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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 6:40am | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 August 2010 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
wow nive part aabray.. mwaahhhhhhh
 a big hug .. mwaaay.. do continue ..luvyou jana,,,,
 

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Posted: 27 August 2010 at 12:24am | IP Logged
plz update soon waitiong for maan to entire and plz add me in pm list

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Posted: 27 August 2010 at 6:16am | IP Logged

hey aabz...just read the first part...had been a bit busy...sorry 4 being this late...

the part was awesome...love it..superb!!

waiting 4 maans entry n maaneet meeting!!

love

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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 6:51pm | IP Logged

gr8 job!!

i lyk the way u write... keep it up
waiting 4 maan's entry!
and could u add me to ur PM list
thanx

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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
nice one... waitin for maan's entry...n pls add me to ur pm list....

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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
thanQ all Hug for all ur luvly comnts, i luved reading them, and sory for the late upd actually was bz wid eid shoppin and classes..anyways heres the next chap
hope u lyk it, and updtd my PM list tooEmbarrassed
 
Chapter 2

Pinky comes and joins them in living-room after a fresh-up. She sees Naina and greeted her, and sat beside Geet.
Pinky : "so di kaisi hain aap? aur jeejaji kaise hain?"
Naina : "hum dono bilkul theek hain, aur tum batao kaisa chal raha hain sab kuch?"
Pinky : "theek hain....."
Mrs.Handa served them tea.
Pinky after taking a sip whispered to geet : "tune auntyji se baat ki? job ke baremein?"
Geet : "bataya toh tha but no reply"
Pinky : "abb bol, dii bhi hain, bol na......."
Geet sighed : "theek hain....ummmm mummy wo aamm maine apse kahin thi na ke pinky ke office mein  ek job vacancy hain....toh...."
Mrs.Handa interrupts : "haan beta lekin tu waha akelii."
Naina : "akeli kaha mummy?, pinky aur uski dad hain na, mujhe lagta hain usse ye job karni chahiye, i mean salary bhi acchi hain aur business experiance bhi ho jayegi"
Mrs.Handa after sometime : "theek hain aaj shyam main tumhari papaji se baat karungi, phir wohi decide karenge"
Geet : "thank you mummy"
 "chal abb mein tujhe apne office ke baremein baata ti hoon" said pinky pulling geet.
Geet : "aare pinky ruk to........."
*~*~*

(geet's bedroom)
Pinky : "agar uncle ne permisssion de diya to tu Khurana's ke waha kaam karegi....
MAAN SINGH KHURANA ke saath........" (giving dreamy look)
Geet : "MAAN...SINGH...KHURANA..?? ye kaun hain?"
Pinky : "maan singh khurana, the hottest guy ever,

(on the other side, in mumbai)
Maan comes out of the car,

Pinky : "jab wo chalta hain, aisa lagta hain jaise ke ramp walk kar raha hain"

Maan wearing half-sleeved maroon shirt with a black waist coat and walking through the entrance.

Pinky continued : "you know what? hum sab usse DD kehke bulate hain"
Geet : "DD?"
Pinky : "dhak-dhak"
Geet became confused.
Pinky : "but at the same time he is very very strict, actually woh hamesha mood mein rehte hain, kabhi unhe muskurate  huwe nahin dekha"


Maan entered the office, and walking towards his cabin, stuffs stands up, and wishes him "Good Morning Sir". He replied them in a very formal way, and stopped at Adi one of the stuff
"Adi, panvel wale project ke file mere cabin pohcha dena" ordered Maan
Adi : "yes sir"

*~*~*

Maan entered his cabin and saw his dad Mr.Khurana waiting for him.
Mr.Khurana : "good morning my son"
Maan : "good morning dad"
Mr.Khurana : "maan beta, mujhe tumse ek important baat karni thi"
Maan : "kahiye na dad, kya baat hain?"
Mr.Khurana : "beta, tum nahin jaante but hoshiyarpur pe mere ek dost rehte hain, my childhood friend,
toh hum sab usse milne ke liye waha jayenge"
Maan : "lekin dad mera panvel ka project, usse complete kiye bina mein kahin nahin jaa sakta"
Mr.Khurana : "theek hain, to jab tumhara project complete honge tab jayenge hum"
Maan : "haan aur Miss.Pinky ne kahi thi ke uski koi friend hain jo meri secretary ki job kar sakti hain, ekbar ek secretary mil jaaye tab project shuru karungi"
Mr.Khurana : "theek hain, we'll wait for your work to be completed"
Maan : "thanks dad".
Mr.Khurana : "accha toh mein chalta hoon, see you at home"
Maan : "bye dad". Mr.Khurana left.
Maan then remembers that he ordered Adi to bring a project file, he becomes angry at the delay
He then calls at reception to remind Adi.
After few seconds, Adi knocks at the door.
Maan angrily : "come in"
Adi after entering : "sir wo aap ke file"
Maan : "maine tumse kab kaha tha file lane ko?"
Adi couldnt utter any word
Maan : "Adi you are 5 minutes late, aur tumhe achi tarah pata hain ke mujhe 1 second ka bhi delay bilkul pasand nahin"
Adi : "sory sir, wo tasha ne kaha tha ke ek paper mein choti si correction kardo, toh main......."
Maan : "tumhe salary kaun deta hain? tasha ya mein?"
Adi : "i am sorry sir, it wont happen next time"
Maan : "you better be, now get back to your work"
Adi : yes sir. Saying that he leaves

*~*~*

Mrs.Handa talking to Mr.Handa about Geet.
Mrs.Handa : "mujhe to lagti hain ke geet jo karna chahti hain wo karein, aur waise bhi pinky aur uski papa hain na waha"
Mr.Handa : lekin aapko to pata hi hain, ke geet kisiki amanat hain, aur.......
Mrs. Handa interrupts : "haa lekin geet waha sirf job ke liye jaa rahi hain aur jab wo log wapas aayenge, tab unhe bhi ye sunke accha lagega ke geet ko job experiance bhi hain, karne dijiye na usse ye job"
Mr.Handa after thinking for sometime : "theek hain, agar wo yehi chahti hain to karne dijiye"
Mrs.Handa became really happy, she told them the good news.
Pinky and Geet both were happy.
Pinky : "main sir ko inform kar deti hoon" with she started dailing Maan's number.
Maan : "hello?"
Pinky : "sir mein pinky bolrahi hoon"
Maan : "ha bolo kya kaam hain"
Pinky : " wo maine batayi thi na ke meri ek friend ke job ke baremein, to wo ye job karegi"
Maan : "thats great, thanks for informing, abb usse leke jaldi wapas aajao, office mein bohot kaam pari hain, ok?"
Pinky : "ok sir, bye"  They hung up

 

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Edited by Aabrayy - 30 August 2010 at 10:55pm

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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
heyy
i loved the way u made pinky describe maan!!!
he deff is the hottest guy ever!
thanx a bunch 4 the update & PM....waiting 4 the nxt one

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