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Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 (Page 4)

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:10am | IP Logged

The guys go to the outside for a while to work and Pinky, Dadi and Geet stay behind..

Pinky- Yaar Geet..bata was your trip??

Geet goes in flashback mode and doesn't speak

Dadi-Geet bete..boliye na..Maan ne aapko zaada sataya toh nahi

Geet- Dadi..mian kya batau...uff..MAan bohot bohot tang karte hain...lekin bohot achhe bhi hain..he took great care of me..and was a perfect husband

Dadi- did he behave himself?

She an dPinky exchanged a look while Geet blushed

Geet- woh..umm...

She tells them about what they did, what they saw..etc etc..

Geet- meri chhodo..tu bata Pinky..what were you doing with Adi?

Dadi winked at Geet

Dadi- waqt aane pe sab pata chal jaayega..I hope we will be in the same team geet

Geet is confused

At the outhouse

MAan and Adi and Vicky are talking about business..Vicky is normal but Adi seems really tensed up..

MAan- Adi..!!

Adi- j- ji sir..

MAan- kya hua? I have been calling you tab se...what are you thinking?

Adi- n-n-othing sir..woh main bas..

He looks at Vicky..

Maan- vicky..How has everything been?

Vicky- superb bro! you have some amazing people in your office..bohot mazaa aaya and all projects going perfectly well! would need to go have a look at the one in Thailand..

MAan- ohh,that resort?

vicky- ji bro..

MAan- hm..okay..I will have a look at the files and everything..Sasha been causing trouble

At this Adi gives his signature laugh

MAan looks questioningly while Vicky glares at Adi

Maan notices, and he's confused..

Vicky- uh..bhai..I'm going to the mansion..bhabhi ke paas

Adi- main bhi chalta hoon

MAan- Nahi..Adi,you can go now

Maan- Adi..I need to talk to you

Adi stands nervously..

They sit and MAan asks him what's wrong and why he is being so distracted

MAan- kya hua Adi?

Adi- woh..sir..woh..uh..Vicky..uh..nahi mera matlab hai...pinky..nahi..woh Sir..I..

MAan- ek minute..Pinky and Vicky? Really?

MAan pretends a happy look while inside he's thinking

MAan- hmm..toh problem kya hai?
If Pinky and Vicky like each other..then?

Adi- No problem sir..Bas wahi problem hai jo aapko hui thi when Geet left the job

Maan is stunned

MAan- ...that much?

Adi looks morose..

MAan- hmm..and why did you laugh when I mentioned Sasha

Adi- Sir..Sasha has been after Vicky sir..

MAan- KYA?

Geet is also trying to find things out from Vicky..

Geet- Vicky..main maarungi..chal bata..Pinky andDadi not telling me anything..

she makes a sad face that melts Vicky

Vicky- bhabhi..Sasha mere peechhe padhi hai!!
So me and Pinky decided that we are going know...

Geet laughs..

Geet- SAsha..toh kar le na haan

Vicky looks horrified..
Vicky- nah baba na...Unpe toh sirf MAan sir ka bas chalta hai

Geet- hmph...She would wish...

Vicky- Haan..Bro toh aapke pyaar mein lattoo hain na?

Geet blushes

Vicky- bhabhi..waise ek aur baat hai..

Geet- kya?

Vicky- Pinky likes Adi but woh kuchh nahi she asked for my help...maybe jealousy would work..?? what do you think?

Geet- hmm...toh yeh hai grand plan...

Maan ko batau ki nahi? LEt's see..if he tells me anything about Adi..

But Adi should speak himself- not forced to speak

Vicky(heard the last part)- But bhabhs, we need to give him some push na..

Geet- be careful though..don't hurt him..

Its dinner time and MAan isn't here yet

Dadi- Geet..MAan kahan hain?

Geet- pata nahi dadi..Outhouse mein hi honge

Dadi- aap khaana nahi khayengi

Geet-..uh..woh main...

Dadi- Geet..Aap aur MAan ek saath outhouse mein khana kha lijiye

She goes to the outhouse

Geet- MAan...MAan...

She doesn't find him anywhere

She goes upstairs to the bedroom...where she finds MAan dosing on his lappy

Geet touches his face and whispers in his ear..

Geet- MAan..uth jaao..kuchh kha lijiye..

MAan- hmm..Geet..tum kahan thi?

Geet- I was with Dadi and the others

MAan- did you eat yet?

Geet- kaise khati..aap the hi nahi..

MAan is touched..he shuts the lappy and they go downstairs..

Khana khaa ke..

Maan can see Geet is really sleepy..

MAan- Geet..go, I will clean up..go sleep..

Geet- hmm..nahi Maan..YOu go sleep..I will clean up

MAan- Geet..GO!

Geet- MAan..STOP! you need to sleep..don't make me scold you

MAan corners her near the staircase..

MAan- tum..mujhe roko gi...

Geet comes closer...

Geet- Haan..MAin rokungi...samjhe aap?

MAan is lost in Geet's eyes

MAan- hmm..

Geet pushes him away and comes behind him to push him towards the climb them
unable to do so

Geet- MAan..aap sachhi..hilte hi nahi hain..

MAan- haha..Geet..Main jaa raha hoon..but ek shart pe?

Geet- kya?

MAan- Tum saath chal rahi ho..

He picks up his unsuspecting wife and takes her upstairs..

He makes her lie on the bed..and Geet closes her eyes and immediately falls asleep

Maan kisses her cheek and moves closer to hold her in his arms

MAan- Ise kal mujhe Thailand jaana hoga kuchh din ke liye

He puts his head in the hollow of her neck and falls asleep

At the outhouse, Pinky very innocently asks where MAan and Geet are

Dadi- BEte..Ab woh nahi aayenge..

They all exchange looks and smirks..

Vicky realises how cute she looks whien she's smiling

Okay..that's need to add others too na..nahi toh bore ho jaayenge aap sab...

Tell me how u feel!!

About Vicky and apna Pinky adi..

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:21am | IP Logged
loved the update!! glad to see you including vicky, pinky and adi to the mix!!! loving maneet!!

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:21am | IP Logged
wow, awesome update.
sash aab vicky ke piche , iye lerki ka kya hoga.
 maan thailand ja rehi hain, ekele iya geet ko leke.
pls continue soon.

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:30am | IP Logged
loved iT!!!!!


update sooN!!!!

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:30am | IP Logged

sasha tou khurana bros k peechay he padi rehti hay Wink

loved it
update soon

Edited by NoorFatima - 21 August 2010 at 10:36am

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:33am | IP Logged
this was so so cute..............vicky finding pinky cute ????

oh dnt tell me in uniting adi nd pinky he is gonna fall for her LOL

this was so good thank you Hug

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Nice update
Liked Pnky n Vicky's plan
Maan gng Thailand leaving Geet alone thats undone but lets c wat happens aage

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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 10:35am | IP Logged
congrats for the new thread...
"Ise kal mujhe Thailand jaana hoga kuchh din ke liye"
don't do that...
hope geet also goes with him...

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