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Posted: 13 years ago


Thanks A Lot 😳

Glad U Liked It.

-Mahak

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Posted: 13 years ago
omgg....omggg..... 😍😍😍

so beautiful.....😳 so lovely.... 😳so natural.... 😳 so touching poem yaar....😳

i really loved it to the core......πŸ€—

thanks mahima for asking mahak to write it...... tumne bahut acha kaam kiya hai !! πŸ˜‰

mahak .... u r outstanding my jaan......πŸ‘πŸ‘  u just rock !! ⭐️

u have written it so beautifully......😳  with so real emotions..... i can feel it !! πŸ˜ƒ

superb.... mindblowing.....lovely....awesome poem yaar.....πŸ‘πŸ‘
πŸ‘
you should write more yaar..... infact u have to write them for me.... ok !! πŸ˜‰

brilliant job done as always my dear......πŸ‘πŸΌ

love u my burfi....πŸ€—
ur varshu
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FragranceOfLove thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -krazyriya-

omgg....omggg..... 😍😍😍 itna drool mat karo....u always make me blush....

so beautiful.....😳 so lovely.... 😳so natural.... 😳 so touching poem yaar....😳 Aww....Thanks yaar....

i really loved it to the core......πŸ€— Thanks for loving it yaar.....lekin yeh itni bhi achi nahi thi...

thanks mahima for asking mahak to write it...... tumne bahut acha kaam kiya hai !! πŸ˜‰ Acha? but yup, she made me write a poem. otherwise i never publish my poems. But there is one more which i wud pakka publish....

mahak .... u r outstanding my jaan......πŸ‘πŸ‘  u just rock !! ⭐️ Thanks chocopie....

u have written it so beautifully......😳  with so real emotions..... i can feel it !! πŸ˜ƒ Yup, those were real emotions for sure....Thanks....glad that u can feel them....

superb.... mindblowing.....lovely....awesome poem yaar.....πŸ‘πŸ‘ Thanks.....☺️
πŸ‘
you should write more yaar..... infact u have to write them for me.... ok !! πŸ˜‰ Sure yaar....topic bolo.....i will surely write for you....

brilliant job done as always my dear......πŸ‘πŸΌ Thanks....

love u my burfi....πŸ€— Love u too my chocopie.....
ur varshu Ur Mahak



Thanks A Lot 😳

Glad U Liked It.

-Mahak



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Posted: 13 years ago
That is superb Mahi
 
Thanks for PM, Aanchal
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Shreyu..

That is superb Mahi

 
Thanks for PM, Aanchal



Thanks A Lot 😳

Glad U Liked It.

Shreya, tujhe pasand aayi, yahi bahut hai...

-Mahak


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Posted: 13 years ago
mahak
 
i am out of words
 
you have left me speechless
 
thank you for writing such an amazing poem on nature........ that too on rain........
 
 
now i want ton narrate something...... the conversation between me and my english teacher after she will return my notebook after checking my poem......
 
TEACHER:- this poem can't be written by you......
ME:- it isn't.....
TEACHER:- which famous poet has written it
ME:- not by any famous poet...... it is written by a famous poetess.... that is my friend Mahak..... she is very sweet and a great writer........
 
i am sure this will happen
 
 
i have no more words yaar
 
no more.......
 
    
 
MAHIMA


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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Mahi
I loved it!!!
Right from the beginning!
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful ..its really good
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful poem, gal. You are equally good at poetry too, wow!! πŸ‘πŸΌ

Now that I am allowed to criticize, I think you could have given it a better title. Just a suggestion, people don't mind. =]

And hey, you know something? I was smiling throughout, it was such a happy and mesmerizing thing to read. Keep up the good work and may you write even better poems and keep posting them! God bless. 😳

TC xx

-Kanky
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi mahak......GOD! you are so talented dear really awesome....!! the poem is wonderful...well written...

Divya❀️