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gunjanmariya

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
hey miasha....
buhat he heartwrenching part tha yr...but seriously it was awsome awsome awsome.....
but i wana know the reason...!!!plzz jaldi jaldi twist kholdo.....plzz hon
and the flashback was lovely loved it....
plzz continue soon and thanks alot for the pm...
love,
gunjan mariya...

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 5:05am | IP Logged
loved part 1
Its very interesting  can't wait to know why gunjan is in coma
plz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 6:18am | IP Logged
amazing start
loved it
do cont soon
thnx for the pm
 
love
sneha

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 7:39am | IP Logged
omgggggggggggg
 
awsomeeeeeeeeee updt
 
loved it to the **core**
 
keep it up...!!!!!!
 
continuee soonn...

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res

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Posted: 26 August 2010 at 11:41am | IP Logged
hey wow
aussum concept
its interesting
continue soon
will be waiting

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part-2
at night...
samrat was in the kitchen...he was making milk for her daughter neha...the milk was boiling..when samarts eyes fell on something..it was two coffee mugs...in which there was written samarat n gunjan...samrat took the mugs n smiled......
flashback
gunjan is making coffee in the kitchen....samrat comes from office..n hugs her from behind
g=kaun ha????
s=tumhara jaan..
g=tum itni jaldi kaise agaye?????
s=bass...aj kaam jaldi khatam hogaya tha..isiliye.....coffee bana rahiho?????
g=ha......
s=mujhe bhi peena ha....
g=theek ha.....accha wooh dusra mug nikalna......
s=oh ma to bhooolhi gayaa..........
g=kya hua????
s=ma ek chez laaya hu..yedekho..
g=mugs??? samrat gharme itne sare muga ha..aur uparse tum ye aur do mugs leke aye ho...
s=are chashmish..tumne iska desighn nahi dekha......heart shape.....
g=tumbhina...
s=ek minute...ek aur kaam karte ha....ma abhi aya..
samrat broought a red pen..n wrote there names on the mugs.
g=are ye kya karraheho???
s=hum ajse isse mug me coffee piyenge theek ha??????tum mere naam ke mug me..aur ma gunjan ke..theek ha???
g=theek ha......
gunjan poured the coffee in the mugs n gave it to samrat..
sajan=cheerss...
flashback ends..
samrat comes into sense when he hears neha was crying...he quickly takes the milk n rushes to the room......he takes her in his laps.. feeds her milk....
s=pata ha neha.......agar aj gunjan yaha hoti na...to woh bohot khush hoti..kyuki woh humesha mujhse kehti thi...ke jab tum yaha aogi....tab tumhara sara ka sara kaam ma karungi.......aur aj dekho..tumhari mama ki baat sach horahiha....
flashback
g=samrat!!!!! samrat!!!!!!!
s=chashmish....arahahahu......uffooo.kya ha chashmish???
g=kya samrat??? itna gussaa kyu hote ho??? jao mujhe bura laga ha..
s=sorry chashmish..lekin ma kya karu?? office nahi jasakta...aur tumhe kaam bhi nahi karne desakta..isiliye sab eksath karna parega na....
g=abhise thak gaye?????? to jab baby ayega...tab kya karoge???
s=ma pagal hojaunga...
g=kya?????
s=im sorry...mera matlab ha...ke...koi bata nahu...tumhe aram denekeliye....ma thorise takleef sehlunga.....dekhna jab ye ayega...tab ma iska saraka sara kaam karunga...isse milk pilaunga....iski nappy change karunga.....aur.....
g=theek ha,,theek ha....jab ye ayega tab dekhenge.......
flashback ends...
samrat looks at gunjan's picture kept on the side table n smiles
s=kyu chashmish??? ma apna duty theekse karraha huna??? jab tum ghar wapas aogi...tabhibi ma tumhe koi kaam nahi karne dungaa......promise..
after drinking milk..samrat covers neha with the bedsheet...when she falls asleep..samrat kisses her forhed..n sits beside the bed.....n takes gunjans picture...n starts regaining flashback.....
flashback
in college...
g=samrat.....hum aj college kyu aye ha??????
s=kyu matlab??? humhe....sabko humari shadikeliye invite karna ha na...isiliyee.....
g=accha theek ha...
s=tum yehi ruko.......ma zara abhi aya...
g=theek ha.....
v=hi gunjan....
g=oh...hi vicky......kaise ho???
v=theek hu..
g=aare..tum itne udass kyu lagraheha?????
v=kuch nahi....woh..tum aur samrat i mean......mumbaise jarahehona???
g=ha.....woh samrat ne kaha ha ke hum delhi shift hojayenge...isiliye...apr tum chinta kyu karte ho??? hum ate rehenge..theek ha??
v=gunjan ill miss u.....i mean..ma tum donoko bohot miss karunga..
g=are vicky tum...
s=hey dude.....tumhehi dhund raha tha....
