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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 12:44am | IP Logged
first of all congo 4 new ff
we all knw dat u r amazing writer k
so there is no doubt dat this is fantastic fffffffffffffffffffffffff
plz do continuesoomnnnnnnnn
plz update long parttttttttttttttttt
m always waiting 4 ur ffffffffffffffffffff
sajan are mrried n also a daughter a very nice concepttttttttttttttt
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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 2:44am | IP Logged
congratulations for your new ff ...the concept is really interesting please continue soon and thanks for the pm Smile
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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 5:07am | IP Logged
nice concept yaar
loved it
add me to your pm list
 
love
sneha
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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 7:24am | IP Logged
interesting intro....
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 7:42am | IP Logged

lovelyyyyy concept dear...

 
toooooooooooooooo gooddd...
 
continuee soonnn
 
congo on nw ff...
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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 7:53am | IP Logged
brilliant concept dear
lovelyyyyyyyyyyy
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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 8:37am | IP Logged
part-1
samrat is stil crying......when the doctor calls him...
d=mr shergilll...
samrat wipes his tears..n gets up..
s=ji doctor......gunjan ki koi progres?????
d=har din ap humse yehi puchte ha....aur har din....humme apo nirash karna parta ha....abto humne umeed chordi ha...ke ms shergil kabhi theek hopayengi ya nahi....
s=bass docotr....ap esa kaise keh sakte ha?? ap to doctor ha.....apkoto gunjan ka ilaj karna ha....aur ap?? ese kaise doctor????? nahi...ma to apke bharose hu..aphine mujhe hosla dia tha..ke meri gunjan....theek hojayegi.....aur abh ap???
d=ma apke jasbaat samajhta hu mr shergill...lekin hum apni tarafse puri koshish karraheha....lekin pichle do saalse ms shergill ko observe karneke baad...humhe esa lagta ha... ke shayed mrs shergill ko jeeneki icchahi nahi ha...woh saas to le rahiha...lekin unhe wapas hosh me aneki koi asha nahi ha.....
samrat was not shattered......he sat on the bench.the doctor kept a hand oon his shoulder..
d=mr shergill...hum apki takleef samajhte haa......hum apkeliye phirse koshish karenege.......aur hum apni medicines change karenge..ap tension maat lijiye....aur ha hum inke oxygen mask nikalke rakhte ha....theek ha????
samrat wasnt saying anything.....he was just flowing tears.....the doctor left......samrat turned to gunjan...who was like a sleeping beauty.....sleepingg...he took her hand....n was thinking something....when we see.......some black flashbacks....not clear....n hear gunjans voice...shoutingg....
"g=samrat.........samrat plzz...rukh jao..meri baat suno.........
s=chashmish.......tumne esa kyu kia????
g=samrat.....samrat..hathooo!!!!!!!!
s=chashmish...tum..
g=samrat.........aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
s=chashmishhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
samrat closed his eyes...n looked at gunjan..
s=chashmish....plzz...utho na.........utho naa.......tum aj ka din celebrate nahi karogi??? har saall hum yaad nahi college jate thee......kyuki aj humare first mulakat hui thi...college mee.,.....yaad ha....
flashback.....
excell college.....everywhere is noise..n noise...the classrooms are empty....n the canteen is full.......there a boy is playing bb....in the court.....all are trying to cover him,....but noone is able to stop him.......the boy is samrat.....
s=yipeee.....aj phirse 50 goals......
b=samrat....tu...tujhse jitna namunkin  ha...
s=benji...haar manle..samrat ko bb me harana impossible......
then another boy comes.....he is vicky..samrats frend
v=dude.,....
s=hey vicky......again sabko haaraya...
v=isme naya kya ha??? tuto raja ha....samrat...
s=i no.....
v=acha sun...tujhe.....princi bula raha ha.....
s=kyu??
v=ek new student ne admissionn liya ha.......usse milana ha.
s=really??? ma abhi aya.....
