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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
beatiful and real and feeling jealous of geet that mannis their for her.cute one.

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
awww.. dont be... you will find your maan who will do all this for you as well..!! just be on a look out!

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beatiful and real and feeling jealous of geet that mannis their for her.cute one.
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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Nice one Niha ...like the over cautious and protective and of course possessive Maan .....pls continue .... Big smile

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
amazing plzzz continue....


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Posted: 15 August 2010 at 12:01am | IP Logged
As they drive to the office Geet as usual is fidgeting with her dupatta... her body language shows she is awkward and uncomfortable .. Whenever Maan looks at her she smiles, but once maan starts to look ahead, you know there is something playing on her mind.. maan asks her if she is okay.. she nods.. as soon as they are a few meters away from the gate of khurana constructions she asks him to stop the car... Maan does.. she is like... sir.. aap jayiye.. main aati hoon.. Maan is like
M: Geet kya hua? koi problem ho gayi hai kya?
Ge: nahi sir... koi problem nahi hai... aap chaliye... main aati hoon.. thoda kaam hai...
Maan: oh! toh fir main rukta hoon... tum apna kaam poora kar lo...
Geet: nahi sir, mujhe der lag sakta hai.. aur main nahi chahti mere wajah se aap late ho...
Maan: Geet, yeh meri company hai.. yahan main jab chahu tab jaa sakta hoon... mujhe poochne waala yaha koi nahi hai...
Geet: lekin aaj se pehle aap kabhi late hue, aur na hi main chahti hoon ke aaj aisa ho... please sir.. time waste mat kee jiye... please jajiye...
Geet gets off the car.. while Maan is mad at her...
Maan: yeh ladki mujhse kuch chupa rahi hai kya?
He wonders why she has been behaving like this....Geet doesnt wait for maan to start his car but she starts walking ... and Maan slowly follows her car from behind...to his suprise she does nothing as suspected, but walks straight into Khurana constructions and runs inside before Maan can stop her... she has disappears from his sight and maan is mad at her... cos she doesnt know why she has done this...
Maan: agar isey yahi pe aana tha, toh chal ke kyun aayi? yeh ladki sach main pagal hai....
dadi calls him from home and maan's attention gets diverted...
When Geet reaches the office everyone is surprised to see her there-they are all wondering what she is doing there...
voice 1: geet yahan fir se?
voice 2: kitni besharam hai... naukri jaane ke baad fir se aa gayi hai....
voice 3: MK sir ko job bheek main maangne aai hogi...
Geet ignores all this...
Sasha walks there in with tasha following her soon after...
Sash: Miss Hosiarpur... kya hua? MK ne ghar se nikaal diya kya? jo yahan aayi ho? waise tumhare paas aur koi jagah nahi hai kya jaane ki liye... MK ke ghar aur office ko chod ke...
Tasha giggles... " silly, desperate girl"
Geet cant meet their eyes... just then Pinky and Adi land up there...
Adi: Ggeett... hhahahahaha...tum waapis aa gayi... hahahahaah... zaroor ... M.K sir ne tumhe bulaya hoga hai na?
Sasha: shut up Adi...! MK iss gawar ko kyun bulayenge... yeh toh yeh hi ladki....
Just then the lift ka door opens and MSK walks in... just then geet got knows from where gets the guts to talk and she opens her mouth...
Geet: Sasha maam.. mujhe iss job ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... aur na hi Maan sir ki...! aur aap please har baat pe... maan sir ka naam mere saath jodh na band kee jiye....
Maan who has heard the last few lines cant control his anger or emotions...as he shouts ...
Maan: Geet... ! abhi mere cabin main aao...
geet is shocked to see maan and makes an expression as though to tell him she didnt mean what she said that way.. but maan has already walked off into the office.. and geet follows him trying to appease him...
Geet follows Maan is rush that she bumps into his just as he enters the door-a short eye lock happens but she straightens herself.. and so does Maan..
Geet: sir, actually woh main...
Maan: geet! jab tumhe yahin pe aana tha toh tum aise chali kyun gayi?
Geet: ( relieved that he isnt talking about what she had thought) ... actually woh sir main ... woh...
Maan: Kya geet! kahin tum mujhse kuch....his look of anger hardens on her as there is anger in them.... as he grips her by her shoulders wanting an answer....
Geet: sir please, mujhe chodiye.. please... yeh office...
maan: toh? mujhe jawab chahiye....
As he goes this, he comes little closer to her..she blushes at the proximity, lost in his eyes....then recomposes herself and says...
Ge: sir woh, sasha maam.... adi sir...
maan seals her lips with his hand and says....
man: na sasha, na tasha, na adi .. aur naahi dadi... please geet, kyun tum ... ( before he can complete this, there is a knock at the door...) .. geet pushes maan away... and though he is angry with her.. he has to divert his attention to sasha ...
Sasha says M.K, humare dubai waale client aa gayi hai.... woh aapse milna chahte hai.. aur aapke saath mujhe bhi...
Maan: hmmm.. tum chalo... aur geet tum mere cupboard se woh files aur blue prints leke aao...
Before she can protest.. he walks away...
Geet: gussa toh inke naak pe bhangda karte rehta hai... haye babji.. inko main kaise samjau.. mujhe yahan job nahi karni hai... chalo.. abhi ke liye main yeh file le jaati hoon.. baad main unse main aaram se baath karoongi...
Though maan is in the conference room he cant get his mind off geet.. and he is pretty restless about where she she is... he asks Tasha if geet has come yet... tasha offers to help him but he ignores it...
