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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

beautiful ..its really good


Thanks A Lot Embarrassed

Glad U Liked It.

-Mahak


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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by taibaaa

awesome poem...........


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Glad U Liked It.

-Mahak


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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Kanky-

Beautiful poem, gal. You are equally good at poetry too, wow!! Thumbs Up

Now that I am allowed to criticize, I think you could have given it a better title. Just a suggestion, people don't mind. =]

And hey, you know something? I was smiling throughout, it was such a happy and mesmerizing thing to read. Keep up the good work and may you write even better poems and keep posting them! God bless. Embarrassed

TC xx

-Kanky


Thanks A Lot Embarrassed

Glad U Liked It.

I am glad ki tujhe laga that i am good at poetry.

i agree to ur suggestion...actually kuch soojha hi nahi.....

u were?

Grt sis.

i love to write happy stuffs yaar.

thanks alot kanks.

I have many more poems and will try and publish them too.

TC

-Mahak


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Posted: 23 August 2010 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MjhtFan_Mahima

mahak mahima....
 
i am out of words aisa mat kaho.....Embarrassed
 
you have left me speechless seriously? thanks yaar...Embarrassed
 
thank you for writing such an amazing poem on nature........ that too on rain........ my pleasure yaar...rain is always my fav subject after winds. but glad that u found it amazing.
 
 
now i want ton narrate something...... the conversation between me and my english teacher after she will return my notebook after checking my poem......hell! u always make me blush. tum aisa mat socho. kahin yeh na hoye ki teacher kahein "what crap is this"
 
TEACHER:- this poem can't be written by you......
ME:- it isn't.....
TEACHER:- which famous poet has written it
ME:- not by any famous poet...... it is written by a famous poetess.... that is my friend Mahak..... she is very sweet and a great writer........
 
Awwww.....Embarrassed Blushing i can't stop blushing, can i?

i am sure this will happen i am sure that this wont happen atleast.
 
 
i have no more words yaar jitna kaha hai, utna bahut hai,. thanks yaar Embarrassed
 
no more....... thanks....
 
     i love u too....i always love ur glitters too...
 
MAHIMA




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-Mahak


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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Its AWESOME re!!!

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 5:07am | IP Logged
superb and fabulous!!!
very beautifully written..
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 10:45am | IP Logged
such a nice poem
described nature really well Smile

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Posted: 29 August 2010 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written Mahi...

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