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Part9


Onu Taani ke room mein jataa hai aur woh dekh kar hairann ho jataa hai, uske moo ke rang udh gaye hote hain

Onu ke ankhon mein ansoo aa jate hain aur woh dard badi awaaz se kehta hai: Taani!

Taani Onu ke diye huwe gifts, unki photos, unki sarii yaadein jala rahi hoti hai.. aag unn yadoon ko laghi hoti hai lekin dil Onu ka jal raha hota hai

Onu rote huwe kehta hai: Taani... yeh meri zindagi ka sabse buda din hai... maine kiya kya socha tha ke aaj ke din tum merii fiance bano gi... hamara rishta ek kadam age phare ga lekin... (cry)... tu kehti thi na ke main pagal houn... haan houn main pagal lekin tere pyar mein...

sab yadeein jal chuki hoti hai lekin ek photo todhi si bach gayee hoti hai, Onu woh utha tha hai aur apne haath se uss aag ko puchha tha hai jisski wajah se usska haath jal jata hai

Taani jaldi se usska haath pakkar the huwe phook marti hai aur uske ankhon mein Onu ke liye fikaar hoti hai

Onu: kyon tujhe meri itni fikaar ho rahi hai?

Taani ek dum sochne laghtii hai aur kehtii hai: woh... itne saal tujhse pyar ka natak kiya na to iss liye adaat ho gayee hai lekin... (suddenly she smiles)... aab main itnii bhi budi nahii ban sakhti ke mere samne koi jal raha ho aur main usse marham na laghaoun.. agar teri jagah koi aur bhi hota na to main yehi karti

Onu ghusse se Taani ke haath ko piche karta hai: lekin agar teri jagah koi aur hoti na to main use marham laghane deta... pehle khud mujhe zakhm diya aur aab marham lagha ne ka natak.. tujhse maine yeh expect nahi kiya tha... tu meri Taani nahii hai...

Taani: to phir yeh tasweer jalne dete na kyon apne haath ko jalne diya? sirf iss chotte se tukre ke liye?

Onu: shayd tere liye yeh ek chotta sa tukra hai lekin mere liye yeh merii zindagi hai... tujhe pyar ki kadar nahi hai na to... tujhe to kuch kehna bhi beekar.. ja pehle jaa kar samajh ke pyar kiya hai phir mujhse baat karna...

Taani: Onu agar tera yeh drama ho gaya hai na to please jaa... Pyar sirf ek chotta sa lafz hai aur kuch nahii.. please stop this drama and get.. out!!

Onu ghusse se challa jata hai... Taani jaldi se darwasa lock karti hai aur unn jali huwi yadoon ko apne haath mein leti hai jisski wajah se uska haath bhi jal jata hai aur zor se rona shuru kar deti hai..

Song: Zindagi gawah kar bhi jo zindagi mile
Har khushi gawah kar bhi jo ek khushi mille
woh mang loun tere liye...
Tere Liye... Tere Liye...

~ ~ ~

Shekar said to the guest: I'm sorry!! aap sab ko humne yahan bhulaya aur phir yeh sab ho gaya.. aap sab to inn dono ko jante hi ho.. ek dosre se har waqt jagharte rehna.. to aaj bhi unnka chotta mota jaghra ho gaya.. so hum iss party ko yahin khatam karte hain!!

Admi: aap iss sab ko chotta sa jaghra kehte hain?
other Admi: hum yahan apna kimti waqt nikal kar aye aur aap yahan hamhe yeh drama dikha rahe hain

sab guest chale jaate hain..

The whole family is tensed... but finally they decide ke dono ko kuch din naraz rehne de jab khud ek dosre se raazi honge to tab dekhi jaye gii...

~ ~ ~

after sometimes... Onu corridor se ghussar raha hota hai to woh Subodh Taani ko dekhta hai



Taani: you know Subodh... tere saath time spend karna mujhe bohot acha laghta hai
Subodh: mujee bhii... Taani you are looking beautfull in this dress..
Taani: Thanks Subodh



Onu think: Taani itni ghatiyaa kaise ho sakhti hai? pehle mere saath yeh sab kiya karti thi aur aab Subodh ke saath..

Subodh Taani apni baatein karne laghte hain aur Onu ko bohot dukh hota hai ke uski Taani uske saath aisa kar rahi hai



Onu wahan se challa jaata hai... he was just crying in his heart...

~ ~ ~
After sometimes.. the same thing happend.. Onu Taani ko phone pe baat karte huwe sunnta hai



Taani: Subodh.. tum todhi dher aur rukh jate to mujhe acha laghta... I... I...

Onu remembers when Taani confess her love " I... I... lOVE YOU ONU " Onu reply " I love you too " He smiles...
Taani: I want to talk you.. something special!!



Onu ghusse se chala jaata hai...