Finally once Geet walks into the room, he is relieved, but now pretends not to care .. the seat next to him is vacant and he obviously expects Geet to come and sit there.. but to his horror... he notices that she goes and at the other end of the table...He looks at her sternly and orders her thro his eyes to come and sit next to him... she refuses...Finally the client says... So Mr. Khurana... shall we start....
Maan: huh.. haan ... geet zara woh files laana toh...
Geet seriously brings the files.. without making eye contact leaves it next to him and promptly goes back to her seat...
Maan: main aapko apne team se milwaana chahta hoon... yeh sasha hai, yeh adi, aur yeh geet... ! hum sab iss project main aapka kaam sambhalenge...! aap apne saare details miss geet ko forward kar deejiye...
Client: lekin miss geet hai koun?
Sasha: secretary hai ! ( mockingly)
Client: dont mind, lekin ek secretary ....
maan: Mr. Dubey... aapko humare kaam se matlab hona chahiye.. aur Miss geet bahut hi efficient hai... aur humare team ka ek ehm hissa hai....
dubey: I am sorry Mr. Khurana, mera matlab woh nahi tha....
Maan: good! toh shall we get started then?
Geet doesnt meet his eye during most of the meeting and this drives Maan even crazy...!!
He decides... "theek hai agar isko aise behave karna hai.. toh aisa hi sahi.... lekin yeh aisa behave kar kyun rahi hai"
So a little later as Geet is sitting and working on the computer, Maan walks into her cabin, and closes the door....
Geet: Sir.. yeh aap...
maan: chup!
geet: sir par... yahan... office main....
maan: haan!
As he walks closer ....geet gets even more hassled...
Geet: sir, mujhe sasha maam se milna hai...
she goes away....
For the rest of the day, she is either making excuses or not meeting his eye.... even when she gets him coffee she simply leaves it at his table and runs away making some bahana.... he wants to have lunch with her.. but she says she has already eaten with Pinky and Adi...when he wants some file, she mails him the copy and calls him and informs him the same...
Almost everyone has left the office... and only geet is working in a room at the corner... maan goes there.. and see's her working totally involved.. he doesnt want to disturb her.. so he waits for her to complete her work... once geet's attention gets diverted from her work she notices Maan sitting there patiently... waiting for her ...
Geet: sir, main toh aapko dekha hi nahi.... aap meri wait kar rahe they.. chaliye ... mera kaam khatam ho gaya hai...
she gets up slips her jhola onto he shoulder and walks towards him.. about to make an exit when maan grips her hand tight and pins her to the wall...
geet: sir... ( scared as she notices the look in his eyes)
maan: please geet... kyun kar rahi ho tum aisa? mujhse koi galti ho gayi hai kya? ( surprisingly his voice sounds a little on the pleading side)
geet: nahi sir...( taking a gulp)
maan now holds her face in his hands .. look into them and asks...
Maan: toh fir, aaj subah se tum aise behave kyun kar rahi ho...
geet has no answer....
maan: pehle toh gaadi se jaldi utar gayi.. yahan aane baad ek baaar mujhse theek se baat nahi ki.. aur ab aise bartaav kar rahi ho jaise kuch hua nahi....agar koi problem hai toh mujhe batao.. main ...
geet: sir... koi problem nahi hai....
Maan doesnt know how to get thro to her...
"toh fir tum....
Geet: main bas.... ! yeh job nahi karna chahti..(resounding effect)
Maan suddenly leaves her....
maan: yeh job nahi karna chahti...? kyun?
geet: kyunki... kyunki... ( looking away)
maan: yes, i am waiting....
geet: agar hum ek office main kaam karenge toh... logon ko ...pata chal jayega.. aur fir.. aur fir....
Maan: kya pata chalega Geet! tum mere out house main mere employee ke haisiyat se reh rahi ho....
Geet: lekin hum dono ek doosre se.. mere matlab hai... ke .. hum....
Maan: Pyar karte hai! ( determined, gritting his teeth in anger) he completes it for her.... aur.. yeh baat kehne se tum darti ho kya?( sounding a little hurt)
geet: nahi sir... main aapse bahut pyar karti hoon.. lekin.. please meri majboori samjhiye....! please...!!
Maan: oh! toh ab tumhe apne reputation ki padi hai huh?
geet: nahi sir... main toh bas....yehi keh rahi thi, ke aap mere saath, thoda alag agar behave karenge toh....
maan: tum kya kehne ki koshish kar rahi ho? ke Maan Singh Khurana apne staff main antar karta hai.. jab hum office main hote hai toh, sab mere employees hai.. chahe woh mere munshi ji ki beti sasha ho.. ya mera chota bhai... ya tum geet...! aur jab maine tumhe bol dia hai ke, tum apna job kar sakti ho..tumhe ek baar main samajh main nahi aata kya?
maan: ab chalo.. bahut der ho gayi hai.... ab mere saath aana chahti ho ya!
Geet peeps out to see if tehre is anyone else in the office.. when tehre is no one.. she nods...
As they come down, he asks the driver to leave and makes her sit....
On their way back.. it is Maan who is silent!

precap: is geet right in her worries? will maan understand that?


Edited by -honeydew- - 15 August 2010 at 1:14am

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Posted: 15 August 2010 at 12:39am | IP Logged
amazing update.loved it.
continue soon


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 August 2010 at 12:40am
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Posted: 15 August 2010 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Wow luvd it .
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Posted: 15 August 2010 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Awesome!!!
Loved the part 3...
I have to go somewhere so will read part 4 later...
Thanx for the PM...
Do inform me about the next art...

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