samrat heads for the office.......
s=may i come in sir?????
p=samrat my boy....come in.,.....
s=sir apne bulaya??????
p=ha samrat....isse milo...ye ha gunjan......
gunjan turnss.......samrat is shocked to see her......gunjan smiles..
g=hello..mr samrat shergill.....
s=chashmish...
p=what?????
g=sir...ap fikar mat kijiye mujhe is college me koi takleef nahi hogi.....kyuki....apke ye mr samrat mujhe hone nahi degi.....ha na samrat???????
s=yess dont worry sir.....
sajan come outside.....then after a while...both stare at eachother...n then samrat hugs her,....
g=samrat!! chodo..........plzzz......
s=chashmish...i cant believe itt.......tum kab aye????????matlab tum morena se kab ayi?? mujhe phone bhi nahi kia...chashmish...apne best frend ko nbhool gaye?????
g=are shant hojao........ma nahi bhooli..tumhe surprise dena chahti thi.........isiliyee.....
s=ohhh...chashmish..tum nahi janti ma tumhe yaha dekke kitna khush hu.......meri bestest frend yaha mere sath.....
g=bestest koi word nahi haa........
s=janta hu..chalo..tumhe sabse milata hu......
samrat made her introduce to everyone.....his frend benji n vicky.......gunjan felt very happy......n day by day there frendship became more n more close....
flashback ends...
samrat was smiling thinking that.....then his cell rang...
s=helllo??? kya neha rorahiha?? ma abhi aya,....chahsmish..mana gharse hoke ata hu..theek ha???
he kissed on her forhead n rushed......he reached home...rushed to his room...where his child..was crying......
s=ramu kaka...kya hua??? neha ro kyu rahiha???
he tok her baby in his armss...n started to make her calm down.....he kissed her forehad...n then made her stop cryingg.....
s=neha..kya ha beta??? mummy ki yaad  arahhiha...chinta maat karna..mummy booht jald humare sath hongi.ma abhike abhi unse milke aya hu.....sach........aur unhone apkjo bohot pyaar dia ha......aur kaha ha ma jaldi gha rlot aungi....
he wrapped her child in his armss...n sat on the bed for a whilee........his eyes fall ona pic of his n gunjan...samrat hugging her from back......then samrat remebered the most specila moment of there lifee......
flashback...
g=samrat kaha leke aye ho tum mujhe????????
s=are chashmish ek minutee......ruko na..
g=are..mujhe kuch bhi nahi dikh raha ha..kuch to bolo....mere akhome ye patti...
s=hogaya..hum pouch gaye.....
samrta took off a cloth from her eyes......gunjan was surprised....it was a place...of a water falll......stones...tress....with lights.....water is flowing from one side....gunjan walked n saw a table set for two....gunjan was smiling...when she felt someone holding her hand....she turned n saw samrat holding her.......he took her beside the water..
g=samrat....ye.....
s=sshhh.......sshhhhhhhhhhh (he put a finger on her lips) plzz..........mujhe kehne do.....ma janta hu......ke ye sab sunke tum thora shock rahogi...lekin chashmish...ma ab aur wait nahi kar saktaa...tumhe apni life me humesha keliye lake....meri life aur bhi special bananese ma wait nahi kar sakta.......kyuki.......chashmish ab shayed ma tumhare begar jeee na pau,.....isiliye aj finally keh raha hu........
he holded her both hands n sat on his kness.....
s=i love u gunjan....
gunjan was surprised....but somehoe happy......
s=kya tumbhi apni bakiki life mere sath spend karna chahogi??? kya tum mera stah nibaogi?????? bolo chashmish.....kya tum...humesha keliye meri banogi???????
gunjan had tears...she moved her hands...n made him stand up...holding his shoulders...
g=pata ha...tumhari ek adat abhitak nahi gayi......
s=kya???
g=tum har kaam aj bhi itne style se kyu karte ho??? simple tarikese nahi keh sakte the??????
samrat was very happy....gunjan hugged him...n rested her head on his chest....samrat also hugged her back......
flashback ends....
tears were falling on the picture which were drooling from samrats eyees.s.....he caressed gunjans picture.......n huggged the picture tightly.....n started crying badlyyy.....he sta on the floorr.....
s=im sorry chashmish....plzzzz mujhe maaf kardo....plzzz.........chashmish.....lot aoo....

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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Omg!!
What A Beginning!!
Heartwrenching....
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