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Hey PHriends..how r u all??Hug
OMG i just cant believe i have wrote my first ever shotShocked..it will be a SSWink..if u all liked itLOL..otherwise i will not continue!!Sleepy

Thanks to Hifza and Suku for nameSmile
           so here we go..Tongue
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Part 1
"Hey Prem..kese ho??"Heer with glowing face
"hey..mei tou theek hoon..tum kesii ho..kya baat hai..looking very happy"..Prem said in teasing voice
"yeah i have surprise for u"Heer said rolling her eyes..
"Surprise..kesa surprise??" Prem become super excited
"bata doon!!" Heer teasing him.. "Heer plz yar ab bata do na!! u know na i just cant control myself..and u always do this to me..plz aj tou bata do bina tang kie!!" Prem making puppy face
Heer melted.."Prem I m coming!!" Heer Exlaimed with full excitement.
"kya? kya kaha tum ne??" Prem said confusingly
 
" array i said i m comming Canada for further studies!!"
"sach!! HHEERRR..yeh kab hua!!! tum ne mujhe bataya nahi"Prem excitedly
"yeah i applied for it..and i got admission...received letter today"
"Tumhara plan kab se tha and tum mujhe ab bata rahi ho"said Prem making sad face..as they on video chat.
"i want to give u surprise plus i was waiting for confirmation"
"kya surprise ...jao mei baat nahi karta itni important baat nahi batai"
"Preeemmm..i told u such a good news..and tum ho keh naraz ho gaye jao mei nahi bolti"
"array!! acha acha sorry yeh tou batao kon si university mei admission lia.."
"haan i want to give u surprise is lie nahi bataya and guess wat i got admission in ur university!!"
"WooW Heer tahts great..tou kab aa rahi ho??"
"UUmm abhi nahi pata pehle hostel ka confirm ho jae.." heer was going to say something but intrupted by Prem.."wat!!! Hostel??? r u mad!! tum ne socha bhi kese ke mere hote hue tum hostel mei raho gi!! No never"
"But Prem.."
"nahi heer mei kuch nahi sune wala..i will talk to balraj uncle"
"acha baba theek hai"Heer said rolling her eyes...
"acha ab yeh batao kab aa rahi ho??"
"yeah i within 2 weeks"
"yeahhh!! 2 weeks cant wait pata nahi din kese guzrein ge..3 saa ho gaye!!"Prem said with tears
in his eyes
"yeah..3 saal"...
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so hows it??? hope so its wasnt boringShockedOuch..do tell me if i continue or not!!Tongue
waiting for ur comments!!Big smile
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-=Index=-
Part 1--Pg 1
Character Sketch-- Pg 5
Intro(Main Story)-- Pg 5
Part 2---Pg 9
Part 3---Pg13
Part 4---Pg17
Part 5---Pg 24
Twist---Pg 27
Part 6---Pg 30
Part 7---Pg 34
Part 8---Pg 37
Part 9---Pg 43
Part 10--Pg 53
Part 11--Pg 58
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Edited by Noor_PremHeer - 20 October 2012 at 12:16am

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awesome girl...Clap
continue soon......Wink



Edited by blufate.14 - 16 August 2010 at 10:23am

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OH MY GOD !!! Noor, i am shocked... Good you started SS, will surely read and comment... i am happy you started SS...Big smileBig smile

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Awsome EmbarrassedEmbarrassed do continue plz

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nooriie.....delete ur PM'sAngry

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by blufate.14

nooriie.....delete ur PM'sAngry
LOLLOLLOL sorry!! Done..aj itne PMs aye!!LOLLOL
@Waqas Bhai..HHmm shockedLOL! Thanks Bhai!!
waiting for ur commentTongue

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awesommmm noor really really nice
ClapClap
continue soon

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