Taani mudh kar dekhti hai ke Onu chala gaya hai aur phir kehti hai: Thank you so much Subodh..
Subodh: please Taani... thnks keh kar pharaya mat kar.. agar aur madat chahiye huwi to mujhe yaad karna..

Taani smiles but with pain... after the phone conversation... Taani apni room mein jati hai aur room lock kar ke rone laghti hai

Taani: Onu!! mujhe yeh sab karna phara... tujhse zyada mujhe takleef ho rahi hai... maine tere saath koi dhoka nahi kiya... dokha to mujhe apne saath karna par raha hai.. apni hi zindagi ko khud se dhoor kar rahi houn... teri Taani tere liye kuch bhi kare gii... aab mujhe in jaali huwi yadoon ke sahare jeena hai...

Taani apne ansoo saaf karti hai aur kehti hai: abb se tere dil mein mere liye sirf nafrat hogi.. itni nafrat tere dil mein bar doun ki ke tu iss Taani ko bhool jana chahe ga.. nafrat se bhi zyada nafrat karna chahe ga..

~ ~ ~ ~

Onu bhi apne room mein baitha hota hai... He is thinking of all the moments which he spends with his Taani... but suddenly usse Taani ka dokha yaad ata hai.. woh thoot gaya hota hai... other side Taanii bhi dil hi dil mein thoot gayee hoti hai aur roo rahi hoti hai..

~ ~ ~
Taani take the burn yadeein.. aur unne seene se lagha kar rone laghti hai

Taani: Onu tune soch bhi kaise liya ke main kisse aur ke bade mein soch sakhti houn...  main sirf tumhe chahti houn...

~ ~ ~

Robi Onu ke room mein jata hai

Robi: bhai yeh sab kiya hai? what's happening? main kabse aapse baat karna chah raha houn aur aap yahan baithe hai... akhir yeh sab ho kiya raha hai?

Robi ki nazar Onu ke ansoo par pharti hai: bhai aap ro rahe ho?

Onu roote huwe Robi ko hug kar leta hai: main khud nahi janta ke yeh sab kiya ho raha hai.. aise laghta hai jaise main kahin ghum gaya houn... meri zindagi mujhse dhoor ho rahi hai... man to karta hai jaan de doun apnii... chor doun jeena...

Robi: bhai!!! apne aapko sambaliyee.. abhii aapko baba ka business sambalna hai.. maa ko sambalnaa hai aur mujhe bhii..

Onu uthte huwe chilata hai: nahii... karna mujhe kuch.. nahi jeena... nahi sambalna kissi ko bhi...

Robi apne bhai ko aise dekh kar sad ho jata hai: bhai... I neend you and you neend me.. aaj tak jab bhi main kissi problem mein phassa apne mujhe support kiya.. now it's my turn!!

Onu: thnks Robi.. but tu mere liye kiya kare ga?
Robi: pehle aap mujhe yeh batayein ke yeh ho kiya raha hai?

Onu Robi ko sarii kahani sunaate hain...

Robi: what? Taani bhabhi ne aisa kiya? lekin kyon? woh to aapse bohot pyar karti hain na?
Onu: karti thii lekin aab nahii..
Robi: Bhai.. mujhe laghta hai ke kuch gharbar hai.. aap dihaan se socho.. koi aisii baat jo stange ho ya phir Taani aapse kuch chupa rahi ho.. com'on broo

achanak Onu ko yaad ata hai ke jab Taani phone par baat kar rahi hoti hai to uska haath jala huwa hota hai

Onu thinks: haath to mera jala tha phir Taani.. iska matlab mera haath jalne ke baad Taani ne mere liye apna haath jala diya...

Onu yeh baat bhii Robi ko batta tha haii..

Robi: mujhe laghta hai ke aapko yeh baat Taani ko kehni chahiye... ho sakhta hai aapko koi aur baat patta chal sakhe aur haan aur ek baat aap Taani ke saath aise behave karein jaise aab apko koi farak nahi pharta jab woh aapse rudely baat karti hai..

Onu: thik hai!!... Thanks Robi

they hug each other...

~ ~ ~

Robi sab kuch Mauli ko batta tha hai aur phir Mauli Taani ke paas jati hai

Mauli: Taani!! yeh sab kiya ho raha hai? tu ne party mein sabke samne jhoot kyon bola? tu ne yeh kyon nahi kaha ke tujhe Onu se shaadi nahi karni? ho kiya gaya hai tujhe? aab tujhe Subodh ache laghne lagha hai? pyar ka natak kar rahi thi.. mujhe to yeh baat nahi batta thi ke tujhe natak bhi ata hai... oh I think!! tu dosti ka bhi natak kar rahi thi.. kyon ki jahan tak main tujhe janti houn tu aise nahi hai.. Taani tu kitni badal gayee hai..

