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FF-Maan's confession&Geet's revelation-53last part (Page 7)

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Posted: 20 August 2010 at 1:19am | IP Logged
wow that was cute plz geet tell him all truth and except his love

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Sorry 4 the samll update ...

 

Part 8 :-

 

 

Maan was left alone in the Dhaba …..

 

Geet 2 her self on her way home –

     "Baabaji Jis baat ka dart ha wohi hua …. ab main kya karun babaji … Darga main Maan Sir ko dekh kar jo ehsaas meri andhar paida hua uski vajah sae main usi raat ko main yeh ghar aur naukri chod kae jaana chahthi thi … Par us Raat Maan Sir ne mujhe Dadima ka naam le kar rokh liya tha … aur phir uske baad … Ms.Rathore ki vajah sae jo baath unhone mujhsae kahan tha wo baath sun kae tho main dusri naukri doond na shuru kiya tha par unhone wo bhi karne nahin diya ……. Mujhe use waqt samajh jaana chahiye tha unke mann main kya tha … Par main un sab baton ko nazar andaz karthi aa  rahi thi …Ab main kya karun Baabaji …meri madad kariyen …..main janthi hun mujhe kya karna hain main friday tak wait nahin karungi ....main aaj hi nikal jaaungi ....."

 

Maan was still there in the dhaba & was thinking that ….

     

" yeh Geet wapas aise hi rothe hua kyun baag gai idhar sae …. jaise us din dhabe sae baag gayi thi ..…. yeh ladki bhi naa …. Jab dekho tab rothi rehthi thi …. Par ab kya hua ise …. Maine tho meri dil ki baath use bol di hain aur aaj uskee upar gussa bhi nahin hua …. Isko  tho kush hona chahiye naa meri baath sun kar… par yeh ro kyun rahin hain … kya main sach muchh Ithna bada Dusht Danav hun …kya wo mujhe pasand nahin karthi …….                nahin   nahin  Maan wo tujhe pasand karthi hain ….  aur yeh uske aankhon main uske harkathon sae patha chaltha hain …

         Agar wohi saari harkathein main kisi aur ladki ke saath kartha … ab tak to mujhe sau joothe pade hua hote …

        Aur Geet tho aise hi ladki hain agar koi uske saath aisi harkathein kartha tho usi waqt wo use maar hi dalthi ….jaise by mistake usne us din mujhe bedroom main chor samajh liya tha …  aur us din wo Rahul kae bare main bhi waise hi bol rahin thi …. us din tho usne Rahul ko chod diya tha kyun ki wo client tha .... par usne mere saath aise nahin ki ….  iska matlab hain wo mujhe pasand karthi hain …. phir yeh rone ki wajah kya hain …Mujhe Ghar jaake patha karna padega …aaj tho kisi bhi haal main …. main sachhayi jaan kae hi rahungaa …"

 

Maan then pays the bill & gets into his car & is on the way back to home …..

 

Geet already reached home by now & started packing in a hurry …& thinking that ----

"Sir kae ghar wapas aane sae pehle mujhe ghar chod kae jaana padega ….. "

 

Geet finished her packing & starts coming down stairs & is in the middle of the landing & just then Maan enters the Out House ….They both C each other ….When Maan sees the suitcase in Geet's hand he is shocked but comes back 2 his senses & locks the door immediately …..

 

 Geet starts coming down the stairs & Maan is walking towards her ….

 

Sorry 4 the samll update ...will B updating the next part very soon ...

 

 

 



Edited by dewdropred - 20 August 2010 at 11:27am

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Posted: 20 August 2010 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Amazing update!! Loved it!!
Can't wait for the next part!!
Pls cont.soon!!!

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