g=dekhona samrat vicky udass ha ke....hum delhi jaraheha.....
s=s=kyu dude?????
v=kyu matlab??????? mere dono dost jaraheha...to ma kya hasunga?????
s=are nahi chashmish...ye isiliye udas ha kyuki mujhe meri chashmish mili ha...par isse abhitak koi nahi mila....
v=samrat!!!!
g=samrat chupraho.......vicky...tumhare yedono dost humesha tumhare sath rahenge...samjhe????
v=ma tum donoko bohot miss karungaa.....
s=hum bhi..chill yaarrr.....
g=samrat chale???????
s=chalo.....
sajan came out of the college...gunjan was looking backl....
s=kya soch rahiho chashmish??????
g=bura lagraha ha samrat........ye college...is sheherse meri bohot sari yaade ha...
s=chashmish...udass mat ho.......agar hum ye yaade piche chod raheha...to nayi yaade baananeto jaraheha ha na......jisme hum dono sath honge....kyu????
g=ha...
flashback ends...
s=chashmish......ab humare woh pall..mere lie yaadhi ban gaye ha...pata nahi kab tum wapis aogi......
samrat gets up..n goes to the cupboard...n opens it..n takes out a dairy.......n goes sits back on the bed..it is gunjans diary....he opens it..n starts reading it.....gunjan had given a title to the pages...samrat turned some pages n started to read one of them......
a new start......
it was a fresh sunny morningg.....the sun rays fell on a room....where two persos were sleeping pacefully....rather....who had become.....now one,......they werre sajan....it was the first morning after there marrige.....samrat opened his eeyes..n found....gunjan holding his back.......n in deep sleep...he thought that a fairy is sleeping beside him......he carefully moved the hair from her eyes....n placed a small kiss on her forehaead...n tried to get up.....but he was unable...as gunjan had holded his hand......samrat smiled.......aas he had moved...gunjans sleep broke..she slightly opened her eyes..n found samrat smiling at her lovingly....gunjan let his hand free....n turned around....
g=gud morning.....
s=gud mroningg....
g=tum itni jaldi uth gaye??? mujhe to abhi tak neend arahiha.....
s=apne ghar me soyi thi na....
g=ha...yebhi sahi ha....wase...aj bohot dinoke baad mujhe acchi neend ayi ha......
s=chashmish.thankss...
g=kisliye????
s=ummm....ab list bohot lambi ha....isiliye sirf thankss....
g=tum bhi na.....
gunjan takes his hands..n kisses on his palm.....samrat smiles...he takes some rose petals from the bed...n throws it on her facee.....gunjan smiles..n closes her eyes.......samrat blows on her face.....n kisses on her forehead.....he aagin blows n moves the roses from her eyes...n kisse them....then her nose.....n then gives her a small kiss on her lips...gunjan smiless...n blushes.....
s=yaar...tum ajbhi sharmati ho.......
g=nahi to...........
s=accha nahi????
g=abb..........na....hii................
s=sach me?????
samrat kisses on her necck....gunjan closes her eyes....n holds the bedsheet tightlyy..
g=ha.....aaa....
samrat smiless...n kisses on her chestt..gunjan holds his back...
s=abbhi nahi sharmati...
g=haa.....
saying she hugss him..tightlyy....n samrat also hugs her backk....
flashback ends....
samrat smiles...reading that....
s=chashmishne humare sab hasseen pall like ha.......
samrat turns the page......n a small smiile appears when he sees the title...
gud morning kiss
s=chashmish.....tie band do na..kaha ho tum??????
g=ayi baba......lo..agayi....ye lo juice......
s==thanks....ab tie?????
g=ha do....
gunjan ties the tie...n sees samrat smiling..
g=kya hua ese has kyu raheho??? ma tumhe joker lagrahiho???
s=nahii yaar...pehleme aur abme tumme kitna fark agaya ha......meri sweetsi chashmish..aj ek typical housewife ban gayihaa.......
g=ha to????? mujhe accha lagta ha..lo hogayaa........ab ofice..jao.der horahiha...
s=ek cheeze aur baki ha?????
g=ab kya?? tie...rumal....coat sab to ha....phir????
s=woh dikha woh rahi..
gunjan turned to the place were samrat pointed....n samrat kissed her onn cheeks..
g=ye kya tha???
s=mera gudmorning kiss.....iske begar mera din accha nahi jayegaa.....
g=accha aur gudnite kiss?????
s=woh to......bass esehi....taki raatko tumhe dekke.....sweet sweet dreams dekh saku........aur mera bass chale...to ma to saradin..tumhe...
g=accha hogaya...ab bass bhi karo...aur jao.....
s=acchaa...ma kuch bhoola nahi?????
g=nahi jaoo..............
flashback ends....samrat hugss the diary.....n starts crying..when pic of there shadi falls from the diary....samrat kisses the picc.....
s=chashmish....ma sachme tumhe miss karta hu.....plzzz......wapas ajao...plzzzz
 
 
 
 
 

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