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Posted: 18 August 2010 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
I love the way you are moving this story forward with both Maan and  Geet's thoughts being depicted for us, to delve into their minds. Please continue soon and please add me to your pm list!

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Nice FF
Loved the way Maan was trying hard to make Geet sayin her feelings
Geet not less stubborn
Liked Maan's small gestures towards Geet
Update soon n add me to ur pm list plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 19 August 2010 at 8:47am | IP Logged
comments r welcome & please press the like button if u like it...Smile
 

Part 7:

Maan is sitting beside Geet & thinking 2 himself that --"Maan tum yeh kaise bhool sakhthe ho ki Geet ek Traditional Indian ladki hain aur wo aaj se pehle tak apni controlling family kae Under thi .... aisi ladki pehle kaise confess kar sakh thi hain  kae wo tumse pyaar karthi hain .... uske liye pehle tumhe aee bathaana padega kae tum bhi uss sae pyaar karthe ho ..... aur us kae bina tumhari zindagi aduri hain .... tell her Maan that She completes U "

Geet does not notice Maan ... she is still gazing out of the grill .... & thinking 2 herself -- "Par ek baat mere samajh main nahin aati ki mujh main aisa kya hain jo Maan sir ... Maan Sir ....  jaise aadmi ko pasand aaya .... jinkae liye ladkiyon ki koi kami nahin hain .... ladkiyan tho inkae upar marthi hain aur pyar sae DHAK DHAK bhi bolthi hain ... phir main kyun babaji ... aur Mere andhar jo ehsaas hain wohi ehsaas Maan sir kae dil ke andhar bhi hain ... kya yehi ehsaas ko Pyaa  ... kehte hain '"

Maan 2 himself -- "Come on Maan U can do it ... tum apna ithna badaa empire handle kar sakhthe ho ......  tho ek ladki ko yeh nahin bata sakhthe ho ki tum usse pyaar karthe ho ......"

Maan takes Geet's hand in2 his hand & Geet could not believe at what is happening......

Then softly Maan asks her......

Maan   - " main jab ladkiyon ka interview le raha tha ...... tho tum us kamre sae bahar kyun nikal jaathi thi ...... "

Geet -- " Aisa kuch bhi nahin hain ...... Sir"

Maan - "kyun ki tum mujhe kisi aur ke saath dekh nahin paathi thi  ......"

Maan -- Geet tum mere saath aise behave kyun kar rahi ho......

Geet thodi si gabrayi hui hain  -- Main ...... kya kar rahi hun sir ...... trying 2 take her hand out of Maan's hand......

Maan -  Geet mere kisi bhi sawal ka jawab kyun nahin deti ho ...... kith nae saari aise adure sawaal hain jinka jawab tumne mujhe aaj tak nahin diya hain .... Kyun Geet ...... please mere sawalon ka jawab do ...... aur in sawalon ko please taalna math ...... Tumhara yeh chuppi mujhse bardaasht nahin hota Geet .... main pagal ho rahaan hun .... tumhe abhi bhi samajh main nahin aa rahaa hain Geet ..... us din tumhi ne kaha tha naa ki ....... jab main wo ek raat tumhare saath nahin tha ..... tumne mujhse kithnae saare sawal punche ..... aur us sawal ka kya Geet jo maine tumse puncha .. ek sawal sirf ek sawal us ek sawal ka bhi tumhare paas jawab nahin tha ...... jab tum mere bina ek raat bhi nahin reh sakthi ........ to tum kaise soch sakhthi ho ki main tumhare bina meri puri zindagi bita lungaa ...... hmm Geet ......aur jab dekho tab mujhe chod kae dur jaane ki dhamki kyun dae thi ho Geet ...... mere har ek sawal ka mujhe aaj jawab chahiye ...... aur bina jawab ka main tumhe idhar se jaane nahin dungaa Geet ...... samjhi tum ......

Geet -- Aisa kuch bhi nahin hain ...... Sir......

Maan  -  Acha ....... Mujhe avoid kyun kar rahi ho Geet ...... jab tum aise karthi ho to malum hain tum mujhe kitna Hurt karthi ho ......

