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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahha๐Ÿ˜Š... you allways make me smile with ur updates. ๐Ÿ‘... xclinttttโค๏ธ
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG...๐Ÿ˜ฒ..Such an amazing & cute parts...๐Ÿ˜..lost in Maaneet land while reading ot & actually was imagining the situations...โ˜บ๏ธ..U R 2 Good..๐Ÿ‘...Pls.add my name also in ur PM List.......๐Ÿ˜Š....U Rocks...โญ๏ธ..
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Coolsheetal


OMG...๐Ÿ˜ฒ..Such an amazing & cute parts...๐Ÿ˜..lost in Maaneet land while reading ot & actually was imagining the situations...โ˜บ๏ธ..U R 2 Good..๐Ÿ‘...Pls.add my name also in ur PM List.......๐Ÿ˜Š....U Rocks...โญ๏ธ..


hey thanks a lot
and yup i added u to pm list
i will update next part soon
as possible ๐Ÿ˜›
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by t_skit


hahahha๐Ÿ˜Š... you allways make me smile with ur updates. ๐Ÿ‘... xclinttttโค๏ธ


THANK YOU sooooooo much
feels good that u like them
๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by wiinie_pooh




THANK YOU sooooooo much
feels good that u like them
๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜Š
 
 
โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ... allwaysssEmbarrassed ๐Ÿ˜†
 
Posted: 13 years ago
Neeru meri jaan!!

SOrry sorry..yeh update abhi padha..

maafi pleej!!

It was soo cute!!

Aww..i love it..the way you're showing their "paagalpan process" it's amazing!!

continue continue!!

love love
Posted: 13 years ago
@ geet.a

Thanks princy ๐Ÿ˜‰

princy of fan fictions
my fav GEET
author of mind blowing
LIFETIME GRATITUDE ๐Ÿค—
ur update rocked for the past two parts
i always read them atleast twice
really cant get over them ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Edited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
PART- 6



YEH LADKI SACH MAI.... SACH MAI MUJHE PAAGAL KARDEGI...

saying this Maan springs into his bed and finally tried sleeping
in peace for sometime......... ๐Ÿฅฑ

The next Day our Dadi is back into action, She is once again set with
finding Dulhan for Maan, just to let him admit he's in love and with ......
Well anyways, she knew with whom... ๐Ÿ˜‰

[ But Still she was DADI... dadi of MAAN SINGH KHURANA...
Maan ki DADI hona...koi aisi waisi baat hai kya? she needed to prove
that she was even more stubborn...]

thinking all this dadi went to see Maan, she wanted to tease him ๐Ÿ˜‰

but to her surprise, Maan... MAAN SINGH KHURANA was still sleeping ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
she thought now is the time when she can come up with her ideas, before
anyone can interfere...., and she went to outhouse...
There Geet was all set, she was in a hurry and was thinking...
actually saying all this...
GEET : Geet jaldi kar warna aaj shamat ajaegi.... Kal ke baad tho Maan sir
           tumhe kabhi bhi maaf nahi karenge... ๐Ÿ˜• [ she was soooo worried ]
           ek tho unki file nahi di, aur upar se unka apple bhi khaliya???
           itne sir phirey bhi koi ho saktey hai kya??? pata nahi wo ab tak kyu nahi aye...
           [biting her nails in a tensed voice she said]
           Fir se.... [ in trembling voice almost not heard by the one who even stood beside her ]
           kahi fir se naukri se tho nahi nikaal diye wo mujhe?????
           BABAJIIII........ [ joined her hands together ..... and lifted her face as if she saw someone
                                    up in the air ]

As if to answer her prayers , there came a voice...

DADI : Aisi tho naubat hi nahi aayegi... Geet.., aapko naukri se nikaal kaun sakte hai?
           jab aap humare liye naukri kartey hai... Aapke Maan sir hongey aapke boss
           par aap tho humarey liye kaam kartey hai na... tho chinta mat kijiye,
           aapka koi kuch bhi nahi bigaad payenge.....
                                                                           [Geet gives a sigh of relief ...]
           Tho ab kuch ladkiya doondhe ??? aapke .... MAAN SIR..... ke liye [dadi said teasingly]

GEET : Jee Dadi.... hum abhi file laatey hai...
          [ she goes to her room and while searching for file she thinks ]
          ae le..... idhar kuwa tho udhar khaat.... [picks the file]
          Ladki doondhne se tho, Maan sir ki chaar baatein sun na hai, Hai na.....
          Ab koi Dadi ko kaisey bataye??? ki unke potey ko pari chahiye...!!!
          asmaan se utre so PARI....!!!! Baki sab ko tho wo reject kar chuke hai... ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

then, soon she shows DADI all the girls actually GEET AND AADI shortlisted
and worriedly said
GEET : DADI.... par .... wo ..... MAAN sir....
DADI : ha bete MAAN sir kya???? boliye...
GEET : Unhone tho kisi ko nahi choda....Sabko reject kardiya
            [DHUSHTTT...DAANAV..   ๐Ÿ˜ก she says angrily]
DADI : KYAAAAA???????????
           Itney sarey ladkiyo mai se MAAN ko koi bhi pasand nahi ayi????
           yeh nahi ho sakta.....
    
saying this they discuss in detail about each girl,
and the reason for her getting rejected...

DADI : geet bete yeh ladki mai kya burai hai??? ....? humey tho yeh teek lagti hai
GEET : par wo tho Maan sir hai maam,aur yeh ...???lambey baal wali...unhe lambey baal nahi pasand
[cant handle her anger]
DADI : aur yeh ladki?, iske tho baal lambey nahi???
GEET : nahi Dadi... inki height.... sir se do inch kam hai....[ says in sad and irritated voice]
DDAI :aur yeh???
GEET : yeh wali... black cofee nahi peeti...
[ae le yeh bhi koi wajay hai ladki reject karney ki??? thinks aloud, ..... now grown extremely impatient ]

DADI : aur yyeh aakhri hai... [ now exhausted by the wierd reasons Maan gave ]

GEET : DADI..................... [geet's face flashed like a star]
DADI : kya hua GEET??? aap achanak khush kyu hai????
GEET : DADI .... MAAN sir ne iske barey mai kuch nahi kaha
           aur dekhiye na ismai tho wo saari khubiya hai,
           MAAN sir ke hisaab sai.... CHOTEY BAALO WAALI,MUMBAI KI HAI,
           POSH HAI, MODERN BHI..... DADI ab aur nahi ....
           hum isey bulaatey hai interview ke liye... aapka kya
           khayaal hai?
DADI : ha geet, ab ek pal bhi mat ruklhna, .... jaldi jayiye
           hum tho unke aatey hi mangni karatey hai....[said all this in one breath]

PARI KI ENTRY KAL HOGI....... CHALEGA ????????
please do comment and let me know if its good or bad ๐Ÿ˜•
            
       




___ HAVE A MAST WEEKENDEdited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
aww..my jaan!!

PAri ki entry..hmm...zaada leverage nahi milegi i hope use?

I loved the reasons you gave..really sweet and so MSK!!

Ab main mehendi lagwane jaa rahi hoon GK..
Catch you later!

Posted: 13 years ago
Hope to read more...update soon yaar

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