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Hey guys!

Thanks a lot for all your support- I had to make a new post..if any mods read this..sorry for any inconvenience caused!

Thanks to MY darling Gouri to make me aware of this!





If you have any suggestions, or any complaints regarding updates or PMs..etc etc..please please let me know!

Criticism is appreciated..I'm a writer so it's the most important thing I can get..LOL


NExt update will come soon!

link for last thread:



love and hugs to all!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1436575

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i would love to see ur new thread...i am sure the mods won't mind!Smile

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hey everyone!

I'm posting the last update here for those who haven't read!

Here it is-

Geet opened her eyes, all happy for a change..can't keep her down..no one will..

She said a little prayer to Babaji and then shifted a little to face MAan..

Geet- kitne pyaare lagtte hain sote hue..Babaji..inhe kisi ki nazar na lage..
Ae le..Geet..you won't let anyone harm him..hmph..koi himmat toh kare..

But I need to wake him up..I want to buy some things for Dadi, Vicky, Adi and Pinky..toh phir..

She tries to wake him up..but MAan is in a deep deep sleep..

Geet shakes his arm...
whispers in her ear

Geet- MAan..uthiye na..

Maan doesn't even stir..( he really is sleeping)

Geet- kaise soye hue hain! uff

She then looks at him again and decides that she should go get ready and then wake him up..

She starts to leave but MAan's hold on her is very firm..

Geet- neend mein bhi nahi chhodte..

She smiles as she shakes off his hand..and then starts to go..

MAan- GEEEET!!!

Geet turns back to look at Maan feeling for her sleepily

Geet goes to him and holds his hand

Geet- Maan..aap bilkul bachhe hain

MAan opens one eye

MAan- where were you going?

Geet- Jahunnum mein..what do you think?

MAan gets up and pulls her into his arms

Maan- hm...Main bhi chaloon? You have your pari pass i hope?

Geet- Maan..chhodiye..mujhe shopping jaana hai

MAan- Shopping?

Geet- haan

MAan- but Geet..we have a flight..

Geet- yeah at 3 in the afternoon..abhi sirf 9 baje hain..please maan..

MAan- tum aurtein..sach mein..

Geet glares at him and MAan

Maan- uh..i mean..achha thik hai..

They get dressed, have b'fast and go to the Tibetian Market of MAnali

Geet's face lights up seeing all the beautiful clothes and the silver jewellery

Geet- Maan..I like that suit..

Maan stops and they go to the shop..where Geet starts bargaining after choosing a couple of suits

MAan looks to and fro from the shopkeeper to Geet and makes him meet his eye

MAAn- Geet...aisa karo..you go aage..choose things for dadima and Pinky..I will just come..

Geet- hmm..okay

Before going she whispers

Geet- MAan..yeh zaada le raha hai...hmph..aap jaal mein mat fasna

Maan rolls his eyes and says okay

He then pays the shopkeeper at Geet's amount . The shopkeeper doesn't dare to stop him..All arguments quelled under the gaze of that man

Geet isnt' to be found in the next shop..or even in the next couple of shops..

Maan- kahan chali gayi..??

An old lady from a shop calls to him

LAdy- beta..idhar..

He looks and goes to her..She's nearing 80 and looks at maan with kind eyes

LAdy- are you looking for something?

Maan- ji..someone..MEri pari..uh..i mean, meri wife

He hears a baby's gurgling laughter and loks questioningly

LAdy- MEre paas ek sundar ladki aayi abhi..bachhe ke paas hai..

She invites Maan in and There she is..sitting on a low seat playing with the baby..looking blissfully happy

MAan- GEet..tum yaha ho..

Geet- hi MAan..come na..

MAan walks in, thinking what he would have to do to make her ever listen to him

Geet asks him to hold the baby as she is getting up..and Maan does

They stand together in that moment- a memory of the past left behind and a vision for a coming future

They look at each other and their eyes smile into each others'
There is no pain in Geet's eyes and that makes him extremely happy.

They buy some stuff for Pinky and Geet buys some earrings for herself..they leave

Geet- MAan.dadi ke liye?

MAan- Geet..I buy shawls for Dadi from Kullu..i know a very good shop..tum bhi dekh lena..

Geet- hmm..okay...and Vicky and Adi

Maan thinks...- do you want to buy sweaters for them?

Geet- pata nahi..dekh lete hain

They actually found really nice ones..and also some other Chinese gadgets for the guys and left the market

MAan- Geet, ice cream khaugi?

HE wants to take her to all the places he had visited alone..and lonely...now he wanted to share those thoughts with her..and so he took her to all those places..

They went back to the hotel for lunch and then to the airport..wahan se ghar

At the khurana mansion..

Both Adi and Dadi are waiting for MAneet

Dadi- I hope she's doing much better now..

When they hear laughter..Geet's laughter..finally

MAan and Geet walk in together and hug Dadi, and then Adi

Adi- huh hu hu huh..S-sir...welcome back..and geet..welcome back..

Vicky walks in with Pinky and suddenly.Adi stops laughing and glares at Vicky..

Geet notices it and notices MAan noticing it too
She grins while he's confused

Pinky- oie Geet..tu aa gayi..uh..hello jeeju..uh..jeeju sir..uh..i mean..sir

MAan- Pinky..you can call me jeeju..don't be scared..main Dusht Danav nahi hoon..

Geet nods

Geet- haan haan..nahi hain..

Dadi laughs a delighted laugh

Dadi- toh maan..aapne apne rang mein Geet ko rang liya

MAan- NAhi dadi..Yeh Geet hai..hamesha ulta hota hai..

Dadi and MAan share a look.

Hugging sessions completed..Geet shows them what all they have gotten for them..

Amidst ecstatic cries and thanks..

Geet says

Geet- thanks everyone..aap sab mere saath the..MAan ne mujhe bataya..thank you..itna pyaar toh mere parivaar ne kabhi mujhse nahi kiya

She gets a little emotional and MAan rushes to her..

MAan- Geet..yeh tumhara parivaar hai..jo tum chhod aayi ho..those are bad memories..till they turn to good ones again..and that too..whenever you are ready..

MAan looks around..

MAan- Geet..In this room are the people I love the most in this world..YOu are AT the centre..YOu ARE the CENTre..and never forget that.
Meri happiness..hum sabki happiness tumse judi hui hai..

Ab Geet humse parayi nahi ho sakti..kyun ki woh humari apni hai

She goes to Dadi and hugs him..Maan follows, followed by Vicks and then Adi and Pinky..

Kodak moment!

LOL...guys..I couldn't go xrated in the morning..hope you like this short update

love to all

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Awww loved it.... why is pinky with vicky n not adi :/

continue soon plss

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Originally posted by desigurl953

congrats


thanks!! Hug

I feel so nice..you guys read and liked it all!!

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geetu u dont hv to thank me for this....
love u
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Originally posted by nir_jaanu

Awww loved it.... why is pinky with vicky n not adi :/

continue soon plss


hi!

Well..that's a good question..I dunno , I just felt like it..

LOL Wink

hv u read the others? the ones in the previous post?

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