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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 8:13am | IP Logged
hey i was a lil unwell and my set died on me, toh, i couldnt come.. but i guess, i will write again.. thought, id start and then.... see if people are in line with my thought...!! thanks alot... will continue shortly

Originally posted by acjanfeb1


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.... as the song starts... Dil kho gaya ho gaya kisi ka... we see geet admiring the entire place, there are roses all over, she wants to hold it when maan stops her, removes the thorn on it, in the process hurting himself .. she has tears in her eyes as she puts that finger into her mouth, as an instant reaction.. she has tears in her eyes... she says...
Geet:Maana ke har waqt aap meri raksha karte hai... kabhi kisi problem ko mujhe chune nahi dete... iska yeh matlab nahi hai ke aap khud ko takleef pahuchaaye... samjhe aap she says with the same authority with which he says Samjhi tum....
Maan stares at her, lost for words... he cant understand her even now, though he thinks he does... no one ever had exercised this kinda authority over him.. and no one had showed him what it was to be loved like this.. all his life he was the one who was doing things for people around him ..and to him.. it had almost become like a duty, when there was nothing he had gotten in return.. and in a way.. he had gotten used to it.. and he hadnt expected better.. even dadi, was scared of saying things to Maan after a point... and now, this girl... was saying, doing things that he seemed to always want...
Geet: aise kya dekh rahe hai sir? aap yeh humesha happy scene main baar baar pause kyun ho jaate hai... ye lo play... ab baat kee jiye...
Maan: Geet...! ( suddenly all serious as he breaks out of his trance) ... he looks away... mat karo mujhse itna pyar... mat jatao mujh pe itna haq... mat batao mujhe ke mujhe kya karna chahiye...
Geet: ( is shocked, but tries to change her tone and jokes) ... kyun sir, kya aapko mujh se darr lagta hai? geet handa aisi hi hai she says... imitating Maan... when he notices Maan serious expression...
Maan grips her tight by her shoulders looks into her eyes and says... " haan... darr lagta hai... har cheez se darr lagta hai... tumhe khone ka darr, tumse door jaane ka darr.... please geet... meri feelings ka aise mazaak mat udao... samjhi tum ...
Geet gauges what he is going thro... and without saying another word... just hugs him tight and says...
Geet: Sir, dariye mat... main aapki geet.. aapse kabhi door nahi jaungi... humesha aap hi ke paas rahungi... aise hi.. jaise main ab hoon...!
Maan: hugs her back....tight...
Geet feels a little uncomfortable by the hug, but she doesnt say anything... but the next moment... maan realises...may be he is being too rough with her....
maan: I am very sorry....! maine woh....
geet: koi baat nahi sir.. main samajhti hoon... yoohi pyar nahi karti hoon main aapse...! aur fir dusht daanav se pyar karne koi aasan kaam thodi na hai...
Maan smiles...
Geet: sir...
Maan: hmmm...
Geet: pata hai... mujhe na.. sab sapna jaisa lag raha hai.. jaise filmo main hota hai na....jahan pe hero heroine ke liye...
maan: please geet says maan..yeh na koi film hai.. aur na ma in usme hero...aur tum...
geet: haan haan...jekin jiss tarah aap behave kar rahe ho na... woh toh bilkul aise hi lag raha hai...
Maan is embarrased...
geet: koi baat nahi sir...kabhi kabhi doosre logon ki tarah behave karna galat nahi hota...
maan: lekin Maan Singh Khurana kisiko follow nahi karta samjhi tum...
Geet giggles... " par sir " she is about to say...
Maan: Maan... sirf maan...
geet: sir?
Maan: Aaj se tumhare liye main Maan hoon... !
Geet: nahi sir, main aapko aapke naam se nahi bula sakti....
Maan: kyun....
Geet: bas nahi bula sakti...
Maan: maine kaha na geet... mujhe Maan keh ke bulao...
Geet: nahi sir...
Maan: tum bulaogi ki nahi?
geet: nahi...
Maan: Log Maan Singh Khurana ko uske naam se bulane ki himmat bhi nahi aur tum ...
Geet: nahi sir.. woh alag hai... aur main alag... lekin main aapko aapke naam se nahi bula sakti...
Maan: par dusht daanav, aur raavan keh sakti ho? ( in moch anger)
Geet: haan! lekin woh to pyar se bulati hoon na?
Maan: accha? aur pyar se aur kya bulati ho tum mujhe geet ( he says ... looking into her eyes looking for an answer... she is embarrased... and mahi plays...another eye lock she rests her head on his shoulder smiling.. Maan kisses her forehead....

may continue.... i feel it has slowed down.. feedback please!

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 8:51am | IP Logged
beautiful, nice update.
pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 8:59am | IP Logged
party at home.. will do once it gets over or by tomorrow... thanks :)

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

beautiful, nice update.
pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 9:08am | IP Logged
superlike Thumbs Up ................n omg!!!! CHANDRAKALA!!!!! ROFL ROFL ROFL

n then the 2nd part is Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming jst luvd it!!!!

Edited by SakshiGarg - 14 August 2010 at 9:27am

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Nice!! Of course continue.

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Please continue...this is a very cute scene!!

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Hi Niha ....Chandrakala was just too much yaar ROFL LOL and you have written such lovely moments ....and me too often wonder how it will be when they confess to each other ....and of course yaar plaz continue ...dont stop and pm me when u write again ....thanks

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