Taani: agar tujhe patta hai ke main badal gayee houn to tu yahan kyon ayee?... Onu ke saath saath mujhe tujhse bhi dosti nahi karni.. tu jaa sakhti hai

Mauli: main yahan se jane ke liye nahi ayee.. inn sab sawalon ka jawab mangne ayee houn.. tu mujhe jawab de rahi hai ya nahi?

Taani: jab tujhe sab patta hai to kyon kuch acha expect kar rahi hai

Mauli: main Onu nahi jo tere pyar mein itna pagal ho jaye ge teri koi bhi baat par yakeen kar le.. Taani main bachpan se janti houn ke agar tere moo se sachch nikal na ho to kaise karna hai

Mauli Taani ka haath apne sar par rakhte huwe kehti hai: tujhe meri kasam hai.. bol!! kyon kar rahi hai yeh sab?

Taani: Mauli.. Yeh tu ne kiya kar diya?

Taani ki ankhon mein ansoo aa jate hain: aaj jab rasm ho rahi thi to ek ladki ayee thi usne mujhe kaha...

Taani Mauli ko sari baat batta thi hai aur Mauli shock hote huwe kehti hai: Kiya?! main Onu ko yeh baat bata deti houn

Taani: Nahii!!

Taani Mauli ka haath pakkar kar apne sar par rakhti hai: aab tujhe meri kasam hai ke tu yeh baat sirf hum dono tak rakhe gi..

Mauli crying: Taani!
Taani: tu kuch bhi aisa waisa nahi kare gi na jisse yeh baat Onu ko patta chale?!! tu yeh sab karne mein mera saath degi na?.. please!
Mauli: maine kabhi nahi samajha tha ke pyar kiya hai lekin aaj yeh sab dekh kar, main ek baat kahoun gi ke tera aur Onu ka pyar sachcha hai..

They both hug each other...

~ ~ ~

Robi apne room mein hota hai.. Mauli uske paas jati hai

Robi: Mauli, Taani ne tujhse kuch kaha? kuch to huwa hoga?
Mauli: ussne mujhse kuch nahi kaha aur kuch bhi aisa nahi huwa jisse Onu aur Taani ko ek karne ka koi rasta ho
Robi: Oh god!! laghta hai ke kuch aur hi karna ho ga
Mauli: Robi.. ab kuch karne ka faida nahi
Robi: tu aise kyon bol rahi hai? aur tera chehra kyon itna uthra huwa hai?
Mauli: Taani ne hamari bachpan ki dosti todh di

Mauli Robi ek dosre ko hug kar lete hain

Mauli thinks " I'm sorry Robi.. lekin mujhe Taani ki khatir yeh sab karna pare ga... aur waise bhi aab tere plans mein tera saath de kar aab kuch nahi hone wala "

Robi smiles n thinks " Mauli ne mujhe hug kiya.. bhai ki problemes mein itna kuch ho gaya... lekin Mauli  ne mujhe hug kiya... Hope this is not a dream.. I love you Mauli "

~ ~ ~

Onu is sitting on terrace... Robi comes..

Onu: Robi! kiya huwa?
Robi: bhai!! aap galat the... Taani ke liye hum sab kuch nahi hai..
Onu with pain: ek hi humeed reh gayee thi.. AB to woh bhi thoot gayee
Robi: I'm so sorry bhai!
Onu: arre pagal tu kyon sorry bol raha hai.. (CRY) meri kismat mein hi kuch acha nahi hai
Robi: lekin Taani bhabhi yeh nahi janti ke unnone mere bhai ke saath aisa kiya hai.. I will never fogive her.. unnone jo aapke saath kiya unne usski kimaat chukaani hogi

Onu apne ansoo saaf kar leta hai aur kehta hai: dekh Robi tu Taani ko kuch nahi kare ga... Aab jo karna hai mujhe hi karna hoga
Robi: lekin...
Onu: tujhe meri kasam hai!
Robi: ok!! all the best.. aur agar aapko meri zaroorat pare to please tell me..
Onu: Thank you so much..

~ ~ ~

I hope u all like it...
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Thnks




Edited by Amira10 - 15 June 2011 at 1:00pm

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Awesome chapter. The dialogues are fab. The concept is very unique..
Plz. do continue soon... And PM me whenever you update the next chapter..
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Wowww
Amazing chapter...
Just too gr8...
The FF is getting scary...
And I knew Taani zaroor Onu ke liye kuch karegi...
Update ASAP.,... and add me to the PM list whenever u update next
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Finally you updated :D OMG.. Aweesome upd.
Oww.. Hearttouching and heartwrenching one Broken Heart I cant see my Onu like this..Unhappy Hope the misunderstanding between them solve soon :D Want them togheter :D
 
Thanku for The Pm, Amira Hug
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Beautiful part Amira Hug
Keep it up (:
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awesome part...!!!!!!!!!!!
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do cont soon
taani aise kyun karr rahi hai.. wo ladki kon thi?


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