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Posted: 22 August 2010 at 5:08am | IP Logged
lovely, beautiful.

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Posted: 22 August 2010 at 7:50am | IP Logged
mahi fabulous poem

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Posted: 22 August 2010 at 8:49am | IP Logged
mahak
 
i am out of words
 
you have left me speechless
 
thank you for writing such an amazing poem on nature........ that too on rain........
 
 
now i want ton narrate something...... the conversation between me and my english teacher after she will return my notebook after checking my poem......
 
TEACHER:- this poem can't be written by you......
ME:- it isn't.....
TEACHER:- which famous poet has written it
ME:- not by any famous poet...... it is written by a famous poetess.... that is my friend Mahak..... she is very sweet and a great writer........
 
i am sure this will happen
 
 
i have no more words yaar
 
no more.......
 
    
 
MAHIMA


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Posted: 22 August 2010 at 10:14am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 22 August 2010 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Wow Mahi
I loved it!!!
Right from the beginning!

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Posted: 22 August 2010 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
beautiful ..its really good

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Posted: 22 August 2010 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
awesome poem...........

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Posted: 22 August 2010 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Beautiful poem, gal. You are equally good at poetry too, wow!! Thumbs Up

Now that I am allowed to criticize, I think you could have given it a better title. Just a suggestion, people don't mind. =]

And hey, you know something? I was smiling throughout, it was such a happy and mesmerizing thing to read. Keep up the good work and may you write even better poems and keep posting them! God bless. Embarrassed

TC xx

-Kanky

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