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Posted: 15 August 2010 at 3:00pm | IP Logged

Dear friends this is my 1st FF .Please do read & reply press the like button if U like my post....Smile.

FF on  Maan's confession & Geet's revelation.

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Keeping the ongoing track in mind I wrote this FF.
 

The story progresses from my point of view after dadima asks geet to search for a suitable bride for maan....

I have incorporated some scenes from the show ... these are the scenes ... which were taken from the show ....before geet starts searching for maan's bride... these scenes will be used as memories of geet & maan for future updates as to how their feelings for each other have blossemed in to unconditional,undying love for each other...

1)kurban hua...

2)geet bringing flowers for maan...

3)Dhaba scene...

4)launch party scene...

5)geet shifting to out house & the fight followed after that...

6)darga scene ...

7)maan bringing white rose for geet ....

8)rasika rathod insulting geet ...

9)jhumka scene ...

10)Maan spoting geet decked up in dadima's jewelry ...
 
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Part 1: page 1
Part 2 : page 1 -- Maaneet in kitchen ...
 
Part 3 : page 2 -- maaneet in restaurant .....
Part 4 : page 3 --Maaneet Dinner date in a dhaba ...
Part 5 : page 4--Maaneet Dinner date in a dhaba ...contd ...
 
 
 Part 6 : page 5--Maaneet Dinner date in a dhaba ...contd ...
 Part 7 : page 6 -  Maan's confession .....
  
 
Part 8 : page 7 ---Maan in the dhaba ...
Part 9 : page 8 ---Maan trying to get his ans....
 
 
Part 10 : page 10 - Geet's revelation ....
  
 
Part 11 : Page 12 - Maan's realisation....
  
 
Part 12 : Page 14 -- Maan's 2nd Proposal....
  
 
Part 13 : Page 15 -Maaneet driving back to home ...
  
 
Part 14 : Page 17 --Maaneet moments. ....
  
 
Part 15 : Page 18 --Maaneet 2 the hospital ....
  
 
Part 16 : Page 22 --Maaneet moments. ....
  
 
Part 17 : Page 24 --Maaneet moments. ....
  
 
Part 18 : page 27  --Maaneet meeting dadima...
  
 
Part 19 : page 30 -- Maaneet meeting dadima...contd...
Part 20 : page 33 - Maaneet moments & dadima & panditji ...
Part 21 : page 36 -Maaneet moments & maan dev conversation ...
Part 22 : page 39 - maan's revelation ....
  
 
Part 23 : page 43 Maaneet moments ....
  
 
Part 24 : page 48 Maaneet in dadima's room ....
  
 
Part 25 : page 51 Maaneet adi & Pinky ....
  
 
Part 26 : page 55 - Maaneet  dream seq . & Pinky ....
  
 
Part 27 : page 58 - Maaneet  phone conversation & Pinky ....
  
 
Part 28 : page 64 - engagement ceremony part1 ....
  
 
Part 29 : page 66 - engagement ceremony part2 ....
  
 
Part 30 : page 72 - engagement ceremony part3 & maaneet moments & geet's confession....
  
 
Part 31 : page 76 - maaneet romance ...
  
 
Part 32 : page 76 - maaneet wedding...
  
 
Part 33 : page 80 - maaneet wedding night...
  
 
Part 34 : page 83 - next day morning ...
  
 
Part 35 : page 88 - Geet's Muh Dikhayi..
  
 
Part 36 : page 92 - maaneet moments geet cooking for maan...
  
 
Part 37 : page 97 - maaneet to darga
  
 
Part 38 : page 101 - Geet's face off with Dev & NT
  
 
Part 39 : page 105 - maaneet moments ...
  
 
Part 40 : page 108 - vicky's entry ....
  
 
Part 43 : page 117 -maaneet moments & vijji moments ... 
  
 
 
Part 44 & 45 : page 122 - geet's godhbarai / geet's baby shower
  
 
Part 46 : page 126 - maaneet moments....
  
 
 
Part 47 & 48 : page 131 -
  
 
Part 49 & 50 : page 136 - why sameera cheated maan ....
  
 
 
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Part 1: 
 
Geet & Maan interviewed most of the girls 4 Maan's contract engagement but Maan was rejecting every one on 1 pretext or the other.
 
It was just 2 more days to Friday they decided to meet the last candidate of the day today evening & Maan asked Geet to call the girl right now & fix meeting with her in the restaurant at 6:00 P.M. & he asked Geet to accompany him....
 
But Geet was not willing to go with him & was thinking in her mind that...
 
geet - "yeh sir bhi naa kuch bhi tho nahin samajhte main inke saath kaise jaa sakti hun mujhe inko kisi aur ladki  ke saath apni shaadi ke baare main baath karte hua dekhna aur sunna bilkul acha nahin lagta bhale hi wo contract engagement ho...ab tak to chai ke bahane ya coffe ke bahane idhar kamre main se chali gayi thi jab yeh ladkiyon se baath kar rahe the...aur main aisi jathi hun ki nahin yehan se ladki  gayab..yeh kya ho raha hain babaji...Yeh sir ke dimaag main kya chaltha rahtha hain kuch patahi  nahin chaltha....babaji ab aap hi batao main kya karun..."

Maan -- Geet  Geet  kya kar rahi ho tum ne suna nahin maine kya kaha tum bhi mere saath chal rahi ho...samjhi tum...

