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Posted: 13 years ago



"Seedhi tareekey se nahi,
ulti dhang se hi sahi Apni mann ki baat,
tum khud maanogi geet
Khud maanogi "


These lines have been awesome

I was longing to write a fiction
but i could never gather the courage to do so
Its the moment when i heard these lines
that i made up my mind to write...

Its just a trial, no expectations at all
please press the like button
if u want me to continue
if u felt it was waste of time
then sorry... πŸ˜•



I will continue the story from the 13th august episode
same as it was left after maan singh khurana determined saying
the above lines... all the charecters are same and the story ...
i mean background is also same as in the show



KAISEY JIYA JAYE ISHQ BINA


~~~~       INDEX           ~~~



PART_1          https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1462227







































                    [ THE WEDDING ]










                      














 

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Posted: 13 years ago
KAISEY JIYA JAYE ISHQ BINA


                                          




[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x85ksuG_dUc&feature=youtube_gdata[/YOUTUBE]
WELL THIS WILL BE MY TITLE SONG... I EDITED SPECIALLY FOR THIS FICTION😊

                                   
Well here is the first attempt




Babaji..... im nervous 😲 πŸ˜•


anyways here we go


PART-1


It was a fine morning,
Geet gathered the courage to got to Khurana mansion
as she had to return the jewellery to dadi,But she was
unable to control her feelings towards Maan

she said to herself "Geet tujhe maan sir se door rehna hoga , aaj se koi galti nahi honi chahiye,samjhi tum?"
Then she visited dadi , spoke to her for a while and felt relaxed
she was happy that the day started peacefully..... 😊

she went back to outhouse
where she saw pinky waiting for her
Geet was surprised to see her as she asked everyone to report at head office
why was pinky in outhouse???? 😲

GEET : pinky tu yahaan?
PINKY : oye geet,kitney dino se hum kahi bahar nahi gaye,chal aaj ghumne chalte hai...
GEET : haaan [geet said as she was bored of her daily routine]
           nahi nahi[out of trance,in trembling voice]
           aaj nahi , aaj bahut kaam hai...
           fir kabhi jaenge,waisey bhi aaj office hai na
PINKY : [says with love in caring voice]
            Geet..... kaam tho roj hi hota hai yaar, par mela....?
            who tho katam hojaegi na   πŸ˜”
GEET : Mela....?? [her tone raised in happiness she loved mela ]
PINKY : Haaan ..... wahi tho...
            aur tujhe pata hai? aaj tho waha food festival bhi hai [excitingly said]
            please yaar mana mat karna πŸ˜•

GEET : par pinky wo kaam???? πŸ˜•
           
PINKY : Haan yaar aur wo DD... who tho kabhi permission nahi denge
            ab kya karey?????
GEET : ek rasta hai.... Humey DD ko manana hoga...tho pehle hum jaldi se kaam katam karlete              
           hain... fir wo kuch nahi keh payenge.... Hain na [sounding like our Beloved geet,playful]
           
planning all this geet and pinky started working pinky left to office

on the other hand Maan singh Khurana was determined to bringout the hidden emotions of geet
He was planning appropriately
..........

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
 neeraja   
please continue dear
its really nice and good


Edited by sravani899 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please continue. I am glad you had Pinky in the first part. I love both her and Adi.

Waiting for the next post.

Polki
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Posted: 13 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sravani899

neeraja

</div>please continue dear
<div>its really nice and good


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thanks dear
ur always there to support me
in my new works
i feel very happy about it
thank you sooooooo much πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahha nice πŸ‘πŸΌ cont.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please continue. I am glad you had Pinky in the first part.. Plz adi in too..
PM me when u update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey kindly add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well written. Do continue. πŸ‘πŸΌ
 
Also plz add me to ur pm list when u decide to continue.