Geet -- Aisa nahin hain ...... sir ...... main .... aapko avoid aur hurt  kyun karungi sir ......

Maan - Oh really ...... avoid karna nahin to ise aur kya kehthe hain Geet ...... Phir aisa kyun hain Geet ....... ki main jab tumhare paas aatha hun to tum mujhse dur kyun baghthi ho ......  aisa kuch kyun bolt hi ho ki main hurt ho jao ......

Geet -- Aisa kuch nahin hain ...... sir ......

Maan  -  Acha yeh batao ...... jab bhi main tumhari ankhon main dekhtha hun to tum meri aankhon main kyun kho jaathi ho ...... Geet

Maan -- Ab bahut hogaya ...... yeh batao aisa kyun hain ki jab bhi main tumhare paas aatha hun aur tumhe chutha hun to tum kaamp thi kyun ho ...... Geet ......

Geet - na......hi......n

Maan gets up & pulls Geet towards him & now keeps his both hands on Geet's shoulders ......

Maan - tum abhi bhi kaamp rahi ho Geet ...... aur ...... tumhari dil ki dadkhanein tez kyun ho rahin hain ...... bolo ...... jawab do......

Geet - na ......hi ..... n ..... ho ...... ra ....... haa ..... hain ......

Now maan pulling Geet close to him ......

Geet trying 2 free herself from Maan ......

Maan -  accha ...... Tumhari dil ki dadh khanein mujhe sunayi de rahi hain Geet ......main sun saktha hun ...... main mehsoos kar sakhtha hun Geet ...... jab bhi main tumhe chutha hun tumhe kuch nahin hota hain Geet ......batao ...... abhi bhi kuch bhi nahin ho raha hain tumhe ...... bolo Geet jawab do ......

Geet - na ...... hi .... n ...... ho ...... taa .. ......

Geet still trying 2 free herself but Maan got a gud grip of her & She's trying 2 build up courage & says --- "ai ...... sa ...... ku ...... ch ....... na ...... hi ............ ha ...... in ...... Si ...... rr ......

Maan - Tum mere aankhon main dekh kar kyun nahin bol rahin ho Geet ...... kahin aur math dekhna Geet Meri aankhon main dekho ......

Maan - Please Geet kuch bolo ...... Tumhara aise chup rehna main bardasht nahin kar sakhtha  ....... Geet ......

Geet eyes started 2 fill with tears ...... she is controlling her self in vain ......

Maan still holding her & talking 2 her - Jab bhi main tumhe paas letha hun tumhe aisa nahin lagtha tum meri baahon main kho jau ......

Geet - na ...... hi ............. lag ...... taa ........

Maan  --  Tumhe malum hain Geet ...... main yeh chahtha hun ki tum hamesha kae liye mere paas ...... mere bahom main ...... meri zindagi main raho ...... Mujhe tum chahiye Geet ...... I NEED U ...... main tumse pyaar kart ha hun Geet ......tumhare bina main jee nahin sakhtha ...... Main tumse shaadi karna chahtha hun Geet ......

That's it maan never thought he would propose 2 anyone like that ...... that 2 in a dhaba......

Geet  as soon as she heard what maan said could not control her tears & started crying & pulled herself away from Maan & ran away from there .......even before Maan could understand what was happening ......

Maan was standing over there all by him self ......

 will B posting the next update very soon ........

 



Edited by dewdropred - 19 August 2010 at 10:26pm

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Posted: 19 August 2010 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
awesome!!! looking forward to the next update!!

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Posted: 19 August 2010 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!! wow maan proposed to geet!! Hope now geet will tell him about her past...pls cont.soon

Edited by kooliio - 19 August 2010 at 7:24pm

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Posted: 19 August 2010 at 7:37pm | IP Logged
loved it....


wat a confession!!!!

update sooN!!!!

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Posted: 19 August 2010 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
amazing.. luved maan's style of proposing.... guess geet would tell hima bt her past.. do continue soon

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Posted: 19 August 2010 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
oh wow what passionate confession
too good fiction parts
do continue dear
bye sumi
do add me in the PM list.
bye sumi

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