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NehAditya8791

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sofsunmannee

nyc update


thanks for ur comment yaar. next part coming up soon. so plz comment then too.

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ok waitinggggggggg r u updatingggg now

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
*****IMPORTANT*****
NOTE:

the next part is coming up, but it will be one of the last few parts. sorry i have to end this fan-fic early. but its that i hav no time for it. plus, this fan-fic is not getting a good response as i want. i hav another fan-fic which is doing much better, so i wanna concentrate on that also, though i hardly get any time to update either. sorry again. i can leave this fan-fic open to whoever wants to continue it though. the only condition i hav is tt the person must follow the initial plot and also ending i had intended, but can type the parts however they want.. whoever wants to take over, just pm me.. if someone takes over then i wont pm the mods of this forum to close this topic.. otherwise i will end it and pm them..


Edited by NehAditya8791 - 16 March 2011 at 9:02am

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waitinggggggggg

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweta2005

ok waitinggggggggg r u updatingggg now




Originally posted by sweta2005

waitinggggggggg




hey swati.. thanks for being such a good fan and encouragement. but plz read the note i just posted. i hope u do understand my probs.

plus, yes i am updating. the next part will be up soon. 

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~ Part 21 ~

Prem is taken to the hospital. Heer stays by his side throughout the journey there, holding his hand, in the ambulance. Heer keeps telling Prem that she loves him, though she knows that he can't hear since he's unconscious. But Heer still knows that Prem is in pain, and that makes her cry even harder.


pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan
ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan


Heer wonders what more exam that Prem has to give to prove his love. She already love him, ok she realised that late, but her feelings are true aren't they? So why is god testing their love? Heer asks all these questions in anger to the creator above. 


ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila


The ambulance finally reaches the hospital, and Prem is rushed to the hospital on the stretcher. Heer sits outside, tensed and crying. She finally regains herself enough to call her sasuraal and inform Prem's parents about the accident. The whole family rushes there, Heer's family and friends included. 


kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka
na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka
dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein
saansein saansein tooti bandishein


Heer can feel Prem breathing hard, fighting hard for his life. She immediately rushes to the god's idol in the hospital and prays for Prem's life.

Heer: Hey bhagwan! Aap chahe toh meri zindagi leke Prem ko zindagi dedo. Meri saasein le lo, magar Prem ki saasein lauta do. Prem mujhse bohot pyar karta hai, sachcha pyar, aur woh bhi kab se. Ek shabd bhi usne nahin kaha, kyunki mere khushi mein hi woh khush tha. Pehle main sochti thi ki meri khushi Raj mein hai, lekin meri khushi shuru se hi Prem mein thi. Prem ke prem ne mujhe bhi ussey prem karne mein majboor kiya. Ab main Prem se bohot prem karti hoon. Meri khushi Prem ke saath hai, aur Prem ki zindagi se hai. Prem nahin toh Heer nahin. Bas, meri khushi Prem hai, aur Prem ki khushi bhi mujh mein hai, mujhe ye pata hai. Isiliye please bhagwan, please please please Prem ko jaldi theek karo. Prem ko kuch nahin hona chahiye.


kahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad hai

kisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

Doctor: Operation successful hua. Lekin, Prem abhi behosh hai. Ussey agle 48 ghante ke liye ICU mein rakhna padhega. Agar in 48 ghante mein woh apne behoshi ki haalat mein se vaapis nahin aaya, ya phir bhagwan na karein, uski haalat bigad jaaye toh hum ussey bachane ke liye kuch nahin kar sakte.

Heer hears this as she comes back to outside the operation theatre. Prem is soon wheeled out of the operation theatre and into the ICU. The doctor does another checkup before exiting the room and leaving Prem to rest. Only one person is allowed in the ICU at a time during visiting hours, so Heer goes in while Angad-Kripa, Mayank and Preet stay outside praying for Prem to get better. The rest just go home and rest.


koi na sune sisakati aanhon ko
koi na dhare tadapati baahon ko
aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein
tooti footi sab farmaaishein


More than one day passes by... It is almost the end of the 2nd day and there is still no improvement in Prem's condition. Heer has not moved one inch from Prem's side, except t go to the toilet and drink the occasional coffee to keep awake incase there is any chance in his condition. 

For the past day and more, Heer has not slept not eaten properly. And no one has been able to convince her to take care of herself more, as she has been busy taking care of and praying for Prem to wake up and get better.

Prerna on the other hand, is more worried than ever for her daughter's life. "Hey bhagwan, meri beti ka pyar ek baar uski zindagi se door chalke uske dil ke tukde kar diya, ab dossri baar uske dil ko mat tootne do. Please bhagwan, uske pyar ko ek baar phir khone na do."


kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai

kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar


The 48 hours are almost up, and Heer is still by Prem's bedside. The doctor has come in for another checkup to look for any improvement in his condition, to no avail. Heer is also tensed, as the doctor gives her almost no hope left.

At this, Heer starts crying even harder. Her tears fall on Prem's hand, the one that she is holding, and she kisses it, telling him "I Love You." As Heer's tears fall on Prem's hand, and he feels her touch, her kiss, and her love, he starts breathing hard again. 


ho o o pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
ho o o o ho o o o


The doctor sends Heer out of the room, making her more tensed. Heer is crying, hence unable to comprehend anything going on inside the room, even though she can see. Kripa and Preet come to support her. (Mayank and Angad have gone home for a while). 

The doctor finally comes out of the ICU, and Preet goes to talk to him while Kripa supports Heer, hugging her.

Doctor: Darne ki koi baat nahin, Prem is not completely out of danger. Haan, magar uske ghaanv aur head injuries ko theek honey mein kuch din lagenge isiliye ussey hospital mein kam se kam ek hafte ke liye rehna padhega.


na poocho dard bandon se
hansi kaisi khushi kaisi
musibat sar pe rehati hain
kabhi kaisi kabhi kaisi
ho o o o... rabba, rabba ho o o ho
rabba ho o o, ho o ho rabba


Preet phones home and gives everyone the good news. Heer enters the ICU along with Kripa, and sees Prem awake, lying there and covered in bandages. Prem has his head turned to the other side, but when he hears and feels Heer coming in, he turns his head to face her.

Slowly, and in main, he still manages to wink at Heer and give her a flying kiss. Heer manages to smile and blush, while Kripa starts giggling, and nudging Heer, getting an angry look from her.

Heer: I Love You too Prem. Main tumse bohot pyar karti hoon.

Heer says this to Prem as she approaches him, and bends down to give him a kiss on the cheek and forehead, causing him to smile and blushLOL



~ END OF FLASH BACK ~


In present time, Prem and Heer are sitting and hugging each other, on the swing in terrace of their home. Heer is now 6 months pregnant. She and Prem are still arguing about baby names. Padma comes and pulls Prem's ear for arguing with Heer, while Shashank comes there and supports Padma for doing the same, making Prem pout.

Prem: Hrumphh!! Toh maa, aap mujhse zyada Heer ko pyar karti ho?

Padma: Of course! Heer meri beti hi toh hai.

Prem: Heer tumhari beti hai, toh main kya hoon?

Padma: Hmm... Sochno do.. Achcha, Prem... Tum toh mere daamaad ho. Aur Heer meri beti.

Prem pouts even more, making Shashank and everyone else also laugh. He sticks his tongue out at Heer, in a playful mode and Heer copies him. In mock, fake anger, Prem goes back downstairs into the house and his room. Shashank, Padma, and Heer laugh even more, as Heer hugs her "parents".


Edited by NehAditya8791 - 16 March 2011 at 11:40am

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