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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Since, there are loads of writers here who perhaps would do more justice to the Maaneet confession and my mind seems to be stuck at one point after it.. i thought id share this with you all...
So, they confess their feelings for one another and hug, cry and part for the night!

Part 1:

Geet is really happy as she falls asleep.. she has spoken to Maan about everything, her being forced into marriage, her baby, and also why she had been running away from her feelings for him...maan tells her, he doesnt want to think of anything else today.. and he has never been this happy before and he wants to live this moment with her....with happy thoughts and the confidence that Maan would always be by her side geet falls asleep...

somewhere in the middle of the night, a sound wakes her up! she is scared, of all the animal sounds she can hear around her, she starts sweating-she tries maan's number but it is unavailable, and its way past mid night, she decides she will not call him... and so she shuts the window and tries to sleep once more.. but this time she hears foot steps, that seem to grow louder by the minute... she gets really scared, and finds her danda that she has always had next to her bed since the time she had come to the Khurana Outhouse.. she grips it with the silppery hands and tells herself, she is a strong girl and that she can handle this...So, slowly and steadily she takes steps and comes down.. she spots a silhouette on the other end of the hallway and she prays to her babaji and goes to attack him.. she comes down slowly in the dark, and before she can react a hand grips her tight and closes her eyes with a black cloth, carries her, straight out of the out house and before she can say a thing, she is put down... and the patti is removed.. she opens her eyes slowly abusing to person only to realise she is in a meadow like place, which is actually maan's garden... there is candles all over, and the jhoola on which she is sitting is adorned with flowers and creepers... she breaks into a smile.. and wants to get down to look around when a person stops her and makes her wear her jooti's ....
yeh jooti toh she says....
wahi waali hai jo tumne mujhe pe pheka tha ... says maan, but he has a smile on his face, instead of his usually stern expression...!
Geet blushes..." yeh ab tak aapke paas hai.....
Maan: haan... aur aaj ke paas bhi mere paas hi rahega....
Geet: yeh toh, wahi kahani jaisi hai na, ho maine apne school main padha tha... chandrakala aur uska raj kumar...
maan: chandra kala?
Geet: haan... humare hoshiarpur main, yeh kahani humari teacher sunaya karti thi....
Maan: oh you mean Cinderella?
Geet: jo bhi ho... toh iska yehi matlab yeh hua ke main woh chandrakala aur aap mere raj kumar.... ( she stops suddenly embarrased as she notices maan gazing at her...)
Maahi..... plays.... she smiles... as he holds her hand... she goes in red in her face and looks away... and the background score of Teri ore starts playing...

tell me if i shd continue...

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Like, Like, Like many many times,

Chandrakala ROFL    ROFL    ROFL too too too funny.

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 7:36am | IP Logged
 WHERE WERE YOU. I WAS WAITING FOR YOUR WRITEUP.NICE WRITE UP. EVERYBODY ARE DISCUSSING PRESENT SCENAIARO.AND YOU ARE STEP AHEAD LOVED YOUE WRITE UP.BUT DEFINTELY I WOULD TO HAVE YOUR COMMENTS ON PAST TWO EPISODES MAY BE YOUR PREDICTION FOR NEXT FIVE DAYS. WAITING FOR YOUR WTITEUP PLZ WRITE.

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 7:42am | IP Logged
amazing... do continue...=)

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 7:43am | IP Logged
LOLZ...
chandrakala...........

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Chandrakala  ... LOLROFL
 
Loved it though ... very cute!! Heart

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green signal from me too!!love ur scenario and i seriously can imagine maan doing something like that!!and maybe in the end...he could say something like "main aisa hi houn"!!lol :D

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Plz do continue Niha.......waiting........

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