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SahSah IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 September 2010 at 6:45am | IP Logged
hey....that was awesome.....totally rocking...
maan and geet are awesome and so adorable...
it is sad....i loved pari for doing this...
she is sweetheart....
i hope maaneet get together fast
keep writing

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wiinie_pooh Senior Member

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Posted: 17 September 2010 at 7:07am | IP Logged

OYE, Confused

Yeh kya yaar???

saarey log mamma ke side ho???

mere saath koi nahi????

Too bad.... Cry Confused Unhappy

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wiinie_pooh Senior Member

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Posted: 17 September 2010 at 10:57am | IP Logged


MAAN : kya pari ?? BOLO...

PARI : ki wo... aapke bina nahi jee sakthi...

saying this she ended the call and Maan stood in silence....
looking at the window... Dev entered the room and came near to

But when he saw Maan who was staring at stars without even
single blink....and having tears settled in his eyes,He thought
he was the only reason due to which Maan faced the barrenness
in his life,and by now he turned back thinking...

DEV : Maine Geet ke saath kitnaa buraa kiya ...?
        Aur bro ki vishwaas ko hameshaa thod diya...
        nahi.. Ab mai bro se tabhi milungaa jab mai
        Geet se maafi paane mai kaamiyaab hojaunga...
        Haan... yahi sahi hai...

He stepped back slowly being keen not to make any disturbance....
and walked away...He went out for some time and returned to
Khurana Mansion... He enterred his room to place the divorce papers
on the table which he just then prepared meeting a lawyer... took his bag
and started to leave to search Geet from nowhere...

But just then, The phone started ringing in the living room,and as was the
situation very difficult to overcome, no one was in a position to attend the call...
so he took the call and before he said hello, he heard the other person saying

____ : Mr. khurana.. Miss Geet ka pata Chal chukaa hain... wo Mumbai
          Main hai kisi orphanage main... SALAAM BALAK.. aur...

DEV : hello.... inspector Pandey..???

Inspector : hello... hello....

The phone was disconnected,Dev tried to contact many times
from that moment but it said ... Unreachable.......

Yeh Hosla Kaise Juke,
Yeh Aarzoo Kaise Ruke

Manzil Muskil to kya,
Dhundla Sahil to kya,
Tanha Ye Dil to Kya
Ho Hooo

DEV felt disheartened,but calmed himself thinking atleast he could
know where Geet stayed now... and it would be easy to reach her,
for a moment he felt like The god almighty had shown him a way to
correct his mistakes which he commited till date....and started off
with his journey of repentance .......

Raah Pe Kante Bikhre agar,
Uspe to phir bhi chalna hi hai,

Geet started moving back to the orphanage holding Sonia's hand in her's....
she never stopped thinking about her past life, and the way life always gifted
her the bitter experiences, she was tilting but trying to manage to walk
for the reason that Sonia was with her

Saam Chhupale Suraj magar,
Raat ko ek din Dhalana hi hai,

Maan was still looking at skies and thinking... that He would Get his Geet back
once Dev confronts her and confess his mistakes...

Rut ye tal jayegi,
Himmat rang layegi,
Subha phir aayegi

He said to himself, he would give her all the happiness, ... each moment that
Life grabbed from Geet, and would love her soo much that she will never again
have to face the life alone as she was facing at the very moment...

Yeh Hosla Kaise Juke,
Yeh Aarzoo Kaise Ruke

while,After putting down the phone, Pari could no longer compose herself
and drove right away to Dharga ...

Hogi hame to rehmat ada,
Dhup kategi saaye tale,
Apni khuda se hai ye Dua,
Manzil lagale humko gale

all the way she kept thinking, how caring Geet was towards her children
whom even their own parents have abondoned and society had never
looked for.... Her heart felt after thinking how rude life had been for
such a lovable girl,which snatched all the happiness and every
everlasting emotion which every person would love to experience .....

Zurrat so baar rahe,
Uncha Ikraar rahe,
Zinda har pyar rahe

Yeh Hosla Kaise Juke,
Yeh Aarzoo Kaise Ruke

She knelt in prayer.... praying the powerful divinity to unite the
souls of love soon,so as to bring back the smiles which they left
miles behind themselves....she wept in silence.... slowly tried and
came back to her real self and returned back to home ..............
Maan called up Pari and told her about Dev reaching to her place
to get Geet's forgiveness....and also asked her to eye on him
so that he would not hurt Geet sooo much....and Pari gave her
acceptance in a supporting voice... they prayed for all to go well
and ended the converstation .....

The night went on... while Pari still kept feeling the pain,Maan never
felt asleep after knowing all the pain his love was going through,
he felt dejected when his mind gave a thought about how Geet
was fighting the worst times of her life and he is unable to stand
by her to lend his support,Dev.... reached Mumbai taking a flight
and started his search to reach Geet.....