Geet ---Par Sir main nahin ana chathi

Maan - maine tumara opinion nahin pucha hain maine tumse kaha hain ki tum mere saath chal rahi ho to chal rahi ho...that's it & tum ne dadima se promise ki thi naa ki mere liye ladki dundogi to wo promise todogi kya...Ab jao aur us ladki ko call kar ke meeting fix karo....

As per Maan's orders Geet called the girl & fixed the meeting at 6:00 P.M. As soon as she hangs the phone Maan comes near her & asks her to prepare some coffee for him & reminds her that this time his coffee should be very very hot.

Geet leaves from there to the kitchen as soon as Geet leaves the room Maan redials & calls the same Girl & changes the time of the meeting & he then follows Geet in to the kitchen....

Geet does not notice that Maan has already entered the room she is so busy talking to herself in the kitchen...

Geet 2 herself - "Inko garam coffee chahiye naa dungi ithna garam coffe dungi ki inka Jubaan hi jal jaayega...hamesha jali kati bathein sunaathe rehte hain na mujhe...hain na...then...nahin Geet tu Sir ke bare main aise kaise soch sakthi hain unhone kitni baar tumhare madad ki hain tumhare liye kya kuch nahin kiya yahan tak ki Ms.Rathore ke saath project bhi chod di tumhare liye...."
 
Now her voice is reducing when she is thinking about Maan & what all he did for her in the past. She gets all the flash backs of the times where Maan either saved or inspired her now she is thinking about her feelings for him the respect she has for him has increased in the past few days than what she had before but still she calls him DD but pyar se...
  
Now Geet very softly 2 herself...
 
geet - "Agar unko takleef ya dard hua to wohi takleef aur dard mujhe bhi hothi  hain ....hain naa....to main kaise unko dard de sakti hun main aisa nahin kar sakthi...isliye to main...."
 
Now Geet is not talking to herself but is thinking in her mind that....
 
geet -  "isliye toh main unse door jaanaa chahti hun taaki unko baad main meri vajah se dukh yah takleef na ho.... "
 
Saying this Geet turns around & to her surprise sees that Maan is Standing in front of her  & she puts her hand on her mouth. She is scared that Maan might have heard when she was talking 2 herself.
 
I will be posting the next update in a short while....Thank You very much 4 liking this FFBig smile...
 
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Edited by dewdropred - 18 March 2011 at 1:41pm

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awesome start!! loved it!! looking forward to the next update!!

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omg that was awesome
cant wait to see read da nxt update
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Hey really good start...please post the rest soon :)

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that was sweet!!

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Part 2
 
 

Maan--- Geet abhi abhi tum kya bol rahi thi ...

Geet -- kya sir...kuch nahin.....Kuch bhi tho nahin sir..

Maan --Geet maine sab kuch sunliya hain....mujhse kuch math chupana...

Geet --- sab kuch sunliya...kya sunliya sir aapne...

Maan starts coming close 2 Geet step by step...as usual Geet is going back & gets stuck to the counter....in the meanwhile their conversation is still on...

Maan -- wohi jo tum abhi abhi apne aap se baath kar rahi thi...

Geet 2 herself ...."Kya sir ne meri puri baath sun li???kya main ithni unchi awaz main baath kar rahi thi ki unko sab sunayi de dyi hain...hey babaji main kya karun kya bolu unko..."

Geet -- main...sir....kuch bhi to nahin baath kar rahi thi main bas aapke liye garam coffee leke aa rahi thi...

Maan -- Jooth math bolo Geet maine sunliya hain ki tum mera jubaan jalane ki soch rahi thi Phir uske baad kya bol rahi thi ... ki...takleef... dard...???

Geet--- Nahin sir aap ne teek se suna nahin main yeh bol rahi thi ki coffee bahut garam hain aisi garam coffee peene se aapki jubaan naa jal jaaye or aapko takleef naa ho jaye....

Maan -- Geet tum jhooth math bolo tumne baath aisi nahin kahin hain...tum baath ko badal rahi ho...aur yeh baath main samajh gaya hun....tumhari chehra aur ankhen kabhi mujhse jhooth nahin bol sakhti hain aur mujhe aisa lag raha hain ki tum mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho Geet...kya baat chupa rahi ho mujse Geet....jawab do...mujhe jawab chahiye...

Maan cornered Geet now & is lost in her eyes as usual & their Mahi music starts in the Back ground...

Nowadays Maan is not leaving any chance if he can get close 2 Geet he is on full swing & 2 make Geet confess he is ready 2 come toooo close 2 her even if there is no space in B/w them...he really does not care anymore as he does not have much time he needs to make Geet confess now & right now they both R so close 2 each other that their noses R like almost touching each other...thn suddenly Geet shouts Dadima...

Maan comes out Geet Trance & he looks behind sheepishly but to his dismay Dadima is actually not there....

Maan shouts --- "Geet"

Geet---Haan sir ...main bol rahi thi dadi maa ke liye ladki dundni thi naa...

Maan -- (with his usual expression when he says kya )"Kya"

Geet --Haan sir humme abi restaurtant jaana padega naa ladki ko dekhne ke liye...

Maan --- haa chalo we R getting late...tum tayyar ho jaao main bhi tayyar ho kar aata hun....main bahar tumhare liye wait karunga...come Soon...



Edited by dewdropred - 18 August 2010 at 10:32pm

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so cute hey continue soon

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awsum!!!!


update sooN!!!

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