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Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 (Page 6)

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 6:04pm | IP Logged

                for new thread


update

love geet dadi and pinky's convo
Dadi-Geet bete..boliye na..Maan ne aapko zaada sataya toh nahi

maan and adi convo is also

MAan- kya hua Adi?

Adi- woh..sir..woh..uh..Vicky..uh..nahi mera matlab hai...pinky..nahi..woh Sir..I..

MAan- ek minute..Pinky and Vicky? Really?


MAan pretends a happy look while inside he's thinking

MAan- hmm..toh problem kya hai?
If Pinky and Vicky like each other..then?

Adi- No problem sir..Bas wahi problem hai jo aapko hui thi when Geet left the job


Maan is stunned

MAan- ...that much?

Adi looks morose..

MAan- hmm..and why did you laugh when I mentioned Sasha

Adi- Sir..Sasha has been after Vicky sir


 geet and vicky   chemistry

Vicky- nah baba na...Unpe toh sirf MAan sir ka bas chalta hai

Geet- hmph...She would wish...

Vicky- Haan..Bro toh aapke pyaar mein lattoo hain na?

superb update

conti soon



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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
Hi Geet

Wonderful update. I actually read a lot of the upates in one go today. I apologize for not commenting regularly but work is crazy.

I loved the way you are moving the story along. There is an innocence to the characters that I completely enjoy.

Could you kindly add me to your PM list.

Thanks
Jhan

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 7:03pm | IP Logged
congrats on the new thread and the new part was amazing!

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
gud job. plz continue
plz add me to ur pm list!

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Hey awesome. I'm so in love with ur ff

pls continue. :)

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
lovely update... sasha behind vicky.. thts hilarious.... do continue soon..

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by JULIEL

loved the update!! glad to see you including vicky, pinky and adi to the mix!!! loving maneet!!


hmm..aur chahiye?

Want some more nice scenes..Adi- pinky or Vicky-pinky...Vicky-adi?

LOL

suggestions welcome!!
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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetha10

lovely update... sasha behind vicky.. thts hilarious.... do continue soon..


hmm..would you like to see more scenes between Sasha and Vicky? LOL

thanks for liking it!

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