FF-Maan's confession&Geet's revelation-53last part - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago

i loved!!!!!! really cute!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3:
 

Maan & Geet are at the restaurant & R waiting 4 the girl 2 come….They waited for 30 min but the girl didn't turn up…As we know tht Maan already changed the meeting time so that he can spend some time with Geet & make her confess….but does not know that Geet is tough nut 2 crack & is not going 2 confess that easily….Geet is neither talking 2 him nor looking at him….she is trying 2 avoid being with Maan & is looking some where else thinking 2 herself how 2 get out of this place ASAP…Maan also wants 2 leave the place now because he doesn't want 2 meet the girl & is thinking 2 himself what if the girl comes early…we both have 2 leave now….

 

Maan – "Geet chalo hum chalthe hain bahut intezaar kar liye…jis insaan ko waqt ka kadar nahin hain us insaan ke liye Maan Singh Khurana kabhi intezaar nahin karta…jab ki usko malum hain ki log Maan Singh Khurana ko dekh kar apne gadi set karthe hain….She is not a Perfect Bride 4 me…let's Go Geet"

 

Geet does not understand what 2 do now… just before this she wanted 2 leave…but now she's thinking what to do whether 2 wait 4 the girl or 2 leave…she tries 2 convince Maan but...Maan does not listen 2 her....

 
"humara  Maan  ithna aasani se baath todi maanega…bolo....nahin naa…so…"

 

Maan cannot wait any longer….before Geet says anything he grabs her hand & walks out of the restaurant in a hurry…

 

Maan 2 himself "Geet ko restaurant se baahar tho leke aagaya main…ab ise main udhar kaise le jau"….thinking about an excuse 2take her some where….

 

Geet – Sir main aap se ek baat kahun…aap ko gussa tho nahin ayega naa….

 

Maan – Kya hain Geet.

 

Geet – Wo…sir…mujhe….main… main....

 

Maan – kuch bologi ki bakri ki tarah main main karogee…

 

Geet – Sir mujhe bahut bukh lagi hain….aur maine aaj lunch bhi teek se nahin kiya hain…to main yeh keh rahi thi ki….

 

Maan thought 2 himself "Thank God U answered my prayers so soon"

 

Maan – Teek hain main ek jagah jantha hun jo tumhe bahut pasand ayegaa…main tumhe udhar le jaatha hun…

 

Maan takes Geet to a DHABA ….not the same 1 what they visited previously….that was so unhygienic…So Maan searched a Dhaba which was sophisticated as well as hygienic & which serves the same Desi Food for Our Desi food Lovers….

 

Geet is totally surprised 2 C that Maan has actually taken her 2 a dhaba…Geet follows Maan....

 

Maan entered the dhaba…As soon as he entered the dhaba the fresh fragrance of Night Queen flowers took his breath away…his heart & mind were feeling happy & were filled with feelings of Love & warmth….

 

A waiter comes close 2 Maan & tells him something & points out 2 a small hut which is far away from all the remaining huts…

 

Geet enters the dhaba & is surprised to C that this Dhaba is looking so different….She too feels the fragrance of Night Queen but does not react that much…She notices that there were small small huts / cottages which were dimly lit for customers so that they can have their own privacy…

 

Maan tells Geet that their cottage is far away over there & points 2 the hut & asks her to follow him.....
 
Will be posting the next part very soon....
Posted: 13 years ago
some of the dialogues i wrote for dhaba scene came in 2day's episode....will try 2 modify my script if possible...
Posted: 13 years ago
wow this is cute...pm me when you update 😊
Posted: 13 years ago
wow thats Lovely Dear
pls continue soon
Posted: 13 years ago

Part 4:

 

Maan 2 himself'...."aaj kisi bhi haalat main Geet sae bulwa kae hi rahungaa ki wo mujhse pyar karti hain...aur aaj wo mujhse aur is dhabe sae aise baag bhi nahin sakti jaise wo roz mujhse se baag rahin hain meri puri baath katam hone se pehle hi.....agar main use abhi ghar le jaata tho wo mere haath main nahin aathi....Outhouse office main ya ghar main tho wo mere paas aathi nahin hain aur aaj kal mujhse teek sae baat bhi nahin kar rahin hain jab dekho tab mujhe avoid kar rahi hain...aisi haalat main mere paas aur koi rastha nahin bachtha ki main Geet ko idhar le ke aao...dinner ke bahane'"

 

Geet 2 herself ..."Yeh Maan sir mujhe idhar kyun leke aye... dinner ke liye to hum ghar bhi jaa sakhte hain....hain na...to idhar kyun'"

 

Maan enters their cottage & sees that it is decorated as he told them...White & Yellow Rose Petals on the whole floor of the cottage, unlit candles in the candle stand on the table & with Red Roses in the Flower Vase & a very dimly lit cottage which has half solid wall & 1/2 grill so that visitors can enjoy the beauty of the out side nature....Geet soon follows him inside the cottage...

As Geet entered the cottage she is totally surprised by the look of it...she never expected that the cottage would be decorated in such a way...Geet's tension is increasing but she is trying 2 B normal in front of Maan...not 2 show her feelings or uneasiness..

As usual Maan is behaving in a Gentleman way & pulls out the chair 4 Geet but our Geet goes & sits in the opposite chair & starts looking out of the Grill... Maan sits in the chair he pulled out...Geet avoids looking into Maan's eyes...Maan is just looking at her & admiring her beauty then suddenly...Waiter enters the cottage & then he lights the candle & asks them what they would like 2 order...Geet does not answer...

Maan..."Geet order do"

Geet does not answer his question...she is deeply thinking abt some thing.

Maan again now...loudly.. "Geet order do...waiter wait kar raha hain..."

Geet comes back 2 her senses & says that "aap hi order de do..."

Maan remembers what she ordered last time in the Dhaba & orders the same items & tells the waiter very softly so that Geet cannot hear him to not 2 come that early & take his own sweet time...Waiter nods his head & leaves....

Maan is thinking in his mind how 2 start the topic....

Will B posting next update very soon..

Edited by dewdropred - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for such a Lovely update Dear
pls continue soon😊
Posted: 13 years ago
wow wonderful updates.. maan planning a romantic dinner.. thts so cute.. hope she confesses.... do continue soon n thanx a lot for the pm..
Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely
Waiting for the next part!
Posted: 13 years ago
hey lovely update..

thnx 4 the pm

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