It seemed to be longest of the nights either of them had gone through,
till that very moment.....four of them wished for a bright day ahead
which would help them in overcoming their misery .....

Finally a sun raised with sparking brightness,Dev reached SALAAM BALAK
Geet was about to go to the class which she had to deal then,.....

they came across each other,Dev stood still... to look how lean and
weak Geet turned to be... with her eyes swollen as she cried days
together and seemed as if she was crying all the way even now, in
her deeper souls,she was walking but was not steady, she was listening
but was not attentive,she was speaking but she never knew what she said...

Looking Geet this way made Dev curse himself for his deeds,
Pari somehow reached the place in time and managed to hide herself
and watched in silence having her fingers crossed...

DEV gathered the courage to confront, he cleared his throat and called out...

DEV : GEET ..........

Geet who was slowly moving forward suddenly stopped listening
her name in a familiar voice, it took her more than a moment to
find out it was none other than DEV himself.....she turned back
reluctantly, and was shocked to see....

DEV : GEET .....

He again called and headed towards her....
and was about to say, when Geet shouted
in a pitch of her voice....

GEET : kyu aaye ho tum yahaan????
           ab kya baaki reh gaya hai DEV ????
she raised her hand to slap him but then she thought about the children
who were circling around and stopped herself from slapping DEV ....

DEV : Geet main jaanta hoon ki main tumhaara gunegaar hoon...
          main tumsey maafi maangney aaya hoon apney gunaaho ke liye..
          Main jaantaa hoon maine jo kiya hain wo maaf karne laayak nahi...
          par ho sakey tho mujhe maaf kardo... Geet ... please... I AM SORRY....

the words "I AM SORRY" reminded Geet about the day when Maan asked her sorry,
and she started to burst out by now....

GEET : tumney keh diya jo kehna tha????
           ab jao... MERE SAAMNE KABHI MAT AANA ...

DEV : Par Geet mai tho...

GEET : bas karo Dev... Ab aur nahi...

GEET : Main jab bhi apni zindagi nayi tarah se shuru karne waali hoti hoon
           tho mera ateet ne hamesha mujhe rokh liya hain... mujhse har wo khushi
           cheenli hain... jise har insaan mehsoos karna chaahta hain...

Dev stood in silence hanging his head down....

GEET : mujhse mera parivaar cheen liya... ek dost cheen liya....
           Aur... mere....

DEV : Maan.... Maan ko cheen liya hain na mainey....
          Jissey tum pyaar karti ho?

Geet got a blow, she wondered how Dev knew about Maan
and she asked him, as she was barely able to speak...

GEET : Tumhey kaisey pata????

DEV : pehle tum waada karo ke...

GEET : wadaa?? aur tumse??? tumney soch bhi kaisey liya Dev ???
           ke ab hum tumaarey koi bhi baat maanengey???

DEV : Geet main jaanta hoon ki mai barosey ke laayak nahi hoon....
        par yeh ek baar meri poori baat sunlo Geet....

Geet dint have enough strength to bounce back, her health was preventing her
from aggression,she stood quite....and Dev explained about each and every detail...
how NAintara and himself planned to marry her,to repay the loans,and stated the fact
that Maan was not involved in the whole scenario and lastly said that
and also explained that he confessed to Maan about the Sin's he did and even told
that Maan said he would never forgive him,and also the fact that Maan loved Geet
soooo much That he would take care of her like a princess....
He said about the divorce papers he signed for NAINTARA and that he was
leaving to Canada to lead his own and truthful life all alone as to punish himself...

All the time Geet silently heard what DEV told her... she collapsed and fell on the ground...
Pari came running from behind.... she took her to the hospital, treated her and took
immense care...As soon as Geet opened her eyes... She saw DEV still kneeling and
joining his hands waiting for her to forgive....she wanted to end it forever and said
she forgive him and also said that she never ever wanted to see his face in the
coming days,to which he agreed and wishing her good life he left without turning back.....

Oye dosto.... Hug



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.sireesha. Goldie

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Posted: 17 September 2010 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Thats Amazing DearClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
Thats a very Touching Part
Loved it so much
Loved each and every single line
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soon

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 September 2010 at 11:48am | IP Logged
wiinie_pooh Senior Member

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Posted: 17 September 2010 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shah10




felicitysmoak. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 17 September 2010 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved it
can't wait for them to meet again
wonder how geet is going to react
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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maanmishti Goldie

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Posted: 17 September 2010 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
oh my god!!! what an update i cried the whole timeCryCryCryCryCryCry reading this update.....its just terrific,sad update....anyways i hope next maan and geet meet......

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