettt......
s=bye jaan...
g=byee...
flashback ends....
b=woh yaar....starting to acchi hi ha..phirr...
s=bohot kuch hua ha benji......is 3 saallome bohot kuch hua ha...
b=bol na..yaar...mujhe jaana ha...
samrat hears neha's crying...he runs upstairs.....n takes her in his arms...benji also comes up...
s=oh shitt...neha ki nappy change karni thi..ma bhool gaya...benji..zara woh box lena.aur study nme chal.....chashmish ko rest karna ha......
b=ha chal....
both comes out of the room.....as soon as samrat n benji comes out...we see....a fingerof  gunjans rite hand slightly moves....n then stopss!!!!!
 
 
 

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Posted: 31 August 2010 at 2:31am | IP Logged
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Heyy maisha!!
too good yaar! love this ff...
Its soo different! but its very very nicee!!
Love ur ideas! each and every dailogue!!
N gunjan's FINGER MOVED!! YAY!!
1st step! even i want to knwo ki kya sab hua iske pehle!!!
Waitinggg!!


Edited by Mjhtrox11 - 31 August 2010 at 2:42am

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Posted: 31 August 2010 at 2:40am | IP Logged
awesomeee update dear
loved it to the core
omg gunjan's fingers moved a bit..
pleasee do cont soon

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