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wow thats Lovely Dear
pls continue soon

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Part 4:

 

Maan 2 himself'...."aaj kisi bhi haalat main Geet sae bulwa kae hi rahungaa ki wo mujhse pyar karti hain...aur aaj wo mujhse aur is dhabe sae aise baag bhi nahin sakti jaise wo roz mujhse se baag rahin hain meri puri baath katam hone se pehle hi.....agar main use abhi ghar le jaata tho wo mere haath main nahin aathi....Outhouse office main ya ghar main tho wo mere paas aathi nahin hain aur aaj kal mujhse teek sae baat bhi nahin kar rahin hain jab dekho tab mujhe avoid kar rahi hain...aisi haalat main mere paas aur koi rastha nahin bachtha ki main Geet ko idhar le ke aao...dinner ke bahane'"

 

Geet 2 herself ..."Yeh Maan sir mujhe idhar kyun leke aye... dinner ke liye to hum ghar bhi jaa sakhte hain....hain na...to idhar kyun'"

 

Maan enters their cottage & sees that it is decorated as he told them...White & Yellow Rose Petals on the whole floor of the cottage, unlit candles in the candle stand on the table & with Red Roses in the Flower Vase & a very dimly lit cottage which has half solid wall & 1/2 grill so that visitors can enjoy the beauty of the out side nature....Geet soon follows him inside the cottage...

As Geet entered the cottage she is totally surprised by the look of it...she never expected that the cottage would be decorated in such a way...Geet's tension is increasing but she is trying 2 B normal in front of Maan...not 2 show her feelings or uneasiness..

As usual Maan is behaving in a Gentleman way & pulls out the chair 4 Geet but our Geet goes & sits in the opposite chair & starts looking out of the Grill... Maan sits in the chair he pulled out...Geet avoids looking into Maan's eyes...Maan is just looking at her & admiring her beauty then suddenly...Waiter enters the cottage & then he lights the candle & asks them what they would like 2 order...Geet does not answer...

Maan..."Geet order do"

Geet does not answer his question...she is deeply thinking abt some thing.

Maan again now...loudly.. "Geet order do...waiter wait kar raha hain..."

Geet comes back 2 her senses & says that "aap hi order de do..."

Maan remembers what she ordered last time in the Dhaba & orders the same items & tells the waiter very softly so that Geet cannot hear him to not 2 come that early & take his own sweet time...Waiter nods his head & leaves....

Maan is thinking in his mind how 2 start the topic....

Will B posting next update very soon..



Edited by dewdropred - 16 August 2010 at 11:57pm

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Thanx for such a Lovely update Dear
pls continue soonSmile

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
wow wonderful updates.. maan planning a romantic dinner.. thts so cute.. hope she confesses.... do continue soon n thanx a lot for the pm..

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Lovely
Waiting for the next part!

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great update

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hey lovely update..

thnx 4 the pm

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