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Posted: 13 September 2010 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
hey frndz sooooooooorrrrry for late upd.actually past few days was soo busy with eid shoppings.
and plus then eid's day........Also my grandmother died on 12th, plzz do pray for her soul

anyways heres the next chap.....do lemme know howz it and plzzzz dont forget to comment,
i got very less comment in the last chap, wherz the rest of the cmnts??Ermm
hope to see more comments in this chapEmbarrassed

Chapter 3

Pinky disconnects the call, and looked quite worried, Geet noticed that.
'kya hua pinky?' asked Geet
'kuch nahin yaar, wo MK sir ne kaha ke jaldi wapas jaane ko, kyunki unhe ek project pe kaam karna
hain aur uske liye unhe secretary ki zaroorat hain' said Pinky
Geet: 'toh hum chale jayenge na, but why are you worried?'
Pinky : 'arre tu nahin janti Sir ko, agar hum late ho gaye na, toh woh dusri candiddate dhoond lenge, aur phir tera ye mauka hum gawa denge'
Geet : 'haa lekin parso (day after tomorrow) toh saare vehicles ke strike hain, i mean uss din koi
rickshaw, bus, truck nahun chalenge, aur ye strike i guess 4-5 din tak continue honge'
Pinky : '4-5 din? nahin geet, hum itna late nahin kar sakte, humhe kal hi jaana hoga'
Geet : 'kal? tu pagal hain? mummy aur papa se baat toh karni paregi na?'
Pinky : 'arre yaar, hum kal jaa rahe hain to kal hi batayenge, i mean kal breakfast unse baat karenge aur lunch time mein hum station pouhch jayenge'
Geet : 'haa ye accha idea hain. lekin aab jaldi soh jaa, subah jaldi uthkar taiyari karni paregi na'
Pinky : 'yeah, good night'
Geet : good night

*~*~*
The next morning, Pinky and Geet talked to Geet's parents about their last night's conversation.
After thinking for few minutes, Geet's Dad agreed to their decision and let Geet go to the mumbai.
In Lunch time, Pinky, Geet and also Geet's family comes to the station to see-off them.
Geet's Mom : 'apni khayal rakhna aur kaam acche se karna theek hain?'
Geet : 'ji mummy'
Geet's Dad : 'aur maine tumhare sharmaji (pinky's dad) se baat karli wo tumhara khayal rakhenge, aur
haa wo parminder (geet's neighbour) ko email main apni photo wagarah bhej te rehna'
Geet : 'jii papaji abb main chaloon'
Geet's Mom : 'rukh, aik minute ye le babaji ke prasad'
Both Geet and Pinky received the "prasad" and walks in the train saying bye to them

*~*~*
After few hours, both have reached Mumbai.
Both Pinky and Geet gets off the train with their luggage.
Pinky : 'Geet, yaha paas mein ek cafe shop hain, chal lets eat something arent you hungry?'
Geet : 'haan yaar bhuk toh mujhe bhi lagi hain'
Pinky : 'toh chal, uske baad hum log taxi leke ghar chale jayenge'
Geet nodded.

Coincidently Maan was also there at the station. Actually Maan's Dadi also went to a village and
returned on the same train. Maan took Dadi to the same cafe shop.

*~*~*

At the Cafe Shop.


Pinky and Geet took their seats. Maan and Dadi seats quite far away from pinky and geet.
Two Waiters came to them to take their orders
Pinky ordered lemon tea and a burger,
On the other side, Dadi ordered tea.
Then the waiter at Geet's table asked Geet
Geet : 'one black coffee with 1/2 (half) table-spoon sugar
Other Side, Maan too ordered the same as Geet :one black coffee with 1/2 (half) table-spoon sugar
the waiters leaves then.
Pinky : 'you drink black coffee that too half table-spoon of sugar?'
Geet : 'yup, that helps me to remove my tiredness, and its kinda refreshing'
Pinky : 'i dont know who you feel refreshing with this,  sounds bitter-taste'
Geet : 'well mujhe yehi achi lagti hain anyways main washroom hoke aati hoon, where is it?'
Pinky pointed : 'wo rahi'
 'oh thanks, will be right back' with that said Geet moved towards the washroom

Other Side,
Maan and Dadi were talking when suddenly Maan got a important call from his office.
He excused himself to dadi and walked through the washroom ways. He stopped in between male and
female washroom doors and received the call.
'yes mr.gupta what is it?' asked maan
'dekhiye mr.maan, aap panvel wale project kab start kar rahe hain' asked mr.gupta
'umm yehi 2 or 3 din mein, you dont worry, once i get a secretary i'll start it' said maan
'better do it soon' almost-warned mr.gupta
This almost-warning made Maan angry. Someone just warned Maan Singh Khurana. How dare he?
Maan disconnects the call, but still mad.

Geet comes out of the washroom, while she slips and is about to fall. But Maan catched her on time, by wrapping his hands around her waist. There was eye-lock for few minutes. Then Maan came to sense and quickly helped her to get up.
Geet hesitantly : 'thank you'
Maan was angry : 'are you blind? tum dekhke nahin chal sakti kya?'
Geet was shocked about his mannerless behaviour, She just thanking him
'kamaal hain, I was thanking you and you are being rude to me, how mannerless' replied Geet
Maan angrily pointing his finger on her : 'tum Ma.....
Geet moving his finger : 'aap toh battameez bhi ho, aik thappar laga dungi na tab theek ho jaoge'
saying that she rushed to her seat without hearing him, because she knew that he'll again utter some
bitter words.
'iss ladki ki himmat toh dekho, Maan Singh Khurana ko mannerless aur battameez boli? i am not going to spare her, aik baar phirse mujhe mil jaaye phir bata dungi ke Maan Singh Khurana se panga lene ka anjam kya hota hain' said Maan

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Posted: 13 September 2010 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Aaby mujhe laga atleast in ur FF they wont fight in strt
But nopes here also they did their strt wit fghting
Liked the update
Pinky was caring n sweet
Hop orders do not get changed 
Maan was angry on sumthg else but removed his anger on Bechari Geet

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Posted: 13 September 2010 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

Aaby mujhe laga atleast in ur FF they wont fight in strt
But nopes here also they did their strt wit fghting aww...buh i hope u'll luv their story..wil try to mak it diffEmbarrassed
Liked the update thankooooEmbarrassed
Pinky was caring n sweet
Hop orders do not get changed just wait and watchLOLTongueWink
Maan was angry on sumthg else but removed his anger on Bechari Geet
yeah...buh hez her boss alsoShockedLOL

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Posted: 13 September 2010 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
aww aabray its awesum!!!!
maan is angryyy ooo
 cnt wait wen they clash again
continue soon
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Posted: 13 September 2010 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Nice part!!
Thanks for the PM!!

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Posted: 13 September 2010 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
lolz..Maan is so MSK..lolz

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Originally posted by angelic shaz

aww aabray its awesum!!!!
maan is angryyy ooo
 cnt wait wen they clash again
continue soon
x


thankxx mother indiaEmbarrassed

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Originally posted by Radhika Shah

Nice part!!
Thanks for the PM!!


thanks and my pleasureEmbarrassed

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